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My Series: The Legend of Amaterious

Jan. 10, 2019  2:14 AM
 
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:08 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 13: The Finale

Spoiler (Click to View)
Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!

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Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
Jan. 10, 2019  2:30 AM
 
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:08 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
Lol it is
Jan. 10, 2019  2:35 AM
 
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:30 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Yes and you just had to do that many spoilers :p
Lol it is

I wanted to hide the answer so that someone who didn’t want to see it could turn away
Jan. 10, 2019  2:36 AM
 
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:35 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2019  2:30 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Lol it is

I wanted to hide the answer so that someone who didn’t want to see it could turn away

I mean The Answer it is
Jan. 13, 2019  3:21 AM
 
Cool story
Jan. 13, 2019  3:24 AM
 
(Jan. 13, 2019  3:21 AM)BeybladeislifeX Wrote: Cool story

Thank youSmile
Jan. 14, 2019  2:04 AM
 
Yo welcome
Jan. 15, 2019  9:45 PM
 
I summon the story critic!
Jan. 15, 2019  10:59 PM
 
Originality: It has an original plot, and it is more unique than most stories. 9/10

Plot: The plot is certainly original, but it isn’t the best plot ever. It focuses more on being flashy and quantity over quality. 5/10

Enjoyability: It is somewhat enjoyable, but it is very short and prizes quantity over quality. 6/10

Overall:
Originality: 9/10
Plot: 5/10
Enjoyability: 6/10
Average: 20/30 or 6.3/10
Jan. 15, 2019  11:00 PM
 
(Jan. 15, 2019  10:59 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Originality: It has an original plot, and it is more unique than most stories. 9/10

Plot: The plot is certainly original, but it isn’t the best plot ever. It focuses more on being flashy and quantity over quality. 5/10

Enjoyability: It is somewhat enjoyable, but it is very short and prizes quantity over quality. 6/10

Overall:
Originality: 9/10
Plot: 5/10
Enjoyability: 6/10
Average: 20/30 or 6.3/10

Yay?
Feb. 17, 2019  10:53 PM
 
CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?
Feb. 17, 2019  10:55 PM
 
(Feb. 17, 2019  10:53 PM)Red phi Wrote: CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?

PM me
Feb. 17, 2019  10:56 PM
 
(Feb. 17, 2019  10:55 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2019  10:53 PM)Red phi Wrote: CheetoBlader can you make a story about my own beyblade?

PM me

Ok
Jul. 01, 2019  3:18 AM
 
Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.
Jul. 01, 2019  3:20 AM
 
(Jul. 01, 2019  3:18 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.

It ended and I’m not really happy about my work.
Jul. 08, 2019  12:23 AM
 
(Jul. 01, 2019  3:20 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Jul. 01, 2019  3:18 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Does this still exist? It seems like the thread has been inactive for a long time.

It ended and I’m not really happy about my work.

You shouldn't be sad about your work! I liked this series a lot!
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