Oh... So does that mean that Xaviero can't be published?

Also, is Benjamin approved? Just wondering.

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your first one is pretty much in I think, the rest can't be taken for granted.
Pink is gone for now due to irl stuff so the thing will go on a hiatus for a little bit until we decide stuff.

Understood.

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Not on everyday, but I always check my messages, so don't hesitate to message me, as I will get to it sooner or later!

Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

When will I learn if my character passed or not?

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Oops, you passed lo.
Also should mention that the contest is closed so... Cold might update the thread title.

Okay thanks for letting my character pass I was working hard on him

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I just finished making Xaviero's character. He seems to be very likable, and I hope that you guys will accept him too. Only thing stopping me from posting is that I'm just waiting for confirmation on Benjamin's character.
There is absolutely no rush, I'm just letting you guys know about what I've been doing. ^^

Edit: I just made a few minor character adjustments to Benjamin. He now comes from Minnesota, and the reason his ENTIRE family moved to New York is not just because of Beyblading, but rather because his father found a better paying job there.

Second edit: Just in case Benjamin is accepted Ill do the same "claiming ownership" thing I did with Ben.
Remember, the following will NOT be the official post, just claiming ownership of the names.

Characters Name: Xaviero Gaunt

His Beyblade: Superior Xanthus

So, Benjamin is in. Xaviero is probably in. You cannot do a third one though.

So, Benjamin is in. Xaviero is probably in. You cannot do a third one though.

Ah, okay. Ill post Xaviero's profile soon then, since I never did.

Edit: Xaviero's profile is below.
-WizardBlader

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Name: Xaviero Gaunt
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 4 '11

Personality: Xaviero (Can be nicknamed as X) is a very hard person to provoke, partially because of his light-hearted, and calculating persona. He enjoys to Beyblade with his older brother, Benjamin Gaunt, ever since he saw Benjamin blading with his friends in the Cho-Z era. Just like Benjamin, he looks up to, Aiga Akaba, but also Valt Aoi. He also trains at the Raging Bulls along with Benjamin, and because of that, he has grown exponentially as a blader. Despite the fact that he blades with the largest bey-group in America, he always seems to want more(Perhaps an antagonistic want for power? Or an innocent want for more experience; to surpass the legends, but in a good way?).
Appearance: Xaviero looks similar to Benjamin, except he has lighter skin, and turquoise eyes. His outfit is alike to Aiga's attire from GT, but not exact, as he wears a dark-orange-yellow shirt with a turquoise zipper, a red Letterman's jacket with long sleeves, black wrist collars and borders with a yellow stripe, and a dark-blue "X" and pearl-colored buttons. His pants are a pair of blue jeans with stitched-in patches, and his shoes are red sneakers with a yellow border, white laces, and white toe caps. His right hand has a medium arm length fingerless glove in a celestial-red color. His black hair has an green accent in the front, and his eyebrows are black. He has a red letter "X" tattooed on his right cheek, and a couple bandage strips on his face: a horizontal one on the bridge of his nose, and a "X" shaped bandage on the left temple.

Bey: Superior Xanthus.Nn.6-A.Qc'

Layer: Superior (A dark-red plastic and purple rubber right-spin Attack Layer akin to a larger bladed Dead Hades layer. Like the Dead Hades Layer, it is mostly made of heavy metal, but with few metal contact points. Its primary contact points is made of hard rubber, increasing Superior's attack power. Because of the larger, more tilted blades, it is able to do upper attacks, but not too often).

Core Plate: Xanthus (A somewhat golden and dark-purple core. Its motif is one of the legendary horses gifted to Achillies, Xanthus. The avatar motif is dark-orangeish colored, with a small tinge of gold, and looks similar to Valkyrie's horse, only without wings. The middle has a small Amber gem within it. Clicks: Two strong clicks.)

Core Gear: Heavy

Disk: Nonaon (A Disk with 9 equally weighted blades curving inward, and looks similar to Karma from DB but for right-spins. Prongs say Nn. Weight: 30.4 grams)

Chassis Frame: 6-A (A red plastic and metal Chassis Frame that is similar to 4-A on Rage Longinus, only ported to the GX system, made right-spin viable, with longer blades, and finally into a Chassis Frame.)

