This is going to be so awesome. One thing I love is the chapters are normally short and people love it no matter what. Just proves your story is amazing.

Doesnt the name Athena come from a Greece city?

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Athena is the Greek goddess of wisdom, arts and war.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

Oh wait nvm lol its called Athens

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Chapter 8

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~it had been hours and Athenas exhaustion had finally faded! She reached over to get her bey and left the factory. as she left, the following thought ran through her mind~

Why? Why can't I reach him?....

~someone was waiting at the factories entrance, it was Valt! He had heard about Athena and Lanes battle and was waiting for her the entire time~

Valt: Been a while huh?

~Athena stared at the bluenette and said nothing, she still didn't feel like talking~

Valt: Is something wrong?

Athena: Its Lane... He just will not listen.

Valt: Well you should try to make him listen. You're the only one who can make him listen.

Athena: But How?! How can I?!

~Valt was taken aback by her sudden outburst, he honestly had no idea what to say~

Valt: Well if strength is what Lane respects then the only thing I can think of is become stronger where he will finally see you as worthy. You ARE the only one who can take on his Flare after all.

Athena: i guess you're right..

~she looks down at Adeona who was glowing a white aura and looks back up at Valt with a smile~

Athena: You are right! I'll strengthen my flare so I can take on his!

~Valt was surprised by Athenas sudden burst of confidence but shrugs it off and smiles, then his bey: Brave Valkyrie begins to shine in his hand~

Valt: Looks like Valkyrie wants to challenge that Flare of yours.

~they go back to the GT Arena and they head into the Main Arena which was completely empty, no crowd and no announcer. Nothing. Valt and Athena walk up to a SpeedStorm stadium~

Valt: Let me see what that Flare can do!

Athena: You got it!

~one person was watching from the empty crowd, it was Lane. He stared at the 2 bladers with an emotionless expression, Lucifer layed in his hand and Harry emerges from his collar, squeaking~

Athena: I'll be going with Guide Adeona!

Valt: Very Well! Just don't hold back!

3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!

*Valkyrie and Adeona land in the stadium and they instantly come in for an attack*

Athena: Go!!

*Adeona lands a devastating blow to Valkyrie*

Valt: Hold On!!

*Valkyrie recovers from the attack and comes in for its attack*

Valt: Rush Shoot!!

*Valkyrie deals a barrage of ferocious attacks*

Athena: Adeona!!!

*Adeona gets pummeled by all of Valkyries attacks*

~Athena glares as her aura rages out wildly, Lane who was still watching looks on with a bit of a surprised expression~

Lane: Is she about to-?

~a bright glow from Lucifer cuts him off, purple and black particles emit from it~

Lane: *smiles menacingly*

Athena: END HIM!!!

*Adeona starts to shine with Flare and starts its counterattack*

Lane: That flare... I can feel its power from here.. Tch!!

Valt: We're not giving up here!!

*Valkyrie heads into one of the speed cradles, gaining an intense amount of speed*

Athena: That speed! It's incredible!!

Valt: Now! Brave Sword!

~Athena snapped! Parts of her purple hair turn white and her purple eyes glow! Her white flare grows slightly~

~in the audience, Lucifer glowed even brighter. Lane stared down at it with a stunned expression as he was able to hear the low growls of his beys avatar~

Athena: Finish it with Guiding Upper!!

*Adeona and Valkyrie clash and both beys get blown back*
~Adeona bursts midair and Valkyrie lands on the ground shortly after, it was nearly a simultaneous Over Finish~

Athena: OH COME ON!!! AGAIN?!?!

Valt: You didn't do too bad. You never gave up even when it was looking tough, i respect that. Until we meet again.

~Valt left and Athena goes to leave but then she spots Lane in the audience, she waves at him. Instead of waving back, Lane turned and walked away without a word~

Athena: Lane....

~Lane still had Lucifer in his hand. It was no longer glowing but its avatars growl was audible to Lane~

Lane: I refuse to let her surpass me.. I'll make sure of it!

~Lane left GT Arena and returned to the factory and stood in front of his stadium~

Lane: GO SHOOT!!!

*Lucifer lands in the stadium and takes the center*

Lane: The only one who will shine with Flare will be me!!!

~Lane screams as his Flare shoots across the factory, Harry whimpers and hides in a pipe~

Lane: Athena... Next time we battle, I'll make sure you never touch a bey again!!

[TO BE CONTINUED]

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Chapter 8

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~it had been hours and Athenas exhaustion had finally faded! She reached over to get her bey and left the factory. as she left, the following thought ran through her mind~

Why? Why can't I reach him?....

~someone was waiting at the factories entrance, it was Valt! He had heard about Athena and Lanes battle and was waiting for her the entire time~

Valt: Been a while huh?

~Athena stared at the bluenette and said nothing, she still didn't feel like talking~

Valt: Is something wrong?

Athena: Its Lane... He just will not listen.

Valt: Well you should try to make him listen. You're the only one who can make him listen.

Athena: But How?! How can I?!

~Valt was taken aback by her sudden outburst, he honestly had no idea what to say~

Valt: Well if strength is what Lane respects then the only thing I can think of is become stronger where he will finally see you as worthy. You ARE the only one who can take on his Flare after all.

Athena: i guess you're right..

~she looks down at Adeona who was glowing a white aura and looks back up at Valt with a smile~

Athena: You are right! I'll strengthen my flare so I can take on his!

~Valt was surprised by Athenas sudden burst of confidence but shrugs it off and smiles, then his bey: Brave Valkyrie begins to shine in his hand~

Valt: Looks like Valkyrie wants to challenge that Flare of yours.

