The Legend of the beys: the lost blader- incomplete
ha, sory for not answering your question. yes you should wait for the next chapter, witch i will try to do now but i just got pokemon white today so yea. hey i have almost finished the other story so ill put that up soon. oh and by the way, Blake Ritchie is based off me.
Name: Dakori (Male)
Age:16
Bey:Nova Horuseus 130MD (metal defense) Nova= Left Spin Burn Wheel (Red) Horuseus Clear Wheel=Clear white) 130 and MD (Clear red)
Parts Decription: Face: Standard Horuseus Face Red and White
Clear Wheel: Clear White with Red Decals (stickers)
Metal Wheel: Nova=Left Spinning Burn Wheel and is Red
Spin Track: 130 Clear red
Preformance Tip: MD (Metal Defense) self explainitory A Metal D tip (color is Clear red)
Special Move: Nova Falcon Tornado: Spins around opponnets bey quickly until it creates fire the knocks bey out of stadium.
Character Descripstion: Dakori is a very friendly dude and is very layed-back but when it comes to blading he gets red hot with energy. He is a very strong blader in which he know his bey so well that in fact he made the bey himself from a metor. Other than that he is against anything evil or dark.
Age:16
Bey:Nova Horuseus 130MD (metal defense) Nova= Left Spin Burn Wheel (Red) Horuseus Clear Wheel=Clear white) 130 and MD (Clear red)
Parts Decription: Face: Standard Horuseus Face Red and White
Clear Wheel: Clear White with Red Decals (stickers)
Metal Wheel: Nova=Left Spinning Burn Wheel and is Red
Spin Track: 130 Clear red
Preformance Tip: MD (Metal Defense) self explainitory A Metal D tip (color is Clear red)
Special Move: Nova Falcon Tornado: Spins around opponnets bey quickly until it creates fire the knocks bey out of stadium.
Character Descripstion: Dakori is a very friendly dude and is very layed-back but when it comes to blading he gets red hot with energy. He is a very strong blader in which he know his bey so well that in fact he made the bey himself from a metor. Other than that he is against anything evil or dark.
![[Image: TwistidBladersig.png]](https://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy246/christopherlim/TwistidBladersig.png)
mmm, this guy is actually interesting, mostly because he made his bey out of the same stuff the legendary beys are made out of.
(Mar. 28, 2011 6:21 AM)pikabattler Wrote: ha, sory for not answering your question. yes you should wait for the next chapter, witch i will try to do now but i just got pokemon white today so yea. hey i have almost finished the other story so ill put that up soon. oh and by the way, Blake Ritchie is based off me.
aw, okay, i'll post them later(I made 4 ._.'') and I had no idea Blake was base off you! :O
(Mar. 28, 2011 6:53 AM)G.Cancer90R2F Wrote: Name: Dakori (Male)I already made a character with Horuseus(he started out with Ra, but Pikabattler needed to change it to Horuseus, just wanted to point that out
Age:16
Bey:Nova Horuseus 130MD (metal defense) Nova= Left Spin Burn Wheel (Red) Horuseus Clear Wheel=Clear white) 130 and MD (Clear red)
Parts Decription: Face: Standard Horuseus Face Red and White
Clear Wheel: Clear White with Red Decals (stickers)
Metal Wheel: Nova=Left Spinning Burn Wheel and is Red
Spin Track: 130 Clear White
Preformance Tip: MD (Metal Defense) self explainitory A Metal D tip (color is Clear white)
Special Move: Nova Falcon Tornado: Spins around opponnets bey quickly until it creates fire the knocks bey out of stadium.
Character Descripstion: Dakori is a very friendly dude and is very layed-back but when it comes to blading he gets red hot with energy. He is a very strong blader in which he know his bey so well that in fact he made the bey himself from a metor. Other than that he is against anything evil or dark.
well the start of the other story is very connected to my life until the thing that made him have the adventure happens. i played Pokemon white too much yesterday, so i will Finnish the other story at school and on Thursday (that's the day im supposed to beast ghetes, but it's also when i get my 3ds) i will write ch 7 on this one, and it will have a battle, and for those who want to see more battles the other story has one in nearly every chapter.
character: tatayoma
bey: claw tiger C145AS (def/attk)
special move: giant claw maul
the giant claw maul is when one huge paw comes out of the bey and it extends it's claw, then the whole tiger comes out of the bey and grabs either the bey (if the beast isn't out) or the beast and mauls them or grabs the bey in its mouth and flings it into the air.
personality: he likes to have fun and he is very noble to his friends. He is very shy though. He is extremely good at beyblading because he has been taught from the age of 5.
bey: claw tiger C145AS (def/attk)
special move: giant claw maul
the giant claw maul is when one huge paw comes out of the bey and it extends it's claw, then the whole tiger comes out of the bey and grabs either the bey (if the beast isn't out) or the beast and mauls them or grabs the bey in its mouth and flings it into the air.
personality: he likes to have fun and he is very noble to his friends. He is very shy though. He is extremely good at beyblading because he has been taught from the age of 5.
