Alright! I've been wanting to make a story for forever, as I love writing. I had a little idea so I wrote a prologue, but I don't know if it's up to WBO standards. Feedback is highly appreciated! This story was written in a journal-format. By "Entry" it means he is writing an entry in his journal (By the way, the prologue doesn't have much beyblade stuff in it, but there will be alot more beyblade-related chapters if this is well recieved). Thanks all!

Prologue: Meet Fox Tate.

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Entry #1: I'm not an ordinary blader. I live in a small town in Canada, and have been blading for years. But the thing is, I am the only blader in my town, probably all of the province. That has proved a problem for me at times, not having anyone to blade with, but my spirit has always came back. The year is 2012, and I am the age of 14. My name is Fox Tate, and my beyblade is my trusty Draciel G. I got this beyblade when I was 5 years old from my father who was termanilly ill, and I made a promise to him that I will take good care of it. Father always told me there was an incredible power inside this bey, but I never really understood him. Tomorrow my mother and I are moving to Toronto, that is why I am writing this journal. We are moving because she got a great job offer that can keep us well fed and have a much larger apartment than we do now. I wonder if most kids would be sad if they were moving, having friends and all, but I wouldn't know that feeling. I can't wait to move. I have to go to sleep though, so this is where I will end this entry.

Entry #2: I am writing this part on the plane ride to Ontario. This isn't my first plane ride, but it feels kind of wierd, because I haven't been on one since I was four. My mother used to work for the airline, so we get on quite cheaply. I was a little bit scared during take-off, but there was a cute girl sitting beside me and I was sure she kept looking at me, so I tried my best to act brave. I think we are landing now, I will continue writing when I can.

Entry #3: I don't know why I am still writing in here, but I guess it is sort of fun. I just hope noone sees it and thinks it is a diary, although it basicly is, sadly. I am writing this in our hotel room, which we are staying in because we landed quite late. I had a great day today. I got to go on a plane again, and when we where getting off the plane, the cute girl I was talking about dropped her phone without realising it, and I caught up to her and gave it to her. "Thanks a lot! I would've died if I lost this." -She said.
"No problem. Happy to help." -I said, as I started to walk away.
"Wait! What is your name?" -She said.
"Fox Tate. Glad to meet you."
"What a nice name! My name is Kuma Shroud. What buisness do you have in Toronto?'
"I just moved here from Vancouver. What about you? Are you on vacation?"
"Actually, I'm just coming back from vacation! Where are you moving?"
"11685 Sunnyside Street, do you know of it?"
"Oh my gosh, I live on Sunnyside street! Here's my number if you need help unpacking."
"Haha thanks, but you don't nee-"
"Take it, I insist" -she interrupted, as she winked. "Seeeee yaa lateerr!" She walked away.
My life here started out really well. I mean, I got a girls number before I even got home! Haha, talk to you later, journal.

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Bump King. For my birthday. I think I've said enough.

OK,so the HMS(did I get it right?) is with beys like Earth Virgo GB145BS and Thermal Pisces T125ES,right?

We are not hackers, so we cannot see pictures inside your computer. You must upload it to an image-hosting website like ImageShack.us

anyone come on an battle me if u dare. COME ON! i will show u my true bladder power!

You posted an awful combo, did not get "yelled at" by anyone, and then decided to argue, insult people, and call me a "petofile".

What is the "sharpest" beyblade in Plastics? Any that could cut your finger if touched? No, this is not for emo purposes, just need to pull off a good pun.

Are you high?

R u dumb?

A tunnel have two hole. One At the start and One at the end.

You think that is a weird fact nobody knows ?

An excellent Balance type bey customization would be Flame Capricorn 145WD. This customization has the maximum amount of Balance power that is possible in a Bey. It also has a high amount of Stamina and Defense power. It has very low attack power. It's a great winning combo! Use it as you please!

But how do we even know if it has Samurai yet?

That is the difference between you and me : I find concrete and confirmed information, and you do not question me.

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This story is really hard for me to understand. What are the "entries". Are you trying to let people vote on which one is the best?

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This story is really hard for me to understand. What are the "entries". Are you trying to let people vote on which one is the best?

Oh, I get it! I think he's writing a journal entry!

If that's the case, pocketpulls, you should probably state that those are in a journal. It kinda confuses people if you put that kind of format...

