Masterful as always, NightWolf. Well, you asked for some good feedback, so shall it be written so shall it be done.

A quick space error, should be:

clicked his blade into place, ready for the next match

You had a double space around the comma.

You use plenty of antecedents, I see. Sometimes, however, especially in paragraph 7, they are overused, mainly 'his'. Maybe reference the object (ie launcher, and whatever else you reference) more to cut down the confusion?

Blatant product placement would be better worded as 'brand advertisement' IMO, especially since you are advertising a shop.

Quick physics question: If Reiji's blade has a sharp tip, why is it orbiting the stadium?

That's it for now, expect a full review of the chapter(s? I'll see if I have time to get a 'full' full review done) later.

PS. Is the person in your sig Falkner, or simply a fan-made character?

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

When enough spin is imparted on a sharp tip, it moves much more in comparison to a defensive tip(as Ryouma's has)

And yes it's Falkner(flying types ftw)

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Hello everyone, remember to read my story Beyblade: Legends at

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Beyblade-Legends

That story is AMAZING!!!

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I will never back down!!!

Charcter: Dason Kenyu
Bey: Grand Anubis 130 PD
Appearance: Grayish brown hair brown eyes White vest with blue stirp in the middle with baggy jeans and Red vans sneakers
Personality: trusting, amazing blader and friend

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You Never know what is coming

I have an announcement to make. Beyblade : Legends will indeed be continuing despite the midseason hiatus. Also, I've begun redoing some of the older episodes. I will be redoing all of the old episodes as well as completing new ones so be weary for updates! Episode 13 is coming up on Thursday!

Oh and when I say Redo, I mean refurbish. As in, correcting grammar, improving syntax, adding motifs, all that good stuff. Just stuff that bothered me upon rereading them! As you know this work is over 2 years old so definitely subject to improvement.
Redone Episodes:
Episode 1
Episode 2 part 1
Episode 2 part 2
Episode 3

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Hello everyone, remember to read my story Beyblade: Legends at

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Beyblade-Legends