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Nemean avoided the dragonic bey.
“Feel my wrath, fool!” Ryu shouted in glee.

“I won’t unless you feel mine first!” I yelled in anger to cover my fear. “Hunter Dragoon, Dark Matter attack!” Ryu activated his skill and created a black hole.

How did this begin? It started this morning. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! My alarm rang at six thirty, and hour after I woke up.

“Hey mom my tournament’s today, and Shane told me to come early. His uncle is also making our whole team breakfast.” I explained. “At Six-thirty?” She asked.

After two hours of watching TV I started talking. “Hey mom, can I go now? The tournament starts in two hours.” She starts talking too.
“OK, but if they aren’t awake come home.” She told me. “OK, thanks.” I said as I ran out the door.
Shane’s house isn't that far away from mine and Joey and Ken live across the street from me. When I got to Shane’s house there was amazing a feast of bacon, sausage, waffles, and eggs. For the next hour we talked about who we thought would be there and what beys they will use. Shaun told us to get in the car because the tournament was an hour away, but we were lucky because we were only an hour away.

We got there ten minutes early and got signed up really fast. “Would team Dragon Blade and Team Star Knights report to Stadium One?” The intercom blared, we were Team Star Knights. We walked to the first stadium, an extra-large Zero-G stadium.

Joey went first and surprisingly lost his battle, Shane went next and won faster than I could understand what was happening.

It was my turn."Hi, I'm Ryu."He greeted me happily. “Three, two, one, let it shoot!” Our word mixed as we said different things. The beys hit the stadium floor, and his bey stayed in the same place while mine attacked like mad. Paladin Nemian finally bashed his bey. So now you understand what’s happened up until now.

Sorry for Quadruple posting.

Maybe kinda like this? This was just quick. Look at my story for an example. Its in my signature.

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Nemean avoided the dragonic bey.
“Feel my wrath, fool!” Ryu shouted in glee.

“I won’t unless you feel mine first!” I yelled in anger to cover my fear. “Hunter Dragoon, Dark Matter attack!” Ryu activated his skill and created a black hole.

How did this begin? It started this morning. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! My alarm rang at six thirty, and hour after I woke up.

“Hey mom my tournament’s today, and Shane told me to come early. His uncle is also making our whole team breakfast.” I explained. “At Six-thirty?” She asked.

After two hours of watching TV I started talking. “Hey mom, can I go now? The tournament starts in two hours.” She starts talking too.
“OK, but if they aren’t awake come home.” She told me. “OK, thanks.” I said as I ran out the door.
Shane’s house isn't that far away from mine and Joey and Ken live across the street from me. When I got to Shane’s house there was amazing a feast of bacon, sausage, waffles, and eggs. For the next hour we talked about who we thought would be there and what beys they will use. Shaun told us to get in the car because the tournament was an hour away, but we were lucky because we were only an hour away.

We got there ten minutes early and got signed up really fast. “Would team Dragon Blade and Team Star Knights report to Stadium One?” The intercom blared, we were Team Star Knights. We walked to the first stadium, an extra-large Zero-G stadium.

Joey went first and surprisingly lost his battle, Shane went next and won faster than I could understand what was happening.

It was my turn."Hi, I'm Ryu."He greeted me happily. “Three, two, one, let it shoot!” Our word mixed as we said different things. The beys hit the stadium floor, and his bey stayed in the same place while mine attacked like mad. Paladin Nemian finally bashed his bey. So now you understand what’s happened up until now.

Sorry for Quadruple posting.

Maybe kinda like this? This was just quick. Look at my story for an example. Its in my signature.

I'll try that, thanks.

Nice chapter, as usual!

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Nice chapter, as usual!

Thanks, I'm thinking of Chapter 11, there will be 16 more chapters before it ends.

Nice chapter, as usual!

Thanks, I'm thinking of Chapter 11, there will be 16 more chapters before it ends.

Can't wait for my character to be in action again, lol. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter,
KIU

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Nice chapter, as usual!

Thanks, I'm thinking of Chapter 11, there will be 16 more chapters before it ends.

