If you use the same word over and over again, it becomes way too repetitive, and simply does not display a lot of writing skills, which is required when writing for an encyclopedia.
... Perhaps you do not know the physics of it, but what happens at other heights that make TH170 and SR200 the best choices ? There is something you can observe which you can report without being Newton.
Who cares about F230CF being the highest setup though ? It performs better than SA165 simply because it is more of a Life After Death part than SA165, not because of the height. You would probably put it at 140 and it would still be better. It is not relevant to mention the height. Real Life After Death is in plastics anyway.
The variation in F230s needs a specific section though, like in all other Beyblade articles where they have parts that differ in their releases. Even if there is not something physically discernable about each F230, it still needs to have the general expression : "Mold Variation".
Sure, a lot of the bolded edits were simply grammatical things that you should definitely not take to heart, but they are all important.
... Perhaps you do not know the physics of it, but what happens at other heights that make TH170 and SR200 the best choices ? There is something you can observe which you can report without being Newton.
Who cares about F230CF being the highest setup though ? It performs better than SA165 simply because it is more of a Life After Death part than SA165, not because of the height. You would probably put it at 140 and it would still be better. It is not relevant to mention the height. Real Life After Death is in plastics anyway.
The variation in F230s needs a specific section though, like in all other Beyblade articles where they have parts that differ in their releases. Even if there is not something physically discernable about each F230, it still needs to have the general expression : "Mold Variation".
Sure, a lot of the bolded edits were simply grammatical things that you should definitely not take to heart, but they are all important.