(story) Return of the dark power [ch.1]

Poll: Does ya like?

Good
66.67%
2
So/So
33.33%
1
Your a terrible author
0%
0
Total: 100% 3 vote(s)
Here's my first story. Hope you like it.(there are real bey combos with real special moves in this)

CH.1
CH.2
CH.3
Put the chapters in spoilers like this [ spoiler ] text here [/ spoiler ] (without spaces). Needs work with grammar and could be a bit longer.
put the chapters in spoilers. notif y who's speaking. nice story so far bro. it's a little rushed. you might want to put a little more than the story in the first post, even something saying "Chapter 1"
Thats pretty much what I said Tired...Anyway, Earthwolf, just an example that would help with your stories a bit, when you do something like "Meesa jar jar binks, Meesa use beyblade!" ,Jar jar binks said, launching a beyblade at Darth Mauls face. Put the comma like this "...", blahblahblah. It makes it look neater. Also capitalizing the beyblade names would help.