[Fan Fiction]  Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm)

(Aug. 19, 2021  11:09 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: I've been working on Jormungand lately so thats why there hasn't been any episode

Sneak peak:

So many abbreviations, I can't even try to guess lol.
But good to see a Jormungandr.
excited for the new jormungand! hope its owner isnt wasted like jin!
ik you can nail it!
(Aug. 19, 2021  11:36 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: I think the tip is flugel
Nope the parts are all original

(Aug. 19, 2021  11:30 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 19, 2021  11:09 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: I've been working on Jormungand lately so thats why there hasn't been any episode

Sneak peak:

So many abbreviations, I can't even try to guess lol.
But good to see a Jormungandr.

Lol, the abbreviations are just the disc, disc armour and driver

Disc: Lt

Disc armour:sd

Driver:Fl.
I don't think I will guess it anytime soon 😂😆
Episode 10: Towering stamina! Cell Jormungand!
(Aug. 20, 2021  6:25 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 10: Towering stamina! Cell Jormungand!

Is this chapter long enough? I don't know, maybe.
It's a filler? Probably
It has a lot of dialog? It depends, for an introvert it would be very long.
It has a cool bey? Yes, and that's enough for me. 
Is all of my points biased because of Jormungandr? Absolutely.
Is it also a funny bit (reffering to what I'm saying)? Surely yes

Anyways, the chapter did felt short. We didn't got a full detailed Jormungandr explanation (I mean, by the characters. But it's not a big of a deal). Idk if this chapter is shorter than average because I don't remember the length of each chapter.
Nice chapter! Didn't see anything wrong!
(Aug. 20, 2021  6:47 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Aug. 20, 2021  6:25 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 10: Towering stamina! Cell Jormungand!

Is this chapter long enough? I don't know, maybe.
It's a filler? Probably
It has a lot of dialog? It depends, for an introvert it would be very long.
It has a cool bey? Yes, and that's enough for me. 
Is all of my points biased because of Jormungandr? Absolutely.
Is it also a funny bit (reffering to what I'm saying)? Surely yes

Anyways, the chapter did felt short. We didn't got a full detailed Jormungandr explanation (I mean, by the characters. But it's not a big of a deal). Idk if this chapter is shorter than average because I don't remember the length of each chapter.

Yeah it was short and sort of a filler, not detailed on Jormungand cause well I'm lazy and I'm saving a full explanation for furthermore down the line(I'm trying not to spoil the plot)
Hey Guys, What bey/Beys would you like to see in the Fan Fiction? If I do any of the beys suggested they will probably just be for one ark, whether that's the current ark(tag team one) or the next ark.
Episode 11: History! Juno & Fujio
(Aug. 24, 2021  6:18 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 11: History! Juno & Fujio

Awesome Chapter! I really enjoyed it!
Also, holding a little meet the Blader event, ask a question for a character in my fan fiction I'll answer how I think they'd answer, specify who your asking tho lol

(Aug. 24, 2021  6:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 24, 2021  6:18 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 11:  History! Juno & Fujio

Awesome Chapter! I really enjoyed it!

Holy Frick how fast can you read?
(Aug. 24, 2021  6:20 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Also, holding a little meet the Blader event, ask a question for a character in my fan fiction I'll answer how I think they'd answer, specify who your asking tho lol

(Aug. 24, 2021  6:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Awesome Chapter! I really enjoyed it!

Holy Frick how fast can you read?

I love reading, I can finish a Diary Of A Wimpy Kid book in under an Hour don't ever underestimate my reading speed. Tongue_out
(Aug. 24, 2021  6:22 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 24, 2021  6:20 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Also, holding a little meet the Blader event, ask a question for a character in my fan fiction I'll answer how I think they'd answer, specify who your asking tho lol


Holy Frick how fast can you read?

I love reading, I can finish a Diary Of A Wimpy Kid book in under an Hour don't ever underestimate my reading speed. Tongue_out

You sweaty try hard.
Officially going on hiatus due to lack of time, I start school in 3 days so I'm cut on time, hope to be back soon, don't have time to do 2 fan fics, and the other one is more important, oops I've said to much
Official thread for my current/future fanfics
(Aug. 28, 2021  8:38 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Officially going on hiatus due to lack of time, I start school in 3 days so I'm cut on time, hope to be back soon, don't have time to do 2 fan fics, and the other one is more important,  oops I've said to much

Time To Revive This, Hmm how about a special little event for this return, character contest? let's see
(Sep. 11, 2021  11:39 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote:
(Aug. 28, 2021  8:38 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Officially going on hiatus due to lack of time, I start school in 3 days so I'm cut on time, hope to be back soon, don't have time to do 2 fan fics, and the other one is more important,  oops I've said to much

Time To Revive This, Hmm how about a special little event for this return, character contest? let's see

oh HECK yeah!