Driver: Quick' (A clear red Quick with dark-purple rubber)

Bey Moves: Superior Smash: The Superior's primary attack point made of rubber smashes viciously into the opponent, causing major damage.
Superior Shoot: When the Quick' makes a sort of "X" pattern on an opposing Beyblade in the center.
Superior Dive: When Superior Xanthus is hit straight up into the air, comes hurtling down, and clashes with the opposing Beyblade, to perhaps burst the opponent.
Superior Upper: When the Superior Layer is low enough to go beneath the opposing beyblade, it does an upper attack, flinging the opponent high into the air, or just enough to do a KO.

This character was as fun to make as the first. At first, I was planning to make Xaviero as a kind of annoying and slightly irritating character, but it just couldn't fit with what I truly felt his character should be.
As always, feel free to modify him and his beyblade; I feel that his personality is much better explained than his brother, which is a good thing, but there might be some things that can be added or removed.

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Not on everyday, but I always check my messages, so don't hesitate to message me, as I will get to it sooner or later!

Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

I’ll submit my character today. Srry for the wait

I’ll submit my character today. Srry for the wait

They said the contest is closed

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I’ll submit my character today. Srry for the wait

They said the contest is closed

Ah, seriously? Rip. That’s a bummer

Not bad! May I register?

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I’ll submit my character today. Srry for the wait

They said the contest is closed

Nevermind.... Smh

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Name: Mason Murphy
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"

Personality: Mason is a very secretive boy who keeps things to himself unless asked about but then it still becomes a seventy thirty on if he'll tell you or not. His face is usually in a emotionless state though sometimes he shows other expressions. Due to his high intelligence he uses that to out strategize his opponents and make strategize for his teammates. He doesn't have any true friends because he always keeps them at a distance because of his past with fake friends and people betraying him at his old orphanage. People also call him weird due to him usually walking not in a upward position like everyone else but in a more slouched position with his hands in his pockets. Mason's main thing people get from an experience with him is the knowledge of his addiction to anything sweet like candy and tea though he'll also eat other things like bananas but he's not really a meat kinda guy.

Appearance: Mason is a very slim, pale, tall young man with messy neck-length black hair and black eyes (unless he uses his special move where his blue aura appears and his eyes and hair glow blue.) One of his most noticeable features is the shadow below each of his eyes, a result of him being an insomniac. He usually wears a long sleeve white shirt with blue jeans and white crocks with black socks unless forced to by his foster parents or pressured by the people on his team to look good then he'll wear a black shirt sleeve shirt, white jacket, black pants, and black sneakers.

Origins: Mason was given to an orphanage by his mother due to her not being able to pay the bills and get food for Mason. In Mason's experience in the orphanage he would regularly get bullied for being smarter than everyone there which pushed Mason to find something fun to do. In that search he discovered beyblade and fell in love with the game seeing it as a chess game where you have to predict and out play your opponent which is why Mason fell in love with left spinning beys due to their rarety and ability to surprise bladers using right spinning beys. One day Mason finally got adopted and continued his beyblade journey to the outside world where he plans to prove his skills to the world.

Bey: Michael Archangel Iconic Practical Xtreme'

GX Blade: Archangel (Archangel is a white left spin blade with two jagged blades with the one in front being bigger then the other on both the top and bottom and on the sides there are two attack points like L Drago or Longinus like dragon faces but instead of dragons they are metal angel heads with one on the left going down while the one on the right going up. On those angel heads their eyes are blue and on the attack points on the top and bottom there are two diagonal blue stripes on each blade.)

GX Core Plate: Michael (A white left spin Core Plate with a blue angel head faced side ways and looking at the bottom right corner with a blue wing looking to come out of its back.)

GX Core Gear: IWD

GX Plate: Iconic (A disc shaped like the metal piece of sting with two little dagger points on the top right and bottom left of the plate.)

GX Chassis Frame: Practical (A blue frame that lines up with the two metal attack points on Archangel.)

GX Driver: A white Xtreme' with blue rubber.

Special Moves:
Upper Archangel: Using the metal attack points on the Archangel blade Michael is able to send a opponents bey flying in the air. Mason never uses this move unless it is necessary because he prefers to out smart his opponents instead of out powering them.

