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The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012

warning:half of the story is in the beyblades POV.
(chapters added daily)




RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Luck - Aug. 08, 2012

The idea is nice, but the spoiler don't work and it's really short. -so far-


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012

i updated it.The spoiler is working now.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012

prologue not prolouge but nice idea looking forward to what's coming


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Luck - Aug. 08, 2012

Yup , i really like the idea -- looking forward to reading more!


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - flippy4212 - Aug. 08, 2012

this looks cool


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012

Ch.1 is up.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - Sword Master - Aug. 08, 2012

it is really good so far


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story) - SilverBlader - Aug. 08, 2012

thanks for the good reviews.I'll have Ch.2 tomorrow afternoon.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.2 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 09, 2012

Ch.2 is up.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.2 up! - Dual - Aug. 09, 2012

Suggestions-
When someone talks, do it like this.
"I'm a monkey" said George.
"That's really great" muttered the man with the yellow hat.
Also, make your chapters longer. Describe the battles, the setting, everything. Keep on writing Grin


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.2 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 09, 2012

thanks for the suggestions.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 10, 2012

Ch.3 is up.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - nationsbeyblade - Aug. 10, 2012

this is confusing Confused


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - SilverBlader - Aug. 10, 2012

sorry it's confusing,the story will come together.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.3 up! - Nitrohammer - Aug. 11, 2012

LOL. This is sorta funny. @ Chapter 1.


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - SilverBlader - Aug. 11, 2012

ch 4 is up.Also,i'm taking character requests
format:1.gender
2.beyblade
3.appearance
4.good or evil
5.personality


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - dragonFang101 - Aug. 28, 2012

story is gud bt u should make chapters big and its sometimes confusong too


RE: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests - SilverBlader - Aug. 28, 2012

thanks,i'm still going to make chapters,but i'm taking a break.