(Sep. 12, 2021  12:18 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote:
(Sep. 11, 2021  11:39 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Time To Revive This, Hmm how about a special little event for this return, character contest? let's see

oh HECK yeah!


Epic, 1A already exists in this world with a different design so If your character gets passed It'll be marked as 2A-P, but solid bey
(Sep. 11, 2021  11:39 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote:
(Aug. 28, 2021  8:38 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Officially going on hiatus due to lack of time, I start school in 3 days so I'm cut on time, hope to be back soon, don't have time to do 2 fan fics, and the other one is more important,  oops I've said to much

Time To Revive This, Hmm how about a special little event for this return, character contest? let's see

I'll use a beyblade name that's cool


Name: Izuko Yurakashki

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Height: 5'7

Personality: Cocky to his friends, but when he awakens his hair becomes spiky, his hair becomes silver, and he'll be evil.

Characteristics: White hair, Red shirt, Red shirt tie, Black shoes, Brown Vest, Red Eyes, (he is shu kurenai's biggest fan).

Also Known As: Chrono Eye

Beyblade: Ancient Xenon- 15

Role: Antagonist (for a arc.)

Parts: Disc: Corruption (Corrupt-P), (like Nexus but more powerful), Driver: Venture

Moves: Xenon Crush, Obliterator Dive, Ender Dive, Ancient Blast, Ancient Time, Xenon Ablities, Time Period, Corruption Heal, and Obliterator Crushing Dive.

Type: Attack

Launch Form: Like Rashad's but this is what he does

3. Cartwheel

2.360

1. Aims his launcher toward the stadium then launches


Backstory: When Hikaru and Hyuga won the Tag Team league, Izuko created Ancient Xenon
(Sep. 12, 2021  2:13 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote:
(Sep. 12, 2021  12:18 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: oh HECK yeah!


Epic, 1A already exists in this world with a different design so If your character gets passed It'll be marked as 2A-P, but solid bey

oh i forgot

(Sep. 12, 2021  2:13 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote:
(Sep. 12, 2021  12:18 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: oh HECK yeah!


Epic, 1A already exists in this world with a different design so If your character gets passed It'll be marked as 2A-P, but solid bey

ok i changed it to 2A-P
(Sep. 12, 2021  2:23 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote:
(Sep. 11, 2021  11:39 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Time To Revive This, Hmm how about a special little event for this return, character contest? let's see

I'll use a beyblade name that's cool


Name: Izuko Yurakashki

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Height: 5'7

Personality: Cocky to his friends, but when he awakens his hair becomes spiky, his hair becomes silver, and he'll be evil.

Characteristics: White hair, Red shirt, Red shirt tie, Black shoes, Brown Vest, Red Eyes, (he is shu kurenai's biggest fan).

Also Known As: Chrono Eye

Beyblade: Ancient Xenon- 15

Parts: Disc: Corruption (Corrupt-P), (like Nexus but more powerful), Driver: Venture

Moves: Xenon Crush, Obliterator Dive, Ender Dive, Ancient Blast, Ancient Time, Xenon Ablities, Time Period, Corruption Heal, and Obliterator Crushing Dive.

Launch Form: Like Rashad's but this is what he does

3. Cartwheel

2.360

1. Aims his launcher toward the stadium then launches


Backstory: When Hikaru and Hyuga won the Tag Team league, Izuko created Ancient Xenon


Can I get a little more Info, or at least the type.
ok ill update it
(Sep. 12, 2021  2:26 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote:
(Sep. 12, 2021  2:13 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Epic, 1A already exists in this world with a different design so If your character gets passed It'll be marked as 2A-P, but solid bey

oh i forgot

(Sep. 12, 2021  2:13 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Epic, 1A already exists in this world with a different design so If your character gets passed It'll be marked as 2A-P, but solid bey

ok i changed it to 2A-P

alright, I wish you the best of luck against the competition