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Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Jul. 13, 2012

Alright! I've been wanting to make a story for forever, as I love writing. I had a little idea so I wrote a prologue, but I don't know if it's up to WBO standards. Feedback is highly appreciated! This story was written in a journal-format. By "Entry" it means he is writing an entry in his journal (By the way, the prologue doesn't have much beyblade stuff in it, but there will be alot more beyblade-related chapters if this is well recieved). Thanks all!

Prologue: Meet Fox Tate.



RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - TakasuMouce - Jul. 13, 2012

This story is really hard for me to understand. What are the "entries". Are you trying to let people vote on which one is the best?


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - DefStamina88 - Jul. 13, 2012

(Jul. 13, 2012  2:57 AM)Hacked Wrote: This story is really hard for me to understand. What are the "entries". Are you trying to let people vote on which one is the best?

Oh, I get it! I think he's writing a journal entry!

If that's the case, pocketpulls, you should probably state that those are in a journal. It kinda confuses people if you put that kind of format...


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Jul. 13, 2012

My bad guys! I wrote in the OP that he is writing in his journal, so that should clear up any confusion.


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - wtater888 - Aug. 30, 2012

Overall it's good. Noone is spelled in two words(no one)but I sometimes make the same mistakes to keep writing. I got writers block from my story(http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Story--53735). I go and read others fOr ideas


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Aug. 30, 2012

Haha, you bumped my old thread! I thought it was carp, so I sort of gave up xD


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - beybladefoever - Aug. 30, 2012

thats a good storyits the first one on hear that ive fully read


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - wtater888 - Aug. 30, 2012

My link doesn't work. Unhappy


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - sarabscientist - Aug. 30, 2012

Dude, here you go: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Story--53735 Best not to spam the thread with your own stories, but I think pocketpulls will let it slide this time Smile


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Aug. 30, 2012

It's fine, aha Smile

Hmm.. maybe I should get to writing.


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - wtater888 - Aug. 30, 2012

EncOre encore write some more write some more. Smile


RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - sarabscientist - Aug. 30, 2012

(Aug. 30, 2012  3:53 AM)pocketpulls Wrote: Hmm.. maybe I should get to writing.
You should get to sleep, rofl. But jokes aside, you should really continue. I'm curious to see where this goes Tongue_out

(Aug. 30, 2012  3:54 AM)wtater888 Wrote: EncOre encore write some more write some more. Smile

THE CUTENESS OF THIS POST IS TOO DAMN HIGH~