The Legend of the beys: the lost blader- incomplete - Giraton - Jan. 18, 2011
this is a story about a blader who lost his family in a fire with his 2 brothers in a foster home, he ran away from the house and left his brothers with the police to deal with. with his terable history he vows to make everything better with the last thing he has, a beyblade, gravity persious. to survive and reach is goal he goes all over japan on foot winning tournaments. returning to the house that caught on fire one day, he knew the fire wasn't an accident. a track of ash lead to the only wooden door outside of the house, the front.... he hasn't used his real name since the event, instead he uses the name dracoon. he hasn't lost since the fire, and wouldn't survive if he did lose. one day he bumps into a guy in a hood who drops a letter addressed to dracoon. it was an invitation. the entire story is in the spiolers below:
5 years ago, a house caught on fire. it seamed like an accident. only 2 children survived, both brothers, or so thought. another survived, in fact he saved his brothers. he ran away, not being able to bare the fate his parents faced. he had only 1 possession left, his bey gravity persious. he ran and ran from his home, parents and brothers as orphans. he was never seen again. those who knew he left called him THE LOST BLADER.
CH 1: the letter: yet another tournament had come and gone in Tokyo and yet again it was won by a boy known as Dracoon. he was a terror at tournaments, having 5 bey-pointers just to hold all his points, 4 quetz and 5 of every other prize beys of the arcade game. no one knew his real name, some say he didn't have one. he never lost a match, and he had a reason why, he had to win to survive. he normally used gravity persious 90wd. in the main hall of the tournament building Dracoon grabbed his prize and tried to leave. "hey!!" a wbba official yelled, "you forgot this." the official gave a gold galaxy pegasis, the non cash prize of the tournament. "don't want it," the 14 year old said in a deep, solid voice and left the building. as Dracoon walked down the street he bumped into a hooded man, and the man dropped an envelope. "hey you, dropped... this," his words slurred as he noticed the hooded man disappeared. Dracoon looked at the letter to see it was address to him, with his real name, Damian coondez.
chapter 2: answers of the past The letter was apparently an invitation, which led Dracoon to an old ware house. he noticed in the corner of his eye, a newly painted helicopter pad. When he went inside there was only one light on. As he got closer he noticed the the light shone on a bey stadium about 1 meter across and half a meter deep. Suddenly a door opened on the other end of the building. Dracoon hid in the shadows. A boy only about a year older then Dracoon walked in. As the boy got closer, Dracoon noticed that the boy had a scar across his left eye that every time he blinked the scar was completed. Dracoon got a sneaky idea. When the scared boy got close to the stadium with the same confused look as Dracoon had, Dracoon's idea was put in to motion. he jumped out of the shadows saying "boo!" and scared the poor boy half to death. Dracoon bust out a childish laugh he hadn't had for 5 years. "heavens to Betsey, why did you do that?" said the boy in a quite British accent. "Oh I haven't laughed that hard in half a decade," dracoon answered. They started to talk, revealing that the boy was commonly referred to as Scar.
They soon heard a helicopter land next to them (thus revealing what the landing pad was for). A man in a suite and a young woman walked in. The man had a greeting face but the woman looked as confused to be there as Dracoon and scar. "Greetings" said the man," I see you got the letters Dracoon and Scar, may I call you two that?" Dracoon was the first to ask. "How do you know our names!?" "We have been watching you guys for years, ever since the worse days of your lives," explained the man, "by the way the name is Michael." It was scar's turn to talk. "the worst day of our lives? the worst day of my life was when my house burnt down 3 years ago." Dracoon was shocked to hear this, the same thing happened to him 5 years ago! "exactly, the day your house burned down and you got that scar a flame wolf," said Michael, "the boy next to you had his house burnt down 5 years ago where he got a scar on his leg and the girl next to me had her house burnt down by her uncle while she was at a beach party."
"So we are all here because our houses were burnt down?" asked the girl next to him, Dracoon thought she knew as much as he and Scar did. "No Chloe, your all here because your houses were all burnt down by beyblades, actually more like a beyblade," answered Michael. "What!?" yelled 3 young people people in the building. "yep, we think that there is an organization causing these fires with a single bey and that Chloe's uncle is part of it, as I already told her on the way here."Interesting," said Dracoon. "Now, who would like a beybattle!?" announced Michael.
chapter 3: __________
The first battle was Scar and Michael. Dracoon was going to battle the winner so he watched the battle closely for any weaknesses. Michael brought a bey from a suitcase, witch had over 20 beys in it. the bey he chose was a Grand Ketos WD145RS. Scars bey (Flame Wolf 90 F) was an attack type so Scar got a bit worried because Ketos was a decent defence type. Scar set his bey on his beylauncher, Michael felt confident and used a basic light launcher. The count down began.... "3, 2, 1.... let it rip!" went Scar, "Go shoot" yelled Michael. Dracoon got confused but by the time he noticed the battle started the beys were already were already clashing fiercely. Wolf was pushing Ketos almost out of the stadium already. Suddenly Ketos glowed, it's face bolt had light shine across it. "Level 1 attack, KETOS WAVE!!!" yelled Michael. Ketos glowed dark blue and for a second or 2 there was an image of a whale the same shade as blue as the bey was glowing. Dracoon never saw something like this before but everybody else looked like they had. Wolf was forced back by Ketos' power and allowed Ketos to reach the centre of the stadium. Wolf continued to circle the stadium, Scar had to do something. "Flaming Wolf Bite!" cried Scar. His bey glowed red as fire and the temperature around it increased. it charged at Grand Ketos. Michael showed a faint smile and lifted his arm. His bey leaned towards Wolf. Ketos made a large circle dodging the attack and hitting Wolf from behind where the temperature was the coolest. This made Wolf speed forward and fly out of the stadium. Scar lost the battle. Dracoon was in for a big battle.
chapter 4: declined membership: Dracoon, still unsure about what he just saw, thought long and hard about what bey he was gong to use. he finally decided to go with gravity persious 90wd. his d was slightly flattened to provide maximin spin stealing ability's. he attached his bey to the left end of his L/R beylauncher. Michael switched his launcher to a light launcher 2 but not his bey. the count down started, "3,2, wait! where is Chloe?" asked Dracoon. "she left earlier, you may see her soon," answered Michael. yet again the countdown started, "3,2,1, go shoot. No confusion this time, the bladers were in full concentration. because the WD, Dracoon's bey span round and round the stadium. Michael purposely launched his bey to the edge of the stadium but next to the wall so it would be hit. gravity hit Ketos so Ketos ran into the wall. Michael was trying to gain energy for a special attack, little did he know that he wasn't gaining energy, he was losing it. you see, normally any attack gives power, but Dracoon's bey takes energy when it attacks an opposite spin bey. the coolest thing is that Dracoon is able to see the energy be transferred between beys. after 20 hits, Ketos ran on very low rotation speed so it went to the centre of the stadium. "Hey, why can't I do a special attack, I should have enough power?" asked Michael. "it might be because my bey is stealing your beys power, you relied too much on your special attack," answered Dracoon, "Now persious, k.o. Ketos!" Dracoon pulled his launchers string all the way. Suddenly persious started to glow black and an eerie ring surrounded it. Dracoon didn't know what was going on. persious charged towards Ketos. suddenly persious bey was replaced by a black gladiator and ran towards Ketos. as fast as it appeared the gladiator disappeared and persious hit Ketos and Ketos flew out of the stadium. Michael lost this time. "but, but, but, how?" everyone in the ware-house said in unison. after everyone got a hang on what just happened Michael started to talk. "NO!" said Dracoon, "I'm not going to be over run by revenge looking for those people who burnt down my house." "but," started Michael before "NO!!" Dracoon was yelling now. "ok if you change your mind just return here," Dracoon left without a reply. CH5: How Dracoon's Mind Changed.
