Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Balam Young

Age: 16

Height: 6'0"

Personality: He's cold and calculating being able to manipulate whoever he wants, he is also hard headed with his beliefs, and passionate. His plan is to unite the Beyblade world under one banner by making himself the enemy of the beyblade world and becoming strong enough that every beyblade organization's bladers have to unite to stop him. Which will cause peace and stop the hatred of blading organizations different bladers such as Hell's bladers hating WBBA bladers.

Appearance: Balam has green eyes and shoulder long black hair. He wears a green long sleeve shirt, black jeans, black jacket, and some black Air Force 1's.

Origins: Balam lived in a home with his mom, dad, and sister. In those years of innocents he liked to battle his sister but one day everything changed. His mother and father got a divorce splitting him and his sister away from each other with him living with his mother while his sister lived with his father. But one day his mother died at the hospital after a car accident so now Balam became all alone. Then one day he was watching beyblade battles and saw the hate between bladers from every organization and after realizing his life went to ruin from the divorce of his parents he put the burden on himself to unite the beyblade world so everyone could be happy together and not be split apart like him and his sister. So to do so he planned to become strong enough where the only way to stop his rampage of destruction on the beyblade world is for all the organization's bladers having to unite to destroy him and after that event creating peace among bladers.

Bey: Rebel Beelzebub Burn Zone'+Z

GX Blade: Rebel (A black dual spinning blade that can flip to change spin directions. There are 4 attack points on the blade with them being shaped like the points from Master. The blade also has skulls that have green eyes and have black trails that makes it look likes the skulls are souls coming out of the core plate.)

GX Core Plate: Beelzebub (A dual spinning core plate that has a black devil with silver horns in the center with green eyes and has openings in it's skin revealing the inside of it is green.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Burn (Basically the DX. version of wheel)

GX Driver: A black Zone' with a green +Z

Special Moves:
Rebel Upper: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in right spin mode Beelzebub can send a bey flying into the air with a uppercut.

Rebel Smash: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in left spin mode Beelzebub can smash into the opponent bey bursting it or sending the bey flying into one of the sides of the stadium causing the opponents bey to burst off the side of the stadium.

Berserk Mode: When Balam is stuck and is in a hard place where he can't defeat his opponent he starts getting angry with his aura changing from green to red and his eyes start glowing red instead of green and all the green parts on Beelzebub starts glowing red and Balam starts acting crazy and Beelzebub goes berserk destroying everything in its way. Even though this mode is wild and uncontrollable it is when Beelzebub is at its strongest.

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Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Balam Young

Age: 16

Height: 6'0"

Personality: He's cold and calculating being able to manipulate whoever he wants, he is also hard headed with his beliefs, and passionate. His plan is to unite the Beyblade world under one banner by making himself the enemy of the beyblade world and becoming strong enough that every beyblade organization's bladers have to unite to stop him. Which will cause peace and stop the hatred of blading organizations different bladers such as Hell's bladers hating WBBA bladers.

Appearance: Balam has green eyes and shoulder long black hair. He wears a green long sleeve shirt, black jeans, black jacket, and some black Air Force 1's.

Origins: Balam lived in a home with his mom, dad, and sister. In those years of innocents he liked to battle his sister but one day everything changed. His mother and father got a divorce splitting him and his sister away from each other with him living with his mother while his sister lived with his father. But one day his mother died at the hospital after a car accident so now Balam became all alone. Then one day he was watching beyblade battles and saw the hate between bladers from every organization and after realizing his life went to ruin from the divorce of his parents he put the burden on himself to unite the beyblade world so everyone could be happy together and not be split apart like him and his sister. So to do so he planned to become strong enough where the only way to stop his rampage of destruction on the beyblade world is for all the organization's bladers having to unite to destroy him and after that event creating peace among bladers.

Bey: Rebel Beelzebub Burn Zone'+Z

GX Blade: Rebel (A black dual spinning blade that can flip to change spin directions. There are 4 attack points on the blade  with them being shaped like the points from Master. The blade also has skulls that have green eyes and have black trails that makes it look likes the skulls are souls coming out of the core plate.)

GX Core Plate: Beelzebub (A dual spinning core plate that has a black devil with silver horns in the center with green eyes and has openings in it's skin revealing the inside of it is green.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Burn (Basically the DX. version of wheel)

GX Driver: A black Zone' with a green +Z

Special Moves:
Rebel Upper: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in right spin mode Beelzebub can send a bey flying into the air with a uppercut.

Rebel Smash: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in left spin mode Beelzebub can smash into the opponent bey bursting it or sending the bey flying into one of the sides of the stadium causing the opponents bey to burst off the side of the stadium.

Berserk Mode: When Balam is stuck and is in a hard place where he can't defeat his opponent he starts getting angry with his aura changing from green to red and his eyes start glowing red instead of green and all the green parts on Beelzebub starts glowing red and Balam starts acting crazy and Beelzebub goes berserk destroying everything in its way. Even though this mode is wild and uncontrollable it is when Beelzebub is at its strongest.

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How do people even find this thread?
Anyhow, this one might come in handy with his beliefs. Though we might tone down the edgy-ness by -11.
Not saying for sure you're in, you're just not out yet.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Balam Young

Age: 16

Height: 6'0"

Personality: He's cold and calculating being able to manipulate whoever he wants, he is also hard headed with his beliefs, and passionate. His plan is to unite the Beyblade world under one banner by making himself the enemy of the beyblade world and becoming strong enough that every beyblade organization's bladers have to unite to stop him. Which will cause peace and stop the hatred of blading organizations different bladers such as Hell's bladers hating WBBA bladers.

Appearance: Balam has green eyes and shoulder long black hair. He wears a green long sleeve shirt, black jeans, black jacket, and some black Air Force 1's.

Origins: Balam lived in a home with his mom, dad, and sister. In those years of innocents he liked to battle his sister but one day everything changed. His mother and father got a divorce splitting him and his sister away from each other with him living with his mother while his sister lived with his father. But one day his mother died at the hospital after a car accident so now Balam became all alone. Then one day he was watching beyblade battles and saw the hate between bladers from every organization and after realizing his life went to ruin from the divorce of his parents he put the burden on himself to unite the beyblade world so everyone could be happy together and not be split apart like him and his sister. So to do so he planned to become strong enough where the only way to stop his rampage of destruction on the beyblade world is for all the organization's bladers having to unite to destroy him and after that event creating peace among bladers.