Can't wait for my character to be in action again, lol. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter,
KIU

Hiro and Emi will make an appearance, in fact there will be an episode in Hiro's POV.

Sorry for double-posting, but Chapter 11 is in the OP.

EPIC story, Akio. Out of all the stories I've read on this site, Your's is DEFENATELY in the top 5.

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EPIC story, Akio. Out of all the stories I've read on this site, Your's is DEFINITELY in the top 5.

Wow, that's REALLY nice. *Wink, Wink*

Chapter 12 is up. (Sorry for Double-Posting)

Hah, is the name "synchronize smash" – based off of an old story of mine? Lol if you dun know what I am talking about look it up. ANYWAYS great chapter.

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Hah, is the name "synchronize smash" – based off of an old story of mine? Lol if you dun know what I am talking about look it up. ANYWAYS great chapter.

Actually, I think it's based of of a show, I can somewhat remember a character say "Sychrome Smash!" I also thought it sounded cool.

WARNING: DOUBLE-POST Chapter 12 is up.

Sorry for triple-posting, but Chapter 14 is up.

Chapter 15 is up! I am very sorry for quadruple-posting.

After a long hiatus, Chapter 16 is up
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“Will Team Z-Force and Team Star Knights come to Stadium A?” The man on the intercom announced. “Z-Force? That’s the team my big brother had a hard time with,” Joey said with an ounce of fear. “They are going to trounce us,” His eyes wide. “Come on Joey. We’re a good team, right?” I tried to calm him. “Is Team Star Knights in the building?” We ran to the stadium, our order was Joey and Shane, and then me. “Three, Two, One, Go Shoot!” Joey and Ventus, a member of Z-force were off .
The beys fought, but in a calm, gentle way. “You look familiar, kid.” Ventus said coolly. Joey replied quickly, he’s nervous. “Y-Y-Yeah, my brother is the Italy champion.” Ventus looked confused. “His name’s Ryan, right?” Joey focused on the battle “Ren… His name is Ren.” Joey’s Nocturne slammed into Ventus’s SpartanTrioW230SGS making it fly with its winged track
“Nocturne! Nocturnal Vortex!” “Trio, Skill Block!” Ventus used a move that made Joey’s Nocturne slow. But Joey fought against it, and it was just too much for him. He fell on the ground by the agony of his Psychic power being nullified. He lost seconds later as his bey was launched from the stadium.
Shane’s turn, he somehow beat the opponent with a skillful launch.
My opponent was a guy named Daisuke, his bey was called TemplarMinosH145CWD. “Three, Two, One, Let It Rip!” We shouted in unison. I was the last hope for the team; I’d be the deciding factor of our win or loss.
“Nemean, go!” Nemean bashed against his Minos, again and again. Not seeming to do anything to his beyblade, I’d have to think of something, and fast. CLINK! CLINK CLINK! His bey pushed at Nemean, doing a ton of damage to my bey. Nemean almost went in the pocket, but I did not feel like losing today. A grin showed on Daisuke’s face, “Minos,CHARGE!” And Minos did charge, it pushed Nemean almost into the pocket. “NO! NO! NO! NEMEAN! TELEPORT SMASH!” I screamed, using my skill with as much power as I possibly could. But it was a feeble attempt, as I lost soon after.
“Kazuki, that was amazing!” Emi congratulated me, and I could’ve sworn that Hiro gave me a Thumbs-Up.

