Crossover between Beyblade and Battle Strikers (the magnetically-controlled 'rips' of Beyblades developed by Mega Bloks)

Notes:
1. I'll be using Series 1 Battle Strikers in this story (If I ever start writing it)
2. There will be Hybrid Wheel System Beyblades
3. This story I am writing for fun
4. I encourage you all to give me ideas for plot twists, scenes, battles, etc.
5. This is my first story on this site, to let you know.

Synopsis: Four Beybladers (all OCs) are battling each other's Beyblades for fun, when the energies from their special abilities collided with each other, inexplicably opening a worm hole. The wormhole sucked the bladers and
their Beyblades in, sending them into an alternate world. There are no Beyblades in this alternative reality, but there's a unique form of magnetically-controlled fighting tops called Battle Strikers, and just like Beyblades, Battle Strikers (for this story) have powerful spirit beasts in them. Just when those four bladers are starting to figure out a way to get back to their reality, they meet up with a kid named Zane, who wields a powerful Battle Striker named Dragonfire.

Edit (8:30): SwiftShadow suggested to match up the HWS Beys against the Metal XS series Battle Strikers because both they have metallic parts. Might as well do so anyhow!

Edit (7/25/11 7:22 AM): I decided that I'll implement both the 5-layer Hybrid Wheel Beyblades and 4D System Beyblades into this story. Perhaps I'll have two of the MFB OC's will use 4D Beys, and the other two will use the standard HWS Beys.

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

This has been done about 400 times...

Think for a while and find something super original.

Then again, the way it happens IS unprecidented, I think

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If you do write it, you should use battle strikers metal xs instead of series one. It wouldn't really match up if the beyblades were metal but the battle strikers weren't.

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Maybe perhaps depict the Battle Strikers as a type of battling top competing with Beyblades!

@ SwiftShadow: I'll see what I can do!

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

i think you should go with MFB. people are more familiar with it. well thats what i think.

here's an idea. make sure one of the bladers is good friends with the battle strikers people. and one blader hates them all and turns evil or something. maybe a massive war that breaks the rip in space and leaving the battle strikers stuck in a war torn beyblade world or vice-versa. now the two teams must work together to fix the rip in space and save the universe.
anyway good luck. i hope this story goes well.

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@ sonicsora123 I'll consider it

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Ummm... HWS ARE MFB. MFB have Pre-HWS (4 layers), HWS (5 layers), and 4D (Pretty much anything?). Unless you meant HMS, HWS are in fact MFB.

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Ummm... HWS ARE MFB. MFB have Pre-HWS (4 layers), HWS (5 layers), and 4D (Pretty much anything?). Unless you meant HMS, HWS are in fact MFB.

HWS = Hybrid Wheel System

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@ Callum6939: thanks

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Ummm... HWS ARE MFB. MFB have Pre-HWS (4 layers), HWS (5 layers), and 4D (Pretty much anything?). Unless you meant HMS, HWS are in fact MFB.

HWS = Hybrid Wheel System

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sorry. my bad. i thought it said HMS.
anyway there is still my idea for a storyline

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“I thought the devil was a goat-man with a curly beard and horns. I was wrong. Now I know the devil has no face… Literally.”
Read my new story Faceless. It's promised to be bigger and better than my last one.
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Faceless...pid1080518

sounds like a pretty good plot twist. Below are the main OCs for Beyblade VS Battle Strikers

EDIT (7/25/11 1:31): changed a few things plus I added the forth character

Reiji
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: White
Beyblading Style: Aggressive
Beyblade: Vulcanium Ra D:D-M
Type: Attack
Face Bolt: Ra
4D Energy Ring: Ra II
4D Fusion Wheel: Vulcanium (it's a three-layer 4D Fusion Wheel, not unlike that of Gingka Hagane's Big Bang Pegasus F:D, plus it resembles the Vulcan Fusion Wheel on steroids)
4D Performance Tip: Delta Drive-Metal


Alister
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Purple (dyed)
Eye Color: Onyx
Skin Tone: Caucasian
Beyblading Style: Defensive, counterattacking
Beyblade: Hades Annihilate F:C (He would get corrupted/possessed/etc. by it later on in the story and the others will have to free him)
Face Bolt: Hades
Fusion Wheel: Hades Annihilate
4D Performance Tip: Final Counterattack


