The Great Beyblade Story
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can you make the chapters longer?
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can i help your write your stories?
Alright alot of people are asking when their character will appear. Here are the dates.
Nile: Chapter 11
Tai: Chapter 12
Izumi: Chapter 15
Thank you for posting,
~Liam
Nile: Chapter 11
Tai: Chapter 12
Izumi: Chapter 15
Thank you for posting,
~Liam
To my readers,
I am very sorry but their will be no chapter this week. I have been very busy this week and I know that I have posted a lot of chapter this.
I am very sorry,
~Liam
I am very sorry but their will be no chapter this week. I have been very busy this week and I know that I have posted a lot of chapter this.
I am very sorry,
~Liam
what if i should you what my character looks like
can you please make the chpters longer, and more frequently?? ive waited 2 weeks..........
I will really try. in fact if you have pm, i will pm it imeetily when it is finished.
Character: Saif Kayani
Bey: Scale Draco DH110DF
Draco face: Dragon
Draco: Two Dragons that have scales reducing Recoil.
Scale: Two blades that have smash attack. Unique shape makes it only compatible with Draco.
DH110: Track with 5 Dragon Heads on it at the height of 110.
DF
ragon Flat has a very fast flower attack pattern.
Special moveragon Head Destable. The Dragon Heads make their move and start making the hits to destablize the opponent.
Appearance: Brown eyes, blue spiked hair, wears white shirt, black trousers.
Side:Good
Personality: Powerful beyspirit, always fights for justice.
Male.
Age:12
Bey: Scale Draco DH110DF
Draco face: Dragon
Draco: Two Dragons that have scales reducing Recoil.
Scale: Two blades that have smash attack. Unique shape makes it only compatible with Draco.
DH110: Track with 5 Dragon Heads on it at the height of 110.
DF
ragon Flat has a very fast flower attack pattern.Special move
ragon Head Destable. The Dragon Heads make their move and start making the hits to destablize the opponent.Appearance: Brown eyes, blue spiked hair, wears white shirt, black trousers.
Side:Good
Personality: Powerful beyspirit, always fights for justice.
Male.
Age:12
![[Image: 93fb7241f5c1fa7d59ee4bfb9b4f6b63.gif]](https://i.picasion.com/pic43/93fb7241f5c1fa7d59ee4bfb9b4f6b63.gif)
![[Image: userbar%20team%20galaxy%20wings%20member.jpg]](https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/_HR3Pu_KuR08/TYb78HznFDI/AAAAAAAAAZo/hZz4ZAd4SyI/userbar%20team%20galaxy%20wings%20member.jpg)
Thanks!!
ml DRAGO there is no good spots oeft so your character will be evil okay
Chapter 10
The Rainbow strikes
From last weeks episode!!
Except for two. "He he he." Two boys laughed. "Who are you? Where are you ?!?" Whirlpool inquired. "I am Arth." The first boy said. "And I am Reiki." Added the second boy. "And together, We are the two warriors." Reiki and Arth announced.
This week’s episode
Reiki took out his bey and shined it in front of the group and declared I challenge you to a Battle!! The sound of his shouting bellowed through the library.
Jake was quiet and grabbed his bey from the ground and bellowed back Let’s battle!! But before they began they were interrupted By…..Arth said we are the warriors we only fight together so Jake replied ill take you both On…. But the shocking response was AT the SAME Time, Jake stood there motionless thinking what will I do ? but Mark ran to Jake and said I will battle with him Ray and the others set off and the battle began!
3, 2, 1, let it Rip
The beys went shooting off and started right away.
Cyber Excalibur makes a move Right away and starts off with cyber now CYBER Slash! Peafowl was sent straight up into the air but peafowl Fly!! And the bey soared down on the top of Cyber and cyber went flying but Arth did not even seem phased Cyber!! He shouted cyber went back into the stadium and hit peafowl… Jake was stunned then while they lost focus Reiki attacked without mercy Go Iron ram attack it but little did they realize that kyum had been making the stadium turn to ice there beys started to slip and mark smirked It’s My turn …laughing go howling blizzard ! but Cyber was in the air aswell as Aries Now and Aries dived down and smashed Kyum out of the stadium Mark.. said Jake then marks face dropped and said its up to you Jake..?! jake said time to finish this Peafowl rainbow dance !!!! Aries and Arth did not expect it from …. BELOW!! Aries and Cyber smashed down and bounced out of the stadium..
well thats this weeks story!!
Chapter 10
The Rainbow strikes
From last weeks episode!!
Except for two. "He he he." Two boys laughed. "Who are you? Where are you ?!?" Whirlpool inquired. "I am Arth." The first boy said. "And I am Reiki." Added the second boy. "And together, We are the two warriors." Reiki and Arth announced.
This week’s episode
Reiki took out his bey and shined it in front of the group and declared I challenge you to a Battle!! The sound of his shouting bellowed through the library.
Jake was quiet and grabbed his bey from the ground and bellowed back Let’s battle!! But before they began they were interrupted By…..Arth said we are the warriors we only fight together so Jake replied ill take you both On…. But the shocking response was AT the SAME Time, Jake stood there motionless thinking what will I do ? but Mark ran to Jake and said I will battle with him Ray and the others set off and the battle began!
3, 2, 1, let it Rip
The beys went shooting off and started right away.
Cyber Excalibur makes a move Right away and starts off with cyber now CYBER Slash! Peafowl was sent straight up into the air but peafowl Fly!! And the bey soared down on the top of Cyber and cyber went flying but Arth did not even seem phased Cyber!! He shouted cyber went back into the stadium and hit peafowl… Jake was stunned then while they lost focus Reiki attacked without mercy Go Iron ram attack it but little did they realize that kyum had been making the stadium turn to ice there beys started to slip and mark smirked It’s My turn …laughing go howling blizzard ! but Cyber was in the air aswell as Aries Now and Aries dived down and smashed Kyum out of the stadium Mark.. said Jake then marks face dropped and said its up to you Jake..?! jake said time to finish this Peafowl rainbow dance !!!! Aries and Arth did not expect it from …. BELOW!! Aries and Cyber smashed down and bounced out of the stadium..
well thats this weeks story!!
hey, Great Peacock and Nile, ca i help write the stories, for the test, i have my ow story in the link in my sig thx
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OK< SO IS THE STORY BEING CONTINUED
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nice story.
were did you get the idea.
were did you get the idea.
uhh dude, he is too busy to do his own story, even so you.... but ill help
you mean write for you??? i thought that Nile was doing that
No i am not doing the story anymore.
The story is over. I am no longer doing it. Someone else can if they want to.