+- World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc. (https://worldbeyblade.org)
+-- Forum: Off-Topic Forums (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Off-Topic-Forums)
+--- Forum: Your Creations (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Your-Creations)
+--- Thread: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers (/Thread-Story-Idea-Beyblade-VS-Battle-Strikers)
Pages:
1
2
Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
Crossover between Beyblade and Battle Strikers (the magnetically-controlled 'rips' of Beyblades developed by Mega Bloks)
Notes:
1. I'll be using Series 1 Battle Strikers in this story (If I ever start writing it)
2. There will be Hybrid Wheel System Beyblades
3. This story I am writing for fun
4. I encourage you all to give me ideas for plot twists, scenes, battles, etc.
5. This is my first story on this site, to let you know.
Synopsis: Four Beybladers (all OCs) are battling each other's Beyblades for fun, when the energies from their special abilities collided with each other, inexplicably opening a worm hole. The wormhole sucked the bladers and
their Beyblades in, sending them into an alternate world. There are no Beyblades in this alternative reality, but there's a unique form of magnetically-controlled fighting tops called Battle Strikers, and just like Beyblades, Battle Strikers (for this story) have powerful spirit beasts in them. Just when those four bladers are starting to figure out a way to get back to their reality, they meet up with a kid named Zane, who wields a powerful Battle Striker named Dragonfire.
Edit (8:30): SwiftShadow suggested to match up the HWS Beys against the Metal XS series Battle Strikers because both they have metallic parts. Might as well do so anyhow!
Edit (7/25/11 7:22 AM): I decided that I'll implement both the 5-layer Hybrid Wheel Beyblades and 4D System Beyblades into this story. Perhaps I'll have two of the MFB OC's will use 4D Beys, and the other two will use the standard HWS Beys.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - Sparta - Jul. 25, 2011
This has been done about 400 times...
Think for a while and find something super original.
Then again, the way it happens IS unprecidented, I think
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - SwiftShadow - Jul. 25, 2011
If you do write it, you should use battle strikers metal xs instead of series one. It wouldn't really match up if the beyblades were metal but the battle strikers weren't.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
Maybe perhaps depict the Battle Strikers as a type of battling top competing with Beyblades!
@ SwiftShadow: I'll see what I can do!
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - sonicsora123 - Jul. 25, 2011
i think you should go with MFB. people are more familiar with it. well thats what i think.
here's an idea. make sure one of the bladers is good friends with the battle strikers people. and one blader hates them all and turns evil or something. maybe a massive war that breaks the rip in space and leaving the battle strikers stuck in a war torn beyblade world or vice-versa. now the two teams must work together to fix the rip in space and save the universe.
anyway good luck. i hope this story goes well.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
@ sonicsora123 I'll consider it
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - DynaZord - Jul. 25, 2011
Ummm... HWS ARE MFB. MFB have Pre-HWS (4 layers), HWS (5 layers), and 4D (Pretty much anything?). Unless you meant HMS, HWS are in fact MFB.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - Callum6939 - Jul. 25, 2011
(Jul. 25, 2011 3:06 PM)Coasters "R" Us Wrote: Ummm... HWS ARE MFB. MFB have Pre-HWS (4 layers), HWS (5 layers), and 4D (Pretty much anything?). Unless you meant HMS, HWS are in fact MFB.
HWS = Hybrid Wheel System
¬¬
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
@ Callum6939: thanks
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - sonicsora123 - Jul. 25, 2011
(Jul. 25, 2011 3:08 PM)Callum6939 Wrote:(Jul. 25, 2011 3:06 PM)Coasters "R" Us Wrote: Ummm... HWS ARE MFB. MFB have Pre-HWS (4 layers), HWS (5 layers), and 4D (Pretty much anything?). Unless you meant HMS, HWS are in fact MFB.
HWS = Hybrid Wheel System
¬¬
sorry. my bad. i thought it said HMS.
anyway there is still my idea for a storyline
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
sounds like a pretty good plot twist. Below are the main OCs for Beyblade VS Battle Strikers
EDIT (7/25/11 1:31): changed a few things plus I added the forth character
Reiji
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: White
Beyblading Style: Aggressive
Beyblade: Vulcanium Ra D:D-M
Type: Attack
Face Bolt: Ra
4D Energy Ring: Ra II
4D Fusion Wheel: Vulcanium (it's a three-layer 4D Fusion Wheel, not unlike that of Gingka Hagane's Big Bang Pegasus F:D, plus it resembles the Vulcan Fusion Wheel on steroids)
4D Performance Tip: Delta Drive-Metal
Alister
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Purple (dyed)
Eye Color: Onyx
Skin Tone: Caucasian
Beyblading Style: Defensive, counterattacking
Beyblade: Hades Annihilate F:C (He would get corrupted/possessed/etc. by it later on in the story and the others will have to free him)
Face Bolt: Hades
Fusion Wheel: Hades Annihilate
4D Performance Tip: Final Counterattack
Milly
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Skin Tone: Tan
Beyblading Style: Outlasting the opponent
Beyblade: Inferno Virgo WgD145WD
Face Bolt: Virgo
Energy Ring: Virgo
Fusion Wheel: Inferno
Spin Track: Wing Defense 145 (it's like Wide Defense 145, but the wings are shaped more like angel wings)
Performance Tip: Wide Defense
Jackie
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: One eye is blue and the other is brown (heterochromia)
Skin Tone: White
Beyblading Style: Something suitable for Balance-types.
