Hah, that's kinda sad. My plate is totally full right now, Where the Angel Sings is turning out great! I'm thinking of making Chapter 8 more about Iin's family that Chapter 7. I mean, I'm DEFINITELY going to do more with the Sora no Otishimono parody that is Iin's mother, but I really want to focus on Ian, Iin's little brother. (The fact that he was mentioned in Chapter 6 helps that idea a lot.)

Kicking back, writing and watching anime between breaks. Paradise.

Ugh, need to update SK. Tell me what you guys think when I do so!

EDIT: LUCKY. I'm cramped on a small chair, eating a stale calzone

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

Still plugging away on WtAS, and I recently had an idea. I posted the teaser yesterday, and frankly, I like the idea of someone out to get the main character. Of course, it will only last two or three chapters, I don't want fighitng to take over. Something I noticed. Normally, 40 pages means I'm winding down. I'm not even done with the first week of the school year in Where the Angel Sings, and I just hit page 40.

hhm, i'm thinking of writing an interesting discussion of my bey, i'm entering the design a bey competition

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I am, quite apparently, a glutton for punishment. I started on another book, though I don't have a title yet. It will, again, be a life-based book, much like Where the Angel Sings, but it will be based in science fiction. I'll post a few paragraphs when I get the chance.

I am, quite apparently, a glutton for punishment. I started on another book, though I don't have a title yet. It will, again, be a life-based book, much like Where the Angel Sings, but it will be based in science fiction. I'll post a few paragraphs when I get the chance.

I have a Science Fiction story, probably my favorite story I've thought of I <3 Science, there's just so many possibilities.

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Ah! I thought of a title! "Corporeal". How does that sound to you guys?

Ah! I thought of a title! "Corporeal". How does that sound to you guys?

Is that even a word?

Sounds cool, though. Better be a concept in the book...


OhMyGosh, I still haven't updated SK. I need to get in that!

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

I haven't been able to write lately on account of life. Stupid non-writing life! I need to do what Sparta's doing and focus on one story. And maybe eat some stale calzones.

Ah! I thought of a title! "Corporeal". How does that sound to you guys?

Is that even a word?

Sounds cool, though. Better be a concept in the book...


OhMyGosh, I still haven't updated SK. I need to get in that!

Actually, yes. It means solid, able to affect one's surroundings in a physical way.

Concept found! Corporeal will explore a question again, like "Broken". Is being lazy and stupid the same thing? Do grades mean everything? Why the hell is Canada so cold!? (Minor idea. Not really a concept, just a funny thought.) I might post the prologue here so I can get some feedback.

Concept found! Corporeal will explore a question again, like "Broken". Is being lazy and stupid the same thing? Do grades mean everything? Why the hell is Canada so cold!? (Minor idea. Not really a concept, just a funny thought.) I might post the prologue here so I can get some feedback.

1)Yes

2) For my parents

3) Only go-Haruhi knows XD.

Post it! Sounds cool.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

...I think you just indirectly called me stupid, hah. On that note: Talk to the 3.4 GPA, I'll just cram the night before.
Well, here it is. The prologue to "Corporeal".

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“Ms. Ottoman, the twins have been successfully operated on. You may have them back.” A doctor hands a new mother her babies, and the woman, Celine Ottoman, looks at the fraternal twins, rubbing their heads.

“I wonder how you two will do in school? I guess we’ll see, won’t we? Now, what should I name the both of you?” The boy kicks his feet a bit, seemingly examining his surroundings, and his mother smiles. “Hm… I think you will be called Daniel. Daniel Ottoman. I like that name, don’t you?” The girl child looks at her mother, as if expecting to be next.

“I didn’t forget you, child. I think that you will be named…Danielle! Do you like that name, Danielle?” The girl moves ever so slightly, satisfied. “Daniel and Danielle. I think that you two will be really close, won’t you?” She looks outside a window at the Toronto sunset, thinking of days, years to come where she would take care of these two. The doctor clears his throat, catching Celine’s attention.

“Well, I hope that you are satisfied with your children, and I wish you the best of luck. While going through the data, I noticed something…odd about the two. Apparently, the data for their Reflections was faulty, and as a result they will likely be abnormal in some way. It will not affect their health, but it is something I am required to tell-”

“That’s good! I’d like for my children to not be normal, as they say. I want them to grow up, to be themselves, regardless of what that means. I have faith in them, don’t you, Doctor?”

“Hm. They seem to be quite the children. I’m sure that they’ll grow into fine young adults. Of course, they will cause their fair share of trouble.”