Dracoon thought he made up his mind. He tried to forget about it and get on with his difficult life. A week passed and Dracoon was getting ready to leave Tokyo for the next tournament. he was going to the grocery store to feed him for the next week when he saw a bey spinning in the middle of the foot path. the bey span into an alley and Dracoon followed it, his parents died before they could give him the 'don't-follow-beys-down-dark-alleys speech. When he turned a corner he saw the bey's owner. he was mostly hooded but seamed male. "Ah, you made it," said the hooded person who sounded deferentially male but sounded quite young. "who are you, tell me!" yelled Dracoon. "ok, no need to yell," said the man as he took his hood off, "the name is Agateo." "and you brought me here because?" Dracoon asked. "I was told to eliminate your bey, maybe thought as a threat or something to our organization." replied Agateo as he set up his bey. "if it's a battle you want," started Dracoon as he set up his bey witch was set to his default setting, gravity persious right mode 90RF, "it's a battle you will get." "3,2,1 GO SHOOT!" and the beys were off. Dracoon noticed something. "I have never seen a bey like that before." "it's my own personalized bey, only members of our organization get them," answered Agateo, "mine is called screw knight L85RF." the 2 beys clashed together and repelled each other, and continued to do this 7 times. "level 1 special attack, dark screw lance!" Knight glowed silver and charged towards persious. Dracoon tried to repeat the same thing as he did against Michael but nothing happened. "ha, what was that?" laughed Agateo, obviously not showing his age. Dracoon had to think of something fast. "go, err, dark ring slash!?" yelled Dracoon, pulling his launchers string all the way. persious glowed black, but then knight rammed into persious before the ring appeared. persious flew into the air and knight struck it again by bouncing off the wall and into the air. both landed and knight prepared to charge again. "LET IT RIP," yelled an unknown, Australian accented voice. a bey sped down in a red and white line to strike knight and hit it far away from both persious and the new bey. a 14 year old boy was on top of a building. he kicked a ladder down and slid down as he said "we leave you for one week and you run into this guy." the boys bey ran into persious to give it more spin, thus revealing that the bey was meteo L-drago. "now, let's finish this guy off," said the boy. Dracoon just went with the flow. "go, dark ring slash," yelled dracoon. "level 1 attack, meteo pile-driver!" yelled the boy. "hey, 2 against 1 isn't fair," cried Agateo as he grabbed a round pellet. he threw it to the ground and it burst into smoke. the other 2 young boys lost concentration and the beys stopped their attacks. Agateo was gone. "Chicken," said Dracoon, "hey thanks, who are you?" "Blake Ritchie, I was the one who gave you that letter last week, I'm also the top ranger bladder and cyber bey tester at the organization against the organization that that guy was part of, or the organization for short." "Your with Michael aren't you, you were following me weren't you?" asked Dracoon. "yes and no, I was on ranger patrol," answered Blake. "well I'm still not join your organization," said Dracoon. "never implied that, but I do recommend joining, we are not bent on revenge, only on legal justice, plus you get free food and air fare to tournaments," said Blake. "hmm, ill think about that," said Dracoon, and he ran off, "I would never turn down free food and air fare. CH6: the organization:
when he reached the ware house there was no lights on but the windows were open to let the sun, in. Dracoon walked up to the stadium, or more like it, where it was. Dracoon looked down and noticed a hole, one that looked like it was shaped for a bey. Dracoon knelt down and put his bey in the hole. a red light started to run over his bey. "PLEASE STAND BACK, DAMIAN COONDEZ," boomed a female, robotic voice. Dracoon jumped back, kinda surprised the computer knew his name. his bey fell down a pipe system and a round elevator thing rose out of the ground. Dracoon walked in thinking "sweet teck". the elevator's door closed and sped down. "NOW ENTERING HQ LEVEL 1, RECEPTION, PLEASE PICK UP YOU BEY FROM THE DISPENSE TUBE AND WALK TO THE COUNTER FOR FURTHER INSTRUCTIONS, HAVE A NICE DAY," said the same voice as before. the elevator stopped and the door opened soon after that. As Dracoon walked out he whistled in awe. The place looked like a futuristic office building from some sci-fi film. he noticed his bey in the dispense tube. he picked it up and walked up to what looked like a reception desk. "excuse me, the elevator told me to come here," said Dracoon to the guy who had his back to Dracoon behind the counter. "Ah, new guy, name and beyblade," said the strangely familiar person as he turned around. " err, Damian Coondez and gravity persious," answered Dracoon, wondering which name to say. the accountant typed away. "ok, elevator to the left and you will be sent to your sector. "Thanks," replied Dracoon. the whole experience was like going to a new school, you have no idea on what to do when everyone else looks like they know what to do. he found the elevator, not the fastest he has ever found something. he figured his bey was a security pass around here. The elevator lead him to the Elite rangers to to find and apprehend fire arsonists organization members sector (lets just call it the elite ranger sector). "hey you made it," said a familiar voice. "Scar!?" responded Dracoon, "hey what are you doing here?" "what am I doing here, what are you doing here? I thought you weren't coming," asked Scar. "some kid named Blake Ritchie helped me out and changed my mind," answered Dracoon. "WHAT!? I haven't even seen Blake, he is a legend around here," responded Scar. "CAN SCAR, DRACOON, CHLOE JANGMI AND BLAKE RITCHIE PLEASE HEAD TO THE ELEVATORS TO BE TAKEN TO THE MAIN OFFICE!" boomed a speaker. Dracoon and Scar got in the elevator. This time it whizzed around like the great glass elevator from Charlie and the chocolate factory. When it opened, apart from everything spinning, the room looked like the American president's office, only with a high teck monitor for a window. Blake and Chloe were already talking with Michael. "Miss anything?" asked Scar. "No just passing the time," answered Michael, now to business. After an hour of explaining, Blake summed it up. "ok, so basically, we are the international ranger team." "you also have to find legendary beys like Blake's meteo L-drago. "How do we do that?" asked Scar. "Ill answer that, we have a team who searches for beyblade arsonist activity, then we go there and use my ability to see beyblade energy to pinpoint the exact location. "wait, you can see beyblade energy?" asked Dracoon. "Well you can see energy being transferred between beys, cant you Dracoon?" "err, well yea, but not very well." "then that's good enough reason to believe me isn't it, wait I got a call," said Blake as he pulled out his launcher. He stretched out his launcher's string and but the handle against his mouth and the rest of the launcher to his ear like a phone, then he started to talk into it. "ok, thanks," finished Blake, "well we have our first mission."