(Mar. 28, 2011 11:25 PM)clankzappah Wrote: character: tatayoma
bey: claw tiger C145AS (def/attk)
special move: giant claw maul
the giant claw maul is when one huge paw comes out of the bey and it extends it's claw, then the whole tiger comes out of the bey and grabs either the bey (if the beast isn't out) or the beast and mauls them or grabs the bey in its mouth and flings it into the air.
personality: he likes to have fun and he is very noble to his friends. He is very shy though. He is extremely good at beyblading because he has been taught from the age of 5.
dude, if you read around the thread(or this page...) then you would know that he's not interested in any characters at the moment, after the chapter he's writing will he accept this..oh, and I was planning on posting a tiger related blade..oh, and read the other bios past page 3, the special moves are different in this story
ok I hav a person
gender male
name Hiese Wollo
age 13
bey burn wolf 145WD
bey special move ballistic burn blitz. the bey creats a explosion around it to do a ton of damage to the other bey(s)
bio a kid from America who wants to become the #1 blader in japan (after "easily" becoming number #1 in the US) and create the ultimate bey. and completely destroy lightning l drago
personality Hiese is mostly calm and does not let his anger get in the way of his battle.
gender male
name Hiese Wollo
age 13
bey burn wolf 145WD
bey special move ballistic burn blitz. the bey creats a explosion around it to do a ton of damage to the other bey(s)
bio a kid from America who wants to become the #1 blader in japan (after "easily" becoming number #1 in the US) and create the ultimate bey. and completely destroy lightning l drago
personality Hiese is mostly calm and does not let his anger get in the way of his battle.
(Mar. 28, 2011 11:50 PM)Soopah Wrote:(Mar. 28, 2011 11:25 PM)clankzappah Wrote: character: tatayoma
bey: claw tiger C145AS (def/attk)
special move: giant claw maul
the giant claw maul is when one huge paw comes out of the bey and it extends it's claw, then the whole tiger comes out of the bey and grabs either the bey (if the beast isn't out) or the beast and mauls them or grabs the bey in its mouth and flings it into the air.
personality: he likes to have fun and he is very noble to his friends. He is very shy though. He is extremely good at beyblading because he has been taught from the age of 5.
dude, if you read around the thread(or this page...) then you would know that he's not interested in any characters at the moment, after the chapter he's writing will he accept this..oh, and I was planning on posting a tiger related blade..oh, and read the other bios past page 3, the special moves are different in this story
you say this then the_kid98 posts a character XD but yeah, i gotta stop being lazy and read the threads, only read first two chapters
hey hey, im ok with the character requests, i just want them to slow down. remember the more the character links to the story the better chance it will get in so people wait till the next chapter so i can get the most out of characters.
ps: they may get in but i will have to read it first.
ps: they may get in but i will have to read it first.
not really worried if mine gets in or not, this just sounded to me like an interesting character, feel free to change the personality and add a bio!
(Mar. 29, 2011 4:36 AM)clankzappah Wrote:i got tired of posting and just sent him a pm 'bout it ^^''(Mar. 28, 2011 11:50 PM)Soopah Wrote:(Mar. 28, 2011 11:25 PM)clankzappah Wrote: character: tatayoma
bey: claw tiger C145AS (def/attk)
special move: giant claw maul
the giant claw maul is when one huge paw comes out of the bey and it extends it's claw, then the whole tiger comes out of the bey and grabs either the bey (if the beast isn't out) or the beast and mauls them or grabs the bey in its mouth and flings it into the air.
personality: he likes to have fun and he is very noble to his friends. He is very shy though. He is extremely good at beyblading because he has been taught from the age of 5.
dude, if you read around the thread(or this page...) then you would know that he's not interested in any characters at the moment, after the chapter he's writing will he accept this..oh, and I was planning on posting a tiger related blade..oh, and read the other bios past page 3, the special moves are different in this story
you say this then the_kid98 posts a character XD but yeah, i gotta stop being lazy and read the threads, only read first two chapters
I know it's only been 2 days--but this thread feels dead. Anyways, I thought it would be okay to post these characters I've been saving for 2 weeks xD, do what you want with them, don't use 'em if you don't want too 
I don't mind!
