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WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

Okay, here are the stories.

Entry one:
Entry 2
First to 5 votes
You may vote ONCE
Participants may not vote
Try to elaborate.
Voting...BEGIN!


RE: WBO Tournament! Katsuya vs. Megablader9! - Kai-V - Jul. 24, 2011

I would avoid using "WBO Tournament" : it is extremely misleading.


RE: WBO Tournament! Katsuya vs. Megablader9! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

Blargh, yeah. I'll change that.
EDIT: Done


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Megablader9! - SwiftShadow - Jul. 24, 2011

I vote for Entry One. The way that the writer describes it is amazing, I love the details and word choice. They matched the theme perfectly, and they made it interesting to read. That was one of the best beyblade related writing pieces that I have ever read!


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Megablader9! - Will I AmBlader - Jul. 24, 2011

Entry one honestly had a GRIP on the reader BUT number two also had a grip as we compared pirahna to pegasus . So I would have to say number two, sory number one,


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Megablader9! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

Keep the votin' comin' guys! Tied at one!


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - TenshouTsubasa - Jul. 24, 2011

Entry one.
Entry two's words are jamming and it's description is bad.


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Sparta - Jul. 24, 2011

I vote for entry 1.

Not only does it totally capture the idea of the theme, but the author was able to combine dialogue with description.


I would advise the writer of entry 2 that, though it was well written and the flow was good, s/he made the jumps from thing to another. Instead of writing multiple scenes, I think the idea for this theme was to write about 1, making it extremely difficult.


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

Entry one leads 3-1. Voting ends tomorrow.


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Primal - Jul. 24, 2011

Entry one. The grammar is better, and it seems to flow better.


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

4-1. This turned around pretty quick.


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

Last day of voting. Anyone who hasn't voted yet should, then move on to NooDoo Soup and Burn Blader's match.


RE: WBO Writing Tournament! Katsuya vs. Temporal! - Temporal - Jul. 25, 2011

...Awww, time's up. The day's over, so the deadline's been missed. Ah, well. Anyway, I win, 4-1 and advance.