chapter 7: the first mission:
'zip zip zip zip'. "how do you get used to them?" asked Dracoon after travelling in another transportation pod (the elevator tube thing). "you do, just not quickly, I've been here for about 2 years so this is actually quite calming now, but I hated them when I first got in one." answered Blake. "where are we then?" ask Scar. "err you may be a little shocked but the American transportation centre for the organization, from here we can go anywhere in the world." answered Blake again. "eh, at this rate nothing surprises me," said Chloe. "well we better get going, we need to get to Egypt as soon as possible," said Blake. "then wouldn't it be faster to go from Japan?" asked Dracoon. "err, no. the pod from Japan to Egypt is so slow it takes 2 days to get there, from here we can get there in 10 minutes because his place is super fast in any pod." answered Blake," now lets go, those guys could already have the bey." they followed Blake to a busy intersection of pods and people. not one pod wasn't being used. "wow, busy," said Scar. "and this is a slow day, you should see it on a Wednesday." said Blake, "anyway this is the pod dock we want, I just hope there is 4 left." "6 pods left in dock, how many do you want?" that was a robotic voice that activated when Blake hit a button. "good, 4 please." answered Blake. up came a pod. "Dracoon, you are up first." Dracoon got in the pod and the door closed. the pod went up, turned it's self over so Dracoon was on his back a zip, he sped forward in a very smooth movement that made the ride pleasant, like a plane ride without turbulence. Dracoon actually fell to sleep for 5 minutes before a voice told him he was almost at Egypt. zip, ding! "wow this is probably the least busy place in this organization," said Dracoon. 'zip, ding.' "wow this place is boring compare to the other places," said Scar as he walked out of his pod, "you would think this place would be more active." 'zip, ding, zip, ding.' "hmm, strange, this place looks empty," said Chloe. "normally is on Saturday nights," explained Blake. "night? it's only mid-day?" said Scar. "you forgot time difference," explained Dracoon. "oh, right." "well what are we waiting for? lets get going." said Chloe. "we are waiting for one of our top Egyptian spy's, and she isn't even Egyptian, she just knows Egypt like the back of her hand, her name is Kid Druman," said Blake, "her code name is The Reader." 'zip, ding.' "yawn, man I hate night missions," said a 18 year old girl who just arrived on the other side of the room. "oh good there she is now," said Blake. "oh good your all ready, wait who are these guys?" asked Kid. "well this is Scar, Dracoon and..." started Blake "Chloe, I used to be the spy for her but then I was sent as the spy for the arsonist actions at Egypt, still am," said Kid. "well are we ready to go?" asked Scar. "yep, let's go.
'zip zip zip zip zip,' "ok we are here," said Blake. "where?" asked Scar. "look behind you," answered Kid. he turned around to view a huge camp site in the middle of the baron desert. "so?" asked Scar, "it's just a camp site." "its the gadget site for Egypt, it's also where we get more information for our mission," answered Blake. "oh, ok," said Scar. all 5 walked up to the biggest tent, the mission briefing tent. there was a man standing at the end of the tent. "since you are late we will give you 5 a short brief," said the man. "sorry Clarence, Kid was a little late and the pods were slow," said Blake. "well then, here is your mission, there is a camp 4 kilometres north with the arsonist digging away for a bey said to control the power of the first sun and part of the key trio, it's name is sol blaze, the other 2 are called sol blaze eclipse, the bey of the first dark star, and sol blaze gold, the bey of the golden sun, a sun made of golden energy that not even Ra or the legendary beys created or know who created it." started Clarence, "sol blaze and sol blaze eclipse was used by Ra and Dark Ra in the first god war, but were lost in meteorites after the war, turns out one landed here. your mission is to find the bey before they do." "understandable, a super powerful bey that controls the first burning ball of fire in the universe and the beyblade arsonist want it," said Dracoon. "these are the gadgets you have access to during this mission. Kid, will you do the honours? asked Clarence. "yes, first this is the portability, a cube that unfolds into a automatic drill, created by Chloe's dad actually," said Kid. "Wait, my dad MADE that!?" asked Chloe. "yes, your dad worked for us as an inventor, this is why we think your uncle is part of the arsonist organization," answered Kid "wow, he always was the garage dad, didn't think he made anything good, but here it is," said Chloe in an emotional wispier. "we also have the digital bey launcher, launches high speed digital beys, set to cyber Pegasis 90R2F, the pen pick axe and drill in one, for when you find the meteorite, and finally our greatest invention, the invisibility field generator," finished off Kid. "well we better get to the proposed site of where the bey is," said Blake. each team member grabbed their bags of food and gadgets and set out for their transport. "CAMELS!" yelled Scar and Chloe.
chapter 8: 1 of 3 found:
the team rode on their slow, sweaty, fluffy camels. "hey I think mine is constipated, it keeps farting!" yelled scar. "oh that's just Farty, holds the record for the most farts done by a camel in an hour," said Kid. "WHAT!!!!!!!!! oh boy," then scar fainted but still stayed on the camel. he woke up when Blake yelled, "found something!" "what?" said Dracoon. "there is a dungeon of beyblade energy over there," Blake was pointing to a sand dune a few meters away from the group. "well the fire arsonists are just over that dune if I'm reading this thing right," said Kid. "ill scout ahead, if they see us we will have one big battle on our hands," said Blake. he went over to the dune to see if there was any action on the other side. there was a large group of diggers with pick axes and shovels looking for any sign of a temple that would hold the bey. Blake went down the sand dune as quietly as possible to avoid getting seen. "ok, we got to work fast, quietly and stealthy, I can feel the energy emanating close to the surface of that dune so we won't have much work.," explained Blake. "so they are there?" asked scar. "yes, and hey are not being very noisy so we got to be quiet, now let's get to work," said Blake before he ran off to get the sand off the dune with some sort of powerful pocket fan and his hands. the rest ran towards the dune and started helping with what ever digging and clearing tool they had. Chloe was the first to find something. "good, let me at it," said Blake when Chloe announced she found it, "oh perfect, it's the door, get the rest of the sand off while I figure out how to open it." somebody must of heard it because the arsonist seamed to slow down and inspect the area. "hurry up, we don't want to get caught," whispered Kid as she spotted what the arsonist group were doing. "got it, hurry up and get over here, I'm going to open the door," loudly whispered Blake to only get the team to come. once everybody were ready, Blake put his bey into a hole in the door and it started to glow. "hey, you, stop!" one of the arsonist goons spotted them when the door started to open. "get in, ill fend them off, Dracoon stay with me," yelled Blake. everybody but Blake and Dracoon got into the corridor behind the door. "ready for a crass course in learning how to do a special attack?" asked Blake. "oh I'm ready, wait what?" asked Dracoon. "connect with your bey emotionally and pull your launcher twice and you will then know the rest, now get my back," quickly answered Blake as he prepared for a really big battle by first grabbing his meteo L-drago from the door. "let it rip!" yelled Dracoon and Blake in unison as they launched there beys. there were more arsonists around and they all were launching there beys. meteo was hitting the beys full force one by one and they were all 1 hit KO's. persious was dodging them and making them hit each other. "you got to do it now or we won't make it, we will have to try a double team attack," said Blake. "ok, let's do this," said Dracoon. ok, connect with your bey emotionally, oh this is stupid it's an inanimate object. thought Dracoon. you have had me for years now and you still don't know a thing about me. it was persious talking to Dracoon! it was talking to Dracoon through his mind! looks like it got to you before you got to it, I haven't had a case like that. now Blake was talking to Dracoon through his mind. hey what are you doing here Blake, how are you here the both of you? thought Dracoon. well I'm here because I'm able to enter people's mind when they are connecting to their bey, and that's exactly what's happening to ya now, well we better get to reality and do this thing. they got out of their head in thought and pull their launchers twice. both meteo and persious glowed and span into overdrive. "gladiator smash," cried Dracoon. "meteo dragon smasher," cried Blake. the 2 beys joined together and shared their energy and twilled around in a blaze of red and black. they flew around and smashed into the arsonist's beys and wiped them out. "ok we got to get in now Dracoon, meteo and persious keep them busy!" yelled Blake. both boys ran into the corridor, using there special torches. meanwhile, the rest of the team entered a room lit by torches and the gold walls. "wow, this room is worth the white house times 10," said Chloe. "there it is, the thing we are looking for," said Kid, pointing towards a red bey sitting on a podium. "we came all this way for this? it's just a sol blaze bey," said Scar. "in case you forget, this is the bey used by the Egyptian god Ra," explained Kid. "what we miss," said Dracoon as he ran into the room. "you found the bey? good let's go, our beys wont last forever," said Blake as he came into the room. Kid grabbed the bey and they left the room. the door was closing, probably because the bey was gone. "come on, or we will be locked in here forever," cried Blake. they all got out but Scar only got out with one less shoe. the arsonist left, scared by the 2 beys defending the door. "there they are, now let's go before the arsonist get reinforcements," said Blake pointing to L-drago and persious sitting in the sand. they left on their camels, with Scar on Farty again. "ewww, that was a stinky one."
