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This is my first story.
I hope everyone likes it!
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I'm also taking character requests in this format,
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Good, evil, or mysterious
Chapters will be added daily!
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5
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I hope everyone likes it!
Please right any improvements needed in this thread.
I'm also taking character requests in this format,
Name-
Bey-
Looks-
Personality-
Special move-
Good, evil, or mysterious
Chapters will be added daily!
Prologue
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In the year 2050, the world had changed. There were no more countries, only Beyland. Beyblade was everything. Money was replaced by beypoints. No one could live if they couldn't beyblade. There were good bladers and then there was the Dark Spirit bladers that misused the powers of
beys. The dark spirit was defeated many times until a new leader of the Dark Spirit Bladers was born. That's when the world was sure of being ruled by the Dark Spirit bladers. But there was one kid who believed he could stop the Dark Spirit with the help of his friends. That kid is Azhar.
beys. The dark spirit was defeated many times until a new leader of the Dark Spirit Bladers was born. That's when the world was sure of being ruled by the Dark Spirit bladers. But there was one kid who believed he could stop the Dark Spirit with the help of his friends. That kid is Azhar.
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"Wake up sleepy head", said Azhar's mom.
"You're going to be late for the first day of beyschool", She said.
Azhar got up quickly, went to the bathroom, freshened up, and ran to the kitchen.
He didn't want to be late for the first day of beyschool.
"Where's my breakfast mom?" Yelled
"It's on the table", she said.
Azhar ate his breakfast, grabbed the bey his grandfather gave him, and ran outside.
He had never beybladed before. His grandfather was a legend blader and so was his father.
The bey Azhar had recieved was Twisted Bull 85 WD.
This bey was passed down through his generation so the dark power of beyblades would never rule the Earth.
His father was killed while trying to stop the Dark Power. He stopped the Dark Power but sacrificed his life as well.
Azhar and his mom moved to Beytown a month ago.
Azhar knew nothing about beyblading so he spent his whole summer increasing his knowledge about beyblading. But he never battled since he wanted to know all about beyblading first.
At beyschool, you were only taught how to become a better blader. Every Friday, the bladers would get to battle. Every Sunday, there would be a tournament to determine the best bladers.
While he was going to the beyschool, he saw this kid holding a laptop walking toward the beyschool as well.
Azhar caught upto him and asked him his name. The kid said "Hi! My name is Jaden. I'm a bey mechanic. I live on the streets but I make enough money to eat food by fixing and repairing beys. What about you?"
Azhar said "My name is Azhar, I'm a blader, well actually a blader in progress. I just moved here a month ago. This is my bey, Twisted Bull 85 WD."
"Nice bey you got there", said Jaden.
Before they entered the school, Azhar asked Jaden a question.
"Let's make a deal. I will let you live with my mom and I in our house only if you repair my bey on a regular base. So like every week, if you know what I'm trying to say."
"Sure, that would be great! Thanks a lot!" Jaden replied.
"One more thing, I am making a team so do you want to be in it as our bey mechanic?" Azhar asked.
"Definitely yes!" Jaden said.
"Ok then, see you afterschool." Said Azhar.
"Yeah see you later", Jaden replied.
Both boys went into the beyschool rushing to their classes.
"What a great day so far, I've already made a friend. Can't wait to see who else I meet." Said Azhar.
"You're going to be late for the first day of beyschool", She said.
Azhar got up quickly, went to the bathroom, freshened up, and ran to the kitchen.
He didn't want to be late for the first day of beyschool.
"Where's my breakfast mom?" Yelled
"It's on the table", she said.
Azhar ate his breakfast, grabbed the bey his grandfather gave him, and ran outside.
He had never beybladed before. His grandfather was a legend blader and so was his father.
The bey Azhar had recieved was Twisted Bull 85 WD.
This bey was passed down through his generation so the dark power of beyblades would never rule the Earth.
His father was killed while trying to stop the Dark Power. He stopped the Dark Power but sacrificed his life as well.
Azhar and his mom moved to Beytown a month ago.
