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Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - Printable Version +- World Beyblade Organization (https://worldbeyblade.org) +-- Forum: Other (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Other) +--- Forum: Closed Threads (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Closed-Threads) +--- Thread: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft (/Thread-Wyvang-Chrome-Wheel-Draft) |
Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - FIREFIRE CPB - Mar. 21, 2016 this is my second draft, so please if there is any mistake do correct and forgive me ![]() FIREFIRE Wrote: Wyvang how is it? also, any help will be appreciated edit-1:- i just edited page and added/fix some things. if anyone want to read it, here's links. RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - Oi Shinji - Mar. 21, 2016 Sweet! It's a shame that Archer Wyvang wasn't released... After all, Captain Arrow's design is based on Tyson Granger!!! XD RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - SoSteve - Mar. 21, 2016 I want it so bad RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - FIREFIRE CPB - Mar. 21, 2016 thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - Oi Shinji - Mar. 21, 2016 (Mar. 21, 2016 5:31 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote: thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance Just add the fact that Archer Wyvang is owned by Captain Arrow! XD RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - FIREFIRE CPB - Mar. 21, 2016 (Mar. 21, 2016 5:37 PM)Paul° Wrote:(Mar. 21, 2016 5:31 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote: thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance sure bro. but it's a draft article for Wyvang Chrome Wheel. btw no wiki had proper info on this monster attack wheel, so thought to write one to help new blader knowing what this thing is. edit:- there are still part that don't have good info on Wiki. so i will try to cover them as well RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - Oi Shinji - Mar. 21, 2016 (Mar. 21, 2016 5:41 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote:(Mar. 21, 2016 5:37 PM)Paul° Wrote:(Mar. 21, 2016 5:31 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote: thanks for feedback guys! Wiki editors. can you take look at it and tell me where i can improve? thanks in advance My bad... It's really heavy, though! XD RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - Cookie Bouquets - Mar. 21, 2016 The information isn't exactly wrong, but everything seems cluttered and frustrating to read. There are quite a bit of grammatical errors that I'll point out when I get home, but "Design" and "Performance" should both be combined under one sub title as "Description." And for future reference: (Mar. 21, 2016 5:44 PM)Paul° Wrote:(Mar. 21, 2016 5:41 PM)FIREFIRE Wrote:(Mar. 21, 2016 5:37 PM)Paul° Wrote: Just add the fact that Archer Wyvang is owned by Captain Arrow! Please refrain from posts like these, as they aren't appropriate in a wiki thread. RE: Wyvang Chrome Wheel Draft - Kai-V - Mar. 21, 2016 Ah, I will have to close this, because we have a draft on Orojya Wyvang that is way more detailed and with the right format for Chrome Wheels (When used as the top Chrome Wheel, etc.): https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Orojya-Wyvang-145EDS-Draft |