chapter 9: the school:
the team sat in a stinky tent witch was high teck inside. there was computers everywhere along the side and a big monitor on the back with a stage with a pedestal and microphone at the front for announcements to the people who would sit in the chairs all along the centre on the room, witch only 5 of them were filled, the team and Kid. there was a tall skinny yet muscular man on the stage, not bothering to speak through the microphone to the 5 young people. "sounds like you got lucky, normally there would be more goons" said the man. "yea Pedro, but still allot when working with newbies, dracoon only just learnt how to do a special attack, even then I had to help him with a double combo, it was a risky mission with these guys, at least Kid helped," said Blake( he never really had that many goons with others, just took them all on with a bey he didn't have now, but I will get to that bey later). "well at least you got the bey without any loses, that's the important thing," said Pedro, "anyway,you have an undercover mission, well not really, you've been to the facility so many times before hand nearly everybody knows you, its that school in America, the one with all the kids from our orphanage." "you mean Alfred's primary school for the lost and found?" asked Blake and Chloe at the same time. "yes, wait how do you know about it Chloe?" answered and asked Pedro. "I looked up your files on orphanages you fund and I only found one in the whole of north America, Fred's orphanage, witch I used to go to so I had to go to Alfred's school for quite some time, then I ran away when I had the money and skills to survive in the streets, using my bey for protection and to gain the money from beyblade tournament prizes that I sold," answered Chloe. "hmm, strange, you must have been a quiet girl at the school, I've had so many undercover jobs there as a volunteer I've seen every year book since it opened 20 years ago, your name never came up," said Blake. "yea, I never ended up in the year book, but I had a different name cause I didn't like my real name back then, I was Jennifer Tagami," said Chloe. "well that doesn't ring a bell either but back to the mission, why am I going there again?" asked Blake. "we think we might have found the lost Earth Aquila from the centre of the universe, it's being used by a kid named Ben Maxmos," answered Pedro. "the school bully, how did he get one of the 3 most powerful beys of them all, the one linked to my partner bey?" asked Blake. "we don't know," answered Pedro. "wait, is your meteo L-drago one of the strongest beys ever?" asked Scar in amazement. "no, meteo is just a replacement for my true partner I haven't seen for a year, and even then it was only for a month, no my true partner bey is known as Ultra L-drago, the bey of time and space, I trained it from a lightning L-drago and it's the only thing in the universe that can create energy in the form of electricity. earth eagle, created by Ultra, was the one who created the planets and all life given upon the ones who could hold them, earth, as in the planet, was the only one that created life by it's self fully, earth eagle only created the dust that created our solar system, as it did with most, but always helped a planet start life, earth the planet was lucky. the last bey out of the 3 was Libra, and bey that balance all things to make it even, or just the right amount of each to keep the universe and the anti-universe stable. it can spilt it's self into 2 parts, flame Libra and dark Libra, normally leaving dark Libra in the legends," answered Blake with allot more explanation than needed. "wow, I never thought you could be the personal trainer to god, or are you just lying? asked Scar. "No lie, I've seen ultra being used by Blake with my own eyes, it's power is amazing," answered Kid. "anyway, when do we leave?" asked Blake. "in five hours, you are going mostly by plane to reduce your profile, the is 4 pods to Cairo up and ready for you 4, and I forgot to tell you, Kid you are not in this, you have a different mission that I wish to tell you about after they leave," answered Pedro. "ok, well see ya guys," said Kid as the rest got up. "see ya!" said the team as they walked out of the tent. they were off to America! they took the pods and ended up in a ally in Cairo witch was close to the airport. they got on the plane witch they almost missed. the landed in Detroit and instantly got in to the orphanage, witch behind it hid an entrance to another Organization base. they entered that base to get settled as that would be their home for the next 2 weeks. "hey Joey!" cried Blake as he entered the base. "hey, how have you been," answered a tall thin boy with red hair. "good, got a new team to help with the missions and new team tournament league," answered Blake enthusiastic. "ah ok, you got another mission at the school again?" asked Joey. "err yep, they think they found eagl--- I mean Aquila," answered Blake. "oh so that's what that energy spike I saw yesterday was, looks like they might be right, I've also noticed the bully getting more upbeat as well, you think they are linked?" asked Joey. "they said the bully had it, looks like this will be easy," answered Blake, "we will get to work tomorrow where is our rooms?"
:the next day:
"wake up Scar, wake up!" yelled Dracoon, "damn, must be his jet lag, or well he will miss the juicy bacon, gooey eggs and melted cheese pockets Chloe made with the chiefs." that got up Scar as soon as he heard bacon, it got into his sleep and got him up. the same happened with Blake a few minutes before then, only he got up with cheese. Dracoon wasn't lying about the pockets, they were little pastries shaped like pockets with cheese and bacon just packed in them with a lid of egg, very delicious. Chloe made the recipe by herself but it's very basic and easy to learn. after eating their breakfast they left the base for there undercover job of retaining Earth Aquila. "here we are, Alfred's school for the lost and found," announced Blake as they arrived at the school. "hey, looks like I found the bully already," said Dracoon. there was 2 kids playing in a strangely smooth metal rubbish bin. one of the kids was twitching like crazy while the other looked all angry and determined. the angry looking kid was using a earth Aquila but it was surprisingly aggressive against the twitching boy's bey witch was having a hard time standing it's ground despite it being a defence type with some impressive parts. "hey that's twitch battling the bully," cried Blake. twitch, obviously the twitching kid, was beaten to an out spin, but the bully, Ben Maxmos, wasn't done. he sent his bey heading straight towards Twitch's. "let it rip!!!" yelled Blake as he launched his bey into the bin lid and conked Twitch's bey out of the way using it's rubber on it's clear wheel to weaken the blow to Twitch's bey only out of the stadium. "Blake!" cried Twitch happily, he was shocked to see his favourite teacher, or at least class helper. "hey Ben, what are you doing with that bey?" asked Blake as he ran over to concentrate on the battle. "found it at the tip, not lie, it's still got a bit of carrot on it. what are you doing here?" asked the bully Ben. "I believe you, it's just that that bey is well, a little strong for you to control there, more than you think," said Blake, "now meteo, GO GET THAT LITTLE BEY!" "oh yea, AQUILLA GO GET HIM," cried Ben. the 2 beys ran into each other and reacted in a strange way, the bounced back each having a strange glow. "whoa, the power is everywhere between these beys, looks like I might have to call in the big guns soon," said Blake. "I saw that as well, the energy is fleeing out in streamer like lines that any bey could steal, unless they were doing the same thing, looks like the beys didn't like each other, or are linked in a way," said Dracoon to the others in the team. "oh you aren't getting away just because our beys did a light show, come on, show me what you got!" challenged Ben. "oh you have no idea what I can do, time to show you what I really got, LEVEL 1 ATTACK, METEO PILEDRIVER!" yelled Blake as his bey shot into the air. it charged energy and glowed a bright red before coming back down in a high speed that blasted Aquila, but it still hadn't lost. "what!? how could a noob like you survive a special attack like that!?" yelled Blake. "probably because I'm not a noob and I can do this, DOUBLE EAGLE STRIKE!" cried Ben and Aquila started to glow. it split into 2 glowing eagles and started attacking meteo. there was suddenly a flash when both eagles were going to collide with meteo. the flash was soon replaced with a lightning bolt and a bey emitting so much power anybody could see it crackling out of it. meteo was still spinning but slowly, it had to win soon or Ben would win. "Ultra L-drago, the ultimate bey and my true partner is here!" cried Blake as he figured out what the bey was. "wait, that's Ultra L-drago!? it just looks like lightning L-drago with a platinum coloured metal wheel." said Scar. "it's more different than you think but yes that's basicly it the only difference in look, but here is what it can really do, LEVEL 1 ATTACK, ULTRA BLAST CANNON!" called Blake as Ultra glowed in rainbow energy and shot towards Aquila. it suddenly stopped half way and the energy was let lose toward Aquila. Aquila was shot right out of the stadium and stopped dead on the grass of the school grounds. Aquila glowed and shot towards Blake stopping in front of his face. "hey, what the? hmm, seams that because I won, and this is a legendary god bey it now belongs to me, looks like those guys were right. hey this really does have a piece of carrot on it, burnt now." said Blake. "hey we weren't playing for keeps, give it back, plus you cheated," cried Ben. "in case you forgot, you finished this battle yet continued the battle, they bey's don't lie when it comes to winners. if it came to me then it said I won, meteo never stopped till, err 3, 2, 1, there it goes, it's stopped now. in other words, I won, and the bey's decision is final," said Blake. "well that's got to be our quickest miss-- duh I mean, oh just scratch it," said Scar, "wait why isn't this kid in shock? I mean most haven't seen a special attack in action." "oh I have seen more than my share of special attacks, and I know about the club you guys are in and I know about Ultra L-drago, Blake told me all about them," explained Twitch," I was shocked at first but now I'm just trying to get my own special attack." "oh ok," replied Scar. "come on, ill show you guys the rest of the school," said Blake. little did they know they were being watch by a familiar face to Dracoon and Blake, and he was here on business.