~they go back to the GT Arena and they head into the Main Arena which was completely empty, no crowd and no announcer. Nothing. Valt and Athena walk up to a SpeedStorm stadium~

Valt: Let me see what that Flare can do!

Athena: You got it!

~one person was watching from the empty crowd, it was Lane. He stared at the 2 bladers with an emotionless expression, Lucifer layed in his hand and Harry emerges from his collar, squeaking~

Athena: I'll be going with Guide Adeona!

Valt: Very Well! Just don't hold back!

3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!

*Valkyrie and Adeona land in the stadium and they instantly come in for an attack*

Athena: Go!!

*Adeona lands a devastating blow to Valkyrie*

Valt: Hold On!!

*Valkyrie recovers from the attack and comes in for its attack*

Valt: Rush Shoot!!

*Valkyrie deals a barrage of ferocious attacks*

Athena: Adeona!!!

*Adeona gets pummeled by all of Valkyries attacks*

~Athena glares as her aura rages out wildly, Lane who was still watching looks on with a bit of a surprised expression~

Lane: Is she about to-?

~a bright glow from Lucifer cuts him off, purple and black particles emit from it~

Lane: *smiles menacingly*

Athena: END HIM!!!

*Adeona starts to shine with Flare and starts its counterattack*

Lane: That flare... I can feel its power from here.. Tch!!

Valt: We're not giving up here!!

*Valkyrie heads into one of the speed cradles, gaining an intense amount of speed*

Athena: That speed! It's incredible!!

Valt: Now! Brave Sword!

~Athena snapped! Parts of her purple hair turn white and her purple eyes glow! Her white flare grows slightly~

~in the audience, Lucifer glowed even brighter. Lane stared down at it with a stunned expression as he was able to hear the low growls of his beys avatar~

Athena: Finish it with Guiding Upper!!

*Adeona and Valkyrie clash and both beys get blown back*
~Adeona bursts midair and Valkyrie lands on the ground shortly after, it was nearly a simultaneous Over Finish~

Athena: OH COME ON!!! AGAIN?!?!

Valt: You didn't do too bad. You never gave up even when it was looking tough, i respect that. Until we meet again.

~Valt left and Athena goes to leave but then she spots Lane in the audience, she waves at him. Instead of waving back, Lane turned and walked away without a word~

Athena: Lane....

~Lane still had Lucifer in his hand. It was no longer glowing but its avatars growl was audible to Lane~

Lane: I refuse to let her surpass me.. I'll make sure of it!

~Lane left GT Arena and returned to the factory and stood in front of his stadium~

Lane: GO SHOOT!!!

*Lucifer lands in the stadium and takes the center*

Lane: The only one who will shine with Flare will be me!!!

~Lane screams as his Flare shoots across the factory, Harry whimpers and hides in a pipe~

Lane: Athena... Next time we battle, I'll make sure you never touch a bey again!!

[TO BE CONTINUED]

Very good chapter.
Oh no! Not again! Why is Lane so angry your scaring Harry

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Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro! Ranjiro comes up with a solid strategy to take down Lucifer, but will it be enough?...

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Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Rip Ranjiro

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Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Rip Ranjiro

DeltaZakuro this is the best fan fic I have read on WBO.

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Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Huh let's see here. Lane is the antagonist.
"Black sun" a big bad thing from metal fury.
"Armageddon" diablo nemesis's (another big bad thing from metal fury) special move.
Not that I'm criticizing you, I think it's cool but just saying.

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Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Armageddon! Summary

With a new tournament on the horizon, qualifiers are underway! One match being between Lane and Ranjiro!

Huh let's see here. Lane is the antagonist.
"Black sun" a big bad thing from metal fury.
"Armageddon" diablo nemesis's (another big bad thing from metal fury) special move.
Not that I'm criticizing you, I think it's cool but just saying.

Too much Metal Fury refernce lol

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even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

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even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

This will be very interesting.

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even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

Aiga flashbacks to when he loses to Lane and Lucifer

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even though Lane vs Ranjiro will be one of the main focuses next chapter, there will be some pretty cool surprises in the chapter, like the return of a certain character.

My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

yeah not happening

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My boy Aiga going to whoop Lucifer with headband Achilles

yeah not happening

And again.
Sad Aiga noises.
At least he wont be played dirty.

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R.I.P 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000 headbands destroyed by Aiga

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Hi

R.I.P 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000 headbands destroyed by Aiga

lol.
Where does he even get those headbands anyway.
He probally has Infinite of them

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R.I.P 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000 headbands destroyed by Aiga

lol.
Where does he even get those headbands anyway.
He probally has Infinite of them

He robbed a bank and bought the whole stock. IN THE WORLD

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Hi

lol.
Where does he even get those headbands anyway.
He probally has Infinite of them

He robbed a bank and bought the whole stock. IN THE WORLD

lol. But thats Shu´s line

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Pluto Unknown Ou Universe' Breakdown

Chip: Pluto (Pl) - Features a Pluto motif, a god of the underworld. features a black metal chip core

Ring: Unknown (U) - features 6 spikes with 6 spikes underneath. when the limit break system activates, the 6 bottom spikes extend some.

Disk: Ou

Driver: Universe'

Owner: Pascal Hirogashi (mid-season antagonist)

Special Moves: Limit Break Unknown, Unknown Guard (best used before Limit Break), Unknown Press

First Appearance: New Challenger! Pluto Unknown! (tentative title)

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I bet the main antagonist is someone who owns a dragon bey

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When is there going to be another contest (what date so that I know when to come back)

When is there going to be another contest (what date so that I know when to come back)

whenever season 2 starts

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