I know that the contest is over but I was wondering if I made the cut or not since it seems most if not everyone got a answer if they passed the inspection but me

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Name: Mason Murphy
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"

Personality: Mason is a very secretive boy who keeps things to himself unless asked about but then it still becomes a seventy thirty on if he'll tell you or not. His face is usually in  a emotionless state though sometimes he shows other expressions. Due to his high intelligence he uses that to out strategize his opponents and make strategize for his teammates. He doesn't have any true friends because he always keeps them at a distance because of his past with fake friends and people betraying him at his old orphanage. People also call him weird due to him usually walking not in a upward position like everyone else but in a more slouched position with his hands in his pockets. Mason's main thing people get from an experience with him is the knowledge of his addiction to anything sweet like candy and tea though he'll also eat other things like bananas but he's not really a meat kinda guy.

Appearance: Mason is a very slim, pale, tall young man with messy neck-length black hair and black eyes (unless he uses his special move where his blue aura appears and his eyes and hair glow blue.) One of his most noticeable features is the shadow below each of his eyes, a result of him being an insomniac. He usually wears a long sleeve white shirt with blue jeans and white crocks with black socks unless forced to by his foster parents or pressured by the people on his team to look good then he'll  wear a black shirt sleeve shirt, white jacket, black pants, and black sneakers.

Origins: Mason was given to an orphanage by his mother due to her not being able to pay the bills and get food for Mason. In Mason's experience in the orphanage he would regularly get bullied for being smarter than everyone there which pushed Mason to find something fun to do. In that search he discovered beyblade and fell in love with the game seeing it as a chess game where you have to predict and out play your opponent which is why Mason fell in love with left spinning beys due to their rarety and ability to surprise bladers using right spinning beys. One day Mason finally got adopted and continued his beyblade journey to the outside world where he plans to prove his skills to the world.

Bey: Michael Archangel Iconic Practical Xtreme'

GX Blade: Archangel (Archangel is a white left spin blade with two jagged blades with the one in front being bigger then the other on both the top and bottom and on the sides there are two attack points like L Drago or Longinus like dragon faces but instead of dragons they are metal angel heads with one on the left going down while the one on the right going up. On those angel heads their eyes are blue and on the attack points on the top and bottom there are two diagonal blue stripes on each blade.)

GX Core Plate: Michael (A white left spin Core Plate with a blue angel head faced side ways and looking at the bottom right corner with a blue wing looking to come out of its back.)

GX Core Gear: IWD

GX Plate: Iconic (A disc shaped like the metal piece of sting with two little dagger points on the top right and bottom left of the plate.)

GX Chassis Frame: Practical (A blue frame that lines up with the two metal attack points on Archangel.)

GX Driver: A white Xtreme' with blue rubber.

Special Moves:
Upper Archangel: Using the metal attack points on the Archangel blade Michael is able to send a opponents bey flying in the air. Mason never uses this move unless it is necessary  because he prefers to out smart his opponents instead of out powering them.

I know that the contest is over but I was wondering if I made the cut or not since it seems most if not everyone got a answer if they passed the inspection but me

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I'm surprised no one said anything about yours. But no, you're not innit. Too many characters with the same personality / similar personalities was the cause.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

I know that the contest is over but I was wondering if I made the cut or not since it seems most if not everyone got a answer if they passed the inspection but me

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I'm surprised no one said anything about yours. But no, you're not innit. Too many characters with the same personality / similar personalities was the cause.

Oh alright thanks for answering my question though.

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Bad news, and good news, and worse news. (And slightly bad news)

1. The Bad News: Pink has been taken away from social platforms again guys, so that is a major setback.

2. The Worse News: Pink's parents have deleted every archive she had of this fan-fic

3. The Good News: We have the blueprint for 11 (?) episodes!

4. The Slightly bad news: Everyone started school so this might take a while to start.

When will I learn if my character passed or not?

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Oops, you passed lo.
Also should mention that the contest is closed so... Cold might update the thread title.

That's a bummer if only I joined the WBO before the contest ended because I have a oc I think you'll would've liked

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Ok guys, I swear that's the last time we'll be dead. Once again, I bring with me good news, bad news, and worse news.

Babadum baaaa

1. Good news: We finished every friggin Beyblade that will be included in this fan-fiction (including your entries) and we should be able to start posting episodes soon.

