yup because he is outgoing but no one knows that he is one of the best bladers

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Great story. Can't wait till the next chapter comes.

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

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When my bey stop spinning
In Time

hey kid keep going dont give up little kid and you can make money with that story maybe

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Proud member of team Big Bang Fury

hey kid keep going dont give up little kid and you can make money with that story maybe

dude really-___-...
what do you mean little kid!I am one year younger than you!

I think that the plot is great, but you really should try to use less speech. *Show, don't tell.

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GFX SHOP

I think that the plot is great, but you really should try to use less speech. *Show, don't tell.

Ok I will!Chapter 6 will be added later on the day!some pics too maybe late night!

Great story bro

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Your improving really fast just like your beyblading skills

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Great story bro

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Your improving really fast just like your beyblading skills

Thanks!

In chapter 6 you put Thunder Fox. Need to fix that. Other then that it's great!

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Proud Leader of Team Chaos Universe

My stories:

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When my bey stop spinning
In Time

In chapter 6 you put Thunder Fox. Need to fix that. Other then that it's great!

Oh really!I didn't notice thanks!!!

It's great

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I can't do another chapter if I don't get another character!
Beychamp76:I will do your character drawing soon!

character request
name:Chris Roland
bey:Grand Cetus WD145 RS
looksverything blue or white(clothes,eyes,hair,bandana,)
personality:He believes he is one with the ocean and will say it countless times, he will go to help or destroy anyone he feels to
Special Move:WAVE DEFENSE(water spins with left rotation around the bey preventing a hit to cetus and lowering the attacks stamina)WATER WAVE STRIKE(water turns into the whape or a narwhals horn and cetus slams into the other bey

character request
Name:Ryan
Age:12
bey:L drago Destroy LW160CF
looks:Black hair with a white sleeve black jacket with blue jeans and black sneakers with light skin
personality:Mysterious and he dont like to pick on the weak as he dont fight pointless battles and destroy whatever bey that challenge him he loves blading but can be kind if he wanted too but he only seeks out to beat every strong blader and declare himself the only true strongest blader
special move: Emeror death grip

Your story improving spark

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character request
Name:Ryan
Age:12
bey:L drago Destroy LW160CF
looks:Black hair with a white sleeve black jacket with blue jeans and black sneakers with light skin
personality:Mysterious and he dont like to pick on the weak as he dont fight pointless battles and destroy whatever bey that challenge him he loves blading but can be kind if he wanted too but he only seeks out to beat every strong blader and declare himself the only true strongest blader
special move: Emeror death grip

Your story improving spark

Thanks I will do your character like in chapter 8 or 9!after beatfox character...

sorry guys i haven't been doing the chapters... but tomorrow i will do chapter 7 and 8!and some new pics of characters will be added tomorrow!

The story is good.Although it still needs a little more work!

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I like this chapter alot but i did not expect you to make chris bad but im fine with it

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG

I like this chapter alot but i did not expect you to make chris bad but im fine with it

i just wanted to make a twist in the story!specially since no one has seen Aiden and Keenan beyblades or their background story...

i understand its all good, i guess we cant expect to know whats next in ur story

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THIS SIG AND AVATAR IS FROM THE GREAT (BESTLEONEBLADE) HE DESERVES ALL CREDIT BECAUSE I WOULD DUCK AT TRYING TO MAKE A SIG

nice story. interesting beys.

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Proud leader of Team Tempo Twisters!(powered by Chaos Universe)

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HORRAY FOR THE RESIZE BUTTON THINGY!credit to Insomniac for the sig.

nice story. interesting beys.

Check out the drawings at the top of the first post

leom reminds e of leon from beywheelz

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Proud leader of Team Tempo Twisters!(powered by Chaos Universe)

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HORRAY FOR THE RESIZE BUTTON THINGY!credit to Insomniac for the sig.

leom reminds e of leon from beywheelz

I know right!!!but I did this drawing 2 years ago when it was summer vacation and I was about to go to 8 grade!*its just weird*...I kinda fixed the drawing a bit from how it was before I changed where the launcher and beyblade is.

Cool drawings

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