Bey: Dark Knight Percy 230 W4D
name: Yuki-San
Age: Is 5 but looks, acts, and has the intelligence of a 18 year old.
Gender: Female
Skill: Assaulting any body carrying a bey she sees on the street for training, which she easily does stealthed, and also interupting matches with extremley strong characters, which she would most likely do to your battle with Daisuke and instantly get you both a stadium out, but then keep showing off when bey-police try to join the battle and arrest her by defeating her, untill the stadium is completley destroyed and she dispears in the mist of the night
Bio: Although she is a girl- who also turns out to he the daughter of Whales and Sophie, she is very serious, evil, and power hungry- like a younger female version of Ryuga from Metal Fusion. Always will battle anything, anywhere, anyway. Although her bey isn't really dark like destroyer, she got the darkness from her parents. When Whales and Sophie were in a battle with Tsubasa and Yu. Although they never unleashed the darkness, Yuki got it genetically- which never can go away.
Bey Description: Is the Zero-G version of Gravity Destroyer. Like destroyer it can spin left and right and has a great balance of defense and attack , but instead of using Darkness it uses water. It is Percy Jackson, instead of perceus from clash of titans.
Special Move: Grand Escaliver: The whole stadium turns into a whirlpool, and percy smashes his sword through the middle, which can cut beys in half.
Modes: Percy has two modes, which can be switched by flipping the metal wheel. Lock-On Mode: contains full out attack power( which is frickin awesome!!), is way better for 1 on 1 battles and has accurate that is almost perfect in one on one battles making doing tricks and special moves alot eaiser. Discharge Mode: Is extremley not recommended for 1 on 1 battles, but in any battle where there is more than one oponent, it can have the same effect as Lock-On mode in 1 on 1. It also may shoot projectiles in every direction if a foe isn't going to come in it's way for long enough- such as moments where normal beyblades need to slide shoot or they will lose.

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Bey: Dark Knight Percy 230 W4D
name: Yuki-San
Age: Is 5 but looks, acts, and has the intelligence of a 18 year old.
Gender: Female
Skill: Assaulting anybody carrying a bey she sees on the street for training, which she easily does stealthed, and also interrupting matches with extremely strong characters, which she would most likely do to your battle with Daisuke and instantly get you both a stadium out, but then keep showing off when bey-police try to join the battle and arrest her by defeating her, until the stadium is completely destroyed and she disapears in the mist of the night
Bio: Although she is a girl- who also turns out to he the daughter of Whales and Sophie, she is very serious, evil, and power hungry- like a younger female version of Ryuga from Metal Fusion. Always will battle anything, anywhere, anyway. Although her bey isn't really dark like destroyer, she got the darkness from her parents. When Whales and Sophie were in a battle with Tsubasa and Yu. Although they never unleashed the darkness, Yuki got it genetically- which never can go away.
Bey Description: Is the Zero-G version of Gravity Destroyer. Like destroyer it can spin left and right and has a great balance of defense and attack , but instead of using Darkness it uses water. It is Percy Jackson, instead of Perseus from clash of titans.
Special Move: Grand Escaliver: The whole stadium turns into a whirlpool, and Percy smashes his sword through the middle, which can cut beys in half.
Modes: Percy has two modes, which can be switched by flipping the metal wheel. Lock-On Mode: contains full out attack power( which is frickin' awesome!!), is way better for 1 on 1 battles and has accurate that is almost perfect in one on one battles making doing tricks and special moves a lot easier. Discharge Mode: Is extremely not recommended for 1 on 1 battles, but in any battle where there is more than one opponent, it can have the same effect as Lock-On mode in 1 on 1. It also may shoot projectiles in every direction if a foe isn't going to come in it's way for long enough- such as moments where normal beyblades need to slide shoot or they will lose.

I really don't want her bey to be Percy Jackson, in my eyes that seems a bit close to copyright infringement and bad writing. But Dark Knight Perzeus sounds cool. I don't like using other people's intellectual properties, hence the reason I changed Neku and Shiki's names to Hiro and Emi. Yuki could nickname her bey Percy because she has trouble saying Perzeus. Thanks for the character request, it's pretty good. Maybe she could be gifted and hates when people treat her like she's a kid. A skill is a psychic power, like telekinesis or Clairvoyance.
I'll try and introduce her in the next chapter.