Bey: Rebel Beelzebub Burn Zone'+Z

GX Blade: Rebel (A black dual spinning blade that can flip to change spin directions. There are 4 attack points on the blade  with them being shaped like the points from Master. The blade also has skulls that have green eyes and have black trails that makes it look likes the skulls are souls coming out of the core plate.)

GX Core Plate: Beelzebub (A dual spinning core plate that has a black devil with silver horns in the center with green eyes and has openings in it's skin revealing the inside of it is green.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Burn (Basically the DX. version of wheel)

GX Driver: A black Zone' with a green +Z

Special Moves:
Rebel Upper: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in right spin mode Beelzebub can send a bey flying into the air with a uppercut.

Rebel Smash: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in left spin mode Beelzebub can smash into the opponent bey bursting it or sending the bey flying into one of the sides of the stadium causing the opponents bey to burst off the side of the stadium.

Berserk Mode: When Balam is stuck and is in a hard place where he can't defeat his opponent he starts getting angry with his aura changing from green to red and his eyes start glowing red instead of green and all the green parts on Beelzebub starts glowing red and Balam starts acting crazy and Beelzebub goes berserk destroying everything in its way. Even though this mode is wild and uncontrollable it is when Beelzebub is at its strongest.

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How do people even find this thread?
Anyhow, this one might come in handy with his beliefs. Though we might tone down the edgy-ness by -11.
Not saying for sure you're in, you're just not out yet.

Alright thanks for reading it

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Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Balam Young

Age: 16

Height: 6'0"

Personality: He's cold and calculating being able to manipulate whoever he wants, he is also hard headed with his beliefs, and passionate. His plan is to unite the Beyblade world under one banner by making himself the enemy of the beyblade world and becoming strong enough that every beyblade organization's bladers have to unite to stop him. Which will cause peace and stop the hatred of blading organizations different bladers such as Hell's bladers hating WBBA bladers.

Appearance: Balam has green eyes and shoulder long black hair. He wears a green long sleeve shirt, black jeans, black jacket, and some black Air Force 1's.

Origins: Balam lived in a home with his mom, dad, and sister. In those years of innocents he liked to battle his sister but one day everything changed. His mother and father got a divorce splitting him and his sister away from each other with him living with his mother while his sister lived with his father. But one day his mother died at the hospital after a car accident so now Balam became all alone. Then one day he was watching beyblade battles and saw the hate between bladers from every organization and after realizing his life went to ruin from the divorce of his parents he put the burden on himself to unite the beyblade world so everyone could be happy together and not be split apart like him and his sister. So to do so he planned to become strong enough where the only way to stop his rampage of destruction on the beyblade world is for all the organization's bladers having to unite to destroy him and after that event creating peace among bladers.

Bey: Rebel Beelzebub Burn Zone'+Z

GX Blade: Rebel (A black dual spinning blade that can flip to change spin directions. There are 4 attack points on the blade with them being shaped like the points from Master. The blade also has skulls that have green eyes and have black trails that makes it look likes the skulls are souls coming out of the core plate.)

GX Core Plate: Beelzebub (A dual spinning core plate that has a black devil with silver horns in the center with green eyes and has openings in it's skin revealing the inside of it is green.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Burn (Basically the DX. version of wheel)

GX Driver: A black Zone' with a green +Z

Special Moves:
Rebel Upper: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in right spin mode Beelzebub can send a bey flying into the air with a uppercut.

Rebel Smash: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in left spin mode Beelzebub can smash into the opponent bey bursting it or sending the bey flying into one of the sides of the stadium causing the opponents bey to burst off the side of the stadium.

Berserk Mode: When Balam is stuck and is in a hard place where he can't defeat his opponent he starts getting angry with his aura changing from green to red and his eyes start glowing red instead of green and all the green parts on Beelzebub starts glowing red and Balam starts acting crazy and Beelzebub goes berserk destroying everything in its way. Even though this mode is wild and uncontrollable it is when Beelzebub is at its strongest.

IF we add him in, we are 100% not making him god. I mean, come on. First off, there is absolutely NO way, that Hell, Spark Devils, etc. etc. Would all come together to defeat ONE 16 year old. Also the dude turns to the dark side just to unite the blading world?? Look, if that were actually the case, and some blader went THAT FAR to become the strongest in the world so that the WHOLE blading world has to come together to beat him, theres no way that after he's been beaten by the whole blading world he's just gonna be able to smile and say "It's just a prank bro." If we do add him in, you'd have to be fine with us changing him by 90%, if that.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Balam Young

Age: 16

Height: 6'0"

Personality: He's cold and calculating being able to manipulate whoever he wants, he is also hard headed with his beliefs, and passionate. His plan is to unite the Beyblade world under one banner by making himself the enemy of the beyblade world and becoming strong enough that every beyblade organization's bladers have to unite to stop him. Which will cause peace and stop the hatred of blading organizations different bladers such as Hell's bladers hating WBBA bladers.

Appearance: Balam has green eyes and shoulder long black hair. He wears a green long sleeve shirt, black jeans, black jacket, and some black Air Force 1's.

Origins: Balam lived in a home with his mom, dad, and sister. In those years of innocents he liked to battle his sister but one day everything changed. His mother and father got a divorce splitting him and his sister away from each other with him living with his mother while his sister lived with his father. But one day his mother died at the hospital after a car accident so now Balam became all alone. Then one day he was watching beyblade battles and saw the hate between bladers from every organization and after realizing his life went to ruin from the divorce of his parents he put the burden on himself to unite the beyblade world so everyone could be happy together and not be split apart like him and his sister. So to do so he planned to become strong enough where the only way to stop his rampage of destruction on the beyblade world is for all the organization's bladers having to unite to destroy him and after that event creating peace among bladers.

Bey: Rebel Beelzebub Burn Zone'+Z

GX Blade: Rebel (A black dual spinning blade that can flip to change spin directions. There are 4 attack points on the blade with them being shaped like the points from Master. The blade also has skulls that have green eyes and have black trails that makes it look likes the skulls are souls coming out of the core plate.)

GX Core Plate: Beelzebub (A dual spinning core plate that has a black devil with silver horns in the center with green eyes and has openings in it's skin revealing the inside of it is green.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Burn (Basically the DX. version of wheel)

GX Driver: A black Zone' with a green +Z

Special Moves:
Rebel Upper: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in right spin mode Beelzebub can send a bey flying into the air with a uppercut.

