I'm not done and It needs a name after youve read it please sugest a name.Like it or don't.

Chapter one:That Boy and WILLIAM

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“HEY GET OUT OF HERE! NOW!” Shouts That Boy you know That Boy, his name is That and his second name is Boy.
“I’m moving I’m moving I’M MOVING!”Shouts William As Loud As He Can Shout.
Ya'll know William As Load As He Can Shout like That Boy. Well anyway Harris just happen’ to be in town and he just happen’ to be tired and he ju- UH there I am going off again and making all that nonsense. Let’s get back to the story well Harris just happen’ to be in town so he stopped by William As Loud As He Can Shout's house (from now on we call him WILLIAM) WILLIAM and That(And I’m not joking about the caps)rushed down the stairs and jumped on to the banister and jumped on to the table and jumped on to the sofa and jumped right in front of the door and slammed open the door because it was LASHING rain.They realy didn't want Harris to get wet but Harris wasn't wet he was as dry.
"OWW!"That Shouted as Harris pushed him on to the floor.
"What'd you do that for?"This time That was angry.
"Suprise!"Harris shouted back."HAPPY BIRTHDAY!"
"Eh Harris I dont know if you know this or not but my birthday was five months ago."
"Oh well better just keep the present for myself!"
"Oy you two stop fighting!NOW!"

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Trying to get to grips with the new stuff after taking an eight year break from the franchise  :D

i don't understand
what is the point of all of this

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How do I still have 17th most posts here...?

There are many grammitical errors. Plus the first chapter is WAY to short. Please fix those mistakes, if you can. Plus I don't get it. What is the point of this?

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I Have No Idea What I'm Doing With My Life Right Now

i don't understand
what is the point of all of this

Its a nonsens story filled with nonsense and fun but it will get bigger.

and

There are many grammitical errors. Plus the first chapter is WAY to short. Please fix those mistakes, if you can.

Ill try and fix them and by the way ya is is meant to be ya and like I said it will get bigger.It seemed much bigger on word......

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Trying to get to grips with the new stuff after taking an eight year break from the franchise  :D

Meh, this story, so many..... , it's just ......., basically what Rai and Ozone said.

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still posi

... So that boy's name isn't capitalized?

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This is what we all want, Brad.

Yeah, I probably shouldn't have put this up here-I wrote it straight off the top of my head without planning and without editing.
Do any of you know a good site with advice on how to write good stories?
I've fixed most of the mistakes hope you enjoy!
I've also included more.
I realy hope its made it better.

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Trying to get to grips with the new stuff after taking an eight year break from the franchise  :D

No offense but, this story is bad. Even if you fixed the errors, it makes no since. There's no plot, good storyline, or good dialog. Please try coming up with a good story before you go and write one all crazy like this one. I suggest you practice writing in real life before you come and post a random story on here. No offense.

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I Have No Idea What I'm Doing With My Life Right Now

I liked it,But i don't know why

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I liked it,But i don't know why

Oh, I liked it cus of the names and the part where he jumps around

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Kye#4 gave this signature to me:O

I liked it,But i don't know why

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I liked it,But i don't know why

Oh, I liked it cus of the names and the part where he jumps around

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I don't think Ill continue this but I WILL make other stories and I can tell you the'll be 100% better.They'll have a plot and trix and everything!!!!!
Oh and should I do it from the charecters point of view or mine?say yes or no

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Trying to get to grips with the new stuff after taking an eight year break from the franchise  :D