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Bey: Dark Knight Percy 230 W4D
name: Yuki-San
Age: Is 5 but looks, acts, and has the intelligence of a 18 year old.
Gender: Female
Skill: Assaulting anybody carrying a bey she sees on the street for training, which she easily does stealthed, and also interrupting matches with extremely strong characters, which she would most likely do to your battle with Daisuke and instantly get you both a stadium out, but then keep showing off when bey-police try to join the battle and arrest her by defeating her, until the stadium is completely destroyed and she disapears in the mist of the night
Bio: Although she is a girl- who also turns out to he the daughter of Whales and Sophie, she is very serious, evil, and power hungry- like a younger female version of Ryuga from Metal Fusion. Always will battle anything, anywhere, anyway. Although her bey isn't really dark like destroyer, she got the darkness from her parents. When Whales and Sophie were in a battle with Tsubasa and Yu. Although they never unleashed the darkness, Yuki got it genetically- which never can go away.
Bey Description: Is the Zero-G version of Gravity Destroyer. Like destroyer it can spin left and right and has a great balance of defense and attack , but instead of using Darkness it uses water. It is Percy Jackson, instead of Perseus from clash of titans.
Special Move: Grand Escaliver: The whole stadium turns into a whirlpool, and Percy smashes his sword through the middle, which can cut beys in half.
Modes: Percy has two modes, which can be switched by flipping the metal wheel. Lock-On Mode: contains full out attack power( which is frickin' awesome!!), is way better for 1 on 1 battles and has accurate that is almost perfect in one on one battles making doing tricks and special moves a lot easier. Discharge Mode: Is extremely not recommended for 1 on 1 battles, but in any battle where there is more than one opponent, it can have the same effect as Lock-On mode in 1 on 1. It also may shoot projectiles in every direction if a foe isn't going to come in it's way for long enough- such as moments where normal beyblades need to slide shoot or they will lose.

I really don't want her bey to be Percy Jackson, in my eyes that seems a bit close to copyright infringement and bad writing. But Dark Knight Perzeus sounds cool. I don't like using other people's intellectual properties, hence the reason I changed Neku and Shiki's names to Hiro and Emi. Yuki could nickname her bey Percy because she has trouble saying Perzeus. Thanks for the character request, it's pretty good. Maybe she could be gifted and hates when people treat her like she's a kid. A skill is a psychic power, like telekinesis or Clairvoyance.
I'll try and introduce her in the next chapter.

Thanks for considering adding her, it's the first story of mine ever considered xD I don't have any experience with zerog, so I made it Percy Jackson because I thought it had to be different then MFB energy rings. Then I found out there was a samurai Pegasus (xD)
What do you mean physical power? She's not magic.. But I'll guess and say she can teleport and likes to do it the second they aren't looking.
Btw, I made her evil and overpowered because there is almost no evil Villian who is also over powered that is capable of being the bad guy in the final battle ( the one ginka always wins that losing would destroy everything). Her skill is also making herself look older in a way that can't really be token from her.
Also, she should like really lose her temper when she gets treated like a kid. Remember, she looks, acts, talks, and has the inteligence of a 18 year old so not really anyone knows her secret except for people around where she lives that know her for her criminal acts of assaulting innocent bladers. ( you can decide where she lives xD. ), but where she lives she gets the respect of an 18 year old because they know what she will do to them if she doesn't, and people who don't live close to her have no idea she is 5 years old, making it nearly impossible to detect it except for the fact that she sometimes does weird 5 year old things, but even that isn't really enough to stop her. Btw, she may be a baby but she is NOT a crybaby, and she can definantly take care of herself. Oh last thing, please note this. There should be a scene where she falls in love with some guy who is like 16 or something. Then he asks her out and then she's like. " Oh... That's nice but... I can't. z_z" then he's all like "Why? Are you taken am I... not that good looking? " He took a moment to try and tidy up his clothes. " Well uh... I'm sort of 5 years old. " Then he's all like " ._. ............ what the hell." That would be hilarious xD

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What. That makes close to no sense. I said Psychic power, not physical power. that's all I can say right now

Name: Firestar
Bey: Fire cat C145S
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Skill: Longtail (Bey knocks severeal times in to the apponent causing it to lose its balance severly) Cat appears with long tail lashing its tail.
Bio: Fire star has a strange appearnce for he looks like a cat. He has long red hair. Hi is qiute tall. He has many ctas that follow him every where. He has a cat that always is on his shoulder named Brambleclaw. He has no friends and finds it hard to make friends.
Bey Description: Fire colored with cat as face bolt. Small spikes apering as cat claws on the Chrome wheel.

