World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

Full Version: The Beyblade Uprising (story)Ch.4 up!taking character requests
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warning:half of the story is in the beyblades POV.
(chapters added daily)

The idea is nice, but the spoiler don't work and it's really short. -so far-
i updated it.The spoiler is working now.
prologue not prolouge but nice idea looking forward to what's coming
Yup , i really like the idea -- looking forward to reading more!
this looks cool
Ch.1 is up.
it is really good so far
thanks for the good reviews.I'll have Ch.2 tomorrow afternoon.
Ch.2 is up.
Suggestions-
When someone talks, do it like this.
"I'm a monkey" said George.
"That's really great" muttered the man with the yellow hat.
Also, make your chapters longer. Describe the battles, the setting, everything. Keep on writing Grin
thanks for the suggestions.
Ch.3 is up.
this is confusing Confused
sorry it's confusing,the story will come together.
LOL. This is sorta funny. @ Chapter 1.
ch 4 is up.Also,i'm taking character requests
format:1.gender
2.beyblade
3.appearance
4.good or evil
5.personality
story is gud bt u should make chapters big and its sometimes confusong too
thanks,i'm still going to make chapters,but i'm taking a break.