Azhar knew nothing about beyblading so he spent his whole summer increasing his knowledge about beyblading. But he never battled since he wanted to know all about beyblading first.
At beyschool, you were only taught how to become a better blader. Every Friday, the bladers would get to battle. Every Sunday, there would be a tournament to determine the best bladers.
While he was going to the beyschool, he saw this kid holding a laptop walking toward the beyschool as well.
Azhar caught upto him and asked him his name. The kid said "Hi! My name is Jaden. I'm a bey mechanic. I live on the streets but I make enough money to eat food by fixing and repairing beys. What about you?"
Azhar said "My name is Azhar, I'm a blader, well actually a blader in progress. I just moved here a month ago. This is my bey, Twisted Bull 85 WD."
"Nice bey you got there", said Jaden.
Before they entered the school, Azhar asked Jaden a question.
"Let's make a deal. I will let you live with my mom and I in our house only if you repair my bey on a regular base. So like every week, if you know what I'm trying to say."
"Sure, that would be great! Thanks a lot!" Jaden replied.
"One more thing, I am making a team so do you want to be in it as our bey mechanic?" Azhar asked.
"Definitely yes!" Jaden said.
"Ok then, see you afterschool." Said Azhar.
"Yeah see you later", Jaden replied.
Both boys went into the beyschool rushing to their classes.
"What a great day so far, I've already made a friend. Can't wait to see who else I meet." Said Azhar.
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In beyschool, there were three classes.
There was a launching class, a bey spirit class, and a bey repairing class.
You could decide whatever class you want to go to.
Jaden decided to take the bey repairing class like always. Azhar decided he would take the launching class. Jaden left to go to his class and Azhar went to his class.
When he entered, he saw a man teacher and 12 boys sitting in the chairs. There were also 6 stadiums in the class.
"You must be Azhar Awan", the teacher said.
"Yeah I am", Azhar replied.
"Well, great to have you in the class. My name is Mr. Hagane. I am your launching class teacher. Please have a seat next to Williem, the kid with a blue Pegasus shirt."
Azhar walks over to the chair next to Williem and sits down.
"Hey! My name is Azhar. I'm new here and I live in my house with my mom. My bey is Twisted Bull 85 WD. Do you know Jaden? I just met him and now we're friends. He's on my team as the bey mechanic. Currently, it's only us two but we're recruiting. Want to join?"
"Slow down bro. My name is Williem and my bey is Storm Pegasus 85 RF. Yeah, I know Jaden. We're close friends. I might join your team if you let me stay at your place cause I also got no home."
"Okay, you can stay at my house and welcome to the team!"
"That's great! Now let's go improve our launching skills."
Azhar and Williem walked over to an empty stadium. Since it was Friday, they could battle as well as improve their launching skills.
"Let's battle", said Williem.
"Ok, let's do it!" Azhar replied.
They both readied their beys and the countdown began!
3!
2!
1!
LET IT RIP!!!
Both beys attacked each other head on.
"Push him to the edge!" Said Williem.
"Not on my watch! Now Bull, Destructive Time Blast!
Bull flew up and dropped down with full power onto Pegasus.
There was huge dust and nobody could see what happened. The dust cleared and both bladers were surprised. Twisted Bull was spinning as fast as new but Pegasus was still spinning slowly as well.
"I'm not done yet!" Yelled Williem
"Yes you are", Azhar answered back.
"Special Move, Pegasus Storm Bringer!"
"Special Move, Time Stop Bull Hot Hit!"
Pegasus stopped moving!
"What the?!?" Said Williem.
Bull charged at Pegasus with full speed and knocked Pegasus into Williem's hands.
"Yeah! A win in my first battle against a strong opponent!"
"WAIT, this was your first battle ever? I can't believe I lost to a newbie!" Screamed Williem.
"Yup! And it was a great one!" Said Azhar.
"Now I'm honored to be in your team. I use to be the best but now you beat me so being on the best's team is a great honor." Said Williem.
"Thanks man", Azhar replied.
