My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 03, 2019
@[Dt20000] I took your advice and made my own story
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Dt20000 - Jan. 03, 2019
(Jan. 03, 2019 12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: @[Dt20000] I took your advice and made my own story
Where is it?
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 03, 2019
Chapter 1: The Creation
Deep in a cave 100 years ago the 1st BEYBLADE was being made. “It’s done! Now we must give this to boss!” Said an employee. “This is Amazing! How did you make this! Me and Amaterious will be Ultimate! When is the next Tournament?” Boss said excitedly. “Um... no one else has a BEYBLADE remember.” “Oh yeah. Well maybe next year.
..... to be continued
Chapter 2: A New Owner
In the house of the Jamieson’s a celebration was being held Amaterious was being passed on to a new generation “Can I have the BEYBLADE now dad!” Andy complained. “Fine but you have to promise to take care of Amaterious son.” Andy’s dad said. “Ok ok ok I will take care of Amaterious very well dad!” Andy exclaimed. “Here now go win a tournament”!
...To be continued
(Jan. 03, 2019 12:35 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2019 12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: @[Dt20000] I took your advice and made my own story
Where is it?
Right above this post
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Dt20000 - Jan. 03, 2019
(Jan. 03, 2019 12:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 1: The Creation
Deep in a cave 100 years ago the 1st BEYBLADE was being made. “It’s done! Now we must give this to boss!” Said an employee. “This is Amazing! How did you make this! Me and Amaterious will be Ultimate! When is the next Tournament?” Boss said excitedly. “Um... no one else has a BEYBLADE remember.” “Oh yeah. Well maybe next year.
..... to be continued
Chapter 2: A New Owner
In the house of the Jamieson’s a celebration was being held Amaterious was being passed on to a new generation “Can I have the BEYBLADE now dad!” Andy complained. “Fine but you have to promise to take care of Amaterious son.” Andy’s dad said. “Ok ok ok I will take care of Amaterious very well dad!” Andy exclaimed. “Here now go win a tournament”!
To be continued...
(Jan. 03, 2019 12:35 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Where is it?
Right above this post
Can you please stop editing your post? Every time you do that I get an alert. Nice story though.
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 03, 2019
(Jan. 03, 2019 3:24 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2019 12:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 1: The Creation
Deep in a cave 100 years ago the 1st BEYBLADE was being made. “It’s done! Now we must give this to boss!” Said an employee. “This is Amazing! How did you make this! Me and Amaterious will be Ultimate! When is the next Tournament?” Boss said excitedly. “Um... no one else has a BEYBLADE remember.” “Oh yeah. Well maybe next year.
..... to be continued
Chapter 2: A New Owner
In the house of the Jamieson’s a celebration was being held Amaterious was being passed on to a new generation “Can I have the BEYBLADE now dad!” Andy complained. “Fine but you have to promise to take care of Amaterious son.” Andy’s dad said. “Ok ok ok I will take care of Amaterious very well dad!” Andy exclaimed. “Here now go win a tournament”!
To be continued...
Right above this post
Can you please stop editing your post? Every time you do that I get an alert. Nice story though.
Thank you I didn’t realize that though
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 04, 2019
Chapter 3: The Tournament Part 1
“Andy! Wake up! You’ll be late for the tournament!” Andy’s dad yelled. “Wha... OH yeah the tournament! I’ll be down in a minute dad!” Andy rushed down the stairs and quickly ate his toast with a little butter on it.” “I’ll be in the car Andy!” Andy’s dad yelled “I’m coming!” While rushing out the front door. 10 minutes later they arrive at the tournament. They registered and then waited for the tournament to begin. 15 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Oliver Kennington. “I’ll take you down!” Oliver exclaimed. “Sure you will” Andy sarcastically said. 3...2...1... Let It Rip!
...To Be Continued
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Dt20000 - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 2:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 3: The Tournament Part 1
[Spolier] “Andy! Wake up! You’ll be late for the tournament!” Andy’s dad yelled. “Wha... OH yeah the tournament! I’ll be down in a minute dad!” Andy rushed down the stairs and quickly ate his toast with a little butter on it.” “I’ll be in the car Andy!” Andy’s dad yelled “I’m coming!” While rushing out the front door. 10 minutes later they arrive at the tournament. They registered and then waited for the tournament to begin. 15 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Oliver Kennington. “I’ll take you down!” Oliver exclaimed. “Sure you will” Andy sarcastically said. 3...2...1... Let It Rip!