Rebel Smash: When Balam's resonance appears and his eyes glow green the green eyes and parts on Beelzebub will glow and the ring will glow green by Beelzebub channeling all its energy into the Rebel ring when it's in left spin mode Beelzebub can smash into the opponent bey bursting it or sending the bey flying into one of the sides of the stadium causing the opponents bey to burst off the side of the stadium.

Berserk Mode: When Balam is stuck and is in a hard place where he can't defeat his opponent he starts getting angry with his aura changing from green to red and his eyes start glowing red instead of green and all the green parts on Beelzebub starts glowing red and Balam starts acting crazy and Beelzebub goes berserk destroying everything in its way. Even though this mode is wild and uncontrollable it is when Beelzebub is at its strongest.

IF we add him in, we are 100% not making him god. I mean, come on. First off, there is absolutely NO way, that Hell, Spark Devils, etc. etc. Would all come together to defeat ONE 16 year old. Also the dude turns to the dark side just to unite the blading world?? Look, if that were actually the case, and some blader went THAT FAR to become the strongest in the world so that the WHOLE blading world has to come together to beat him, theres no way that after he's been beaten by the whole blading world he's just gonna be able to smile and say "It's just a prank bro." If we do add him in, you'd have to be fine with us changing him by 90%, if that.

Alright sure. Though about your "It's just a prank bro" my plan was for him to go into hiding and away from society and only come back if he is truly needed.

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IF we add him in, we are 100% not making him god. I mean, come on. First off, there is absolutely NO way, that Hell, Spark Devils, etc. etc. Would all come together to defeat ONE 16 year old. Also the dude turns to the dark side just to unite the blading world?? Look, if that were actually the case, and some blader went THAT FAR to become the strongest in the world so that the WHOLE blading world has to come together to beat him, theres no way that after he's been beaten by the whole blading world he's just gonna be able to smile and say "It's just a prank bro." If we do add him in, you'd have to be fine with us changing him by 90%, if that.

Alright sure. Though about your "It's just a prank bro" my plan was for him to go into hiding and away from society and only come back if he is truly needed.

I like this character because it reminds me of Eren but I don't think this would work in a burst fan fiction. The character would probably work the best in like Metal Fight since it has a better infuses of blading organizations and is more mystical then realistic.

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I seem to like this series's vibe, so I guess Ill join in the Character Contest if its alright with the author.

It will be my first Character Contest, but Ill try my best to make my character as good as I can ^^.

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Not on everyday, but I always check my messages, so don't hesitate to message me, as I will get to it sooner or later!

Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

Hope you like my oc since it's my first. Sorry if the whole passed down from generation to generation and Theseus giving Terry information from all the bladers who used Theseus is too mystical I just thought it was a cool idea so I decided to implement it.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Terry Allen

Age: 15

Height: 5'2"

Personality: As a result of his early childhood years, Terry got the title of "clean freak" from his fellow teammates because he prefers his environment and himself spotlessly clea which is why if you want to join United Army before you can battle you have to prove your cleaning abilities to Terry. He is averse to having either himself or his equipment dirty, which is why he'll be wiping himself and his equipment mid battle or when he's on the bench. However, he will not hesitate to battle with dirty equipment body if he deems it necessary to win so he doesn't have to concentrate on cleaning. Despite his preoccupation with cleanliness, Terry is not very approachable. He rarely shows emotion, giving a cold impression to others. His manner of speaking tends to be very blunt, even insulting, and his comments are often coarse or inappropriate. He is not above provoking or belittling those who oppose or irritate him. His sense of humor tends toward the vulgar, insulting, and dark. All of this makes him unsettling to a great number of people.

Appearance: Terry has short, straight black hair styled in an undercut curtain, as well as narrow, intimidating dull gray eyes with dark circles under them and a deceptively youthful face. He is quite short, but his physique is well-developed in musculature from extensive physical training. He is usually either frowning or expressionless; that, plus his extremely calm demeanor, often makes it difficult for others to guess what he is thinking. When he is out doing things and not blading he wears a blue t shirt, a black long sleeve jacket, black sweat pants, and pure black shoes. But when he's training or blading in tournaments he'll wear his blading uniform which consists of a white button up long sleeve shirt, brown long sleeve jacket with the teams symbol on the left pocket of the jacket that being a pair of silver wings, black paints with a brown belt, black shoes, and a white ascot he uses to clean his equipment and himself.

Origins: Terry lived in a household with a single mother after his father passed away. In his fathers side of the family there were many strong bladers with them all passing down the bey Theseus from generation to generation so their children could become a strong blader as well. On Terry's 14th birthday Terry was snooping around his fathers room where he found Theseus which his father was supposed to give to him on his birthday. After grabbing Theseus he made a strong connection with him due to Theseus being connected to the Allen family blood. After two months of Terry using Theseus he practiced a lot with Theseus helping him giving him techniques and information passed from his family's blood line for generations giving him the blading information from every blader in his family and finally on the fifth month Terry decided to evolve Hero Theseus into General Theseus. Months from then Terry decided to make a blading club at his school to follow in the footsteps of Valt and due to the story of Valt and the Beigoma Academy beyclub many people signed up so they could be the next great team. At the current point of the story Terry has used his blading skills to make his school the number one school in blading in his state and is planning to make his team the best blading team in the world.

Bey: General Theseus Artillery Flak Destroy'

GX Blade: General (A green right spin blade shaped like Imperial and has the ability to ricochet off other beys and the stadium walls with it's spring loaded blades that have metal on top.)

GX Core Plate: Theseus (A green right spin chip with the center symbol being a golden knight with a silver sword.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Artillery (A circular disc that has three little rectangular points sticking out on the left and right side.)

GX Chassis Frame: Flak (A circular silver frame with little missing pieces in the circular frame creating edges like expand does.)

GX Driver: A green Destroy'

Special Moves:

Bound Slash: When General hits the side of the stadium the wings lock into place like God Valkyrie causing a strong attack to come from the blade.

Destroy Drive: By using the free spinning part of Destroy' Theseus grinds on the stadium like Satan causing a more concentrating attack.

