The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012
warning:half of the story is in the beyblades POV.
(chapters added daily)
Alot of people like Beyblade. But what if Beyblades got tired of it? What if they hated humans? What if Gingka doomed bladers around the world? With a Beyblade uprising,not even the WBO is safe. My name is Galaxy Pegasus. Some kid named Gingka just released me. So far I think he's a jerk.He always makes me hit other beyblades. And he always tells me what to do. I came up with a plan to end this madness. I would normally see Phantom Orion B : D,but Hasbro screwed up. So,I told Dark Wolf my plan. Dark Wolf had to help me with my plan since I got him fixed after that psycho Ryuga attacked him. "Where are you!,"A voice boomed. carp! It was Gingka. "There you are!,"Gingka said as he picked up Galaxy Pegasus. "Be ready!,"I told Dark Wolf. "Phase one begins at the world championships!" Blader DJ's POV:Gingka just beat the chinese team,but something didn't seem right. It was Gingka's bey,Galaxy Pegasus.I've seen it and many other beys communicate mentally.Also,many reports of Beyblades attacking humans have occured. I needed help. I got ready to call Chris,but he didn't appear in the anime yet. Then,I got the perfect idea. The World Beyblade Organisation! They could put together a team of bladers to stop the attacks! I went on the website and sent a request for a team."What are you doing?" I turned around to see Gingka. "Galaxy Pegasus,I'm being controlled by it,"He said. He launched Pegasus at me. I took out my Earth Eagle and launched it. Pegasus slammed Eagle into the wall. "You're weak." I looked around and realized it was Galaxy Pegasus. "You can't win!" It got ready to attack. Eagle couldn't take the attack. It broke down into pieces. "No!,"I screamed. "Now it's your turn!" Pegasus charged towards me. "Let it rip!" Five beys charged and smashed Galaxy pegasus. The beys retreated to thier owners. "Who are you guys?,"I asked. "We're from the WBO,"one of them said."Did you call for us?" Ryuga's POV:"Ahhh!" I heard a scream come from outside. I ran outside to find a kid being attacked at a stadium. It was five against one. The boy in the middle of the group stepped forward. "My name is Trent,a U.S blader of the WBO". "We've got to take the bey that's controlling you". The kid silently shook his head. "Have it your way",Trent said. "I'll just destroy the bey". "Oh no you don't!",I yelled. "If I beat you in a battle,then you leave the kid alone!" Trent smirked. "I accept your challenge,but you won't beat my Earth Pegasus" "3,2,1,let it rip!" The beys charged into the stadium. "Go L-Drago!" L-Drago crashed into Pegasus. "L-Drago will steal all of your power!",I shouted. I noticed my spin power wasn't increasing. "I used the weak-shooting technique to stop your special ability. Trent said. "Now to show you real power!" "Special move! Cosmis Quake!" A blue light engulfed Pegasus and it soared into the sky and came crashing down. The ground shook wildly and an explosion rocked the stadium. Galaxy Pegasus POV:Darn it! Those WBO jerks ruined my plan! And the first phase was perfect too! I finally made it possible to control humans. Then,I caught blader DJ calling for a team. The WBO team came,beat me senseless,locked me up,and left to free more people from beyblades control. I needed to build a dimensional portal and I need Phantom to give me a human body. "Phantom!" I called. A shady figure in a black cloak came out of nowhere. "I brought the boy" Phantom said. "Good,now to get my new body" I said. Phantom started to chant,and in a flash of light,my body was switched with the boy's body. "The WBO will never suspect me" I said. "Also,the they would never know that Phantom is really a spy on thier own team!". "Then,when my plan succeeds,I'll make humans battle." "We just recieved new info" Phantom said. "Ryuga was defeated by a WBO member". "Well then,we'll have to deal with them" I said. "Start making the special bey,it'll be the WBO's worst nightmare". Trent's POV:I needed a strong opponent. I was at a beypark looking for someone to train with. suddenly,I got a strange feeling. I was being watched. I continued walking. "Why are you here?" I turned around. It was Seth,a member of the WBO.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Luck - Aug. 08, 2012
The idea is nice, but the spoiler don't work and it's really short. -so far-
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012
i updated it.The spoiler is working now.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012
prologue not prolouge but nice idea looking forward to what's coming
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Luck - Aug. 08, 2012
Yup , i really like the idea -- looking forward to reading more!
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - flippy4212 - Aug. 08, 2012
this looks cool
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012
Ch.1 is up.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012
it is really good so far
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012
thanks for the good reviews.I'll have Ch.2 tomorrow afternoon.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.2 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 09, 2012
Ch.2 is up.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.2 up! - Dual - Aug. 09, 2012
Suggestions-
When someone talks, do it like this.
"I'm a monkey" said George.
"That's really great" muttered the man with the yellow hat.
This is what happens when you babysit your baby cousin for to long XD Also, make your chapters longer. Describe the battles, the setting, everything. Keep on writing
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.2 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 09, 2012
thanks for the suggestions.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 10, 2012
Ch.3 is up.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - nationsbeyblade - Aug. 10, 2012
this is confusing
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 10, 2012
sorry it's confusing,the story will come together.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - Nitrohammer - Aug. 11, 2012
LOL. This is sorta funny. @ Chapter 1.
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - SilverBlader - Aug. 11, 2012
ch 4 is up.Also,i'm taking character requests
format:1.gender
2.beyblade
3.appearance
4.good or evil
5.personality
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - dragonFang101 - Aug. 28, 2012
story is gud bt u should make chapters big and its sometimes confusong too
RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - SilverBlader - Aug. 28, 2012
thanks,i'm still going to make chapters,but i'm taking a break.
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