...To Be Continued [/spoiler]
You spelled spoiler wrong
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 2:43 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 04, 2019 2:42 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 3: The Tournament Part 1
[Spolier] “Andy! Wake up! You’ll be late for the tournament!” Andy’s dad yelled. “Wha... OH yeah the tournament! I’ll be down in a minute dad!” Andy rushed down the stairs and quickly ate his toast with a little butter on it.” “I’ll be in the car Andy!” Andy’s dad yelled “I’m coming!” While rushing out the front door. 10 minutes later they arrive at the tournament. They registered and then waited for the tournament to begin. 15 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Oliver Kennington. “I’ll take you down!” Oliver exclaimed. “Sure you will” Andy sarcastically said. 3...2...1... Let It Rip!
...To Be Continued [/spoiler]
You spelled spoiler wrong That’s why it wasn’t working thank you
Chapter 4: The Tournament Part 2
Oliver’s BEYBLADE was Odax/Odin O2 Down Revolve. Odax took the center and Amaterious started to do a flower pattern rapidly striking Odax until Odax bursted. “Yes! I won!” Andy screamed. Now Andy was in the top 32 of the tournament. 10 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Jimmy Long “I’m gonna win this!” Jimmy said confidently holding his Jormantor J2 Jerk Unite.
...To Be Continued
Chapter 5: The Tournament Part 3
3...2...1... Let It Rip! Amaterious and Jormantor went around the stadium. Amaterious went for an attack smashing Jormantor against the wall making it burst “WHAT!” Jimmy said confused. “What where you saying about winning.” Andy said with a smirk. Jimmy ran away crying. “Yeesh such a crybaby.” Andy said. Now Andy is in the top 16 of the tournament.
... To Be Continued
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Dt20000 - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 2:44 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jan. 04, 2019 2:43 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: You spelled spoiler wrong That’s why it wasn’t working thank you
Chapter 4: The Tournament Part 2
Oliver’s BEYBLADE was Odax/Odin O2 Down Revolve. Odax took the center and Amaterious started to do a flower pattern rapidly striking Odax until Odax bursted. “Yes! I won!” Andy screamed. Now Andy was in the top 32 of the tournament. 10 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Jimmy Long “I’m gonna win this!” Jimmy said confidently holding his Jormantor J2 Jerk Unite.
...To Be Continued
Chapter 5: The Tournament Part 3
3...2...1... Let It Rip! Amaterious and Jormantor went around the stadium. Amaterious went for an attack smashing Jormantor against the wall making it burst “WHAT!” Jimmy said confused. “What where you saying about winning.” Andy said with a smirk. Jimmy ran away crying. “Yeesh such a crybaby.” Andy said. Now Andy is in the top 16 of the tournament.
... To Be Continued
They are short but yes
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Al Edison - Jan. 04, 2019
I like to sudgest uhm please make another new beyblade character with mew beyblade
NEw I mean
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 04, 2019
(Jan. 04, 2019 6:48 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 04, 2019 2:44 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: That’s why it wasn’t working thank you
Chapter 4: The Tournament Part 2
Oliver’s BEYBLADE was Odax/Odin O2 Down Revolve. Odax took the center and Amaterious started to do a flower pattern rapidly striking Odax until Odax bursted. “Yes! I won!” Andy screamed. Now Andy was in the top 32 of the tournament. 10 minutes later Andy’s name was called. His opponent was Jimmy Long “I’m gonna win this!” Jimmy said confidently holding his Jormantor J2 Jerk Unite.
...To Be Continued
Chapter 5: The Tournament Part 3
3...2...1... Let It Rip! Amaterious and Jormantor went around the stadium. Amaterious went for an attack smashing Jormantor against the wall making it burst “WHAT!” Jimmy said confused. “What where you saying about winning.” Andy said with a smirk. Jimmy ran away crying. “Yeesh such a crybaby.” Andy said. Now Andy is in the top 16 of the tournament.
... To Be Continued
They are short but yes
I want them to be short so I can write more but thank you
(Jan. 04, 2019 8:09 AM)Al Edison Wrote: I like to sudgest uhm please make another new beyblade character with mew beyblade
NEw I mean
In my next series
Chapter 6: The Tournament Part 4
Andy started to go to the tournament but then a strange voice came out of nowhere. Andy started to follow the strange voice. When Andy got there he was relieved that it was just a puppet show with a cat and a dog. Then Andy left to go to the tournament. 20 minutes later the tournament began only 8 bladers would make it to the next round. In Andy’s match his opponent had 2 puppets on his hand a cat and a dog then he realized something: that was the puppet kid! “You’re going down.” Andy muttered.
... To Be Continued
Chapter 7: The Tournament Part 5
“You’ll never beat Kerbeus.” Keru said. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Kerbeus took the center while Amaterious charged up for a flurry attack. Kerbeus deflected all of the attacks. Then Amaterious started to wobble eventually Amaterious fell down. “1 point to King Kerbeus for a survivor finish.” Announced the referee. “Throw in the towel already you’ll lose.” Keru said. “No chance!” Andy yelled. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! “Go Amaterious Attack!” Andy screamed. “Chain Defense!” Keru yelled. The BEYBLADES clashed for a while then out of nowhere Kerbeus bursted. “Yeah! I won!” Andy exclaimed. “On to the quarter-finals!”