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Hope you like my oc since it's my first. Sorry if the whole passed down from generation to generation and Theseus giving Terry information from all the bladers who used Theseus is too mystical I just thought it was a cool idea so I decided to implement it.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Terry Allen

Age: 15

Height: 5'2"

Personality: As a result of his early childhood years, Terry got the title of "clean freak" from his fellow teammates because he prefers his environment and himself spotlessly clea which is why if you want to join United Army before you can battle you have to prove your cleaning abilities to Terry. He is averse to having either himself or his equipment dirty, which is why he'll be wiping himself and his equipment mid battle or when he's on the bench. However, he will not hesitate to battle with dirty equipment body if he deems it necessary to win so he doesn't have to concentrate on cleaning. Despite his preoccupation with cleanliness, Terry is not very approachable. He rarely shows emotion, giving a cold impression to others. His manner of speaking tends to be very blunt, even insulting, and his comments are often coarse or inappropriate. He is not above provoking or belittling those who oppose or irritate him. His sense of humor tends toward the vulgar, insulting, and dark. All of this makes him unsettling to a great number of people.

Appearance: Terry has short, straight black hair styled in an undercut curtain, as well as narrow, intimidating dull gray eyes with dark circles under them and a deceptively youthful face. He is quite short, but his physique is well-developed in musculature from extensive physical training. He is usually either frowning or expressionless; that, plus his extremely calm demeanor, often makes it difficult for others to guess what he is thinking. When he is out doing things and not blading he wears a blue t shirt, a black long sleeve jacket, black sweat pants, and pure black shoes. But when he's training or blading in tournaments he'll wear his blading uniform which consists of a white button up long sleeve shirt, brown long sleeve jacket with the teams symbol on the left pocket of the jacket that being a pair of silver wings, black paints with a brown belt, black shoes, and a white ascot he uses to clean his equipment and himself.

Origins: Terry lived in a household with a single mother after his father passed away. In his fathers side of the family there were many strong bladers with them all passing down the bey Theseus from generation to generation so their children could become a strong blader as well. On Terry's 14th birthday Terry was snooping around his fathers room where he found Theseus which his father was supposed to give to him on his birthday. After grabbing Theseus he made a strong connection with him due to Theseus being connected to the Allen family blood. After two months of Terry using Theseus he practiced a lot with Theseus helping him giving him techniques and information passed from his family's blood line for generations giving him the blading information from every blader in his family and finally on the fifth month Terry decided to evolve Hero Theseus into General Theseus. Months from then Terry decided to make a blading club at his school to follow in the footsteps of Valt and due to the story of Valt and the Beigoma Academy beyclub many people signed up so they could be the next great team. At the current point of the story Terry has used his blading skills to make his school the number one school in blading in his state and is planning to make his team the best blading team in the world.

Bey: General Theseus Artillery Flak Destroy'

GX Blade: General (A green right spin blade shaped like Imperial and has the ability to ricochet off other beys and the stadium walls with it's spring loaded blades that have metal on top.)

GX Core Plate: Theseus (A green right spin chip with the center symbol being a golden knight with a silver sword.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Artillery (A circular disc that has three little rectangular points sticking out on the left and right side.)

GX Chassis Frame: Flak (A circular silver frame with little missing pieces in the circular frame creating edges like expand does.)

GX Driver: A green Destroy'

Special Moves:

Bound Slash: When General hits the side of the stadium the wings lock into place like God Valkyrie causing a strong attack to come from the blade.

Destroy Drive: By using the free spinning part of Destroy' Theseus grinds on the stadium like Satan causing a more concentrating attack.

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We can't really complain about mystical stuff when we have some of our own (Unless it is nonsense •- •). And beys speaking to bladers is normal by it's own in the fictional part of beyblade.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

So sorry guys... We are just reusing Zwei- **Gets shot to death** (btw, energy gear is the new name for chassis)
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Tyrant Longinus Calamity3 Torment
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Tyrant: A left spin, attack type GX Blade. It features an overall shape similar to one of it's predecessors, Bloody Longinus. It has 4 spear-shaped blades with dragon heads on it, two of which are similar to Rage while the other 2 are like Bloody. Unlike Bloody, it has more edgy and sharp points to improve attacks. (the Rage blades give upper attacks while the Blood blades give smash attacks)
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Longinus: A left spin GX Core Plate. It features a design similar to Zwei Longinus, having 2 dragon heads at the middle to despict it's motif: Longinus
Teeth position: 3 Strong teeth.
The heads have metal.
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Weight Core - Dense: It is the heaviest gear. Giving good grip to the stadium but somewhat less stamina. It also gives amazing KO resistance.
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Calamity2: A GX Disc fused with the Energy Gear. It shares aspects with Drake, having 2 dragon heads on the disc section and 4 metal dragon heads covered in plastic, two big and two smaller, on the Energy Gear section. They can align with the Carnage blade to heavily increase the attack power.
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Torment: An attack type driver. It features a Zephyr-like tip. It has a metal plate similar to Destroy, but with a rubber perimeter. Its plate can lock up if pushed enough, giving a speed boost.

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Oh No! If an ice dragon wasn't enough, now we have an earth one!!
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Aether Dragon Discharge A-1
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Aether: A right spin, attack type GX Blade. It features an overall shape similar to Tempest. Two of it's blades will pop-out once it is mid-way from bursting, gaining bound, while the other two can be pushed back with strong enough hits to reveal rubber, akin to Imperial.
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Dragon: A GX Core that features a dragon in the center slashing with it's claws to represent the motif: Dragon. Shares similarities with Imperial and Tempest chips.
Teeth position: 4 Average teeth
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Metal Core - BWD: The gear with BWD. It is an in-between Speed and Wing and, as such, doesn't have much prominent status changes.
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Discharge': A fused-to-disc electrical driver. It features an overall shape similar to Charge, with one small tip at the center surrounded by a sharp, spiky metal-coated circle. But instead of the small plastic tip, it has a red tip that is electrically powered. The tip activates periodically mid-battle and can either go to the opposite spin direction or the same. It has a golden spring akin to any dash driver.
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A-1: A GX Frame. It features a shape similar to 1A (sparking chassis), with plastic blades that, when hit, can deal some damage.

Hope you like my oc since it's my first. Sorry if the whole passed down from generation to generation and Theseus giving Terry information from all the bladers who used Theseus is too mystical I just thought it was a cool idea so I decided to implement it.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Terry Allen

Age: 15

Height: 5'2"

Personality: As a result of his early childhood years, Terry got the title of "clean freak" from his fellow teammates because he prefers his environment and himself spotlessly clea which is why if you want to join United Army before you can battle you have to prove your cleaning abilities to Terry. He is averse to having either himself or his equipment dirty, which is why he'll be wiping himself and his equipment mid battle or when he's on the bench. However, he will not hesitate to battle with dirty equipment body if he deems it necessary to win so he doesn't have to concentrate on cleaning. Despite his preoccupation with cleanliness, Terry is not very approachable. He rarely shows emotion, giving a cold impression to others. His manner of speaking tends to be very blunt, even insulting, and his comments are often coarse or inappropriate. He is not above provoking or belittling those who oppose or irritate him. His sense of humor tends toward the vulgar, insulting, and dark. All of this makes him unsettling to a great number of people.

