I know that i have left many stories unfinished but I promise that I will finish this story
The story is in first person
The main characters name will not be revealed untill later in the story
I am accepting characters BUT ONLY IF THEY HAVEN'T BEEN USED.
PLEASE COMMENT I like feedback so i can improve my story.
CHAPTER 1 PART1
The bey ripped right through me I remember feeling intense pain it was my only thought I only wanted to die so that the pain would stop and then everything went black.....
let me start from the beginning
I was an orphan in coma village my parents had just disappeared one day when I was two. In the orphanage I wasn't very popular I only had one friend and her name was Rem she always supported me no mater what. Once we were watching TV we saw it, Beyblade. "What is that?" I asked Rem when we were 9. "thats beyblade you've never heard of it?" she replied. "No" I said. "Just watch" she said. I did. I was amazed I watched a famous blader named Seth battle his way to the top with his bey infinity Horogium 125S Every day that a tournament was on I would be there to watch it.
One day Rem was adopted by woman named Serena Amadai, ad I was left alone. until one day a woman named Aura Hagane great grandaughter of the famous Ginkga Hagane came to the orphanage . Everyone rushed and crowded her begging her to pick one of them, while I sat on the stairs watching.
The woman smiled asking everyone to bake off. then she came up to me he had flowing red hair and warm golden brown eyes "Hi" she said "whats your name mines Aura" she continued. "I prefer not to tell people what my name is" I replied. Then without another word she walked towards the office. Everyone practically didn't breath as they waited. But I just sat there not expecting her to pick me. When she came out she gestured to me "come on we have to go" she said with a smile.
"What" said completely surprised. I got up and walked toward her. When we got to her house she came up to me and said "I knew you were just perfect when i saw you" I was confused "perfect for what?" I asked "To be the next phoenix, you know what beyblade is right." she asked "Yeah I do." I replied." "what would you say to getting one of the most powerful beys in history?" she asked. "Id say yes" I replied.
"You'll need some training" She said, and she handed me a bey. (like this fakish ones commonly used in beyblade metal fusion.) So she trained me. Over the years I learned skills such as perfect aim. Awesome control. Launch power and everything else. By the time I became 15 I was done. It took me 6 years to complete my training. and on my 15th birthday she gave it to me. It was a bey, Hell Fireblaze ED145MS. "LET IT RIP!" I yelled as I launched the bey. As soon as I launched it it burst into flame but is still stayed perfectly intact. "That is fireblaze's burn ability it allows him to create searing hot flames to increase the intensity of his attacks he also has a special move raging phoenix storm. "I also had another gift for you" she Said pointing to a box. "Over there" I went over to open it and inside was a mask and blonde wig. The mask of the legendary Phoenix, Ryusei Hagane.
End of chapter 1
The story is in first person
The main characters name will not be revealed untill later in the story
I am accepting characters BUT ONLY IF THEY HAVEN'T BEEN USED.
PLEASE COMMENT I like feedback so i can improve my story.
CHAPTER 1 PART1
The bey ripped right through me I remember feeling intense pain it was my only thought I only wanted to die so that the pain would stop and then everything went black.....
let me start from the beginning
I was an orphan in coma village my parents had just disappeared one day when I was two. In the orphanage I wasn't very popular I only had one friend and her name was Rem she always supported me no mater what. Once we were watching TV we saw it, Beyblade. "What is that?" I asked Rem when we were 9. "thats beyblade you've never heard of it?" she replied. "No" I said. "Just watch" she said. I did. I was amazed I watched a famous blader named Seth battle his way to the top with his bey infinity Horogium 125S Every day that a tournament was on I would be there to watch it.
One day Rem was adopted by woman named Serena Amadai, ad I was left alone. until one day a woman named Aura Hagane great grandaughter of the famous Ginkga Hagane came to the orphanage . Everyone rushed and crowded her begging her to pick one of them, while I sat on the stairs watching.
The woman smiled asking everyone to bake off. then she came up to me he had flowing red hair and warm golden brown eyes "Hi" she said "whats your name mines Aura" she continued. "I prefer not to tell people what my name is" I replied. Then without another word she walked towards the office. Everyone practically didn't breath as they waited. But I just sat there not expecting her to pick me. When she came out she gestured to me "come on we have to go" she said with a smile.
"What" said completely surprised. I got up and walked toward her. When we got to her house she came up to me and said "I knew you were just perfect when i saw you" I was confused "perfect for what?" I asked "To be the next phoenix, you know what beyblade is right." she asked "Yeah I do." I replied." "what would you say to getting one of the most powerful beys in history?" she asked. "Id say yes" I replied.
"You'll need some training" She said, and she handed me a bey. (like this fakish ones commonly used in beyblade metal fusion.) So she trained me. Over the years I learned skills such as perfect aim. Awesome control. Launch power and everything else. By the time I became 15 I was done. It took me 6 years to complete my training. and on my 15th birthday she gave it to me. It was a bey, Hell Fireblaze ED145MS. "LET IT RIP!" I yelled as I launched the bey. As soon as I launched it it burst into flame but is still stayed perfectly intact. "That is fireblaze's burn ability it allows him to create searing hot flames to increase the intensity of his attacks he also has a special move raging phoenix storm. "I also had another gift for you" she Said pointing to a box. "Over there" I went over to open it and inside was a mask and blonde wig. The mask of the legendary Phoenix, Ryusei Hagane.
End of chapter 1