... To Be Continued
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 05, 2019
Chapter 8: The Tournament Part 6
Andy was listening to the announcements for the matches of the quarter-finals and Andy was up against Akira Yamaoka. “He is going down.” Andy said. The next day Andy arrived at the tournament. “Andy and Akira come to the stadium.” The announcer said. Andy made his way to the Beystadium while Akira cartwheeled on to the stage. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Anubion circled the center. “Go! Attack!” Andy yelled. Amaterious kept on missing but then Amaterious started to go to the edge (tornado ridge). Then Amaterious started to pick up massive speed. “Go Assault Strike!” Andy yelled. Amaterious attacked Anubion and easily bursted it. Fans of Akira in the audience started crying. “On to the Semi-Finals!” Andy yelled.
...To Be Continued
@[Dt20000] do you like these chapters?(6-8)
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Al Edison - Jan. 06, 2019
Too short but the story was nice!
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Dt20000 - Jan. 06, 2019
(Jan. 05, 2019 11:08 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 8: The Tournament Part 6
Andy was listening to the announcements for the matches of the quarter-finals and Andy was up against Akira Yamaoka. “She’s going down.” Andy said. The next day Andy arrived at the tournament. “Andy and Akira come to the stadium.” The announcer said. Andy made his way to the Beystadium while Akira cartwheeled on to the stage. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Anubion circled the center. “Go! Attack!” Andy yelled. Amaterious kept on missing but then Amaterious started to go to the edge (tornado ridge). Then Amaterious started to pick up massive speed. “Go Assault Strike!” Andy yelled. Amaterious attacked Anubion and easily bursted it. Fans of Akira in the audience started crying. “On to the Semi-Finals!” Andy yelled.
...To Be Continued
@[Dt20000] do you like these chapters?(6-8)
Yep but they are pretty short and I’m pretty sure Akira is a boy
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Oylspil - Jan. 06, 2019
Uh question are you talking about the original amaterios or Shining/shadow amaterios?
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - twin eclipse - Jan. 06, 2019
Wow I mean its short but he is all ways wining its like watching agia but other then that its a great story
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 06, 2019
(Jan. 06, 2019 6:12 PM)Oylspil Wrote: Uh question are you talking about the original amaterios or Shining/shadow amaterios?
Original for now
(Jan. 06, 2019 4:27 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jan. 05, 2019 11:08 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 8: The Tournament Part 6
Andy was listening to the announcements for the matches of the quarter-finals and Andy was up against Akira Yamaoka. “She’s going down.” Andy said. The next day Andy arrived at the tournament. “Andy and Akira come to the stadium.” The announcer said. Andy made his way to the Beystadium while Akira cartwheeled on to the stage. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Anubion circled the center. “Go! Attack!” Andy yelled. Amaterious kept on missing but then Amaterious started to go to the edge (tornado ridge). Then Amaterious started to pick up massive speed. “Go Assault Strike!” Andy yelled. Amaterious attacked Anubion and easily bursted it. Fans of Akira in the audience started crying. “On to the Semi-Finals!” Andy yelled.
...To Be Continued
@[Dt20000] do you like these chapters?(6-8)
Yep but they are pretty short and I’m pretty sure Akira is a boy
I make them short so I can make more of them but thanks also I fixed she To he because I forgot
(Jan. 06, 2019 6:17 PM)twin eclipse Wrote: Wow I mean its short but he is all ways wining its like watching agia but other then that its a great story
It is going to lead up to something but thanks
Chapter 9: The Tournament Part 7
The Semifinals started almost immediately after the quarterfinals. “The matches in the Semifinals are Andy VS Xander and Lui VS Orochi!” Announced The announcer. Lui easily beat Orochi. Now Xander and Andy please come to the stadium. “So you’re the one everyone is talking about.” Xander said. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Xcalius zoomed towards Amaterious “Saber Strike!” Xander yelled. Amaterious flew out of the stadium. “1 Point To Xeno Xcalius. 1-0. The announcer said. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Both BEYBLADES zoomed towards the center making a huge Explosion causing the stadium to shatter. Amaterious flew on to the top of the wall while Xcalius stayed in the stadium. Amaterious went around to the isolated part of the stadium. “Go Amaterious dive down!” Andy yelled. Amaterious attacked Xcalius knocking Xcalius between the cracks of the stadium. Xcalius bounced around trying to escape eventually bursting. “I won! Time to take down Lui!” Andy exclaimed.