Appearance: Terry has short, straight black hair styled in an undercut curtain, as well as narrow, intimidating dull gray eyes with dark circles under them and a deceptively youthful face. He is quite short, but his physique is well-developed in musculature from extensive physical training. He is usually either frowning or expressionless; that, plus his extremely calm demeanor, often makes it difficult for others to guess what he is thinking. When he is out doing things and not blading he wears a blue t shirt, a black long sleeve jacket, black sweat pants, and pure black shoes. But when he's training or blading in tournaments he'll wear his blading uniform which consists of a white button up long sleeve shirt, brown long sleeve jacket with the teams symbol on the left pocket of the jacket that being a pair of silver wings, black paints with a brown belt, black shoes, and a white ascot he uses to clean his equipment and himself.

Origins: Terry lived in a household with a single mother after his father passed away. In his fathers side of the family there were many strong bladers with them all passing down the bey Theseus from generation to generation so their children could become a strong blader as well. On Terry's 14th birthday Terry was snooping around his fathers room where he found Theseus which his father was supposed to give to him on his birthday. After grabbing Theseus he made a strong connection with him due to Theseus being connected to the Allen family blood. After two months of Terry using Theseus he practiced a lot with Theseus helping him giving him techniques and information passed from his family's blood line for generations giving him the blading information from every blader in his family and finally on the fifth month Terry decided to evolve Hero Theseus into General Theseus. Months from then Terry decided to make a blading club at his school to follow in the footsteps of Valt and due to the story of Valt and the Beigoma Academy beyclub many people signed up so they could be the next great team. At the current point of the story Terry has used his blading skills to make his school the number one school in blading in his state and is planning to make his team the best blading team in the world.

Bey: General Theseus Artillery Flak Destroy'

GX Blade: General (A green right spin blade shaped like Imperial and has the ability to ricochet off other beys and the stadium walls with it's spring loaded blades that have metal on top.)

GX Core Plate: Theseus (A green right spin chip with the center symbol being a golden knight with a silver sword.)

GX Core Gear: OWD

GX Plate: Artillery (A circular disc that has three little rectangular points sticking out on the left and right side.)

GX Chassis Frame: Flak (A circular silver frame with little missing pieces in the circular frame creating edges like expand does.)

GX Driver: A green Destroy'

Special Moves:

Bound Slash: When General hits the side of the stadium the wings lock into place like God Valkyrie causing a strong attack to come from the blade.

Destroy Drive: By using the free spinning part of Destroy' Theseus grinds on the stadium like Satan causing a more concentrating attack.

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We can't really complain about mystical stuff when we have some of our own (Unless it is nonsense •- •). And beys speaking to bladers is normal by it's own in the fictional part of beyblade.

So has my character passed the inspection or do I have to do some changing like Tatake?

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We can't really complain about mystical stuff when we have some of our own (Unless it is nonsense •- •). And beys speaking to bladers is normal by it's own in the fictional part of beyblade.

So has my character passed the inspection or do I have to do some changing like Tatake?

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Yours is likely to pass with some minor changes (More insecure and less cold + a diagnose). Tatake's is likely to not pass because we have plenty of bladers similar to Balam.
You don't need to worry about changes as we can handle it ourselves in this case.
However, Tatake . If you read above this line you know. I'd suggest toning down the edgelord vibes on Balam, perhaps limit the origin story to just divorce rather than death and also change the motivation a little (I like the little anarchist energy he has, but you could just make his current motivation less anime protagonist-y. You decide tho). If you want an example you can just ask and I'll PM it to you.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

As a little sneak-peek for my character, before I release him too late, Ill make sure I say his name and Beyblade before someone takes the names:

Name for Character: Benjamin Gaunt

Name for his Beyblade: Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus

Reminder: This is NOT my actual submission, just a sneak-peek and a claim of ownership.
I should have the submission soon today.

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Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

As a little sneak-peek for my character, before I release him too late, Ill make sure I say his name and Beyblade before someone takes the names:

Name for Character: Benjamin Gaunt

Name for his Beyblade: Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus

Reminder: This is NOT my actual submission, just a sneak-peek and a claim of ownership.
I should have the submission soon today.

Too little detail!! >

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(Joking btw)

Here is my finished submission. Worked on it until late yesterday, into today. I hope you guys will like it!!! ^^

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Benjamin Gaunt
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5 '1

Personality: Benjamin (can also be called Ben for short) Has a mild-mannered and calm personality. He comes from Minnesota, and moved to New York with his family, after his father found a new job there that paid better. Soon after his arrival in New York, he immediatly signed up to be a team member of the Raging Bulls, and was accepted for his skills.. He loves Beyblading with every fiber of his being, and is very close to his little brother Xaviero Gaunt(might create Xaviero as a rival if Benjamin gets accepted). He first started blading using the Cho-Z system, inspired to use that system by watching Aiga Akaba winning the Champion Title against Valt Aoi.

Appearance: Benjamin appears a bit shorter compared to some of the other characters. He has dark-brown hair, fair skin and sky-blue eyes. He also has dark-red markings on his left and right cheek below his eye; the upper markings appears lightning-shaped, and the middle and lower markings are right triangle shaped. Benjamin wears a outfit similar to Valt's GT attire, but in different colors. He wears an red short-sleeved hoodie with a golden B emblem on the front, a dark-green body warmer with dark-yelow markings on the front and a red Beyblade symbol on the back, black gloves with red cuffs, blue pant with white stripes at the ends with a black belt, and black boots with white soles, two red stripes, and light-red borders.

Bey: Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus.Bl.5-B.HXt+'

Layer: Chaotic (A Right-spin black plastic and dark-red colored Balance Layer featuring two massive blades similar to Guilty, but reversed with metal on the top on the opposite sides. The only place the simalereties end is that the blades are turned to right-spin, and they have metal wings within them similar to Crash Ragnaruk's gimmick, to increase stamina. The top and bottom of the Layer feature merged interchangable modes of contact points both being Attack and Defense. You can change these modes by simply sliding the preset mode off of the Layer using a specially designed tool, flipping both Balance Modes around to the desired mode, and connecting it back by sliding it back into place until it clicks twice, telling you that the Balance Modes have been locked in to the Layer).