Chapter 11: the school's children
back at the school, Twitch and Blake were leading the team throughout the school, introducing them to every student, mostly by Blake as Twitch was not the talkative type. ‘hey Yumi!’ cried Twitch, ‘over here.’ a girl came over that wasn't much older than twitch was but due to twitch being short for his age and she being tall for her's, you wouldn't know without asking. ‘hey how you going, i thought you were in a battle?’ said Yumi. ‘I lost, but he was still attacking my bey. Blake came and helped me a somehow won his bey.’ explained Twitch. ‘What, Dean was going to destroy my greatest creation!’ said an anonymous, British, male voice. ‘hey it's Glen,’ said Twitch. ‘yea, where is Dean now, i need to teach him a lesson, trying to break my friends bey,’ said Glen furiously. ‘hey, me taking his bey should be punishment enough, you don't need to beat him up,’ said Blake. ‘yea well i get a little defensive over Twitch here,’ said Glen, starting to calm down. at that point the bell rang. ‘well we better get to class, wait who are you 3?’ said Glen in response of the bell. ‘oh yes, this is Scar, Dracoon and Chloe, they are going to help with the school, now you 3 better get to class or you will be late,’ said Blake. ‘ok, see ya,’ finished Twitch and the group ran off.
(3 hours later)
‘ah the end of school, i haven't had that feeling for a long time,’ said Blake. ‘well i never had it, i was home schooled before the event that changed my life,’ said Dracoon. ‘7 years for me,’ said Scar. ‘well 3 years for me,’ said Chloe. ‘well thats interesting info from you guys, lets get back to base.’
(1 hour later)
‘good your here,’ said the mission officer of the base, ‘just got something for ya.’ ‘what is it?’ asked Blake. ‘it's your next mission, i have a sore throat today so i wrote it down for ya,’ said the officer. Blake grabbed the note and started reading it. ‘oh boy, looks like we will be busy at the school, 2 undercover agents for the arsonist have been found out at the school, 1 being a teacher and 1 that just snoops around normally. seams like we will have to bust them,’ said Blake. ‘good, means we wont be just looking after kids all the time,’ said Scar. ‘well we start tomorrow so get some rest,’ said Blake.
the next day, the team went to the school with a job to do this time. unfortunately Scar wasn't very good, he had obviously watching too many cartoons. he popped around every corner and every place a person could remotely fit in. if it wasn't for Dracoon, he would have got stuck in a flower pot. second class for class B was swimming, in the schools state of the art Olympic swimming pool. this class was the one Dracoon and Blake was helping. the teacher was named Keiko, or Miss Takanara according to the students. "hey, isn't she a bit young to be teaching?" asked Dracoon. "knowing her, she is probably filling in for her mom," said Blake, "she is one of the best swimmers in the country, and thats saying something in America." "does she always look that good?" asked Dracoon. "nope, she is wearing green so she could look better," answered Blake. "ok lets get this class started," said Keiko, "we will start with some warm ups, then to some back strokes and finish with some dives." "he he, at least we don't have to do that," whispered Dracoon. "I HEARD THAT! now you have to do it," yelled Keiko. "wha whe wha wh whet what!" cried Dracoon, "i can't swim!" the class was probably the worst that room has seen, full of Dracoon's splashing about and loud arguments with Keiko. after an hour, the class was finally over. the last to leave were Blake, Dracoon and Twitch. "mmm, strange, the door is locked, wonder why?" asked Blake as they tried to leave, "let's try the back door, they never lock that." "trying to leave so soon?" said a familiar voice. "wait, that voice is..." started Dracoon. "AGETEO!" "nice guess boy, too bad you don't get bonus points for getting my name," Ageteo said as he jumped off a pillar. "oh yea, and he isn't alone," said another familiar voice as the owner came out of the life guard office. "so you are in this too Keiko, expected," said Dracoon. "really? im plain shocked," said Blake, "i mean, i know her mom, I've scanned her mom's house for any signs of bey-arsonist tech, how could she be part of the bey-arsonists?" "cause i don't live with my mum and my mum isn't part of it, i also needed more money as an insurance account in case something happens to my swimming career," answered Keiko, "anyway, to business, we are here for the boy named Twitch, we need him to gain one of the sol blazes." "ME!" cried Twitch. "HIM!?" cried Dracoon. "oh boy, i new this day would come," said Blake. "WHAT, YOU KNEW!" cried everyone but Blake. " yes, he has a mark on his arm, a brown target shaped birth mark, even more he has the kerbecks bey-spirit, both signs he is the gate keeper of the great Kerbecks gate, witch contains a legendary bey of great power, but we never knew what it was till now," explained Blake. "well now that your talk is done, we will just take the kid, NOW SHADOW KNIGHT!" cried Keiko. a ninja like figure suddenly appeared behind the boys and grabbed Twitch. Dracoon suddenly twirled around and launched his bey to try and stop the shadow knight but the Knight just disappeared before it hit. "argg, ouch, what was that?" cried Dracoon. "yea, thats the curse of the legend beys, try to shoot someone directly, it hurts you painfully and it get's worse every time you do it," explained Ageteo. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH TWITCH!?" yelled Blake furiously. "calm down, he is fine, for now," said Keiko. "grrr, LET IT RIP!" cried Blake as he launched his beyblade across the room. suddenly, a blue blurr splashed out of the water and knocked ultra L-drago into the water, stopping it completely. now normally, ultra wouldn't be defeated this easily, but the bey is terrible in the air because of no friction on the tip. "argg, dam it, that really hurt," cried Blake. "well we no longer have a reason to stay, let's go Keiko," said Ageteo. Keiko returned her bey and they left the building. "WAIT, GIVE BACK TWITCH!" cried Blake, but they were already gone. "Grrrr, dam it!"