Beyblade: Dark Pisces DF145JB
Face Bolt: Pisces
Energy Ring: Pisces
Fusion Wheel: Dark
Spin Track: Down Force 145
Performance Tip: Jog Ball
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - sonicsora123 - Jul. 25, 2011
(Jul. 25, 2011 4:41 PM)T. L-Drago 9207 Wrote: sounds like a pretty good plot twist. Below are the main OCs for Beyblade VS Battle Strikers
Reiji
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Tone: White
Personality Traits: Energetic, happy-go-lucky, good sense of humor, easy to get along with, fun-loving, great sense of justice
Beyblading Style: Aggressive
Beyblade: Titanium Ra D
Type: Attack
Face Bolt: Ra
4D Energy Ring: Ra II
4D Fusion Wheel: Titanium (it's a three-layer 4D Fusion Wheel)
4D Performance Tip: D
Alister
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Hair Color: Purple (dyed)
Eye Color: Onyx
Skin Tone: Caucasian
Personality Traits: Cold, calculating, serious, proud
Beyblading Style: Defensive
Beyblade: Hades Annihilate F(He would later get corrupted/possessed/etc. by it)
Face Bolt: Hades
Fusion Wheel: Hades Annihilate
4D Performance Tip: Final Survive
Milly
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Green
Skin Tone: Tan
Personality Traits: Adventurous, precocious, intelligent
Beyblading Style: Outlasting
Beyblade: Inferno Virgo ED145WD
Face Bolt: Virgo
Energy Ring: Virgo
Fusion Wheel: Inferno
Spin Track: Eternal Defense 145
Performance Tip: Wide Defense
I'll come up with the forth main protagonist later
lol. shouldve turned off smilies
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
I'll adjust it
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - faissaloo - Jul. 25, 2011
how about this guy tricks them into thinking he has a beyblade but when he battles them the beyblade turns into a battle striker like drones turn into silencers in hotwheels acceleracers 4
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Jul. 25, 2011
I'll think about it
EDIT (3:26PM): here's Zane's profile
Zane
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Hair Color: Red (dyed)
Eye Color: Steel-blue gray
Skin Tone: White
Personality Traits: The same as those of Reiji's, but a bit more cocky
Battle Style: Aggressive
Battle Striker: Dragonfire
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 01, 2011
I'm accepting fassaloo's idea, and will create a character who (jokingly) tricks the main protagonists into thinking he's got a Beyblade, and when they battle, the Beyblade is really a Battle Striker!
"Hey, that's not a Beyblade!"
"Ha-ha-ha, fooled you, this isn't really a Beyblade; it's a Battle Striker! I got you!"
"Why you little--I'm gonna lay you out!"
"What's the matter, Mr. Serious, can't take a joke?"
Plus, I'm gonna edit a few things.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - NoodooSoup - Aug. 02, 2011
No, no, no. Just no. Never, ever, ever list your characters personalities and bios. You're supposed to show it in the story, not tell us. Plus, you spoiled some major parts by writing them (thanks for telling me Alister gets possessed. Now when I read it, I won't be surprised. Not in the slightest.) Plus, you told me yet another part. If you get a suggestion, keep it to yourself. All you're doing is spoiling your potential readers. So yeah, just some advice for next time.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 02, 2011
I'm sorry.
Ugh, why can't I make a story without finding out too late that there are people on this forum who doesn't like any pre-story spoilers!?
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - NoodooSoup - Aug. 02, 2011
Why sorry? Correcting your mistake is easy.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 02, 2011
BUt you said that you're never going to be surprised by the part where Alister's gonna get possessed by his own Beyblade!
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - NoodooSoup - Aug. 02, 2011
Do it for the other readers.
Just don't put pre-story spoilers. If someone wants them, PM them; don't ruin it for everyone else.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 02, 2011
Okay, got it! Also, can I give each--oh wait! I got an idea! How about we become co-authors?!
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - NoodooSoup - Aug. 02, 2011
Eh, sorry, but I have to decline. I don't do partners, I don't write very well, and I barely have enough time for my own stories.
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 02, 2011
But, I can go to you for advice, right?
RE: Story Idea: Beyblade VS Battle Strikers - NoodooSoup - Aug. 02, 2011
Sure, why not?