The Blader's spirit

Luck · Feb. 25, 2012 6:45 PM

hm... we take over the world and pwn every1?

nationsbeyblade · Feb. 25, 2012 6:45 PM

(Feb. 25, 2012 6:45 PM)Luck Wrote: hm... we take over the world and pwn every1?

hmmmmmm good idea but no

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Luck · Feb. 25, 2012 6:46 PM

awww... lol Grin

XXaron · Feb. 25, 2012 6:52 PM

Idea:
Something something something... beybattles... uinexpeted twists... filler... something else.

Credit to DeX for this amazing signature!
Want a ok story that's readable? With actual grammar? Check out Everything Spins Into Chaos: A beyblade story
I use Hasbro beys. Because I have no acsess to TT or Sonokong beys. Hopefully that'll change soon.
~X

Luck · Feb. 25, 2012 6:55 PM

yeah, but then again, that's not really an idea, its just a base for the ideas, but yeah, that would be good Grin

nationsbeyblade · Feb. 25, 2012 7:33 PM

BUMP

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Luck · Feb. 25, 2012 7:41 PM

BUMP

nationsbeyblade · Feb. 25, 2012 7:54 PM

BUMP

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View All Faces · Feb. 25, 2012 8:45 PM

Bumping is only allowed in the Marketplace Forum guys, even then, after 48 hours interval. Please stop.

nationsbeyblade · Feb. 25, 2012 8:47 PM

oh sorry

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nationsbeyblade · Feb. 26, 2012 9:16 AM

heres the new chapter guys

for the character requet you hve to say wht cutry youre in

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nationsbeyblade · Feb. 26, 2012 9:31 PM

also does anyone have an idea for a new bey for this?

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Samurai Changer · Feb. 26, 2012 10:00 PM

Vulcan Anubis 85XF

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nationsbeyblade · Feb. 26, 2012 10:48 PM

thanks

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Dual · Feb. 27, 2012 12:59 AM

(Feb. 17, 2012  2:25 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2012  12:09 PM)å¤©ç¿”ç¿¼ TenshouYoku Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2012  8:49 AM)Uwik Wrote: ~X~ : I'd advise you to be more tactful on your criticism. Positive criticisms work better most of the time.
Well, but he is correct. This story is really, really bad.

The lines stick together.
No real main plot.
Too short.
Wrong grammar usage.
That's deadly for a story.

thanks T_T

you know what i am going to ignore you people who say this is bad, try and make a story yourself!,I thout people here would be more friendly

I actually did make a story but...anyway, besides the grammar and punctuation, it's pretty good. And I want to be an author to! Good luck Smile

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