2. Bad news: I think all of our crew is dea- I mean inactive except for me and Hollow

3. Worse news: Pink is still gone and her discord account was deleted so we have no idea when she will be back or if she's coming back.


(Also I'll post a Beyblade here in a sec)

Ok guys, I swear that's the last time we'll be dead. Once again, I bring with me good news, bad news, and worse news.

Babadum baaaa

1. Good news: We finished every friggin Beyblade that will be included in this fan-fiction (including your entries) and we should be able to start posting episodes soon.

2. Bad news: I think all of our crew is dea- I mean inactive except for me and Hollow

3. Worse news: Pink is still gone and her discord account was deleted so we have no idea when she will be back or if she's coming back.


(Also I'll post a Beyblade here in a sec)

Wow it must've been a lot of work to add all of these oc's into the story.

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Ok guys, I swear that's the last time we'll be dead. Once again, I bring with me good news, bad news, and worse news.

Babadum baaaa

1. Good news: We finished every friggin Beyblade that will be included in this fan-fiction (including your entries) and we should be able to start posting episodes soon.

2. Bad news: I think all of our crew is dea- I mean inactive except for me and Hollow

3. Worse news: Pink is still gone and her discord account was deleted so we have no idea when she will be back or if she's coming back.


(Also I'll post a Beyblade here in a sec)

Wow it must've been a lot of work to add all of these oc's into the story.

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:^)
An ambitious project to say the least. It did took some time, but not as much as it sounds, quite the fun actually.
Wouldn't reccommend anyone to do that tho.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Wow it must've been a lot of work to add all of these oc's into the story.

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:^)
An ambitious project to say the least. It did took some time, but not as much as it sounds, quite the fun actually.
Wouldn't reccommend anyone to do that tho.

Yeah it definitely is. I would add my oc to this fan fic but I bet it would be very much a burden with these many complex oc's to fit in the story.

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:^)
An ambitious project to say the least. It did took some time, but not as much as it sounds, quite the fun actually.
Wouldn't reccommend anyone to do that tho.

Yeah it definitely is. I would add my oc to this fan fic but I bet it would be very much a burden with these many complex oc's to fit in the story.

Not really lol. The contest is just over and the episodes are already pretty much planned. Maybe in future seasons?

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Ok guys, I swear that's the last time we'll be dead. Once again, I bring with me good news, bad news, and worse news.

Babadum baaaa

1. Good news: We finished every friggin Beyblade that will be included in this fan-fiction (including your entries) and we should be able to start posting episodes soon.

2. Bad news: I think all of our crew is dea- I mean inactive except for me and Hollow

3. Worse news: Pink is still gone and her discord account was deleted so we have no idea when she will be back or if she's coming back.


(Also I'll post a Beyblade here in a sec)

(I swear I didn't forget this guys haha...)

Yeah it definitely is. I would add my oc to this fan fic but I bet it would be very much a burden with these many complex oc's to fit in the story.

Not really lol. The contest is just over and the episodes are already pretty much planned. Maybe in future seasons?

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Ok guys, I swear that's the last time we'll be dead. Once again, I bring with me good news, bad news, and worse news.

Babadum baaaa

1. Good news: We finished every friggin Beyblade that will be included in this fan-fiction (including your entries) and we should be able to start posting episodes soon.

2. Bad news: I think all of our crew is dea- I mean inactive except for me and Hollow

3. Worse news: Pink is still gone and her discord account was deleted so we have no idea when she will be back or if she's coming back.


(Also I'll post a Beyblade here in a sec)

(I swear I didn't forget this guys haha...)

Well anyway I'm really exited to see how the story for this series plays out.

