(Story) Beyblade: The Knights of The Elements (Final Ch Up!)

Poll: What do you think of my story?

It was amazing! I love it! Grin
65.38%
34
It's pretty good. I like it. Smile
23.08%
12
Meh. Not so good. :\
5.77%
3
STOP WRITING! YOU SUCK! Angry
5.77%
3
Total: 100% 52 vote(s)
As I'm sure, many of you who are reading this, have read my other story, Beyblade: Through Out the World. It became such a hit, I decided to make the sequel! I'm going to try to make it not involved with my other story as much as possible (For those who haven't read my other story), although, many characters, such as Shawn, Alfred, Yao, and Roderich, will be mentioned through out this story. I hope you all enjoy!

Note: Keep in mind, this takes place years after Shawn won the World Championships.

Note 2: This poll is public. I can see who voted and for what. I will be PM'ing you if you vote for the last option.

Note 3: Do not post who you don't like or who you think "sucks". Thank you! Smile

Prologue:
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:
Chapter 11:
Chapter 12:
Chapter 13:
Chapter 14:
Chapter 15:
Chapter 16 is told From Anca's point of view.
Chapter 16:
Still told from Anca's point of veiw.
Chapter 17:
Chapter 18:
Chapter 19:
Chapter 20:
Chapter 21:
This chapter is told from Peter's point of view.
Chapter 22:
Chapter 23:
Chapter 24:
Chapter 25:
Chapter 26 is told from Fan's point of view
Chapter 26:
Still told from Fan's P.O.V
Chapter 27:
Chapter 28 is told from Feliks' point of view.
Chapter 28:
Chapter 29:
Chapter 30:
Chapter 31:
Chapter 32:
Chapter 33:
Chapter 34:
Chapter 35:

I hope you like it! I'll post new chapters everyday, but not on Sundays. Please vote on the poll!
is this zero g also i cant wait for the next chapter you really pull the readers in!
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:01 PM)bennettcarroll Wrote: is this zero g also i cant wait for the next chapter you really pull the readers in!

Yes, this is Zero G. And thank you. Smile
Since you're incorporating elements, and there are four of them used by the protagonists, will the antagonists have their own elements also?
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:02 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: Since you're incorporating elements, and there are four of them used by the protagonists, will the antagonists have their own elements also?

Yes. They include Space, Lightning, Blood, and Darkness.
plus you need 3 protagonist for each element for the FULL SYCROME ABLITY but still these storys are amazing
when will you be aceting charcter request
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:03 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:02 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: Since you're incorporating elements, and there are four of them used by the protagonists, will the antagonists have their own elements also?

Yes. They include Space, Lightning, Blood, and Darkness.
I saw darkness coming. But I don't believe that blood is a natural element, hah.
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:04 PM)bennettcarroll Wrote: plus you need 3 protagonist for each element for the FULL SYCROME ABLITY but still these storys are amazing
when will you be aceting charcter request

I have five main characters. And I won't be taking requests unless nessicary.
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:05 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote:
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:03 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:02 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: Since you're incorporating elements, and there are four of them used by the protagonists, will the antagonists have their own elements also?

Yes. They include Space, Lightning, Blood, and Darkness.
I saw darkness coming. But I don't believe that blood is a natural element, hah.

I may make it death. But the girl who has blood is a vampire so I put 2 and 2 together...
Oh no. I've said to much.
I think space will be interesting. But I can't help thinking, "Gundams".
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:07 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: I think space will be interesting. But I can't help thinking, "Gundams".
Lockon Stratos, targeting and firing!

anyways, good story, as expected.
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:22 PM)Shirayuki Wrote:
(Jul. 24, 2012  5:07 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: I think space will be interesting. But I can't help thinking, "Gundams".
Lockon Stratos, targeting and firing!

anyways, good story, as expected.
Ha, GN Drive! Or maybe even Ultraman.
This story is already starting up well! Can't wait to see what unfolds!!
i really think this one will end up better than your last one (which i thought was impossible).
(Jul. 24, 2012  6:06 PM)Beyblade mau5 Wrote: i really think this one will end up better than your last one (which i thought was impossible).

What do you mean by that? Chocked_2
i mean i didn't think it was possible for there to be something better than your last story
Alright, I got really excited. Here's Chapter 2:

Chapter 2:
I appreciate how you update your title with every release. Also, if there are 7 elements in total,

Time
Water
Fire
Earth
Air
Space
Lightning
Blood
Darkness

shouldn't there be one more to even out the sides? Seeing that Time has the potential to master all of the "good" elements, which element will be able to master the antagonizing elements?
(Jul. 24, 2012  8:28 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: I appreciate how you update your title with every release. Also, if there are 7 elements in total,

Time
Water
Fire
Earth
Air
Space
Lightning
Blood
Darkness

shouldn't there be one more to even out the sides? Seeing that Time has the potential to master all of the "good" elements, which element will be able to master the antagonizing elements?

I'm working on the last element now. I need to come up with a Beyblade, but until then, yes. Space can master all the antagonizing elements.
I thought so, because space/time aren't polar opposites like light/darkness, but more of complimentary opposites like Yin-Yang, coexisting.

@ Hitsugiya: That's what I was trying to do. It seems you've figured my story out. XD
(Jul. 24, 2012  9:28 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: @ Hitsugiya: That's what I was trying to do. It seems you've figured my story out. XD
I just hope I don't go too far, and spoil it for myself.
Feliks is awesome! I'm probably just saying that because I am 100 percent polish hah. Anyway, awesome story!
Here's Chapter 3:

Chapter 3:

I hope you guys are excited for next chapter!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh
So intense!
Epic Story ChinaBlade
Just what I expected