Second Layer: Supreme ( A Left-spin black plastic and blue metal colored Attack Layer featuring nearly the exact shape as Infinite Achillies's Layer, Infinite, but made left-spin. The place where the simalereties end, is in the middle of each blade. The middle of each blade has a rubber free-spinning place like all itterations of Satan's Layers, to deflect attacks, or do minimal spin-stealing. The primary attack points have metal on them (As in the points that get hit first), to deal strong hits to an opposing beyblade. The rest of the blade is plastic, excludng the rubber gimmick. The upper and lower parts of the layer feature the exact same Balance Modes as the right-spin Layer, Chaotic. These are self explanitory as stated in the "Chaotic" paragraph.

Core Plate: Bellerus ( A Left and Right-spin Core. Features a metal-plastic Black Plate with a motif similar to the DB Perseus; the avatar's motif is entirely metal like Lucifer II, with small blue and red accents. The center has a small Amythest gem embeded in it, and the eyes of the avatar's motif are deep blue. The teeth have two strong clicks at the end, and one small click in the beginning. Since this core is a Dual-spin one, It comes with another special tool that is merged with the Balance Modes Changer Tool, to change its teeth direction.)

Core Gear: OWD

Disk: Balance (A somewhat balanced disk that focuses on two opposite sides of a Beyblade. Balance is designed to look akin to Giga's shape. On opposite sides of the Disk, the left and right side is heavier than the rest of the Forge Disk, distributing weight a bit like the DB 2 armor. Features Bl on the prongs. Weight: 32.6 grams)

Chassis Frame: 5-B (A mostly plastic Chassis that features a metal-rubber free-spinning ring for deflecting attacks)

Driver: High Xtend+' (Black main part and metalic red "+ " gear)



Bey Moves: Right-spin: Chaotic Desent: When Chaotic Bellerus gets hit straight up into the air, they beyblade corrects itself and turns on its side, and hits the opposing beyblade with extreme force from the air.
Chaotic Shoot: When High Xtend+ is on Attack mode, and rages as if in a Rush Shoot.
Chaotic Spin: When High Xtend+ is in Defense or Stamina mode, to increase spin speed, and spin longevity. Also utilizes the metal wings within the blades.
Chaotic Slash: When the Chaotic Layer slashes the opponent with fierceness.

Left-spin moves: Supreme Desent: Like Chaotic Desent, only left-spinning.
Supreme Shoot: Like Chaotic Shoot, only left-spinning.
Supreme Spin: When High Xtend+ is only on Stamina mode, to increase spin longevity.
Supreme Slash: When the Supreme Layer slashes strongly at its opponent with its metal primary contact points; a more powerful version of Chaotic Slash.
Supreme Counter: When the free-spinning rubber touches an opposing Beyblade, and deflects its attack, or spin steals.

I had a LOT of fun designing this character. You have my permission to add more to his persona; I feel I was not into creating this part as much as the rest. Also, if Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus seems too OP, you guys also have my permission to change the power levels to whatever you guys desire it to be.
I hope this gets accepted!!! ^-^

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Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

Here is my finished submission. Worked on it until late yesterday, into today. I hope you guys will like it!!! ^^

[spoiler]
Name: Benjamin Gaunt
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5 '1

Personality: Benjamin (can also be called Ben for short) Has a mild-mannered and calm personality. He comes from Nevada, and moved to New York with his family to blade for "The Raging Bulls". He loves Beyblading with every fiber of his being, and is very close to his little brother Xaviero Gaunt (might create his brother as a rival if Benjamin gets accepted). He first started blading in using the Cho-Z system, inspired to use that system by watching Aiga Akaba winning the Champion Title against Valt Aoi.

Appearance: Benjamin appears a bit shorter compared to some of the other characters. He has dark-brown hair, fair skin and sky-blue eyes. He also has dark-red markings on his left and right cheek below his eye; the upper markings appears lightning-shaped, and the middle and lower markings are right triangle shaped. Benjamin wears a outfit similar to Valt's GT attire, but in different colors. He wears an red short-sleeved hoodie with a golden B emblem on the front, a dark-green body warmer with dark-yelow markings on the front and a red Beyblade symbol on the back, black gloves with red cuffs, blue pant with white stripes at the ends with a black belt, and black boots with white soles, two red stripes, and light-red borders.

Bey: Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus.Bl.5-B-HXt+'

Layer: Chaotic (A Right-spin black plastic and dark-red colored Balance Layer featuring two massive blades similar to Guilty, but reversed with metal on the top on the opposite sides. The only place the simalereties end is that the blades are turned to right-spin, and they have metal wings within them similar to Crash Ragnaruk's gimmick, to increase stamina. The top and bottom of the Layer feature merged interchangable modes of contact points both being Attack and Defense. You can change these modes by simply sliding the preset mode off of the Layer using a specially designed tool, flipping both Balance Modes around to the desired mode, and connecting it back by sliding it back into place until it clicks twice, telling you that the Balance Modes have been locked in to the Layer).

Second Layer: Supreme ( A Left-spin black plastic and blue metal colored Attack Layer featuring nearly the exact shape as Infinite Achillies's Layer, Infinite, but made left-spin, and reversed. The place where the simalereties end, is in the middle of each blade. The middle of each blade has a rubber free-spinning place like all itterations of Satan's Layers, to deflect attacks, or do minimal spin-stealing. The primary attack points have metal on them (As in the points that get hit first), to deal strong hits to an opposing beyblade. The rest of the blade is plastic, excludng the rubber gimmick. The upper and lower parts of the layer feature the exact same Balance Modes as the right-spin Layer, Chaotic. These are self explanitory as stated in the "Chaotic" paragraph.

Core Plate: Bellerus ( A Left and Right-spin Core. Features a metal-plastic Black Plate with a motif similar to the DB Perseus; the avatar's motif is entirely metal like Lucifer II, with small blue and red accents. The center has a small Amythest gem embeded in it, and the eyes of the avatar's motif are deep blue. The teeth have two strong clicks at the end, and one small click in the beginning. Since this core is a Dual-spin one, It comes with another special tool that is merged with the Balance Modes Changer Tool, to change its teeth direction.)