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The main beys are here. Cold couldn't copy paste the descriptions for some reason and I kept forgetting to do it. Anywho, here it is.
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Astrea:

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Quasar Astrea Strain Transport A-6 
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Quasar: A left spin, attack type GX Blade. It features 3 blades sloping slightly upwards as the contact points, it also has rubber on it to increase attack power. It has a gimmick: When it gets two clicks, the 3 blades unlock and charge full-speed to a big attack. Once it's activated, the blades lock again and reveal other 3 smaller blades, made for parrying attacks. The blade's base color is light blue with glittery silver details, the rubber is pink and the metal is silver. 
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Astrea: A left spin GX Core. It has a six-petal flower motif to represent its namesake; Astrea, the Greek virgin goddess of justice, innocence, purity and precision. The outer Ring of the Core is a translucent ice blue, the flower shape is pink.
Teeth position: 2 medium teeth, one at the beginning and one at the end, with a little tab on the middle, akin to Gen, where the 2 middle teeth should be (basically a tall, wide tooth taking the space of 2 but being a burst stopper). 
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Metal Core - BWD: The gear with BWD. It is an in-between Speed and Wing and, as such, doesn't have much prominent effects in any area.
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Strain: A GX Disc (an adaptation of Strain for the GX system). It has semi heavy weight. It features a gimmick: There's an outer spring loaded rubber ring on its perimeter. The mechanism locks only in one way, so all left spin beys will have the disc rotate on the same motion as the layer, opposite for right spin.
Due to it's rubber outer ring, it has bad LAD. 
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Transport - An attack type driver. It features a shape similar to a wider version of Blow. It has a thin layer of rubber that wears down easily, when it wears down there is metal for aggressive attacks. It is also spring loaded so the Beyblade kind of jumps when launched. (The rubber is replaceable)
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A-6: A left oriented GX Chassis attachment. It is a 3 bladed version of 3A (sparking double chassis). It has amazing upper attack potential paired with Quasar.

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Calliope:

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Symphony Calliope Flute9 Note
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Symphony: A right spin, defense type GX Blade. It features a wavy design with 6 "blades" and rollers between them. The rollers are bigger than those on Satomb and are made of rubber. The layer can also free spin depending on the mode it is.
Free-spin mode: The Blade can free spin, but the rollers are fixed.
Locked mode: The Blade does not free spin, but the rollers now move.
The blade is silver with red around it, golden rollers, and golden details.
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Calliope: A right spin GX Core. It features a music note in the middle, with golden laurels surronding it and two red eyes below the laurels. The music note made out of metal.
Teeth position: 6 teeth with 1 Gen-like tab at the middle.
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Weight Core - Dense: It is a more compact Core Gear. Giving amazing grip to the stadium but less stamina. It also gives amazing KO resistance.
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Flute9: A Fused-to-Frame GX Disc. It features an average weight for an defense type and a smooth fused frame that can't be removed. It features good LAD.
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Note: A defense type driver with a shape similar to Mobius. It is similar to a fusion between Dimension and Orbit: The tip features a free spinning ball a bit smaller than Atomic. It features a height change gimmick:
High G - The highest. The plate makes no contact.
Middle C - The in-between. The plate makes some contact
Low E - The lowest. The plate makes more contact

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Chaos:

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Desolate Chaos Magnitude Empty S-3
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Desolate: A right-spin, stamina type GX Blade. It features 2 large wing-like blades that goes in by a spring mechanism. On the space between each wing, there's a gap that feature a blade sticking out, giving some recoil. It features a gimmick: Once one of the blades go in, it burst resistance increases by making the disc have contact with rubber. When the gimmick is activated, the recoil is reduced and adds counterattack power
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Chaos: A right spin GX Core Plate. It features a pink orb in the middle and 1 set of eyes on opposite sides that complete the other set of eyes on the stock blade. It has 3 medium teeth. The eyes are yellow, the core is blue with a white outer line.
Teeth position: 1 weak tooth followed by slopes, then 1 average tooth
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Wing Core - OWD: The Gear with most OWD. Giving the combo more stamina and somewhat slower RPM, it also gives stronger attacks and a bit of burst resistance.
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Magnitude: A GX Disc that features an overall oval shape, with weight focused on the two extremes of the oval. It is mainly OWD focused.
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Empty: A stamina type driver that features a low angled free spinning cone tip with a gimmick similar to a mix of Absorb and Bearing: The tip is spring loaded, similar to Nothing, and when compressed enough, it locks up.
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S-3: A GX Frame. It features high OWD but it is quite elliptical.

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Those are the main cast's beys, there might be an inconsistency or 2, so don't hesitate to ask about it.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

I have returned peoples. I lost my account for a while and didn't really put much effort into getting it back until now because of school. As soon as I get in contact with Hollow again HOPEFULLY he'll be out of school and we can work on this more. Apologies for the wait.