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Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Jul. 13, 2012 Alright! I've been wanting to make a story for forever, as I love writing. I had a little idea so I wrote a prologue, but I don't know if it's up to WBO standards. Feedback is highly appreciated! This story was written in a journal-format. By "Entry" it means he is writing an entry in his journal (By the way, the prologue doesn't have much beyblade stuff in it, but there will be alot more beyblade-related chapters if this is well recieved). Thanks all! Prologue: Meet Fox Tate. Spoiler (Click to View) RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - TakasuMouce - Jul. 13, 2012 This story is really hard for me to understand. What are the "entries". Are you trying to let people vote on which one is the best? RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - DefStamina88 - Jul. 13, 2012 (Jul. 13, 2012 2:57 AM)Hacked Wrote: This story is really hard for me to understand. What are the "entries". Are you trying to let people vote on which one is the best? Oh, I get it! I think he's writing a journal entry! If that's the case, pocketpulls, you should probably state that those are in a journal. It kinda confuses people if you put that kind of format... RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Jul. 13, 2012 My bad guys! I wrote in the OP that he is writing in his journal, so that should clear up any confusion. RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - wtater888 - Aug. 30, 2012 Overall it's good. Noone is spelled in two words(no one)but I sometimes make the same mistakes to keep writing. I got writers block from my story(http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Story--53735). I go and read others fOr ideas RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Aug. 30, 2012 Haha, you bumped my old thread! I thought it was carp, so I sort of gave up xD RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - beybladefoever - Aug. 30, 2012 thats a good storyits the first one on hear that ive fully read RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - wtater888 - Aug. 30, 2012 My link doesn't work. RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - sarabscientist - Aug. 30, 2012 Dude, here you go: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Story--53735 Best not to spam the thread with your own stories, but I think pocketpulls will let it slide this time RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - pocketpulls - Aug. 30, 2012 It's fine, aha Hmm.. maybe I should get to writing. RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - wtater888 - Aug. 30, 2012 EncOre encore write some more write some more. RE: Story: A Different Kind Of Blader - sarabscientist - Aug. 30, 2012 (Aug. 30, 2012 3:53 AM)pocketpulls Wrote: Hmm.. maybe I should get to writing.You should get to sleep, rofl. But jokes aside, you should really continue. I'm curious to see where this goes (Aug. 30, 2012 3:54 AM)wtater888 Wrote: EncOre encore write some more write some more. THE CUTENESS OF THIS POST IS TOO DAMN HIGH~ |