Prolouge-

Spoiler (Click to View)

This is a connected story to the story known as [beyblade story] but this is of another character known as Ryuto with his bey Omega Dragonis rule the land of Dragons which is known for its dark power and despair. His family left him with the legendary bey passed on by his ancestor who had received this bey as a gift from his brother Ryuga, the legend blader and master of the bey L Drago Destroy. Ryutos ancestor's name was Ryuto the First. I know all of you will be thinking how their names are the same well they were named the same for a reason. Well he was named Ryuto because he had the same powers which the Legend Blader Ryuto The First had. You would also be thinking how the bey Omega Dragonis has dark power. Well lets find out in the first chapter or not.

Chapter 1-

Spoiler (Click to View)

The scene opens up in an unknown land

The sky was filled with dark clouds and strong winds rustling through the leaves the sand went into the eyes of the young boy because of the wind the boy wore ragged and tattered clothes and had many scars was moving on, on a barren land with only mountains as far as one could see and the sky filled with stormy clouds. The weary boy not knowing where he was going kept on moving then all of a sudden there was a weary cry as jolly full as a dark witch but still in misery that said " Follow my sound boy, I will give you power limit less power" the weary boy followed the voice but when the voice stopped there was no one present there the boy thought his mind was playing tricks on him but just as he was going to walk away, two hazy dark huge bodies came into his vision still keeping his hands over his face to protect his eyes from the dust he kept his hands now by his sides he saw those two figures they had no face nor proper humanoid shapes. The boy could hear some of the whispers between the two dark bodies one said " He is the one see he has it " but the other one said in opposition " No, this is not acceptable he is a mere child”, But that time something glows in the boys pant pocket.

Want to know what happens next? well lets find out in chapter 2.

Chapter 2-

Spoiler (Click to View)

There was something glowing something unfamiliar in the boys pants. The two dark bodies turned their heads and one said “So it is true, you were right he is the one.” Then the other one said rather proudly “Let us begin our work.” The boy still unknown what was going on and then slides his right hand into his right pocket pulling out something familiar it was a beyblade. The boy looking astonished of what that beyblade was doing in his pocket. Then the boys head started to pain everything around him became hazy and hard to see he was going to fall unconscious, But just before that he heard the dark bodies again they said, “Bear with us, it will pain and you will lose even what little traces of memory you have but you will receive power from us limitless power you will become unbeatable and unstoppable we guarantee you that because we I am the all powerful Nemesis and he is Hades.” These were the last thing the boy heard then he fell unconscious on the sandy and dusty ground.

Find out what happens next in chapter 3.

---

Thanks BeybladeFreak for the great signature

You put capitals where they were not necessary and did not put some where they were necessary. You also forgot some spaces in between words. You also could put some punctuation, as some sentences sound like run-ons.

---

|Instagram|deviantART|Music Album|Youtube|RPG Game|Story (Discontinued)|Sprites
TUMBLR

/r/YoutubeLetsPlay

You put capitals where they were not necessary and did not put some where they were necessary. You also forgot some spaces in between words. You also could put some punctuation, as some sentences sound like run-ons.

Can you please tell me where i have made mistakes? if you are talking about words like Omega Dragonis,Ryuga,RyutoThe First etc.. they are proper nouns and hence will come in capitals if you still want to say something or any other person wants to give me tips please pm me.

---

Thanks BeybladeFreak for the great signature

This is a connected story to the story known as [beyblade story] but this is of another character known as Ryuto with his bey Omega Dragonis rule the land of Dragons which is known for its dark power and despair. His family left him with the legendary bey passed on by his ancestor who had received this bey as a gift from his brother Ryuga, the legend blader and master bey L Drago Destroy. Ryutos ancestor's name was Ryuto the First. I know all of you will be thinking how their names are the same. Well he was named Ryuto because he had the same powers which the Legend Blader Ryuto The First had. You would also be thinking how the bey Omega Dragonis has dark power. Well lets find out in the first chapter!

I quickly edited it.

---

|Instagram|deviantART|Music Album|Youtube|RPG Game|Story (Discontinued)|Sprites
TUMBLR

/r/YoutubeLetsPlay

This is a connected story to the story known as [beyblade story] but this is of another character known as Ryuto with his bey Omega Dragonis rule the land of Dragons which is known for its dark power and despair. His family left him with the legendary bey passed on by his ancestor who had received this bey as a gift from his brother Ryuga, the legend blader and master bey L Drago Destroy. Ryutos ancestor's name was Ryuto the First. I know all of you will be thinking how their names are the same. Well he was named Ryuto because he had the same powers which the Legend Blader Ryuto The First had. You would also be thinking how the bey Omega Dragonis has dark power. Well lets find out in the first chapter!

I quickly edited it.

Thank you for your help and Chapter 1 is up!!

---

Thanks BeybladeFreak for the great signature

wow its...wow

wow its...wow

I will be uploading chapter 2 soon.

---

Sorry for the double post but just wanted to say that Chapter 2 is up!!!

---

Thanks BeybladeFreak for the great signature

This is a beautiful work of art. I love the story.