[/b]This is my first story that i have typed out and shown anyone, never mind love story, so please if there are any spelling, grammar mistakes or overly cheesy bits, please comment on them. I'll try to change the mistakes as soon as possible, i also don't know if this is too stereotypical so you can comment on that too, thank you for your help! 
Characters:
Alexander Jackson (17): Main character
Hair colour: black
Eye colour: brown
Occupation: student (delinquent)
Natalie Isabella (16): other main character
Hair colour: blond
Eye colour: blue
Occupation: Student (transfer student)
Markus James Anderson (16): Alexander’s best friend
Hair colour: brown
Eye colour: black
Occupation: student (delinquent)
Sophie (surname undecided) (16)
Hair colour: ginger
Eye colour: brown
Occupation: student, class rep
Miss Taylor (27)
Hair colour: brown
Eye colour: brown
Occupation: biology teacher, and Alexander, Markus and Sophie’s form tutor
Another wet school day and Markus is taking shelter under Alexander’s umbrella while walking to school.
“Dammit we’re late for school again, Miss Taylor is gonna kill us.†cursed Markus.
“What do you care?†replied Alex, as he said this, in the corner of his eye he spots a girl taking shelter under a bus station, and he stops walking.
“Sophie’s gonna eat us for breakfast, apparently when we’re late she get all the...†realizing he was starting to get wet he turns to find his friend staring at the pretty girl.
“Hey, Alex!†he exclaimed.
“Yeah, what?†he replied as if woken up from a dream.
“I didn’t know you had a thing for blond girls...†he chuckled cheekily with a smirk.
“Hey, shut up!†he returned slightly embarrassed, they stood around for a bit longer “Where does that bus go to?â€
“Certainly not school, she’s probably just waiting for the rain to die down a bit†upon hearing this Alex notices the uniform she wore was indeed that of his schools.
“If you like her you should go talk to her,†Markus suggested at last.
“You know at times like this you say the most stupid of things,†but then he thought “but it might just work!†Saying this he left his friend to get wet and walked over to the girl.
“Hey...†Markus begun, only then deciding that it was best not to interrupt, and continued his journey school.
“Hey.†Greeted Alex nervously, only now realizing how petite the girl was,
She slowly raised he head and smiled.
“Oh, Hello!†she replied sweetly, Alex blushed looking away
“We should get to school, you can walk under my umbrella,if that okay with you.†he suggested.
“Ok, thank you,†she thanked him with another cheerful smile, and they begun their way to school.
And i'll leave it at that! I know it's a little short but i'm still working on chapter 2, i'll post it as soon as possible also please help me think of a good title for my story, i'm really stuck.
Again: Thank you!
Characters:
Alexander Jackson (17): Main character
Hair colour: black
Eye colour: brown
Occupation: student (delinquent)
Natalie Isabella (16): other main character
Hair colour: blond
Eye colour: blue
Occupation: Student (transfer student)
Markus James Anderson (16): Alexander’s best friend
Hair colour: brown
Eye colour: black
Occupation: student (delinquent)
Sophie (surname undecided) (16)
Hair colour: ginger
Eye colour: brown
Occupation: student, class rep
Miss Taylor (27)
Hair colour: brown
Eye colour: brown
Occupation: biology teacher, and Alexander, Markus and Sophie’s form tutor
Chapter 1
Another wet school day and Markus is taking shelter under Alexander’s umbrella while walking to school.
“Dammit we’re late for school again, Miss Taylor is gonna kill us.†cursed Markus.
“What do you care?†replied Alex, as he said this, in the corner of his eye he spots a girl taking shelter under a bus station, and he stops walking.
“Sophie’s gonna eat us for breakfast, apparently when we’re late she get all the...†realizing he was starting to get wet he turns to find his friend staring at the pretty girl.
“Hey, Alex!†he exclaimed.
“Yeah, what?†he replied as if woken up from a dream.
“I didn’t know you had a thing for blond girls...†he chuckled cheekily with a smirk.
“Hey, shut up!†he returned slightly embarrassed, they stood around for a bit longer “Where does that bus go to?â€
“Certainly not school, she’s probably just waiting for the rain to die down a bit†upon hearing this Alex notices the uniform she wore was indeed that of his schools.
“If you like her you should go talk to her,†Markus suggested at last.
“You know at times like this you say the most stupid of things,†but then he thought “but it might just work!†Saying this he left his friend to get wet and walked over to the girl.
“Hey...†Markus begun, only then deciding that it was best not to interrupt, and continued his journey school.
“Hey.†Greeted Alex nervously, only now realizing how petite the girl was,
She slowly raised he head and smiled.
“Oh, Hello!†she replied sweetly, Alex blushed looking away
“We should get to school, you can walk under my umbrella,if that okay with you.†he suggested.
“Ok, thank you,†she thanked him with another cheerful smile, and they begun their way to school.
And i'll leave it at that! I know it's a little short but i'm still working on chapter 2, i'll post it as soon as possible also please help me think of a good title for my story, i'm really stuck.
Again: Thank you!
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