My Series: The Adventures Of Roan

(Aug. 04, 2019  10:35 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Um... Why and what was that?
What?
(Aug. 04, 2019  11:02 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Aug. 04, 2019  10:35 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Um... Why and what was that?
What?

Welp, nothing. Now I know.
Ok, so I keep getting notification saying"CheetoBlader replied to Subscribed Topic" when no recent posts can be seen. What's going on?
Just got 2 more notifications. What's going on?

Alright, I just got another one.
I just got another notification. What is going on?
Hey, sorry for the delay. I was working on it, then I scrapped it so I could change things and work on the the plot. Because… well… I haven’t had too much of a plan until now. I was going with the flow 75% of the time. I will not be accepting characters until further notice. Please wait a bit while I finish making some plans and type up the chapter.
(Nov. 05, 2019  1:03 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Hey, sorry for the delay. I was working on it, then I scrapped it so I could change things and work on the the plot. Because… well… I haven’t had too much of a plan until now. I was going with the flow 75% of the time. I will not be accepting characters until further notice. Please wait a bit while I finish making some plans and type up the chapter.

It's perfectly fine, I'm just wondering why I'm receiving notifications for posts that aren't there.
(Nov. 05, 2019  4:16 AM)#Fafnir Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2019  1:03 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Hey, sorry for the delay. I was working on it, then I scrapped it so I could change things and work on the the plot. Because… well… I haven’t had too much of a plan until now. I was going with the flow 75% of the time. I will not be accepting characters until further notice. Please wait a bit while I finish making some plans and type up the chapter.

It's perfectly fine, I'm just wondering why I'm receiving notifications for posts that aren't there.

I think that’s because I was working on the draft. You won’t receive anymore false ones though, I’ve switched to Google Docs.
(Nov. 05, 2019  3:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Nov. 05, 2019  4:16 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: It's perfectly fine, I'm just wondering why I'm receiving notifications for posts that aren't there.

I think that’s because I was working on the draft. You won’t receive anymore false ones though, I’ve switched to Google Docs.

Ok, thanks!
Chapter 21: An Experienced Mentor! Revenge’s Rebirth!

(Nov. 10, 2019  7:01 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 21: An Experienced Mentor! Revenge’s Rebirth!


Haha, I really like how Norman is much more important and evil in your works! Lets see if these guys can find the power to take him down later
(Nov. 10, 2019  7:01 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 21: An Experienced Mentor! Revenge’s Rebirth!


Great chapter!
lilphilyb, I don’t care that I just asked. Tongue_out
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: lilphilyb, I don’t care that I just asked. Tongue_out

Askes what?
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:02 AM)lilphilyb Wrote:
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: lilphilyb, I don’t care that I just asked. Tongue_out

Askes what?

I was joking around since I just asked for BBS to be judged.

lilphilyb, I summon thee.
Already read it

Character Development: A+
Diologue: A+
Grammar: A+
Exciting moments: A+
Chapter length: A+
Story Juiciness: A+

This is one of your best works yet, the story, the characters, it is past perfect! You are a story master! You got a 169!

Overall score: 169
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:27 AM)lilphilyb Wrote: Already read it

Character Development: A+
Diologue: A+
Grammar: A+
Exciting moments: A+
Chapter length: A+
Story Juiciness: A+

This is one of your best works yet, the story, the characters, it is past perfect! You are a story master! You got a 169!

Overall score: 169
Thanks! But actually though. I need to know what people really think of TAOR and what I should Improve in.
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:28 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:27 AM)lilphilyb Wrote: Already read it

Character Development: A+
Diologue: A+
Grammar: A+
Exciting moments: A+
Chapter length: A+
Story Juiciness: A+

This is one of your best works yet, the story, the characters, it is past perfect! You are a story master! You got a 169!

Overall score: 169
Thanks! But actually though. I need to know what people really think of TAOR and what I should Improve in.

I think it's really good, so I wouldn't change anything.
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:28 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Feb. 02, 2020  4:27 AM)lilphilyb Wrote: Already read it

Character Development: A+
Diologue: A+
Grammar: A+
Exciting moments: A+
Chapter length: A+
Story Juiciness: A+

This is one of your best works yet, the story, the characters, it is past perfect! You are a story master! You got a 169!

Overall score: 169
Thanks! But actually though. I need to know what people really think of TAOR and what I should Improve in.

Maybe try to work in an acceling catagory. Like I said, it is past perfect, so idk.
lilphilyb, are you grading this by where it currently is, or the whole series?
(Feb. 06, 2020  2:52 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: lilphilyb, are you grading this by where it currently is, or the whole series?

Depends on if you are done with it or not.