Core Gear: OWD

Disk: Balance (A somewhat balanced disk that focuses on two opposite sides of a Beyblade. Balance is designed to look akin to Giga's shape. On opposite sides of the Disk, the left and right side is heavier than the rest of the Forge Disk, distributing weight a bit like the DB 2 armor. Features Bl on the prongs. Weight: 32.6 grams)

Chassis Frame: 5-B (A mostly plastic Chassis that features a metal-rubber free-spinning ring for deflecting attacks)

Driver: High Xtend+' (Black main part and metalic red "+ " gear)



Bey Moves: Right-spin: Chaotic Desent: When Chaotic Bellerus gets hit straight up into the air, they beyblade corrects itself and turns on its side, and hits the opposing beyblade with extreme force from the air.
Chaotic Shoot: When High Xtend+ is on Attack mode, and rages as if in a Rush Shoot.
Chaotic Spin: When High Xtend+ is in Defense or Stamina mode, to increase spin speed, and spin longevity. Also utilizes the metal wings within the blades.
Chaotic Slash: When the Chaotic Layer slashes the opponent with fierceness.

Left-spin moves: Supreme Desent: Like Chaotic Desent, only left-spinning.
Supreme Shoot: Like Chaotic Shoot, only left-spinning.
Supreme Spin: When High Xtend+ is only on Stamina mode, to increase spin longevity.
Supreme Slash: When the Supreme Layer slashes strongly at its opponent with its metal primary contact points; a more powerful version of Chaotic Slash.
Supreme Counter: When the free-spinning rubber touches an opposing Beyblade, and deflects its attack, or spin steals.

I had a LOT of fun designing this character. You have my permission to add more to his persona; I feel I was not into creating this part as much as the rest. Also, if Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus seems too OP, you guys also have my permission to change the power levels to your desires.
I hope this gets accepted!!! ^-^

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Whoops, the spoiler didn't work ;-;

you have to put [spoiler] above your paragraph then [spoiler] but with a / before the s below your paragraph.

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Here is my finished submission. Worked on it until late yesterday, into today. I hope you guys will like it!!! ^^

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Benjamin Gaunt
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5 '1

Personality: Benjamin (can also be called Ben for short) Has a mild-mannered and calm personality. He comes from Nevada, and moved to New York with his family to blade for "The Raging Bulls". He loves Beyblading with every fiber of his being, and is very close to his little brother Xaviero Gaunt (might create his brother as a rival if Benjamin gets accepted). He first started blading in using the Cho-Z system, inspired to use that system by watching Aiga Akaba winning the Champion Title against Valt Aoi.

Appearance: Benjamin appears a bit shorter compared to some of the other characters. He has dark-brown hair, fair skin and sky-blue eyes. He also has dark-red markings on his left and right cheek below his eye; the upper markings appears lightning-shaped, and the middle and lower markings are right triangle shaped. Benjamin wears a  outfit similar to Valt's GT attire, but in different colors. He wears an red short-sleeved hoodie with a golden B emblem on the front, a dark-green body warmer with dark-yelow markings on the front and a red Beyblade symbol on the back, black gloves with red cuffs, blue pant with white stripes at the ends with a black belt, and black boots with white soles, two red stripes, and light-red borders.

Bey: Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus.Bl.5-B-HXt+'

Layer: Chaotic (A Right-spin black plastic and dark-red colored Balance Layer featuring two massive blades similar to Guilty, but reversed with metal on the top on the opposite sides. The only place the simalereties end is that the blades are turned to right-spin, and they have metal wings within them similar to Crash Ragnaruk's gimmick, to increase stamina. The top and bottom of the Layer feature merged interchangable modes of contact points both being Attack and Defense. You can change these modes by simply sliding the preset mode off of the Layer using a specially designed tool, flipping both Balance Modes around to the desired mode, and connecting it back by sliding it back into place until it clicks twice, telling you that the Balance Modes have been locked in to the Layer).

Second Layer: Supreme ( A Left-spin black plastic and blue metal colored Attack Layer featuring nearly the exact shape as Infinite Achillies's Layer, Infinite, but made left-spin, and reversed. The place where the simalereties end, is in the middle of each blade. The middle of each blade has a rubber free-spinning place like all itterations of Satan's Layers, to deflect attacks, or do minimal spin-stealing. The primary attack points have metal on them (As in the points that get hit first), to deal strong hits to an opposing beyblade. The rest of the blade is plastic, excludng the rubber gimmick. The upper and lower parts of the layer feature the exact same Balance Modes as the right-spin Layer, Chaotic. These are self explanitory as stated in the "Chaotic" paragraph.

Core Plate: Bellerus ( A Left and Right-spin Core. Features a metal-plastic Black Plate with a motif similar to the DB Perseus; the avatar's motif is entirely metal like Lucifer II, with small blue and red accents. The center has a small Amythest gem embeded in it, and the eyes of the avatar's motif are deep blue. The teeth have two strong clicks at the end, and one small click in the beginning. Since this core is a Dual-spin one, It comes with another special tool that is merged with the Balance Modes Changer Tool, to change its teeth direction.)

Core Gear: OWD

Disk: Balance (A somewhat balanced disk that focuses on two opposite sides of a Beyblade. Balance is designed to look akin to Giga's shape. On opposite sides of the Disk, the left and right side is heavier than the rest of the Forge Disk, distributing weight a bit like the DB 2 armor.  Features Bl on the prongs. Weight: 32.6 grams)

Chassis Frame:  5-B (A mostly plastic Chassis that features a metal-rubber free-spinning ring for deflecting attacks)

Driver: High Xtend+' (Black main part and metalic red "+ " gear)



Bey Moves: Right-spin: Chaotic Desent: When Chaotic Bellerus gets hit straight up into the air, they beyblade corrects itself and turns on its side, and hits the opposing beyblade with extreme force from the air.
Chaotic Shoot: When High Xtend+ is on Attack mode, and rages as if in a Rush Shoot.
Chaotic Spin: When High Xtend+ is in Defense or Stamina mode, to increase spin speed, and spin longevity. Also utilizes the metal wings within the blades.
Chaotic Slash: When the Chaotic Layer slashes the opponent with fierceness.

Left-spin moves: Supreme Desent: Like Chaotic Desent, only left-spinning.
Supreme Shoot: Like Chaotic Shoot, only left-spinning.
Supreme Spin: When High Xtend+ is only on Stamina mode, to increase spin longevity.
Supreme Slash: When the Supreme Layer slashes strongly at its opponent with its metal primary contact points; a more powerful version of Chaotic Slash.
Supreme Counter: When the free-spinning rubber touches an opposing Beyblade, and deflects its attack, or spin steals.

