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[Fan Fiction]  Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice)

Nov. 16, 2020  5:07 AM
 
Chapter 6: Sisco vs Lane! Summary

The final battle against Lane has begun! Sisco hammers at the barrier but Lane counters with the same tactic that ended Ranjiro. With Lanes Flare growing throughout the battle, can Satan endure Lucifers attack?
Nov. 16, 2020  5:10 AM
 
(Nov. 14, 2020  9:45 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Posted this on Wattpad so ima post it here as well

Sorry the new chapter of Story Of Lanes Sister: Athena is taking so long. Recently ive been really stressed and had been severely depressed for the past couple days and that has destroyed my motivation to write anything. I kept it all to myself because I didn't want anyone to worry and bombard me with questions.

Im sorry for no story updates but just know I'm trying my best in my current mental state.

Just keep doing what you do, and take as much time as you need to heal. Remember, we're here if you need help.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:11 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:07 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 6: Sisco vs Lane! Summary

The final battle against Lane has begun! Sisco hammers at the barrier but Lane counters with the same tactic that ended Ranjiro. With Lanes Flare growing throughout the battle, can Satan endure Lucifers attack?

Sisco the devil yes he can
Nov. 16, 2020  5:14 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:11 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:07 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 6: Sisco vs Lane! Summary

The final battle against Lane has begun! Sisco hammers at the barrier but Lane counters with the same tactic that ended Ranjiro. With Lanes Flare growing throughout the battle, can Satan endure Lucifers attack?

Sisco the devil yes he can

Sisco:
[Image: epic-win.jpg]
Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM
 
If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..
Nov. 16, 2020  5:52 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

Probably not.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

Probably not.

Oof.


If you don't mind, care to explain why?
Nov. 16, 2020  5:56 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Probably not.

Oof.


If you don't mind, care to explain why?

Too busy, not to mention the large list of stuff I still have to watch. I also think if it were to be animated it would eventually become like cho-z where everything is too rushed and the characters aren’t done much justice.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:38 PM
 
Chapter 7, 8 and 9 Summaries

Chapter 7: The Demons Flare! Lane Valhalla!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 8: Warrior! Brave Valkyrie!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Force!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Nov. 16, 2020  5:41 PM
 
When they all going to die by an asteriod?
Nov. 16, 2020  5:44 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:38 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 7, 8 and 9 Summaries

Chapter 7: Demon Flare! Lane Valhalla!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 8: Warrior! Brave Valkyrie!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 9: Black Sun! Variant Force!
Spoiler (Click to View)

I can already tell that Athena will lose to Lane due to the titles
Nov. 16, 2020  5:49 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When they all going to die by an asteriod?

not gonna happen sorry.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM
 
Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence
Nov. 16, 2020  5:52 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:41 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: When they all going to die by an asteriod?

not gonna happen sorry.

It was just a joke (that would be terrible if it actually did happen). If you see me type anything that isn’t related to the characters or a different view (really just random) then it’s probably a joke.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

i dont know why this made me laugh as much as it did.

honestly, this story is an AU (Alternate Universe) so Ragnaruk breaking never actually happened.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:54 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

i dont know why this made me laugh as much as it did.

honestly, this story is an AU (Alternate Universe) so Ragnaruk breaking never actually happened.

Yup.
Nov. 16, 2020  5:56 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

i dont know why this made me laugh as much as it did.

honestly, this story is an AU (Alternate Universe) so Ragnaruk breaking never actually happened.

Please have Diavolo die at the end so that this is Jojo canon
Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM
 
i havent decided but there might be a flashback some point in the series on how I thought Lane got First Uranus along with some possible childhood memories.

(this is mostly head-canon stuff and not sure if i'll go through with it.)
Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: i havent decided but there might be a flashback some point in the series on how I thought Lane got First Uranus along with some possible childhood memories.

(this is mostly head-canon stuff and not sure if i'll go through with it.)
I think Lane created First Uranus cause he wanted to defeat the legends
Nov. 16, 2020  6:26 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  6:17 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: i havent decided but there might be a flashback some point in the series on how I thought Lane got First Uranus along with some possible childhood memories.

(this is mostly head-canon stuff and not sure if i'll go through with it.)
I think Lane created First Uranus cause he wanted to defeat the legends

probably but im probably gonna try and come up with a more logical explanation.
Nov. 16, 2020  6:27 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  6:26 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  6:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I think Lane created First Uranus cause he wanted to defeat the legends

probably but im probably gonna try and come up with a more logical explanation.

ok
Nov. 16, 2020  8:25 PM
 
a little bit of a minor detail but Athena did actually have a generic bey combo before creating Adeona (she had 2)

one was Heaven Ashura 1' Eternal Zan and the other is Ace Valkyrie 00Reach Trans Retsu
Nov. 16, 2020  8:27 PM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  8:25 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: a little bit of a minor detail but Athena did actually have a generic bey combo before creating Adeona (she had 2)

one was Heaven Ashura 1' Eternal Zan and the other is Ace Valkyrie 00Reach Trans Retsu

nice combos!
Nov. 17, 2020  1:48 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

HELL YEAH!
THIS IS A GREAT FANFIC!
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

Oh well, circle of life!
Nov. 17, 2020  1:50 AM
 
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

yes defintely
(Nov. 17, 2020  1:48 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:50 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: If this was an anime, would you actually watch it?

Just something random i thought of..

HELL YEAH!
THIS IS A GREAT FANFIC!
(Nov. 16, 2020  5:51 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ranjiro in anime: My Glide Ragnaruk broke
Lane in anime: Take that trash outta here.
Ranjiro in fanfic: Phew! My Ragnaruk is saved from destruction.
Lane in fanfic: How! I will destroy you again!
Harry: No! I will be the one to erase you from existence

Oh well, circle of life!

lol
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