Since there is only one class per day and class finished, it was time to go home. Williem and Azhar walked out and met Jaden. They all walked to Azhar's house.
As they approached the house, they saw that the house was torn down. Azhar ran inside to find his mom and Jaden and Williem followed. Azhar found his mom laying on the floor.
"Speak to me mom, speak to me! Who did this! Tell me!"
"It was the Dark Spirit Bladers. Their leader is ... is ... is..."
His mom was dead. Before she could tell Azhar the leader's name and bey, she died. Azhar, Williem, and Jaden had no house. Azhar really wanted to destroy the Dark Spirit Bladers but he didn't know who they were or where they were.
"It's been 6 hours sitting here. Let's go find a house to buy." Williem said.
"Depends, how many beypoints do we have in total? I have 12,000 beypoints by repairing so many beys." Said Jaden.
"I've got 27,000 since I've been battling a lot." Williem said.
Then, Azhar said "I have 157,000 Beypoints. I only earned 12,000 beypoints but my father gave me his 145,000 beypoints since he knew I would need them one day."
"Wow! Your father must've been the best!" Said Williem.
"That's great because it means we have 196,000 beypoints together! We only need 4,000 more beypoints to buy a house with 4 bedrooms, 4 bathrooms, an officially sized beyblade stadium, and a kitchen." Jaden said.
"We still need some points for food, clothes, furniture for the house, and equipment." Azhar said.
"50,000 Beypoints would be good for all of that stuff so let's earn them now. Azhar and Williem, you guys go battle for beypoints and I will repair beys for beypoints. I could get 15,000 beypoints and you guys could earn 35,000 beypoints. We will meet each other again tomorrow on front of the beyschool, okay." Said Jaden.
"Ok!" Yelled Williem.
"Let's do this!" Yelled Azhar.
Everyone went their own way. Its going to be tough but it's worth it.
There was a launching class, a bey spirit class, and a bey repairing class.
You could decide whatever class you want to go to.
Jaden decided to take the bey repairing class like always. Azhar decided he would take the launching class. Jaden left to go to his class and Azhar went to his class.
When he entered, he saw a man teacher and 12 boys sitting in the chairs. There were also 6 stadiums in the class.
"You must be Azhar Awan", the teacher said.
"Yeah I am", Azhar replied.
"Well, great to have you in the class. My name is Mr. Hagane. I am your launching class teacher. Please have a seat next to Williem, the kid with a blue Pegasus shirt."
Azhar walks over to the chair next to Williem and sits down.
"Hey! My name is Azhar. I'm new here and I live in my house with my mom. My bey is Twisted Bull 85 WD. Do you know Jaden? I just met him and now we're friends. He's on my team as the bey mechanic. Currently, it's only us two but we're recruiting. Want to join?"
"Slow down bro. My name is Williem and my bey is Storm Pegasus 85 RF. Yeah, I know Jaden. We're close friends. I might join your team if you let me stay at your place cause I also got no home."
"Okay, you can stay at my house and welcome to the team!"
"That's great! Now let's go improve our launching skills."
Azhar and Williem walked over to an empty stadium. Since it was Friday, they could battle as well as improve their launching skills.
"Let's battle", said Williem.
"Ok, let's do it!" Azhar replied.
They both readied their beys and the countdown began!
3!
2!
1!
LET IT RIP!!!
Both beys attacked each other head on.
"Push him to the edge!" Said Williem.
"Not on my watch! Now Bull, Destructive Time Blast!
Bull flew up and dropped down with full power onto Pegasus.
There was huge dust and nobody could see what happened. The dust cleared and both bladers were surprised. Twisted Bull was spinning as fast as new but Pegasus was still spinning slowly as well.
"I'm not done yet!" Yelled Williem
"Yes you are", Azhar answered back.
"Special Move, Pegasus Storm Bringer!"
"Special Move, Time Stop Bull Hot Hit!"
Pegasus stopped moving!
"What the?!?" Said Williem.
Bull charged at Pegasus with full speed and knocked Pegasus into Williem's hands.