Edit: Remember- I've been saving these for 2 weeks, so know one make comparisons between the other character with a tiger bey >:I
Name: ''Soup''(yes, another character based off me, more like my other personality though..)
Age: 14
Beyblade: Sabertooth Tiger IF(Ice Fang)130 RSF
Type: attack
Description: ''Soup'' is a cocky, sarcastic, wise guy. He knows a lot, and has a lot of potential, but blows it all away with his ignorance. He doesn't accept anyone, and tends to be a jerk towards people if they get something wrong. He's one of the smartest, but annoying people you meet(I act like this, well, when i'm in an argument. The other person usually loses the argument when i'm like this). He looks almost exactly like Glenn, but his glasses are down a little. His shirts are somewhat baggier, and he looks like a jerk.(Maybe you could make them twins?Glenn and Soup) His real name is Tracy(not my real name though
), so some people make fun of him for it. OH, and he's a bad guy, he joined them to prove to everybody that you don't need to be good to be succesful(future dictator? lol)
Bey Description: Sabertooth is shaped like basalt, not as heavy, and a little smaller. It has a line in between the the blade, but is sperated on 2 sides, kind of like Capricorn/Fury, but bigger, sharper, a little spaced out between the gaps, notches to add recoil smath, and the ends are more pointed. Being very good at attack. Tiger is like Capricorn, but the horns are teeth(no duh!?) and it's heavier, making it good for destabalizing, and attack, since it's so spread out, the face bolt just looks like the side of a tigers head. IF is shaped like an upside down Aquarios energy ring, wider, and yellow. It's supposed to be good for air movement, making it faster.
Level 1 attack: Iron Fang- Tiger charges at the opposing bey faster than a speeding bullet.
Level 2 attack: Relentless hunt- Tiger circles the bey on the outside, breaking bits of it, like when you see a wild animal eating its prey.
Level 3 attack: Frozen Lunge- same concept as Andromeda, but it jumps, 'nuff said.
Name: Erica Elric
Age: 17
Beyblade: Heartbrake Succubus HS(heart shield)160 PD
Type: Stamina
Description: Erica is probably the hottest girl you ever meet. And yes, she's one of those stereotypical egotistic popular girls. Most guys succumb to her, and she breaks their hearts by pretending to like them. Bascially, she's a tease, or another word i'm not allowed to say here. She has long hair, sort-of-tan skin. Brown hair--you know what, no, just think Olivia wilde, younger, and with not to much clothes, maybe a short tank top, and small shorts. Yeah, you know what she is, she's the school-(inserts word that i'm afraid to say). Succubus energy ring looks like Virgo's but dark, and curvy, the face bolt shows a beautiful women smiling coldy.
Bey Description: Heartbreak is completely smooth, with one big break in the middle, looking like a crack. This makes good stamina, with some attack. Heart shield is shaped like heartbreak, but no crack, it's good at absorbing attacks. PD is the best stamina bottom around(I think, if not, it doesn't matter)
Level 1 attack: Shield push- Heart shield pushes the enemy very hard, 'nuff said.
Level 2 attack: Heartbraker- the opposing bey is forced to go to Succubus, and just keeps hitting Succubus until outspun
Level 3 attack: Stamina output- PD becomes extremely fast, while retaining stamina, but loses all attack strength it would ever have, usefull for dodging.
Name: Xander Pipes
Age: 20
Byeblade: Stoneaxe Minotaur MB(metal base)100 CMFS(coat metal flat sharp/spike)
Type: Defense
Description: Xander is a very different man. He's Greek, but anyways, he's a pretty tall, and pretty strong. But he acts like a kid, and he's funny. He likes to look at the good side of things at all times, even when in pain. Xander is one of the most skilled bladers anyone would ever meet, and he's extremely loyal. He wears a normal carp, with folded sleeves, and shorts. He has normal length hair for a guy, and it.looks.awesome.
Bey Description: Stoneaxe is shaped like Earth, bigger, and heavier, and the gaps are filled. Minotaur is shaped like bull, but heavier, and the weight is distributed even better. The face bolt is a bulls face facing forward. MB100 is heavy, giving it defensive purposes. CMFS is a metal flat sharp/spike, with a rubber coat around it, giving it stamina, defense, and attack.
Level 1 attack: Axe swing- Minotaur comes out, and swings its ace with quite some force.
Level 2 attack: Battle stance- Minotaur stands in a defensive position, and takes the hits- like a baws
Level 3 attack: Final blow- Minotaur comes out, and swings it's axe as hard as it can, resulting in it losing half of its stamina.