I had a LOT of fun designing this character. You have my permission to add more to his persona; I feel I was not into creating this part as much as the rest. Also, if Chaotic/Supreme Bellerus seems too OP, you guys also have my permission to change the power levels to your desires.
I hope this gets accepted!!! ^-^

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Whoops, the spoiler didn't work ;-;

you have to put [spoiler] above your paragraph then [spoiler] but with a / before the s below your paragraph.

Thanks so much! I corrected it.

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Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Mason Murphy
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"

Personality: Mason is a very secretive boy who keeps things to himself unless asked about but then it still becomes a seventy thirty on if he'll tell you or not. His face is usually in a emotionless state though sometimes he shows other expressions. Due to his high intelligence he uses that to out strategize his opponents and make strategize for his teammates. He doesn't have any true friends because he always keeps them at a distance because of his past with fake friends and people betraying him at his old orphanage. People also call him weird due to him usually walking not in a upward position like everyone else but in a more slouched position with his hands in his pockets. Mason's main thing people get from an experience with him is the knowledge of his addiction to anything sweet like candy and tea though he'll also eat other things like bananas but he's not really a meat kinda guy.

Appearance: Mason is a very slim, pale, tall young man with messy neck-length black hair and black eyes (unless he uses his special move where his blue aura appears and his eyes and hair glow blue.) One of his most noticeable features is the shadow below each of his eyes, a result of him being an insomniac. He usually wears a long sleeve white shirt with blue jeans and white crocks with black socks unless forced to by his foster parents or pressured by the people on his team to look good then he'll wear a black shirt sleeve shirt, white jacket, black pants, and black sneakers.

Origins: Mason was given to an orphanage by his mother due to her not being able to pay the bills and get food for Mason. In Mason's experience in the orphanage he would regularly get bullied for being smarter than everyone there which pushed Mason to find something fun to do. In that search he discovered beyblade and fell in love with the game seeing it as a chess game where you have to predict and out play your opponent which is why Mason fell in love with left spinning beys due to their rarety and ability to surprise bladers using right spinning beys. One day Mason finally got adopted and continued his beyblade journey to the outside world where he plans to prove his skills to the world.

Bey: Michael Archangel Iconic Practical Xtreme'

GX Blade: Archangel (Archangel is a white left spin blade with two jagged blades with the one in front being bigger then the other on both the top and bottom and on the sides there are two attack points like L Drago or Longinus like dragon faces but instead of dragons they are metal angel heads with one on the left going down while the one on the right going up. On those angel heads their eyes are blue and on the attack points on the top and bottom there are two diagonal blue stripes on each blade.)

GX Core Plate: Michael (A white left spin Core Plate with a blue angel head faced side ways and looking at the bottom right corner with a blue wing looking to come out of its back.)

GX Core Gear: IWD

GX Plate: Iconic (A disc shaped like the metal piece of sting with two little dagger points on the top right and bottom left of the plate.)

GX Chassis Frame: Practical (A blue frame that lines up with the two metal attack points on Archangel.)

GX Driver: A white Xtreme' with blue rubber.

Special Moves:
Upper Archangel: Using the metal attack points on the Archangel blade Michael is able to send a opponents bey flying in the air. Mason never uses this move unless it is necessary because he prefers to out smart his opponents instead of out powering them.

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I just finished making Xaviero's character. He seems to be very likable, and I hope that you guys will accept him too. Only thing stopping me from posting is that I'm just waiting for confirmation on Benjamin's character.
There is absolutely no rush, I'm just letting you guys know about what I've been doing. ^^

Edit: I just made a few minor character adjustments to Benjamin. He now comes from Minnesota, and the reason his ENTIRE family moved to New York is not just because of Beyblading, but rather because his father found a better paying job there.

Second edit: Just in case Benjamin is accepted Ill do the same "claiming ownership" thing I did with Ben.
Remember, the following will NOT be the official post, just claiming ownership of the names.

Characters Name: Xaviero Gaunt

His Beyblade: Superior Xanthus

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Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

Ello, I was wondering whats the limit for characters to be submitted. Yesterday, I made my final character for submission to this Fan-Fic, but was not sure to post it without knowing the character limit. (He's not related in any way to the Gaunt Bro's)

Its totally fine if the limit is only two; Ill just save the new final one.

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Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

Ello, I was wondering whats the limit for characters to be submitted. Yesterday, I made my final character for submission to this Fan-Fic, but was not sure to post it without knowing the character limit. (He's not related in any way to the Gaunt Bro's)

Its totally fine if the limit is only two; Ill just save the new final one.

Let me check with my "colleagues"

So has my character passed the inspection or do I have to do some changing like Tatake?

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Yours is likely to pass with some minor changes (More insecure and less cold + a diagnose). Tatake's is likely to not pass because we have plenty of bladers similar to Balam.
You don't need to worry about changes as we can handle it ourselves in this case.
However, Tatake . If you read above this line you know. I'd suggest toning down the edgelord vibes on Balam, perhaps limit the origin story to just divorce rather than death and also change the motivation a little (I like the little anarchist energy he has, but you could just make his current motivation less anime protagonist-y. You decide tho). If you want an example you can just ask and I'll PM it to you.

When will I learn if my character passed or not?

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Yours is likely to pass with some minor changes (More insecure and less cold + a diagnose). Tatake's is likely to not pass because we have plenty of bladers similar to Balam.
You don't need to worry about changes as we can handle it ourselves in this case.
However, Tatake . If you read above this line you know. I'd suggest toning down the edgelord vibes on Balam, perhaps limit the origin story to just divorce rather than death and also change the motivation a little (I like the little anarchist energy he has, but you could just make his current motivation less anime protagonist-y. You decide tho). If you want an example you can just ask and I'll PM it to you.

When will I learn if my character passed or not?

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Oops, you passed lo.
Also should mention that the contest is closed so... Cold might update the thread title.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st

When will I learn if my character passed or not?

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Oops, you passed lo.
Also should mention that the contest is closed so... Cold might update the thread title.

Oh... So does that mean that Xaviero can't be published?

Also, is Benjamin approved? Just wondering.

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Current Fan-Fic I'm working on (released!): Beyblade: Metal Burst

Neva' Give Up, Neva' Surrender

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Oops, you passed lo.
Also should mention that the contest is closed so... Cold might update the thread title.

Oh... So does that mean that Xaviero can't be published?

Also, is Benjamin approved? Just wondering.

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your first one is pretty much in I think, the rest can't be taken for granted.
Pink is gone for now due to irl stuff so the thing will go on a hiatus for a little bit until we decide stuff.

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Rank 0th means I'm better than 1st