great story i love it
can i be in it too

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Wow! After reading a boring book for my summer homework, and then reading this, this is better! Keep up the great work!

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My opinion os this story is; meh.

Why is there no "meh," option in the voting! >:l

Um ... okay? I can't change the options now. You didn't have to say anything in the first place ...


Chapters added in the OP

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I like dose chapters!! I'm understanding it more and it looks very cool so far. I wonder if anybody else will make an appearance...

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I like dose chapters!! I'm understanding it more and it looks very cool so far. I wonder if anybody else will make an appearance...

Yup. We're going to get attacked by a SPAM bot and Takasu will help us fight it

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This story really sucked me in.


Can't wait to read more!
(Hopefully you won't kill me off...!)

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This is what we all want, Brad.

Well, I know I didn't. I just simply said my opinion on this story is; meh (mediocre).

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Anyways, I do like the story, it's just ugh, something. My favorite chapter was Chapter 6. hehehe

Yep , Im making an appearence. I help code weapons for fight against the hacker, who injects a virus into the WBO, where the mosters begin attacking Insonminac. But she can change the plot, I mean , idea however she likes. Good luck to you!
-Takasu the Mouse

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Yep , Im making an appearence. I help code weapons for fight against the hacker, who injects a virus into the WBO, where the mosters begin attacking Insonminac. But she can change the plot, I mean , idea however she likes. Good luck to you!
-Takasu the Mouse

That sounds awesome. O:

I just read the last 3 chapters! I'm happy I appeared haha

Great job again!

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Trading a Fox face and a Gryph face for anything I don't have atm.

Tournaments I've Placed In (Click to View)

7/22/12 - The Triple Threat - 1st (HMS)
1/19/13 - New Year, Old Formats - 3rd (MFB)
1/19/13 - New Year, Old Formats - 2nd (HMS)
2/24/13 - Paper or Plastic? - 2nd (Plastics)
4/21/13 - BEYBLADE REVOLUTION: Maryland Qualifier - 3rd (Zero-G)
5/26/13  - BeyDays 2013! - 3rd (MFB)
9/20/13 - SeptemBBer 10-Pins - 3rd (MFB)
2/23/14 - Better Late than Never! - 2nd (LMT)

Nice story indeed.

I just hope you dont leave it abridged. Because some stories had started very nicely(like this one) but were left mid-way without an end.

Thanks peeps!

I'm gonna torture you all and leave it abridged XD

Kidding, stay tuned!

This story really sucked me in.

(¬‿¬)

I see what you did there ...

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can i be in the story too?

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1.Tyson fury (leader)
2.The Ganbalancer (co-leader)
3.Sexy Girl (co-leader)
4.Sword Master (jr. co-leader)

can i be in the story too?

Sure.

Though I'm going in chronological order, so it might take a few chapters.

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Can i Be in the story too?
PS. The Story is really good, i feel like reading more

Yes, you can. The response is the same as above though.

I know the story is good. I'm a good writer, it seems XD

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Why dont you start writing books about short stories or something?
Real books , The ones which you buy, the ones which have the writing written on paper, the ones which...

Why dont you start writing books about short stories or something?

Writing is a waste of time. Besides, it doesn't pay well :\

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This story really sucked me in.

(¬‿¬)

I see what you did there ...

o doo u nao ?


Really liked the ending of chapter six. xD

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This is what we all want, Brad.

when will there be new chapters
im so eager to read them

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Awesome story. Can I be in it?
EDIT: lol did u get the insane maniac in the poll from me? I would've voted for bolth but it's not that kind of poll.

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HORRAY FOR THE RESIZE BUTTON THINGY!credit to Insomniac for the sig.

Can I be in this if you don't mind?

EDIT: lol did u get the insane maniac in the poll from me?

Haha, yesh XD

Also, for anyone requesting to make an appearance, you should know that you will have one teeny-tiny mention. Not a whole role. Because I can't just spontaneously alter the story line like that. Because (as you will see) it gets very complicated with all these puzzles, haha.

So here are the next six chapters:
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Kidding! But still, those are how the chapters look before I type them up, haha XD

You will notice something new in the last one though

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Also, if you might have noticed, I have a tendency to change tenses. So please, I hope you don't get bothered by it too much!

Sneak Peak:

24 hours.

1440 minutes.

86400 seconds till erasure.

That was all the time we had. And I sure as hell didn’t want to find out what “being erased” meant.

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wow that story was really great and thanks for adding me in it!!!

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2.The Ganbalancer (co-leader)
3.Sexy Girl (co-leader)
4.Sword Master (jr. co-leader)

Love how you put me in. And you were correct, I answer PMs really fast!

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