"Yeah! A win in my first battle against a strong opponent!"
"WAIT, this was your first battle ever? I can't believe I lost to a newbie!" Screamed Williem.
"Yup! And it was a great one!" Said Azhar.
"Now I'm honored to be in your team. I use to be the best but now you beat me so being on the best's team is a great honor." Said Williem.
"Thanks man", Azhar replied.
Since there is only one class per day and class finished, it was time to go home. Williem and Azhar walked out and met Jaden. They all walked to Azhar's house.
As they approached the house, they saw that the house was torn down. Azhar ran inside to find his mom and Jaden and Williem followed. Azhar found his mom laying on the floor.
"Speak to me mom, speak to me! Who did this! Tell me!"
"It was the Dark Spirit Bladers. Their leader is ... is ... is..."
His mom was dead. Before she could tell Azhar the leader's name and bey, she died. Azhar, Williem, and Jaden had no house. Azhar really wanted to destroy the Dark Spirit Bladers but he didn't know who they were or where they were.
"It's been 6 hours sitting here. Let's go find a house to buy." Williem said.
"Depends, how many beypoints do we have in total? I have 12,000 beypoints by repairing so many beys." Said Jaden.
"I've got 27,000 since I've been battling a lot." Williem said.
Then, Azhar said "I have 157,000 Beypoints. I only earned 12,000 beypoints but my father gave me his 145,000 beypoints since he knew I would need them one day."
"Wow! Your father must've been the best!" Said Williem.
"That's great because it means we have 196,000 beypoints together! We only need 4,000 more beypoints to buy a house with 4 bedrooms, 4 bathrooms, an officially sized beyblade stadium, and a kitchen." Jaden said.
"We still need some points for food, clothes, furniture for the house, and equipment." Azhar said.
"50,000 Beypoints would be good for all of that stuff so let's earn them now. Azhar and Williem, you guys go battle for beypoints and I will repair beys for beypoints. I could get 15,000 beypoints and you guys could earn 35,000 beypoints. We will meet each other again tomorrow on front of the beyschool, okay." Said Jaden.
"Ok!" Yelled Williem.
"Let's do this!" Yelled Azhar.
Everyone went their own way. Its going to be tough but it's worth it.
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Jaden went to the small beypark where newbies would play.
He met 12 kids his age and 3 kids older than him (about Azhar's age).
"Everyone, stopped battling right now! I am a Bey Mechanic and I would love to fix your beys for only 1,000 beypoints per bey." Jaden said.
"Ok, thanks a lot", the kids said.
He repaired beys all day and finally reached 15,000 beypoints. He went to sleep hoping that Azhar and Williem earned 35,000.
Luckily, Azhar and Williem only needed two battles to earn their 35,000 beypoints together. Azhar was challenged to a match by a Beyhunter group leader. The winner would receive 20,000 beypoints. Azhar won but it was still a tough battle with a tough opponent. Williem told Azhar that he can go rest for the rest of the day and then sleep wherever he wants. Williem would earn the other 15,000 beypoints. He was then challenged by the same blader that challenged Azhar. Winner would receive 15,000 beypoints.
The battle was long and hard but Williem won by a close call. He had received the beypoints he needed to so he went to sleep on a bench, awaiting tomorrow, when they would buy a huge house and finally eat food.
He met 12 kids his age and 3 kids older than him (about Azhar's age).
"Everyone, stopped battling right now! I am a Bey Mechanic and I would love to fix your beys for only 1,000 beypoints per bey." Jaden said.
"Ok, thanks a lot", the kids said.
He repaired beys all day and finally reached 15,000 beypoints. He went to sleep hoping that Azhar and Williem earned 35,000.
Luckily, Azhar and Williem only needed two battles to earn their 35,000 beypoints together. Azhar was challenged to a match by a Beyhunter group leader. The winner would receive 20,000 beypoints. Azhar won but it was still a tough battle with a tough opponent. Williem told Azhar that he can go rest for the rest of the day and then sleep wherever he wants. Williem would earn the other 15,000 beypoints. He was then challenged by the same blader that challenged Azhar. Winner would receive 15,000 beypoints.