Name: Dexter Miles
Age: 18
Beyblade: Armour Sentinal WS(wing shield)160 CSD(coat semi defense)
Type: Defense
Description: Dex is a British kid who works undercover for the (good?) organization. His blade, and appearance make him look sinister, but that's what makes him a great spy. Dex wears a black robe in front of most people, but under that is night black hair, and pale white skin(but he's not emo xD). Besides that, he usually wears a long sleeve shirt with the WBBA on it, fingerless gloves, and jeans. He's quite mean to be honest, even to his allies, he's stubborn, rash, and headstrong. But he has his moments when he can be nice.
Bey Description: Armour is left spin and resembles Basalt and Vulcan mixed together. It's supposed to look like wings, this gives it defense, decent attack(but it's WAY better at defense), and since it spins left, spinsteal. Sentinel is shaped like Perseus clear wheel, but there isn't anything their to change performance(like LLD, and GP), and the face bolt looks like a demons face, turned tot he side. Wing shield is a tall track, that can absorb hits pretty well(just like BD145 >). CSD is a bigger CS with a semi defense in the middle, letting it last longer in fights, and the rubber recovers from attacks very nicely.
Level 1 attack: Shadow wing- Sentinel brings out its true wings, and smacks the enemy around.
Level 2 attack: Armour hack- Sentinel gets the amount of smash it has, and tries to hack(as in the attacking swing, not computer hacking!) the opponent.
Level 3 attack: Darkness coat- Sentinel makes the opponent see all black, kind of like making them blind, while Sentinel relentlessly attacks his enemy for 3 minutes. This results in Sentinel to lose 3/4 of it's attack and defensive purpose afterwards, and makes Sentinel left to standstill and try to outspin the opponent.
I don't mind!Edit: Remember- I've been saving these for 2 weeks, so know one make comparisons between the other character with a tiger bey >:I
Name: ''Soup''(yes, another character based off me, more like my other personality though..)
Age: 14
Beyblade: Sabertooth Tiger IF(Ice Fang)130 RSF
Type: attack
Description: ''Soup'' is a cocky, sarcastic, wise guy. He knows a lot, and has a lot of potential, but blows it all away with his ignorance. He doesn't accept anyone, and tends to be a jerk towards people if they get something wrong. He's one of the smartest, but annoying people you meet(I act like this, well, when i'm in an argument. The other person usually loses the argument when i'm like this). He looks almost exactly like Glenn, but his glasses are down a little. His shirts are somewhat baggier, and he looks like a jerk.(Maybe you could make them twins?Glenn and Soup) His real name is Tracy(not my real name though
), so some people make fun of him for it. OH, and he's a bad guy, he joined them to prove to everybody that you don't need to be good to be succesful(future dictator? lol)Bey Description: Sabertooth is shaped like basalt, not as heavy, and a little smaller. It has a line in between the the blade, but is sperated on 2 sides, kind of like Capricorn/Fury, but bigger, sharper, a little spaced out between the gaps, notches to add recoil smath, and the ends are more pointed. Being very good at attack. Tiger is like Capricorn, but the horns are teeth(no duh!?) and it's heavier, making it good for destabalizing, and attack, since it's so spread out, the face bolt just looks like the side of a tigers head. IF is shaped like an upside down Aquarios energy ring, wider, and yellow. It's supposed to be good for air movement, making it faster.
Level 1 attack: Iron Fang- Tiger charges at the opposing bey faster than a speeding bullet.
Level 2 attack: Relentless hunt- Tiger circles the bey on the outside, breaking bits of it, like when you see a wild animal eating its prey.
Level 3 attack: Frozen Lunge- same concept as Andromeda, but it jumps, 'nuff said.
Name: Erica Elric
Age: 17
Beyblade: Heartbrake Succubus HS(heart shield)160 PD
Type: Stamina
Description: Erica is probably the hottest girl you ever meet. And yes, she's one of those stereotypical egotistic popular girls. Most guys succumb to her, and she breaks their hearts by pretending to like them. Bascially, she's a tease, or another word i'm not allowed to say here. She has long hair, sort-of-tan skin. Brown hair--you know what, no, just think Olivia wilde, younger, and with not to much clothes, maybe a short tank top, and small shorts. Yeah, you know what she is, she's the school-(inserts word that i'm afraid to say). Succubus energy ring looks like Virgo's but dark, and curvy, the face bolt shows a beautiful women smiling coldy.
Bey Description: Heartbreak is completely smooth, with one big break in the middle, looking like a crack. This makes good stamina, with some attack. Heart shield is shaped like heartbreak, but no crack, it's good at absorbing attacks. PD is the best stamina bottom around(I think, if not, it doesn't matter)
Level 1 attack: Shield push- Heart shield pushes the enemy very hard, 'nuff said.
