WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal!

Okay, here are the stories.

Entry one:
Entry 2
First to 5 votes
You may vote ONCE
Participants may not vote
Try to elaborate.
Voting...BEGIN!
I would avoid using "WBO Tournament" : it is extremely misleading.
Blargh, yeah. I'll change that.
EDIT: Done
I vote for Entry One. The way that the writer describes it is amazing, I love the details and word choice. They matched the theme perfectly, and they made it interesting to read. That was one of the best beyblade related writing pieces that I have ever read!
Entry one honestly had a GRIP on the reader BUT number two also had a grip as we compared pirahna to pegasus . So I would have to say number two, sory number one,
Keep the votin' comin' guys! Tied at one!
Entry one.
Entry two's words are jamming and it's description is bad.
I vote for entry 1.

Not only does it totally capture the idea of the theme, but the author was able to combine dialogue with description.


I would advise the writer of entry 2 that, though it was well written and the flow was good, s/he made the jumps from thing to another. Instead of writing multiple scenes, I think the idea for this theme was to write about 1, making it extremely difficult.
Entry one leads 3-1. Voting ends tomorrow.
Entry one. The grammar is better, and it seems to flow better.
Last day of voting. Anyone who hasn't voted yet should, then move on to NooDoo Soup and Burn Blader's match.
...Awww, time's up. The day's over, so the deadline's been missed. Ah, well. Anyway, I win, 4-1 and advance.