The battle was long and hard but Williem won by a close call. He had received the beypoints he needed to so he went to sleep on a bench, awaiting tomorrow, when they would buy a huge house and finally eat food.
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The next day, Azhar, Williem, and Jaden met up at the school.
"Let's not go to beyschool anymore." Azhar said.
"Why not? We need to train to become better." Williem replied.
"I have one goal in life now. To defeat the Dark Spirit forever! But I need strong bladers to back me up. We need more stronger members. First, let's buy the house, furniture, and eat food. Then, Jaden you stay home and rest. Williem and I will go battle for the rest of the day after eating and resting a little. We will earn beypoints and look for very strong bladers."
"I got it!" Yelled Jaden.
"Well, let's go buy the house now." Said Williem.
"And finally eat!" Said Jaden.
The group bought the house and the furniture. They placed the furniture in the house and their house was set. Jaden went to buy groceries for the food. When he came back, all three bladers helped cook the food. They ate like there was no tomorrow! Jaden said he was going to go rest and Williem and Azhar left the house to find strong bladers.
"You go to the beypark and I will battle people on the streets. But be back before dinner. If you find a strong blader, bring him to the house." Azhar said.
"Okay, see you later", said Williem.
They both went there own ways. Azhar could only find weak bladers. He beat all of them by KO. He went back home when it was almost time for dinner.
At the beypark, Williem found strong bladers but he beat them all. When he was about to go home, a blader challenged him. That bladers name was Jason. They readied their beys and began the battle.
3!
2!
1!
LET IT RIP!!!
His bey, Earth Eagle went straight to the center of the stadium and spinned in one place.
"That won't help you, now Pegasus, attack with full power!"
Eagle dodged the attack!
"But how! That can't happen! Do it again pegasus!"
Eagle dodged the attack again!
"Let me end this now", Jason said.
"I don't think so, Pegasus! Storm Bringer!"
"Sorry but that move will backfire. Eagle, Metal Wing Smash!"
Eagle flew high into the sky and dropped down on Pegasus at supersonic speed. Pegasus was knocked out of the stadium!
Williem was amazed!
"Please come with me to my house!" Yelled Williem.
"Okay, but why?" Asked Jason.
"I'll tell you why when we reach there." Said Williem.
Williem and Jason walked to the house. When they reached the front door, Williem said "Welcome!"
"Let's not go to beyschool anymore." Azhar said.
"Why not? We need to train to become better." Williem replied.
"I have one goal in life now. To defeat the Dark Spirit forever! But I need strong bladers to back me up. We need more stronger members. First, let's buy the house, furniture, and eat food. Then, Jaden you stay home and rest. Williem and I will go battle for the rest of the day after eating and resting a little. We will earn beypoints and look for very strong bladers."
"I got it!" Yelled Jaden.
"Well, let's go buy the house now." Said Williem.
"And finally eat!" Said Jaden.
The group bought the house and the furniture. They placed the furniture in the house and their house was set. Jaden went to buy groceries for the food. When he came back, all three bladers helped cook the food. They ate like there was no tomorrow! Jaden said he was going to go rest and Williem and Azhar left the house to find strong bladers.
"You go to the beypark and I will battle people on the streets. But be back before dinner. If you find a strong blader, bring him to the house." Azhar said.
"Okay, see you later", said Williem.
They both went there own ways. Azhar could only find weak bladers. He beat all of them by KO. He went back home when it was almost time for dinner.
At the beypark, Williem found strong bladers but he beat them all. When he was about to go home, a blader challenged him. That bladers name was Jason. They readied their beys and began the battle.
3!
2!
1!
LET IT RIP!!!
His bey, Earth Eagle went straight to the center of the stadium and spinned in one place.
"That won't help you, now Pegasus, attack with full power!"
Eagle dodged the attack!
"But how! That can't happen! Do it again pegasus!"