Chapter 12: The Great Escape
“WHAT!?†cried Scar, Chloe, Glen and Yumi. “Yes, Twitch has been kidnapped, I didn't want to bring him into this,†said Blake. “Into what?†asked Yumi. “Oh carp I forgot I haven't told you two yet, oh boy now I have too,†answered Blake. “Haven't told us what?†asked Yumi and Glen. “Us four are part of a super secret organization based against beyblade related crime and the finding of legendary beys before they fall into the wrong hands, namely Twitch's kidnappers, the bey-arsonists.†answered Blake, “the bey-arsonists use legendary beys that control fire or something that can cause fire to burn targeted houses down, but that's only their most common offence, they only burn down houses that hide more legendary beys or contain anything or anyone who might hold information about them.†“Yikes, no wonder you guys didn't want to have us in this thing, it sounds like you guys have the most dangerous job in the world,†said Glen. “Really? I don't think of it being that dangerous, only when we are in a real mission. I think the army would have a more dangerous job than us,†replied Blake, “anyway, we have to get to Kerbecks gate, they would most likely take Twitch there.â€
:meanwhile at the bey-arsonist's dungeons:
“Get in there!†said the guard as he pushed Twitch into the cell. It was locked up with laser bars. Twitch started crying in his cell, his bey being his only room mate. Ageteo, Keiko and a man known as Master Pegasis watched Twitch in his cell from a conference room with a giant monitor. “You sure it was a good idea to take the boy?†asked Ageteo to Master Pegasis. “It's necessary to obtain what The Boss wants, the Gold Sol Blaze bey,†answered Master Pegasis. “It's just, why couldn't we just wait till the organization tries to get the bey?†asked Ageteo. “Because the organization could have got it already if they wanted it, Blake is also able to get it and they know that,†answered Master Pegasis. “Plus, it will be much easier to open the gate without waiting for the organization to get their hands on it,†added Keiko. “Yes but now Blake is going to go after us to get the boy back, he will stop at nothing,†replied Ageteo. “don't worry, he will never find us and even if he does, he will never get out of this base alive,†said Master Pegasis. “ok,†finished Ageteo, looking to the side like he had something on his mind. He left the room slowly. Back in the dungeon, Twitch was still sulking in his cell when he heard a beyblade launch and the guard fall over, then a cry of pain. The electronic bars were turned off and Ageteo poked his head around the corner of the doorway. Twitch jumped up and prepared his bey. “Wait, wait, wait, wait, I'm here to bust you out,†said Ageteo. “What! But you got me in here in the first place!†cried Twitch. “Quiet down, or we will never get out of here, follow me,†said Ageteo. “Well I got nothing better to do,†replied Twitch and he followed Ageteo. “This way to the main vent, we need to get in there and get out without setting off the alarms,†said Ageteo. “OK, how do we do that,†asked Twitch. “Move now!†cried Ageteo and he ran knocking out the guards with his fists. Twitch ran after him and they scrambled up the vent. They were not out of the woods yet, the alarm went off soon after they got in the vent. They got out of the vent witch lead them to an ally in New-York. “Come on, we got to go before they found out where we are,†said Ageteo as they got out of the vent.
:back at the organization base:
“Err Blake, you may want to look at this,†said one of the surveillance operatives. “Yea, what am I looking at?†asked Blake as he came over to look at the computer. “we found Twitch in the streets of New-York, with one of the bey-arsonist's members running away from a bunch of arsonists goons,†said the operative. “REALY! Come on guys we got to go, we found Twitch!†cried Blake as he ran to the teleporter pod. The rest of the team quickly followed. They appeared just in front of the two runaways. “Team, get your beys ready, this is going to be a biggy,†said Blake. Ageteo and Twitch stood next to the team and they formed a wall with they beys set for a large battle. The mob of goons stopped running and launched their cybernetic beys from their generator launchers. The team and Ageteo all launched their beys, Twitch not daring to knowing he will get defeated easily. Bey energy flew every where as legendary beys and cyber beys clashed in an enormous battle. Cybernetic were weaker but had strength in numbers and overwhelmed the team, Blake and Dracoon having the worse trouble. Suddenly, Twitch Glowed in yellow energy and launched his bey in a yellow blaze of energy and eradicated all the cyber beys in one powerful attack. The goons ran scared of the amazing attack Twitch pulled off. Twitch, overwhelmed by his own attack, fainted. He awoke in the organization's main hospital ward. Ageteo was in the organization's dungeon to get as much information as they could before letting him go. Blake came in as soon as he heard that Twitch was awake. “you ok, you have been out for 2 days now?†asked Blake. “yea, what happened?†asked Twitch. “you pulled off the legendary Kerbecks blast, but your bey wasn't powerful enough to fully control it so it wasn't as powerful as it was supposed to be,†explained Blake. “OK, where is Ageteo?†asked Twitch. “he is in the dungeon, we are trying to get as much information as possible from him, he is very cooperative, like he wants to give the information,†answered Blake. “OK, thanks, I would like some sleep now,†said Twitch. “OK, hey what's that on your finger?†asked Blake. “what's whaaaa?! That ring was never there!†cried Twitch. “wait, now I remember, that ring is one of the 3 keys needed to access Kerbecks Gate, we need that key, a certain face-bolt that I must earn and either the chosen one or the one who has controlled Omega L-drago, aka, me,†explained Blake as he got up and started to walk out of the room, â€get some rest Twitch cause tomorrow, we are going to Kerbecks Gate.â€
Chapter 13: the Golden Gate opens!
The team and Twitch arrived at a temple in the Amazon, you know, like the ones you see in cartoons and stuff. Well they were kinda stuck at the door.
"Why can't we just break the door down?" ask Dracoon.
"No, the door must be oppened by the way it was meant to be opened," explained Blake, "the door is strong with bey-energy and it cannot be distoryed by anything, and there is also an alien alloy built into the door, we couldn't distroy it with anything in the world even if it didn't have the bey-energy shield." Everyone was confused on how Blake knew of an alien alloy.
"What Alien alloy? How could an ancient civilisation get their hands on an alien alloy?" asked Chloe.
"It's simple, it's the same alloy that ancient civilisations used to make legendary beys, how else could the door have a bey-energy aura," explained Blake. everyone looked satified with that answer, but Blake knew they still didn't fully understand. Blake studied the door for about 5 minutes, before seing a distinct ingrain in the door. "TWITCH! get over here."
"Here, what do you need?" asked Twitch.
"Still got that ring?" asked Blake.
"Sure, it won't come off," answered Twitch.
"Put the end in that hole," directed Blake. Twitch noticed that the circle, gem encrested end match the engravement in the door. he put it into the engravement and almost instantly, the ring came off Twitch's finger, not even knowing how it came off. the wall glowed faintly, but almost blinded Blake as the light was a strong amount of bey-energy, and the door started to rumble open. Blake soon recovered after the door was completely open.
"Ok, let's go in," said Blake. they walked down the dark corridor. when it was pitch black, Blake flicked his fingers while holding Ultra in his other hand. Blakes fingers glowed faintly and Blake tried to keep his glowing fingers away from his face as much as possible, he could see the entire corridor due to his bey-energy sensitive eyes. the soon reached a large clearing at the bottom of the temple. Blake closed his eyes, put his hands together and charged as much beyspirit he could, then releasing it by shoving his hands sideways and accidently hitting Scar on the nose. the room instantly lit up as all the torches lit up. there was a giant golden door at on the other end of the clearing with a giant golden statue of what looks like a cross between roman, egyptian and medeval armor, with a mark on the forehead of the statue that looked like a 3 headed dog's heads.
