World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.

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@[Dt20000] I took your advice and made my own story
(Jan. 03, 2019  12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]@[Dt20000] I took your advice and made my own story

Where is it?
Chapter 1: The Creation


Chapter 2: A New Owner


(Jan. 03, 2019  12:35 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 03, 2019  12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]@[Dt20000] I took your advice and made my own story

Where is it?

Right above this post
(Jan. 03, 2019  12:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1: The Creation


Chapter 2: A New Owner


(Jan. 03, 2019  12:35 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]Where is it?

Right above this post

Can you please stop editing your post? Every time you do that I get an alert. Nice story though.
(Jan. 03, 2019  3:24 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 03, 2019  12:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1: The Creation


Chapter 2: A New Owner



Right above this post

Can you please stop editing your post? Every time you do that I get an alert. Nice story though.

Thank you I didn’t realize that though
Chapter 3: The Tournament Part 1

(Jan. 04, 2019  2:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 3: The Tournament Part 1

[Spolier] “Andy! Wake up! You’ll be late for the tournament!” Andy’s dad yelled. “Wha... OH yeah the tournament! I’ll be down in a minute dad!” Andy rushed down the stairs and quickly ate his toast with a little butter on it.” “I’ll be in the car Andy!” Andy’s dad yelled “I’m coming!” While rushing out the front door. 10 minutes later they arrive  at the tournament. They registered and then waited for the tournament to begin. 15 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Oliver Kennington. “I’ll take you down!” Oliver exclaimed. “Sure you will” Andy sarcastically said.   3...2...1... Let It Rip!

...To Be Continued [/spoiler]

You spelled spoiler wrong
(Jan. 04, 2019  2:43 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 04, 2019  2:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 3: The Tournament Part 1

[Spolier] “Andy! Wake up! You’ll be late for the tournament!” Andy’s dad yelled. “Wha... OH yeah the tournament! I’ll be down in a minute dad!” Andy rushed down the stairs and quickly ate his toast with a little butter on it.” “I’ll be in the car Andy!” Andy’s dad yelled “I’m coming!” While rushing out the front door. 10 minutes later they arrive  at the tournament. They registered and then waited for the tournament to begin. 15 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Oliver Kennington. “I’ll take you down!” Oliver exclaimed. “Sure you will” Andy sarcastically said.   3...2...1... Let It Rip!

...To Be Continued [/spoiler]

You spelled spoiler wrong
That’s why it wasn’t working thank you

Chapter 4: The Tournament Part 2


Chapter 5: The Tournament Part 3

   @[Dt20000] do you like these
(Jan. 04, 2019  2:44 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 04, 2019  2:43 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]You spelled spoiler wrong
That’s why it wasn’t working thank you

Chapter 4: The Tournament Part 2


Chapter 5: The Tournament Part 3

   @[Dt20000] do you like these

They are short but yes
I like to sudgest uhm please make another new beyblade character with mew beyblade

NEw I mean
(Jan. 04, 2019  6:48 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 04, 2019  2:44 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]That’s why it wasn’t working thank you

Chapter 4: The Tournament Part 2


Chapter 5: The Tournament Part 3

   @[Dt20000] do you like these

They are short but yes

I want them to be short so I can write more but thank you

(Jan. 04, 2019  8:09 AM)Al Edison Wrote: [ -> ]I like to sudgest  uhm please make another  new beyblade character with mew beyblade

NEw I mean

In my next series

Chapter 6: The Tournament Part 4


Chapter 7: The Tournament Part 5

Chapter 8: The Tournament Part 6


@[Dt20000] do you like these chapters?(6-8)
Too short but the story was nice!
(Jan. 05, 2019  11:08 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 8: The Tournament Part 6


@[Dt20000] do you like these chapters?(6-8)

Yep but they are pretty short and I’m pretty sure Akira is a boy
Uh question are you talking about the original amaterios or Shining/shadow amaterios?
Wow I mean its short but he is all ways wining its like watching agia but other then that its a great story
(Jan. 06, 2019  6:12 PM)Oylspil Wrote: [ -> ]Uh question are you talking about the original amaterios or Shining/shadow amaterios?

Original for now

(Jan. 06, 2019  4:27 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 05, 2019  11:08 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 8: The Tournament Part 6


@[Dt20000] do you like these chapters?(6-8)

Yep but they are pretty short and I’m pretty sure Akira is a boy

I make them short so I can make more of them but thanks also I fixed she To he because I forgot 

(Jan. 06, 2019  6:17 PM)twin eclipse Wrote: [ -> ]Wow I mean its short but he is all ways wining its like watching agia but other then that its a great story

It is going to lead up to something but thanks

Chapter 9: The Tournament Part 7


Chapter 10: The Tournament Part 8
@[Dt20000] what do you think besides being short
Chapter 11: The Recreation

Nice now us THIS Shining Amaterios?
(Jan. 07, 2019  11:17 PM)Oylspil Wrote: [ -> ]Nice now us THIS Shining Amaterios?

You will have to see
Chapter 12: The Battle Royale

(Jan. 09, 2019  1:40 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12: The Battle Royale


Great story as always!
(Jan. 09, 2019  2:00 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Jan. 09, 2019  1:40 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 12: The Battle Royale


Great story as always!

Thank you
Chapter 13: The Finale

(Jan. 10, 2019  2:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 13: The Finale

Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!

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