“That’s what makes children so fun, isn’t it?” The doctor looks at the fading sun, remembering a time long past. His first days at school, before the Avatar System was invented twenty-six years ago in 2178. He also looks back on his own little daughter, all grown up and moved out.

“Yes, that is one of the best parts of parenthood.” He kneels, addressing the small beings in their mother’s arms. “Listen you two, don’t cause too much trouble, you hear?” His request was met with movement from both, supposed agreement all around.

“Well, have fun, Ms. Ottoman. I wish you and your children the best.” The doctor walks out, pulling out his phone and calling his daughter, something he hadn’t done in months. Childbirth can do that to people, apparently.

...I think you just indirectly called me stupid, hah. On that note: Talk to the 3.4 GPA, I'll just cram the night before.
Well, here it is. The prologue to "Corporeal".

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“Ms. Ottoman, the twins have been successfully operated on. You may have them back.” A doctor hands a new mother her babies. The woman, Celine Ottoman, looks at the fraternal twins, rubbing their heads.

“I wonder how you two will do in school? I guess we’ll see, won’t we? Now, what should I name the both of you?” The boy kicks his feet a bit, seemingly examining his surroundings, and his mother smiles. “Hm… I think you will be called Daniel. Daniel Ottoman. I like that name, don’t you?” The girl child looks at her mother, as if expecting to be next.

“I didn’t forget you, child. I think that you will be named…Danielle! Do you like that name, Danielle?” The girl moves ever so slightly, satisfied. “Daniel and Danielle. I think that you two will be really close, won’t you?” She looks outside a window at the Toronto sunset, thinking of days, years to come where she would take care of these two. The doctor clears his throat, catching Celine’s attention.

“Well, I hope that you are satisfied with your children, and I wish you the best of luck. While going through the data, I noticed something…odd about the two. Apparently, the data for their Reflections was faulty, and as a result they will likely be abnormal in some way. It will not affect their health, but it is something I am required to tell-”

“That’s good! I’d like for my children to not be normal, as they say. I want them to grow up, to be themselves, regardless of what that means. I have faith in them, don’t you, Doctor?”

“Hm. They seem to be quite the children. I’m sure that they’ll grow into fine young adults. Of course, they will cause their fair share of trouble.”

“That’s what makes children so fun, isn’t it?” The doctor looks at the fading sun, remembering a time long past. His first days at school, before the Avatar System was invented twenty-six years ago in 2178. He also looks back on his own little daughter, all grown up and moved out.

“Yes, that is one of the best parts of parenthood.” He kneels, addressing the small beings in their mother’s arms. “Listen you two, don’t cause too much trouble, you hear?” His request was met with movement from both, supposed agreement all around.

“Well, have fun, Ms. Ottoman. I wish you and your children the best.” The doctor walks out, pulling out his phone and calling his daughter, something he hadn’t done in months. Childbirth can do that to people, apparently.

....Woah. Interesting, but I have no idea what the avatar system is. Please tell me it's not related to the movie by James Cameron.

I still can't get a feel for what each of them look like. Maybe try to put that in somewhere?

Also, you used way too many commas in the first sentence. After reading it over a few times, I can't be sure what to replace with a semi-colon, but I know one has to go.

EDIT: I found out what to do and fixed it. It's in bold.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

Hah, I'll try to break that one up. Nice catch.

And hell no, I am NOT basing ANYTHING off of "Avatar"... I hated that movie. Actually, it has more to do with the first theme, hence the references to school. Lazy versus Stupid.

I don't think I could describe a BABY, it'd be annoying to have to redo it later, wouldn't it? I just re-vamped it with descriptions, I'll post when I'm done... Hell, once I get through this next chapter, I'll make a thread for it.

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Okay, fixed.

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“Ms. Ottoman, the twins have been successfully operated on. You may have them back.” A doctor hands a new mother her babies, and the woman, Celine Ottoman, looks at the fraternal twins. She rubs their brown-haired heads, proud to be a parent. She notes their large eyes, while the boy’s mouth is pulled back in what looks to be a smirk.

“I wonder how you two will do in school? I guess we’ll see, won’t we? Now, what should I name the both of you?” The boy kicks his feet a bit, seemingly examining his surroundings, and his mother smiles. “Hm… I think you will be called Daniel. Daniel Ottoman. I like that name, don’t you?” The girl child looks at her mother, as if expecting to be next.

“I didn’t forget you, child. I think that you will be named…Danielle! Do you like that name, Danielle?” The girl moves ever so slightly, satisfied. “Daniel and Danielle. I think that you two will be really close, won’t you?” She looks outside a window at the Toronto sunset, thinking of days, years to come where she would take care of these two. The doctor clears his throat, catching Celine’s attention.