... To Be Continued
Chapter 10: The Tournament Part 8
“Andy and Lui please come to the NEW stadium.” The announcer said. “I’m going to win.” Lui said. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Luinor Striked Amaterious making Amaterious burst. “You’re lucky it’s to 3 points.” Lui said. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Luinor tried to go straight to Amaterious but Amaterious dodged the attack and Luinor flew up the slope flying out of the stadium. “You got lucky.” Lui said. 3...2...1...Let It Rip! Amaterious and Luinor rapidly attacked each other Luinor was taking a lot of damage while Amaterious was secretly cracking but staying strong. “Finish it!” Andy yelled. Amaterious striked Luinor making Luinor burst but 5 seconds later Amaterious shattered. “Amaterious! No!” Andy screamed.” Andy is the Winner of this tournament!” The announcer said.
...To Be Continued
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 07, 2019
Chapter 11: The Recreation
Devastated Andy walks home holding his broken BEYBLADE and his trophy. When Andy gets home he tells his dad everything.”We can make a new Amaterious son.” Andy’s dad said. “Now go get me some supplies. Andy’s dad says. “Is it done yet!” Andy said. It’ll be done tomorrow.” Andy’s dad said. “Ok.” Andy said. The next morning Andy ran to his garage and saw his dad holding his BEYBLADE. “Here you go Andy.” Andy’s dad said. “THANK YOU dad!” Andy grabbed his BEYBLADE and ran to the park. 3 kids were playing BEYBLADE. “I challenge you to a 3 Against 1 match.” Andy said. “We accept.” The kids answered. 3...2...1...Let It Rip!
... To Be Continued
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Oylspil - Jan. 07, 2019
Nice now us THIS Shining Amaterios?
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 07, 2019
(Jan. 07, 2019 11:17 PM)Oylspil Wrote: Nice now us THIS Shining Amaterios?
You will have to see
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 09, 2019
Chapter 12: The Battle Royale
Amaterious started to do a flower pattern hitting each opponent making them change their spin path. Eventually Andy’s opponents were hitting each other. “Go Amaterious! Finish It!” Andy yelled. Amaterious striked all 3 opponents bursting them. “No!” The kids screamed. The kids ran away crying. “Andy rushed home to tell his dad. “Well it looks like you and Shadow Amaterious had fun.” Andy’s dad said. “Yeah we had WAIT! What! Amaterious’ new name is Shadow Amaterious!” Andy yelled. “Yeah.” Replied Andy’s dad. “Oh Snap!” Andy said.
... To Be Continued
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Geardini1846 - Jan. 09, 2019
(Jan. 09, 2019 1:40 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 12: The Battle Royale
Amaterious started to do a flower pattern hitting each opponent making them change their spin path. Eventually Andy’s opponents were hitting each other. “Go Amaterious! Finish It!” Andy yelled. Amaterious striked all 3 opponents bursting them. “No!” The kids screamed. The kids ran away crying. “Andy rushed home to tell his dad. “Well it looks like you and Shadow Amaterious had fun.” Andy’s dad said. “Yeah we had WAIT! What! Amaterious’ new name is Shadow Amaterious!” Andy yelled. “Yeah.” Replied Andy’s dad. “Oh Snap!” Andy said.
... To Be Continued
Great story as always!
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 09, 2019
(Jan. 09, 2019 2:00 AM)Geardini1846 Wrote: (Jan. 09, 2019 1:40 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 12: The Battle Royale
Amaterious started to do a flower pattern hitting each opponent making them change their spin path. Eventually Andy’s opponents were hitting each other. “Go Amaterious! Finish It!” Andy yelled. Amaterious striked all 3 opponents bursting them. “No!” The kids screamed. The kids ran away crying. “Andy rushed home to tell his dad. “Well it looks like you and Shadow Amaterious had fun.” Andy’s dad said. “Yeah we had WAIT! What! Amaterious’ new name is Shadow Amaterious!” Andy yelled. “Yeah.” Replied Andy’s dad. “Oh Snap!” Andy said.
... To Be Continued
Great story as always!
Thank you
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - CheetoBlader - Jan. 10, 2019
Chapter 13: The Finale
Andy was sitting on his bed watching YouTube but then his dad told him to go to sleep. At 2:00 AM a BEYBLADE stealer crept in to the house. The thieve took Amaterious and left. When Andy woke up he screamed. His dad said they would find it 1 day but they never did and they couldn’t make a new Amaterious either. Amaterious’ new owner is now: Unknown
RE: My Series: The Legend of Amaterious - Dt20000 - Jan. 10, 2019
(Jan. 10, 2019 2:05 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 13: The Finale
Andy was sitting on his bed watching YouTube but then his dad told him to go to sleep. At 2:00 AM a BEYBLADE stealer crept in to the house. The thieve took Amaterious and left. When Andy woke up he screamed. His dad said they would find it 1 day but they never did and they couldn’t make a new Amaterious either. Amaterious’ new owner is now: Unknown Ooh ooh I know who it is! Call on me, call on me!
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