"The Golden Gate of Kerbecks, the door that holds 2 legendary beys of ultimate power, but only one can be taken as if we take the other, the guardian of the gate awakens and distroys all who are around," said Blake in awe of the room, "well, at least thats what i heard, i don't know anything about the guardian or what is behind the door, all i know is that there are deffernately 2 beys behind there and the door hasn't been open scince it was created, the seal is still there and the beys i can sence their power." Twitch, as if he were in a trance, walked to the door, with Blake following. Dracoon stoped the others from going further, saying it was for them alone to go to the door. They both reached the door and touched the door with their hands. The cold, golden door started to glow and began to warm up the room. A voice filled the room.
" The 2 chosen ones have arrived, bestow the golden face of Kerbecks in the center of the legendary Gate of Gold and select the Bey of my spirit or the Bey of the golden sun but never both!" The voice seamed to come from the statue but also from the walls. Blake pulled something gold from his pocket slowly and twisted it into a hole in the wall, witch looked like it had an engraving of a bey around it but was hard to see due to the dirt, but it became more clear as the golden screw was placed in. When fully placed in, the others noticed it was a solid gold facebolt covered in a clear coated alloy to protect it from damage. The golden door stated to glow even more, soon turning into a bliding flash of golden light, but Blake and Twitch seamed unfazed. when the light died down, the door was open and 2 beys on individual pillars looked like they havent been touched in 2000 years. both were gold coulored with solid gold black printed facebolts just like the one Blake put into the wall. One had a 3 headed dog on it's face and 3 slopes on it's metal wheel. The track under it poked through the gaps and spread around the metal wheel, witch was seamly bigger than most metal wheels the bladers were used to. the otherone was smaller and had a clear, well clear wheel on the top. It's face represented the sun. It looked an awfully lot like the beyblade they found in egypt. Blake noticed this fact instantly.
"Gold Sol Blaze, the bey of the golden sun and linked to the other sol blaze beys," said Blake, "and Hell Kerbecks, a beyblade of the legend, held by one of the legendary 3 monks."
Twitch was drawn to Hell Kerbecks, the bey with the 3 headed dog face. He walked right to it and was about to touch i before.....
"STOP RIGHT THERE!" said an evil voice that was only familiar to Blake.
edit: here is a link to the story based 2 years before this story, based around how Ultra L-drago came to being: the legend of the beys
RE: the lost bladder story: characters wanted - Kavasiki - Jan. 18, 2011
A story need rich personalities. Try making characters with different attributes:
A grumpy person
A selfish person
A mysterious person
You get the picture. Also, the more originality you have, the better it might become.
Remeber that: The story itself doesn't matter, it is how you write it that will make it intresting. Try posting some parts of your story to see feedback so you can improve it if needed.
RE: the lost bladder story: characters wanted - PattyCakeChamp! - Jan. 18, 2011
I dont mean to offend you but please change it to blader not bladder I thought this was about peeing or something lol
RE: the lost bladder story: characters wanted - Giraton - Jan. 18, 2011
thanks, so far i only have the main character and some hint of the guy who dropped the letter, i haven't wrote this down, just out of my head but it was a strong story in my head. like it was some hint of the future or something, and that was just a shortened version of the intro. and to master draciel, ok ill fix that up, i normally do 2 b's.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Minidona - Jan. 18, 2011
Name: Briel
Beblade: Green Libra 100 WB ( Green Is like rock but bigger and green ) The bey is all green.
Special Move: Green Tornado. Libra makes a green tornado turning all things green and blowing the opponent bey away.
Look: He is obssesed with green. Green hair (hair is like ginka's), Green T shirt, Green jeans, Green shoes, Green skin.
He is a very strong blader and wants to get even stronger. Found Libra when felt from the sky. He play all the time but when is time to get serius he get serius. And he is very very smart. He is good.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Jan. 18, 2011
interesting character, ill pluck that guy somewhere. probably a friend of some sort.
RE: the lost bladder story: characters wanted - Kavasiki - Jan. 18, 2011
(Jan. 18, 2011 1:36 AM)pikabattler Wrote: thanks, so far i only have the main character and some hint of the guy who dropped the letter, i haven't wrote this down, just out of my head but it was a strong story in my head. like it was some hint of the future or something, and that was just a shortened version of the intro.
OK, I can give you a Character:
Full Name: Chloe Jangmi
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Beyblade: Angus Flower 105RT (Right)
Description: Flower is a Fusion Wheel formed as a flower and is based on ATK. 105 low track in red and RT which standt for Rotation Tip which can make the Blade gain more speed if hit by opposite spinning beyblade also colored red.
Special ATK: Jeonbog Beullum: surrounds the field with rose leafs and will rapidly cut the opponent's blade.
Bio: Chloe means Blooming in greek and Jangmi means Rose in korean, Blooming Rose in full name. She is shy of people, mostly do things on her own so she is quite independent. Her mother owns a Rose garden which is why Chloe has been given her name. She was given Angus by her uncle which later on killed her family for some reason. Chloe's goal is to seek the reason for her Uncle's actions and bring him to justice.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Jan. 18, 2011
that last part got me, got to do that charicter. mmm, so i now have 4 charicters on hold, one i only have a hint of. ill look at something.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - King cold - Jan. 18, 2011
first female beyblader[/size]
full name: anglea haka
gender: female
age: 12
hws beyblade: star angel 165ws (left)+ secert bey!
Description: this bey was found in a deep island. the star wheel is more like an attack type. the 165 is a really high pro. track soo thats means alittle more stam. the fs wide sharp can blance really good even when it titling down.
special move: heart attack makes the bey heart dies!!!!
bio: it was morning... anglea woke up and see took a bath and there where going on a island today to vist thier grandpa. after anglea were in island called tiki island. they had fun , they drink water, they dance, they tell stories.... and then later anglea went to a ocean to surf and then she got drowned and she cou'lt breath and then see saw a bey that was frozen and then see grab it. after she came up they went back home and sleep. the next day anglea woke up and she saw many kids beyblading the she join..... after she saw a evil guy named ginga that blew off evryone. anglea: hey get out of this town, you dont belong here, ginga:never. and then he destoryed all of those kids that were beyblading. after anglea and ginga chagllage to a beyblade battle then it was nosiy and anglea use a spcial move ..... heart attack... and he dies!!
i hope you love this story >3
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Wraith - Jan. 18, 2011
That is a decent story, pikabattler. Can't really say anything that hasn't been said. Feel free to use one of my characters from Hydraes' Legacy.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - cybertech - Jan. 18, 2011
i have an idea for the hooded guy...
male
15 years old
beyblade: cyber phoenix D125 HF
descripion: custom bey never lost in hands of hooded guy
special: spikes follow enemy bey, tearing apart bey on contact.
hair: black
eyes: mood colors
can't normally see his face do to hood
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Jan. 18, 2011
ok, i should tell a hint of the story to get some better characters out of this, the hooded guy works for a organization built for people who survived the mysterious fires and to figure out what happened, little do they know it's also happening outside of japan. dracoon gets offered to join and at first doesn't want to, he wants to deal with it himself, but something happens to change his mind. and to shanniechong, at first i didn't know what i was going to do with that story but i have an idea to put that into the story. can't make that ginga guy die though, or have the name ginga. i have plans for him. i can however make him unable to beyblade due to the move.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - PattyCakeChamp! - Jan. 19, 2011
Name: Antonio Reyes
Beyblade: RF Rubber Rabbit R145 RHF/RS
Evil a 13 year old boy who doesn't know when to stop and most of the time breaks the persons bey a loner tends to sneak up on people
Wears black hoodie and blue jeans brown spiky hair
A beyblade commpletely made of rubber It is a great defense type seems like it has no flaws with metal coated in rubber as well. When beys hit it they just bounce off.