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Bump King. For my birthday. I think I've said enough.

OK,so the HMS(did I get it right?) is with beys like Earth Virgo GB145BS and Thermal Pisces T125ES,right?

We are not hackers, so we cannot see pictures inside your computer. You must upload it to an image-hosting website like ImageShack.us

anyone come on an battle me if u dare. COME ON! i will show u my true bladder power!

You posted an awful combo, did not get "yelled at" by anyone, and then decided to argue, insult people, and call me a "petofile".

What is the "sharpest" beyblade in Plastics? Any that could cut your finger if touched? No, this is not for emo purposes, just need to pull off a good pun.

Are you high?

R u dumb?

A tunnel have two hole. One At the start and One at the end.

You think that is a weird fact nobody knows ?

An excellent Balance type bey customization would be Flame Capricorn 145WD. This customization has the maximum amount of Balance power that is possible in a Bey. It also has a high amount of Stamina and Defense power. It has very low attack power. It's a great winning combo! Use it as you please!

But how do we even know if it has Samurai yet?

That is the difference between you and me : I find concrete and confirmed information, and you do not question me.

Andrew pls. (Click to View)

:andrew:

Overall it's good. Noone is spelled in two words(no one)but I sometimes make the same mistakes to keep writing. I got writers block from my story(http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Story--53735). I go and read others fOr ideas

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Haha, you bumped my old thread! I thought it was carp, so I sort of gave up xD

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Bump King. For my birthday. I think I've said enough.

OK,so the HMS(did I get it right?) is with beys like Earth Virgo GB145BS and Thermal Pisces T125ES,right?

We are not hackers, so we cannot see pictures inside your computer. You must upload it to an image-hosting website like ImageShack.us

anyone come on an battle me if u dare. COME ON! i will show u my true bladder power!

You posted an awful combo, did not get "yelled at" by anyone, and then decided to argue, insult people, and call me a "petofile".

What is the "sharpest" beyblade in Plastics? Any that could cut your finger if touched? No, this is not for emo purposes, just need to pull off a good pun.

Are you high?

R u dumb?

A tunnel have two hole. One At the start and One at the end.

You think that is a weird fact nobody knows ?

An excellent Balance type bey customization would be Flame Capricorn 145WD. This customization has the maximum amount of Balance power that is possible in a Bey. It also has a high amount of Stamina and Defense power. It has very low attack power. It's a great winning combo! Use it as you please!

But how do we even know if it has Samurai yet?

That is the difference between you and me : I find concrete and confirmed information, and you do not question me.

Andrew pls. (Click to View)

:andrew:

thats a good storyits the first one on hear that ive fully read

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Dude, here you go: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Story--53735 Best not to spam the thread with your own stories, but I think pocketpulls will let it slide this time

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Hmm.. maybe I should get to writing.

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Bump King. For my birthday. I think I've said enough.

OK,so the HMS(did I get it right?) is with beys like Earth Virgo GB145BS and Thermal Pisces T125ES,right?

We are not hackers, so we cannot see pictures inside your computer. You must upload it to an image-hosting website like ImageShack.us

anyone come on an battle me if u dare. COME ON! i will show u my true bladder power!

You posted an awful combo, did not get "yelled at" by anyone, and then decided to argue, insult people, and call me a "petofile".

What is the "sharpest" beyblade in Plastics? Any that could cut your finger if touched? No, this is not for emo purposes, just need to pull off a good pun.

Are you high?

R u dumb?

A tunnel have two hole. One At the start and One at the end.

You think that is a weird fact nobody knows ?

An excellent Balance type bey customization would be Flame Capricorn 145WD. This customization has the maximum amount of Balance power that is possible in a Bey. It also has a high amount of Stamina and Defense power. It has very low attack power. It's a great winning combo! Use it as you please!

But how do we even know if it has Samurai yet?

That is the difference between you and me : I find concrete and confirmed information, and you do not question me.

Andrew pls. (Click to View)

:andrew:

EncOre encore write some more write some more.

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Hmm.. maybe I should get to writing.

You should get to sleep, rofl. But jokes aside, you should really continue. I'm curious to see where this goes

EncOre encore write some more write some more.

THE CUTENESS OF THIS POST IS TOO DAMN HIGH~

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