Milly
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Skin Tone: Tan
Beyblading Style: Outlasting the opponent
Beyblade: Inferno Virgo WgD145WD
Face Bolt: Virgo
Energy Ring: Virgo
Fusion Wheel: Inferno
Spin Track: Wing Defense 145 (it's like Wide Defense 145, but the wings are shaped more like angel wings)
Performance Tip: Wide Defense


Jackie
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: One eye is blue and the other is brown (heterochromia)
Skin Tone: White
Beyblading Style: Something suitable for Balance-types.
Beyblade: Dark Pisces DF145JB
Face Bolt: Pisces
Energy Ring: Pisces
Fusion Wheel: Dark
Spin Track: Down Force 145
Performance Tip: Jog Ball

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

sounds like a pretty good plot twist. Below are the main OCs for Beyblade VS Battle Strikers

Reiji
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: White
Personality Traits: Energetic, happy-go-lucky, good sense of humor, easy to get along with, fun-loving, great sense of justice
Beyblading Style: Aggressive
Beyblade: Titanium Ra D
Type: Attack
Face Bolt: Ra
4D Energy Ring: Ra II
4D Fusion Wheel: Titanium (it's a three-layer 4D Fusion Wheel)
4D Performance Tip: D

Alister
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Purple (dyed)
Eye Color: Onyx
Skin Tone: Caucasian
Personality Traits: Cold, calculating, serious, proud
Beyblading Style: Defensive
Beyblade: Hades Annihilate F (He would later get corrupted/possessed/etc. by it)
Face Bolt: Hades
Fusion Wheel: Hades Annihilate
4D Performance Tip: Final Survive

Milly
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Green
Skin Tone: Tan
Personality Traits: Adventurous, precocious, intelligent
Beyblading Style: Outlasting
Beyblade: Inferno Virgo ED145WD
Face Bolt: Virgo
Energy Ring: Virgo
Fusion Wheel: Inferno
Spin Track: Eternal Defense 145
Performance Tip: Wide Defense

I'll come up with the forth main protagonist later

lol. shouldve turned off smilies

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“I thought the devil was a goat-man with a curly beard and horns. I was wrong. Now I know the devil has no face… Literally.”
Read my new story Faceless. It's promised to be bigger and better than my last one.
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Faceless...pid1080518

I'll adjust it

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

how about this guy tricks them into thinking he has a beyblade but when he battles them the beyblade turns into a battle striker like drones turn into silencers in hotwheels acceleracers 4

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Signature was too based. Read the rules.

I'll think about it

EDIT (3:26PM): here's Zane's profile

Zane
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Hair Color: Red (dyed)
Eye Color: Steel-blue gray
Skin Tone: White
Personality Traits: The same as those of Reiji's, but a bit more cocky
Battle Style: Aggressive
Battle Striker: Dragonfire

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

I'm accepting fassaloo's idea, and will create a character who (jokingly) tricks the main protagonists into thinking he's got a Beyblade, and when they battle, the Beyblade is really a Battle Striker!

"Hey, that's not a Beyblade!"

"Ha-ha-ha, fooled you, this isn't really a Beyblade; it's a Battle Striker! I got you!"

"Why you little--I'm gonna lay you out!"

"What's the matter, Mr. Serious, can't take a joke?"

Plus, I'm gonna edit a few things.

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

No, no, no. Just no. Never, ever, ever list your characters personalities and bios. You're supposed to show it in the story, not tell us. Plus, you spoiled some major parts by writing them (thanks for telling me Alister gets possessed. Now when I read it, I won't be surprised. Not in the slightest.) Plus, you told me yet another part. If you get a suggestion, keep it to yourself. All you're doing is spoiling your potential readers. So yeah, just some advice for next time.

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I'm sorry.

Ugh, why can't I make a story without finding out too late that there are people on this forum who doesn't like any pre-story spoilers!?

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Why sorry? Correcting your mistake is easy.

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BUt you said that you're never going to be surprised by the part where Alister's gonna get possessed by his own Beyblade!

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Do it for the other readers.

Just don't put pre-story spoilers. If someone wants them, PM them; don't ruin it for everyone else.

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Okay, got it! Also, can I give each--oh wait! I got an idea! How about we become co-authors?!

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Eh, sorry, but I have to decline. I don't do partners, I don't write very well, and I barely have enough time for my own stories.

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But, I can go to you for advice, right?

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"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Sure, why not?

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