Beyblade Burst Zero

Yay. That was really good. In my opinion, one of the best chapters.
(Oct. 04, 2019  12:34 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 25 - Cosmic Horse vs King of the Seas! The Semi-Finals Begins!

Awesome chapter! Is Hearts going to be in this series? Also, great name for Phoenix.
Great chapter as always!
(Oct. 04, 2019  2:19 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote:
(Oct. 04, 2019  12:34 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 25 - Cosmic Horse vs King of the Seas! The Semi-Finals Begins!

Awesome chapter! Is Hearts going to be in this series? Also, great name for Phoenix.

You bet he will Smile Thanks for the review.
(Oct. 04, 2019  4:25 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
(Oct. 04, 2019  2:19 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: Awesome chapter! Is Hearts going to be in this series? Also, great name for Phoenix.

You bet he will Smile Thanks for the review.

Great! Can't wait!
Chapter 26 will be out in a few hours. If anyone's wondering, I fixed up the op with a list of beys. :) 
(Oct. 07, 2019  3:17 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: Do you still take characters?
I’ve got a lot of characters to work with, so they’d probably be a minor character. DM me and we can work things out.
(Oct. 07, 2019  4:46 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019  3:17 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: Do you still take characters?
I’ve got a lot of characters to work with, so they’d probably be a minor character. DM me and we can work things out.

Hey Dude,  when are you gonna introduce my character?
(Oct. 07, 2019  5:48 AM)Turbo blader Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019  4:46 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: I’ve got a lot of characters to work with, so they’d probably be a minor character. DM me and we can work things out.

Hey Dude,  when are you gonna introduce my character?
 I can try to add him in one of the next few chapters, but seeing as I've got over 30 characters to work with it's gonna be a hassle. If not he'll definitely be in the next arc.
(Oct. 04, 2019  12:34 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 25 - Cosmic Horse vs King of the Seas! The Semi-Finals Begins!

Wow this chapter is amazing . The battle outcomes were as i had expected . But amazing story . You have done good work by bringing phi back .
(Oct. 07, 2019  1:52 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 will be out in a few hours. If anyone's wondering, I fixed up the op with a list of beys. Smile 
I ThOuGhT YoU SaId In a FeW HoUrS? JKJK just poking fun at the people who do that.
(Oct. 07, 2019  9:33 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 07, 2019  1:52 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 will be out in a few hours. If anyone's wondering, I fixed up the op with a list of beys. Smile 
I ThOuGhT YoU SaId In a FeW HoUrS? JKJK just poking fun at the people who do that.

You really had me there Cheeto ? if anyone’s wondering, I’ll need a little more time to work on it. Smile
Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!
(Oct. 09, 2019  12:54 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!

This was your longest chapter . The ending was interesting . I really liked the lui and daniel last conversation .
(Oct. 09, 2019  3:11 PM)Fusion core Wrote:
(Oct. 09, 2019  12:54 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!

This was your longest chapter . The ending was interesting . I really liked the lui and daniel last conversation .

Thanks for the review Fusion Core. It’s always great to have an active supporter. Did you like the long chapter?
(Oct. 09, 2019  3:13 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
(Oct. 09, 2019  3:11 PM)Fusion core Wrote: This was your longest chapter . The ending was interesting . I really liked the lui and daniel last conversation .

Thanks for the review Fusion Core. It’s always great to have an active supporter. Did you like the long chapter?

Yes of course ! The speciality of your chapters is that i never get bored reading them regardless of the fact that the chapter is long or short .
(Oct. 09, 2019  12:54 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!

Awesome chapter! They keep getting better and better!
(Oct. 09, 2019  12:54 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!

Great Chapter! Do you still accept new characters?
(Oct. 09, 2019  12:54 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!

Great chapter! Its so long and action-packed. Phi’s — and you and your writing’ — awesomeness always amaze me
(Oct. 09, 2019  8:31 PM)#Fafnir Wrote:
(Oct. 09, 2019  12:54 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 26 - Phi's Rampage! The Legendary Sword!

Great Chapter! Do you still accept new characters?

I do, but I think yours will be the last one I’m accepting. DM me and send your character in.
(Oct. 09, 2019  11:59 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
(Oct. 09, 2019  8:31 PM)#Fafnir Wrote: Great Chapter! Do you still accept new characters?

I do, but I think yours will be the last one I’m accepting. DM me and send your character in.

Can you take Colin from my story thread? PM me any more information you'll need.
(Oct. 10, 2019  2:18 AM)#Fafnir Wrote:
(Oct. 09, 2019  11:59 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: I do, but I think yours will be the last one I’m accepting. DM me and send your character in.

Can you take Colin from my story thread? PM me any more information you'll need.

Okay. He’ll be in later in the story. Just to let everyone know this is the last request I’m taking.
Quick question: does everyone like the long chapters, or would you prefer them to be shortened?
(Oct. 10, 2019  10:42 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Quick question: does everyone like the long chapters, or would you prefer them to be shortened?

Shortened