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The Wilderness Quakes - Story - Not Accepting Characters ATM

Poll: Should I spend longer on a battle scene? (It's harder to express) - This means same amount of content on everything else, but longer to put out Chapters.

Definitely! Grin
50.00%
3
Spend your similar time. Smile
50.00%
3
Spent Shorter! Crying (Don't pick me!)
0%
0
Total: 100% 6 vote(s)
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Feb. 14, 2011  7:12 PM
 
(Feb. 13, 2011  10:02 PM)ControL_ Wrote: Thanks so much for the positive feedback, I just came back from paintballing and did an unboxing video so i'm kind of knackered. I'm eager to get some of Chapter 3 done however.

@ TheFusionRuler Have a read of the start of Chapter 3, Mario stays!

OK going to try and finish Chapter 4 in under 3,000 words.

that was before you posted chapter 3 really awesome
Feb. 14, 2011  8:28 PM
 
(Feb. 14, 2011  7:12 PM)TheFusionRuler Wrote:
(Feb. 13, 2011  10:02 PM)ControL_ Wrote: Thanks so much for the positive feedback, I just came back from paintballing and did an unboxing video so i'm kind of knackered. I'm eager to get some of Chapter 3 done however.

@ TheFusionRuler Have a read of the start of Chapter 3, Mario stays!

OK going to try and finish Chapter 4 in under 3,000 words.

that was before you posted chapter 3 really awesome
No I edited that post after I started some.
Feb. 15, 2011  10:03 PM
 
oh Ok cool, also if you want any more characters i could give you a few more (I have tons in my head.. and no not all of them are funny!!)
Feb. 17, 2011  11:51 AM
 
Can someone please read this story?! There is so much effort in here, yet so little response.
Chapter 4 will be here after some Basalt testing.
Feb. 17, 2011  9:56 PM
 
...I love this....its better than any other story ive read
(Off-topic...i pmed ya Smile )
Feb. 22, 2011  5:42 PM
 
Kevin hurry up and finish chapter 4.
Feb. 22, 2011  9:17 PM
 
Stop rushing me, huge iGCSE's coming up. I must prioritize. Sorry my few fans that are eager to keep reading.
Feb. 23, 2011  12:17 AM
 
Oh. I didn't know, sorry.
Mar. 05, 2011  12:33 AM
 
No one wants to comment ehh?
Mar. 05, 2011  1:30 PM
 
Well I would if you finished chapter 4 -.-
Mar. 05, 2011  1:34 PM
 
You love your alliteration lol. Sometimes I think its overused because you emphasise everything and I struggle to determine what you actually want to convey.
Mar. 30, 2011  5:07 PM
 
Will carry on by the end of this week - My Easter holiday is coming to an end therefore there's no need to PM me asking for when and what - You know who you are Confused

Character requests will come back soon.
Apr. 19, 2011  10:27 PM
 
Despite the lacking of people at all caring for my long in category story; I have decided to carry on working on this story and finish Chapter 4.
Apr. 20, 2011  1:49 PM
 
Yesssss Finally!!!
Apr. 20, 2011  3:04 PM
 
Yay! I can't wait!
Apr. 20, 2011  3:46 PM
 
yo about you maybe make it a bit shorter but orther than that its pretty good so can i be in the story can i be this old man but when he beyblade he turns into a child called ryo with his bey cyberdramon (like you can see i love digimon)
Apr. 20, 2011  9:41 PM
 
(Apr. 20, 2011  3:46 PM)narutro man z Wrote: yo about you maybe make it a bit shorter but orther than that its pretty good so can i be in the story can i be this old man but when he beyblade he turns into a child called ryo with his bey cyberdramon (like you can see i love digimon)
Read title, not accepting at the moment, sorry we will be later.

No I won't make it shorter, if people are put off/are too lazy to read all of it, it's not the story for them.
Apr. 21, 2011  3:07 PM
 
Can you reserve place for me please!
Apr. 21, 2011  6:13 PM
 
oh srry i just put it in a programe and it readed it to me its great so yeah im lazy Wink
Apr. 22, 2011  10:37 PM
 
plz plz plz make new part
Apr. 24, 2011  11:21 PM
 
FINALLY - Chapter 4 completed, Chapter 5 to be finished.
Apr. 25, 2011  8:57 PM
 
can u reserve a place for me if u can
Apr. 25, 2011  10:35 PM
 
SO AWESOME!!! Your battle scenes are so damn amazing man!!!
Apr. 29, 2011  10:23 PM
 
Hi I would like one more character if anyone is interested.
May. 14, 2011  8:59 PM
 
Still looking for that one character! Then i'll write some more.
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