“Well, I hope that you are satisfied with your children, and I wish you the best of luck. While going through the data, I noticed something…odd about the two. Apparently, the data for their Reflections was faulty, and as a result they will likely be abnormal in some way. It will not affect their health, but it is something I am required to tell-”

“That’s good! I’d like for my children to not be normal, as they say. I want them to grow up, to be themselves, regardless of what that means. I have faith in them, don’t you, Doctor?”

“Hm. They seem to be quite the children. I’m sure that they’ll grow into fine young adults. Of course, they will cause their fair share of trouble.”

“That’s what makes children so fun, isn’t it?” The doctor looks at the fading sun, remembering a time long past. His first days at school, before the Avatar System was invented twenty-six years ago in 2178. He also looks back on his own little daughter, all grown up and moved out.

“Yes, that is one of the best parts of parenthood.” He kneels, addressing the small beings in their mother’s arms. “Listen you two, don’t cause too much trouble, you hear?” His request was met with movement from both, supposed agreement all around.

“Well, have fun, Ms. Ottoman. I wish you and your children the best.” The doctor walks out, pulling out his phone and calling his daughter, something he hadn’t done in months. Childbirth can do that to people, apparently.

Hah, I'll try to break that one up. Nice catch.

And hell no, I am NOT basing ANYTHING off of "Avatar"... I hated that movie. Actually, it has more to do with the first theme, hence the references to school. Lazy versus Stupid.

I don't think I could describe a BABY, it'd be annoying to have to redo it later, wouldn't it? I just re-vamped it with descriptions, I'll post when I'm done... Hell, once I get through this next chapter, I'll make a thread for it.

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Okay, fixed.

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“Ms. Ottoman, the twins have been successfully operated on. You may have them back.” A doctor hands a new mother her babies, and the woman, Celine Ottoman, looks at the fraternal twins. She rubs their brown-haired heads, proud to be a parent. She notes their large eyes, while the boy’s mouth is pulled back in what looks to be a smirk.

“I wonder how you two will do in school? I guess we’ll see, won’t we? Now, what should I name the both of you?” The boy kicks his feet a bit, seemingly examining his surroundings, and his mother smiles. “Hm… I think you will be called Daniel. Daniel Ottoman. I like that name, don’t you?” The girl child looks at her mother, as if expecting to be next.

“I didn’t forget you, child. I think that you will be named…Danielle! Do you like that name, Danielle?” The girl moves ever so slightly, satisfied. “Daniel and Danielle. I think that you two will be really close, won’t you?” She looks outside a window at the Toronto sunset, thinking of days, years to come where she would take care of these two. The doctor clears his throat, catching Celine’s attention.

“Well, I hope that you are satisfied with your children, and I wish you the best of luck. While going through the data, I noticed something…odd about the two. Apparently, the data for their Reflections was faulty, and as a result they will likely be abnormal in some way. It will not affect their health, but it is something I am required to tell-”

“That’s good! I’d like for my children to not be normal, as they say. I want them to grow up, to be themselves, regardless of what that means. I have faith in them, don’t you, Doctor?”

“Hm. They seem to be quite the children. I’m sure that they’ll grow into fine young adults. Of course, they will cause their fair share of trouble.”

“That’s what makes children so fun, isn’t it?” The doctor looks at the fading sun, remembering a time long past. His first days at school, before the Avatar System was invented twenty-six years ago in 2178. He also looks back on his own little daughter, all grown up and moved out.

“Yes, that is one of the best parts of parenthood.” He kneels, addressing the small beings in their mother’s arms. “Listen you two, don’t cause too much trouble, you hear?” His request was met with movement from both, supposed agreement all around.

“Well, have fun, Ms. Ottoman. I wish you and your children the best.” The doctor walks out, pulling out his phone and calling his daughter, something he hadn’t done in months. Childbirth can do that to people, apparently.

Nice job, Temporal. I still don't understand the avatar system...
Also, I didn't like Avatar (the movie) either.

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Person:"Brad, sign my launcher! Brad, sign everything I own!"
BeyBrad:"Did you see me sign that kid's shoe? He was like 'BRAD, CAN U SIGHN MAH SHOO?!' and I was like 'Yeeeaaahhh... ?'
CyberBlader27: Cant believe I missed Beyblade Crusade 2011... :( LMAO Quotes:

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I beat my brother in an anime style way but i then found out that u cant use quick plays from your hand on your opponents turn.

Did you have duel disks? Or were you on motorcycles?