Level 2 attack: Heartbraker- the opposing bey is forced to go to Succubus, and just keeps hitting Succubus until outspun
Level 3 attack: Stamina output- PD becomes extremely fast, while retaining stamina, but loses all attack strength it would ever have, usefull for dodging.
Name: Xander Pipes
Age: 20
Byeblade: Stoneaxe Minotaur MB(metal base)100 CMFS(coat metal flat sharp/spike)
Type: Defense
Description: Xander is a very different man. He's Greek, but anyways, he's a pretty tall, and pretty strong. But he acts like a kid, and he's funny. He likes to look at the good side of things at all times, even when in pain. Xander is one of the most skilled bladers anyone would ever meet, and he's extremely loyal. He wears a normal carp, with folded sleeves, and shorts. He has normal length hair for a guy, and it.looks.awesome.
Bey Description: Stoneaxe is shaped like Earth, bigger, and heavier, and the gaps are filled. Minotaur is shaped like bull, but heavier, and the weight is distributed even better. The face bolt is a bulls face facing forward. MB100 is heavy, giving it defensive purposes. CMFS is a metal flat sharp/spike, with a rubber coat around it, giving it stamina, defense, and attack.
Level 1 attack: Axe swing- Minotaur comes out, and swings its ace with quite some force.
Level 2 attack: Battle stance- Minotaur stands in a defensive position, and takes the hits- like a baws
Level 3 attack: Final blow- Minotaur comes out, and swings it's axe as hard as it can, resulting in it losing half of its stamina.
Name: Dexter Miles
Age: 18
Beyblade: Armour Sentinal WS(wing shield)160 CSD(coat semi defense)
Type: Defense
Description: Dex is a British kid who works undercover for the (good?) organization. His blade, and appearance make him look sinister, but that's what makes him a great spy. Dex wears a black robe in front of most people, but under that is night black hair, and pale white skin(but he's not emo xD). Besides that, he usually wears a long sleeve shirt with the WBBA on it, fingerless gloves, and jeans. He's quite mean to be honest, even to his allies, he's stubborn, rash, and headstrong. But he has his moments when he can be nice.
Bey Description: Armour is left spin and resembles Basalt and Vulcan mixed together. It's supposed to look like wings, this gives it defense, decent attack(but it's WAY better at defense), and since it spins left, spinsteal. Sentinel is shaped like Perseus clear wheel, but there isn't anything their to change performance(like LLD, and GP), and the face bolt looks like a demons face, turned tot he side. Wing shield is a tall track, that can absorb hits pretty well(just like BD145 >
). CSD is a bigger CS with a semi defense in the middle, letting it last longer in fights, and the rubber recovers from attacks very nicely.Level 1 attack: Shadow wing- Sentinel brings out its true wings, and smacks the enemy around.
Level 2 attack: Armour hack- Sentinel gets the amount of smash it has, and tries to hack(as in the attacking swing, not computer hacking!) the opponent.
Level 3 attack: Darkness coat- Sentinel makes the opponent see all black, kind of like making them blind, while Sentinel relentlessly attacks his enemy for 3 minutes. This results in Sentinel to lose 3/4 of it's attack and defensive purpose afterwards, and makes Sentinel left to standstill and try to outspin the opponent.
hey sory for not posting recently, i have been playing pokemon white and the 3ds for too long that i couldnt do anything, as the weekend is coming tomorrow, i will try and finnish the other story and do ch 7 of this one.
oh, it's fine! I really don't mind, I was just wondering when you were coming back, anyways, I hope you actually read my characters xD
damit the coolness of the 3ds, i couldn't do anything but play it. well scince i cant play it at school ill do it during recess.
(Apr. 03, 2011 11:09 PM)pikabattler Wrote: damit the coolness of the 3ds, i couldn't do anything but play it. well scince i cant play it at school ill do it during recess.xD, lets not get off-topic here! It's been days since you've had an update on your progress, just curios, did you work on it at all recently?
err no, sory. man i realy nee some time on my hands. well there are holidays for me coming up so ill try a few chapters then. still got to finish my other story.
(Apr. 03, 2011 11:28 PM)pikabattler Wrote: err no, sory. man i realy nee some time on my hands. well there are holidays for me coming up so ill try a few chapters then. still got to finish my other story.
it's fine, don't apologize. Just feel like i'm the only one keeping up with this thread--and that makes me feel like a nerd
ha ha, well i finished my other story so ill put that up soon, look out for it but don't expect much, it's only a draft.
Is my character/s in?
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at the moment i lost witch characters are who's so i have no idea if yours is in or not.
you still know which characters are mine though..right?