Eagle dodged the attack again!
"Let me end this now", Jason said.
"I don't think so, Pegasus! Storm Bringer!"
"Sorry but that move will backfire. Eagle, Metal Wing Smash!"
Eagle flew high into the sky and dropped down on Pegasus at supersonic speed. Pegasus was knocked out of the stadium!
Williem was amazed!
"Please come with me to my house!" Yelled Williem.
"Okay, but why?" Asked Jason.
"I'll tell you why when we reach there." Said Williem.
Williem and Jason walked to the house. When they reached the front door, Williem said "Welcome!"
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"What do you mean by welcome", said Jason.
"You'll see, hey Azhar, come outside." Williem said.
Azhar came out with Jaden wondering who this mysterious blader was.
"Who's this", Azhar asked.
"He's a very strong blader. He beat me easily. He's perfect for our team." Williem replied.
You want to join my team? Our goal is to gather strong bladers and defeat the Dark Spirit forever. We have this gigantic house, food, gear, equipment, a bey mechanic, lots of beypoints, and beyspirits." Said Azhar.
"I will definitely join. I want to stop the Dark Spirit forever as well. They killed my parents and destroyed my house. I want revenge! I'm in for sure. Thanks a lot for this great opportunity." Jason replied.
"Great! Let's eat dinner and go to sleep. In the morning, after breakfast, Jaden will repair all of our beys as we rest. Then, we will practice launching and battle for the whole day until dinner. By the way, how many beypoints do you have? Jaden has 14,000 from repairing beys, Williem has 15,000 because he contributed all of his previous beypoints into buying the house, and I have 35,000. I use to have 157,000 but I used up all of them on the house." Azhar said.
"I have 43,000 so far, but I'm trying to gain more." Jason replied.
"One more thing, all members in the team have to contribute their beypoints. By that I mean Williem, Jaden, and I have all our beypoints together as one set of beypoints. We share them and we share the house and we share food and we share basically everything because we're a team. Are you willing to contribute and share with us?" Asked Jaden.
"Yup! For sure! I will contribute and share with the team." Jason said.
"Great, you're in! Well I'm getting hungry. Let's eat!" Said Azhar.
"Yeah you're right. Let's Go!" Yelled Williem.
Everyone went inside and made food. They ate the food and went to sleep knowing about their busy day ahead.
"You'll see, hey Azhar, come outside." Williem said.
Azhar came out with Jaden wondering who this mysterious blader was.
"Who's this", Azhar asked.
"He's a very strong blader. He beat me easily. He's perfect for our team." Williem replied.
You want to join my team? Our goal is to gather strong bladers and defeat the Dark Spirit forever. We have this gigantic house, food, gear, equipment, a bey mechanic, lots of beypoints, and beyspirits." Said Azhar.
"I will definitely join. I want to stop the Dark Spirit forever as well. They killed my parents and destroyed my house. I want revenge! I'm in for sure. Thanks a lot for this great opportunity." Jason replied.
"Great! Let's eat dinner and go to sleep. In the morning, after breakfast, Jaden will repair all of our beys as we rest. Then, we will practice launching and battle for the whole day until dinner. By the way, how many beypoints do you have? Jaden has 14,000 from repairing beys, Williem has 15,000 because he contributed all of his previous beypoints into buying the house, and I have 35,000. I use to have 157,000 but I used up all of them on the house." Azhar said.
"I have 43,000 so far, but I'm trying to gain more." Jason replied.
"One more thing, all members in the team have to contribute their beypoints. By that I mean Williem, Jaden, and I have all our beypoints together as one set of beypoints. We share them and we share the house and we share food and we share basically everything because we're a team. Are you willing to contribute and share with us?" Asked Jaden.
"Yup! For sure! I will contribute and share with the team." Jason said.
"Great, you're in! Well I'm getting hungry. Let's eat!" Said Azhar.
"Yeah you're right. Let's Go!" Yelled Williem.
Everyone went inside and made food. They ate the food and went to sleep knowing about their busy day ahead.
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