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

seriously, just stop being so damn lazy.

purple ponies

Name: Seniel hatakashi
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored, tempered
Age: 12
Team: none
Bey: Gravitate Pegasus (or spaţiu) AMGB 159 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

ahem
what are you doing?

Name: Kastu Katsume
Nationality: American
Personality: Energetic, Friendly, Loyal, and Good humored
Age: 15
Team: none
Bey: Lunar Raven (or Corus) AMGB 155 (Armored Magnetic Gravity Bowl) CS

My biggest phobia is... wait for it... Dark Wolf.

Lol
Its to much strength to handle. Lol

Part of the day:

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BD145 (Boost Disk 145)
* Weight: 8 grams

BD145 shares a similar trait with its partner Hell, in that, like Hell is one of the widest Metal Wheels ever released, BD145 is the widest Track ever. This Track is unique both because of its width and also its ability to change modes. Changing modes is similar to how it is done with SW145, however this time, instead of removing the changeable part from the bottom and flipping it, it is removed from the top and then flipped. BD145 has two modes:

* Normal Mode

In Normal Mode the "Boost Disk" sits lower on the Track, which causes most Beyblades to scrape the Beystadium floor easily due to the three downward facing protrusions. However, when using a taller Bottom such as RF, this tendency is lessened somewhat, and the wide diameter of BD145, while it is not able to necessarily provide Smash Attack, it assists in "pushing" the opposing Beyblade out of the Beystadium.

* Boost Mode

Boost Mode works exclusively in combination with Hell. The three upward facing protrusions on BD145 go past the bottom of the Metal Wheel into the gaps of Hell itself and unlike Normal Mode, there is absolutely no space between the Metal Wheel and Boost Disk. This mode has proven to be incredibly effective in Stamina, Defense, and even Attack customizations.
Use in Attack Customizations

Somewhat surprisingly, BD145 found use in Attack customizations such as MF Lightning L-Drago BD145LRF. The increased diameter allowed by BD145 makes it easier to strike the opposing Beyblade, and in combination with the high Smash Attack of Lightning L-Drago and the speed of LRF, this combination is deadly.
Use in Defense Customizations

BD145 is the heaviest Track available, and that along with the fact that it almost completely nullifies low Attackers makes it one of the best Defense Tracks available. It can be used in the custom MF-H Basalt Kerbecs BD145CS/MB.
Use in Balance Customization

Along with having great Stamina, the combo MF Hell Bull/Kerbecs BD145CS (Boost Mode) also has good Defense against Attackers which will be partially neutralized by both the wide, plastic "Boost Disk", and the rubber surrounding the sharp tip of CS.

Thank you Beywiki!

It's good, but maybe you should change the name of the Avatar system. Too many people (not me) are quick to make assumptions and assume you either used or were inspired by the movie. Look at The Last Airbender movie, they had to take out the Avatar part out of the title for that reason (and others, but that's not the point.)

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Fair enough. I may change it to the "Reflection System".

I've set up Chapter 4 of Beyblade VS Battle Strikers yesterday for everyone's viewing pleasure.

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Beyblade...675?page=3

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Hmm...needing some help. I'm not sure whether to make my adventure story mainstream and have a bunch of battles and action, or make it non-mainstream, instead having some kind of trial setting, which I haven't thought of yet. :\

Hmm...needing some help. I'm not sure whether to make my adventure story mainstream and have a bunch of battles and action, or make it non-mainstream, instead having some kind of trial setting, which I haven't thought of yet. :\

That's something totally up to you. I would try to go as out-of-the-ordinary as possible, so it stands out; but that's just me.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

I've got writer's block. And no better time than when you've got a poem due on Monday and who knows how many stories on the internet.

Hmm...needing some help. I'm not sure whether to make my adventure story mainstream and have a bunch of battles and action, or make it non-mainstream, instead having some kind of trial setting, which I haven't thought of yet. :\

That's something totally up to you. I would try to go as out-of-the-ordinary as possible, so it stands out; but that's just me.

Hmm, that's what I'm attempting to do... I can give the battles something extra to make it less mainstream... Ah, maybe a mix of both? I dunno, I always get writers block around this section of my story's.

Thankfully, my writer's block finally passed, but it took about a week. I just got back to working on WtAS, but 10th grade is harder than I thought. Geez, we got slapped with an essay from day one.

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Nwolf-s-...-Senpuujin

my new story, if anyone read drahelix is born then this is the sequel, but i'm having some trouble, should i change the name of the bey as it's called senpuujin, or leave it? also Arix comes back, and he's way more mature, since it's been 3 months since he left, and finally some kick-butt action! (would say kick-A** but dunno if it's allowed)

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