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can I be the last person with a 4d beyblade to exist?

Name: Firestar
Bey: Fire cat C145S
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Skill: Longtail (Bey knocks severeal times in to the apponent causing it to lose its balance severly) Cat appears with long tail lashing its tail.
Bio: Fire star has a strange appearnce for he looks like a cat. He has long red hair. Hi is qiute tall. He has many ctas that follow him every where. He has a cat that always is on his shoulder named Brambleclaw. He has no friends and finds it hard to make friends.
Bey Description: Fire colored with cat as face bolt. Small spikes apering as cat claws on the Chrome wheel.

I really should get working on more chapters, though if I wanted to I could never make another chapter again. Maybe after I get my Podcast up and running. Maybe.
Good character, he's going on Yuki's team for lack of idea. I might change the skill though, as that's quirky.

can I be the last person with a 4d beyblade to exist?

You being?

Trent

bey: duo serpent w145 swd

description: always wears a black shirt and tan pants. he also predicts his opponent's moves correctly all the time; he does not say a word about his power. he is 11.

bio: Trent's story is very similar to Chris's story. he was born in a town where beyblades thrived. Trent was the strongest in the town; nobody wanted to battle him. The town still considered Brad, the previous strongest blader, the strongest. One day, he saw what happened to Chris, an they instantly became friends. about 2 years after the friendship started, Chris was nowhere to be seen, and assumed that I would no longer be his friend. so he started being a blader for hire. 1 year after the Nemesis crisis, Trent found Chris again, wondering where he went, and informed Chris that he was still his friend, and told him that he had a similar story, and was neglected. that leads up to here your story occurs, when Trent and Chris meet Kazuki.

friends with main character and his friends, best friends with chris.

bey description- the only bey that did not evolve into a zero g one, along with Phantom Orion. Duo Serpent and Phantom Orion will never change. Trent's special move is irregular swipe ( when changed into attack mode) and serpent dodge ( in stamina mode). Chris's special move is still Barnard's Loop

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Three children and twelve felines walk away from their home silently, now a pile of charred rubble. There was a nineteen-year-old male, two twelve-year-old boys, a five-year-old girl, and eleven cats. They were the few survivors of the citywide arson.
The perpetrator fought the top blader in the country, won, then suddenly buildings fell and the city was set aflame. These kids were living in an orphanage when it happened. The boys watched in awe as the Beyblades clashed and clanged, and the girl was training against twelve older kids.
Their town is known as “The city of Beyblade” due to the city’s unrivaled reputation since the time of the Beigoma. These kids were no different than anyone else, but they each had special gifts.
These gifts have been popularized as “Skills”, and they come from radiation and a certain phase of the mind which can only happen during this radiation, resulting in certain psychic power.
The kids were the only ones who had these, except for a young adult who was exposed to this radiation with many kittens around him. These kittens have been shown to live a very long time. This young man saved the kids.
He had excellent agility for an average-sized human, almost catlike. His given name was Max, but it is now Firecat He had been kidnapped at an extremely young age; he had escaped and found a Beyblade Brawler Chimera, and his eleven cats that he has lived with.
The two boys were named Trent and Alec. They are the strongest bladers under eighteen. They were friends before they went to the orphanage. They had each been required to learn how to Beyblade from an old hermit, as they would need those abilities to live.
The girl was Yuki, a gifted five-year-old with a severe lack of playfulness. She went to the orphanage at age two; she cannot remember anything before this time.
Eventually they decided they would try to win the Beyblade National tournament, and then go to Worlds. Each one was as skilled as the last, with each being good at one type of Beyblade.
“I’ve got three-hundred dollars for this year of street-performing. Maybe we could pool our money for a hotel?” Firecat said exhaustedly.
“I’ve got one-hundred from bets.” Yuki said, still slightly crying.
“We’ve got two-hundred from jobs.” Alec said quietly.
“How did you kids get so much?” Firecat questioned.
The sun set minutes later, and they slept in a small inn on the outer edge of a mountain.