The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests

Poll: how is the story?

Great
28.57%
2
Good
28.57%
2
Okay
28.57%
2
Bad
0%
0
Horrible
14.29%
1
Total: 100% 7 vote(s)
warning:half of the story is in the beyblades POV.
(chapters added daily)

The idea is nice, but the spoiler don't work and it's really short. -so far-
prologue not prolouge but nice idea looking forward to what's coming
Yup , i really like the idea -- looking forward to reading more!
this looks cool
it is really good so far
thanks for the good reviews.I'll have Ch.2 tomorrow afternoon.
Suggestions-
When someone talks, do it like this.
"I'm a monkey" said George.
"That's really great" muttered the man with the yellow hat.
Also, make your chapters longer. Describe the battles, the setting, everything. Keep on writing Grin
sorry it's confusing,the story will come together.
LOL. This is sorta funny. @ Chapter 1.
ch 4 is up.Also,i'm taking character requests
format:1.gender
2.beyblade
3.appearance
4.good or evil
5.personality
story is gud bt u should make chapters big and its sometimes confusong too
thanks,i'm still going to make chapters,but i'm taking a break.