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Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft

Mar. 21, 2016  2:40 PM
 
this is my second draft, so please if there is any mistake do correct and forgive me Smile

FIREFIRE Wrote: Wyvang

Information:-
Wyvang is a Defence Type Chrome Wheel that is first released with Beyblade Zero-G Ultimate Synchrom DX Set Defense & Stamina Type (Orochi Wyvang 145EDS) .

Design:-
Design wise it's very circular and have a snake/dragon like the design on top like Orochi. it also has a face like design on the hole where Crystal/Chrome Wheel's orb goes in. with stickers for this Chrome Wheel give it a scaled body, as is needed to perfect the wyvern theme.

unlike Orochi, which is completely symmetrical. Wyvang has a notch near hole which makes it suffer recoil and makes it bad choices for Defence.

Performance:-
as mentioned above. Wyvang is not very good for Defence. However. WBO tested and proved that, it has extremely powerful smash attack. It's also heaviest (31.92 grams], making it excellent choice for Top-Tier Attack Combos

Use In Attack Customization:-
tests have proven, Wyvang was able to get over 73.3% win rate against Top-Tier Defence Combos. which make it one of best attack Chrome Wheel in following combos.

MSF/MSF-H Wyvang Wyavng GB145/TR145/H145/CH120/W145/R145RF/R2F/LRF
MSF/MSF-H Wyvang Dragoon SA165/H145R2F

Use In Balance/Anti-Attack Customization
Wyvang is also very useful in Balance Combo like

MSF/MSF-H Wyvang Wyvang BD145RDF/RSF/RF/RB

MSF-H Wyvang Dragooon BD145LRF/R2F

Gallery

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how is it? also, any help will be appreciated

edit-1:- i just edited page and added/fix some things. if anyone want to read it, here's links.
Mar. 21, 2016  4:43 PM
 
Sweet!
It's a shame that Archer Wyvang wasn't released...
After all, Captain Arrow's design is based on Tyson Granger!!!
XD
Mar. 21, 2016  5:11 PM
 
I want it so bad
Mar. 21, 2016  5:31 PM
 
thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance
Mar. 21, 2016  5:37 PM
 
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:31 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote: thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance

Just add the fact that Archer Wyvang is owned by Captain Arrow!
XD
Mar. 21, 2016  5:41 PM
 
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:37 PM)Paul° Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:31 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote: thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance

Just add the fact that Archer Wyvang is owned by Captain Arrow!
XD

sure bro. but it's a draft article for Wyvang Chrome Wheel. btw no wiki had proper info on this monster attack wheel, so thought to write one to help new blader knowing what this thing is.

edit:- there are still part that don't have good info on Wiki. so i will try to cover them as well
Mar. 21, 2016  5:44 PM
 
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:41 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:37 PM)Paul° Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:31 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote: thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance

Just add the fact that Archer Wyvang is owned by Captain Arrow!
XD

sure bro. but it's a draft article for Wyvang Chrome Wheel. btw no wiki had proper info on this monster attack wheel, so thought to write one to help new blader knowing what this thing is.

My bad...
It's really heavy, though!
XD
Mar. 21, 2016  8:49 PM
 
The information isn't exactly wrong, but everything seems cluttered and frustrating to read. There are quite a bit of grammatical errors that I'll point out when I get home, but "Design" and "Performance" should both be combined under one sub title as "Description."

And for future reference:

(Mar. 21, 2016  5:44 PM)Paul° Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:41 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2016  5:37 PM)Paul° Wrote: Just add the fact that Archer Wyvang is owned by Captain Arrow!
XD

sure bro. but it's a draft article for Wyvang Chrome Wheel. btw no wiki had proper info on this monster attack wheel, so thought to write one to help new blader knowing what this thing is.

My bad...
It's really heavy, though!
XD

Please refrain from posts like these, as they aren't appropriate in a wiki thread.
Mar. 21, 2016  9:08 PM
 
Ah, I will have to close this, because we have a draft on Orojya Wyvang that is way more detailed and with the right format for Chrome Wheels (When used as the top Chrome Wheel, etc.): https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Orojya-...5EDS-Draft