Special move:crazy hopper hops around the stadium at an extreme speed until the opponent cant see it then it hits the bey at full speed hitting it in the air and then hitting it continuasly in mid air
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Jan. 19, 2011
ok, that fits in somewhere, but i cant put too many story's and link them in one, my idea does do this but 2 story's are enough, i have a story about a team of people who break beys, and a _________ who cause fires with beys, battling an organization who try to stop both.
RE: the lost bladder story: characters wanted - Teemo - Jan. 25, 2011
(Jan. 18, 2011 1:34 AM)MaStErDrAcIeL97 Wrote: I dont mean to offend you but please change it to blader not bladder I thought this was about peeing or something lol
0_0
LOL!
anyways heres a character
Name: Da (yes you read correctly, Da)
Bey: Big Daddy FA230(Fat 230)B
Big is from big mac 320YEN
Daddy is a ugly clear wheel with a bunch of pictures of chips
Fat is a super big rubber material which is softer than other rubbers released
the shape of the track is circuler
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Jan. 25, 2011
ho ho ho, i know where to put this guy. im going to write the full intro and first chapter soon.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Feb. 09, 2011
ok im posting my first part of the story later today, i have it written down, it looks better in my head though.
edit: here is the intro and ch 1 for ya, not much different as above. i will write ch 2 tonight:
intro v2:
5 years ago, a house caught on fire. it seamed like an accident. only 2 children survived, both brothers, or so thought. another survived, in fact he saved his brothers. he ran away, not being able to bare the fate his parents faced. he had only 1 possession left, his bey gravity persious. he ran and ran from his home, parents and brothers as orphans. he was never seen again. those who knew he left called him THE LOST BLADER.
CH 1: the letter:
yet another tournament had come and gone in Tokyo and yet again it was won by a boy known as Dracoon. he was a terror at tournaments, having 5 bey-pointers just to hold all his points, 4 quets and 5 of every other prize beys of the arcade game. no one knew his real name, some say he didn't have one. he never lost a match, and he had a reason why, he had to win to survive. he normally used gravity persious 90wd. in the main hall of the tournament building Dracoon grabbed his prize and tried to leave. "hey!!" a wbba official yelled, "you forgot this." the official gave a gold galaxy pegasis, the non cash prize of the tournament. "don't want it," the 14 year old said in a deep, solid voice and left the building. as Dracoon walked down the street he bumped into a hooded man, and the man dropped an envelope. "hey you, dropped... this," his words slurred as he noticed the hooded man disappeared. Dracoon looked at the letter to see it was address to him, with his real name, Damian coondez.
How was it?
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Kavasiki - Feb. 13, 2011
I think it was kinda short, bit that doesn't mean I didn't like it
I personally think that the nickname Dracoon didn't fit becuse it is way too similar to Dragoon as you know tho it is better than those nicknames that is used all the time
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Soopah - Feb. 14, 2011
I'm gonna try this(although I already sent pikablader a message to see if I can even try) but hey, if he can't put me in, that's okay
Name: Twitch
Age: 13
beyblade: Hammer Meerkat SD(superior defense)125MWB(metal wide ball)
Description:Twitch isn't necessarily his name, it's just his nickname. But twitch does twitch a lot. He seems to twitch the most when he's nervous and can't think. Which is most of the time! So basically he's be a nervous wreck. Despite that he can be a very good strategist. You can probably use his as a sidekick of some sort.
Bey Descrption: Meerkat's face bolt looks like a meerkat just standing up(no surprise their eh?). His energy ring is a light brown color with 2 small claws on the side(kind of like orsos energy ring). Hammer keeps enemies away with 2 club like rectangles on 2 different sides, kind of like vulcan but thicker and not as tall. SD 125 is basically D125 but wider and made of rubber, just adding weight. MWB as its name implies, is wide ball, but made of metal, nuff' said. Since hammer, SD125 and MWB are uber heavy compared to other parts,(weighing 45.3 grams all together) it's a defensive type
special move: 5 ton Hammer smash(not much to say here, just a charging smash with hammer, it could look flashy, doesn't matter), and ground digger(helps meerkat stand its ground by digging into the ground), these moves can't be overused though, repeatedly using them in a battle makes meerkat lose stamina fast and could end up in a self K.O.
anywho, that's it.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Feb. 14, 2011
Kavasiki well the intro is smaller then most of my intro's i write, my normal intros go on a whole A4 page through typing. to soopha im not sure if i can put him some where but i might if i add a school scene. yes i have an idea to put him in. if i can have some more females and more bad guys then that will help.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - abhicherath - Feb. 14, 2011
hey heres a character request
name=shadow(its an alias,nobody knows real name,u can put in amajor plot twist where his real name is found,ur choice)
bey= mystic comet MS145(multi spin 145)SCV(spin change variable)
bey description= mystic has two modes, eternal spin and fury mode(both can spin dual spin)the track has a gear like structure inside it which loads when the bey is spinning, shadow is the only person who can use this, the tip changes form from attack to defense when shadow says.
special move right spin= antimatter world!!the other bey is made into antimatter andwhen it crashes comet it is destroyed.(antimatter and matter destroy each other,but mystic comet is both at the same time so not destroyed),shadow almost never uses this move.its his ultra mystic move kinda thing his bey's also mostly in left spin.
special move left spin=night burst, a huge amount of energy flows out from comet and stops the opponents bey instantly(except against real stong bladers.it just slows them down)
character= nothing is known about him, he just appears from nowhere and does something and dissapears again, just like his bey he is good and bad at the same time.he wears full black and a cloak .
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Giraton - Feb. 14, 2011
mmm, at first i didn't know what to do with him but now it's just what i wanted. lets see. im going to finish the 2nd chapter tonight.
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - abhicherath - Feb. 14, 2011
thanks!!
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - Tachimukai - Feb. 14, 2011
Heres a character!
Name: Kazemaru (Ka - zay - ma - roo) Katashiko - Friends call him Kaze (ka - zay)
Gender: Male
Beyblade: Killer Unicorno D125B
Description: He has Blue spiky hair and wears a green jacket. On the right side of his jacket at the top, he has the Unicorno facebolt. He has a little blue case strapped to his right arm - like Tsubasa - where he keeps his Killer Unicorno. He wears black shorts with a lightning bolt symbol. He is very friendly so he gains friends quickly. But when he comes to battling, he likes to completely finish his enemy. He is very skilled in blading, and when he loses, he immediately demands a rematch.
Special Moves: (Finishing Move Only) Unicorno Double Horn Strike - Unicorno speeds toward the opponant bey and knocks it out using both sides of the Killer Metal Wheel. (Yes I know it's not the best metal wheel, but you can muck stuff up in the anime, so, you know.)
RE: the lost blader story: characters wanted - 6Skittles9 - Feb. 14, 2011
i have one
name:Qir ( say: kjir)
gender: male
Bey: Metacore Decode DW145 (Down Wing) WS (Wide Sharp)
Description: purple hair one red eye little bit of an idiot
red jacket
blue shoes
black pants
note: little brother of damian
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