Just an update on my writing.

I don’t work on this any more right now. I find it hard to do it at home because of school and other things. But if I can do this at school, I would have constant chapters coming out.

But for now, I can share my current writing project that I like writing. Of course, only if you’re interested. I’m only at Chapter three, so I’m not gonna post these Chapters fast as lightning (cue Kung Fu Fighting by Carl Douglas) but instead, post one every time I finish one, until I finish.

Thanks for reading this and lemme know if you want to read my other writing project.

doing Chapters/Episodes is not that hard to do during school, that is what ive been doing with the previous episodes of Generations

I could get caught at any second, and I don’t have much time at school.

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doing Chapters/Episodes is not that hard to do during school, that is what ive been doing with the previous episodes of Generations

I could get caught at any second, and I don’t have much time at school.

fair point.

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PFP: Baby picture of me and one of my irl friends / ANY PRONOUNS

I could get caught at any second, and I don’t have much time at school.

fair point.

Nice profile picture. Jedi Knight Revan. Darth Revan is also cool too.

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fair point.

Nice profile picture. Jedi Knight Revan. Darth Revan is also cool too.

yeah ive been playing alot of star wars Knights Of The Old Republic lately and so far Revan is my favorite star wars character from Legends

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PFP: Baby picture of me and one of my irl friends / ANY PRONOUNS

I absolutely adore Orb Egis. Please use Evel again some time.

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And yes, Darth Revan is one of my favorite star wars characters.

I absolutely adore Orb Egis. Please use Evel again some time.

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And yes, Darth Revan is one of my favorite star wars characters.

I’m sorry, but did you even read the thread? This story is done.

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This is just a repost but, happy birthday Christina! Man I cringed so hard at my writing skills a year ago.

Birthday Chapter 1: Kristina Kuroda!

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Today is my 19th birthday and birthdays are HUGE in BC Sol! You get cake, upgrades for your BEYBLADE (which I don’t receive because I don’t really blade), and presents! And everything is perfect! Especially on my birthday! Everyone knows I’m a little bit of a perfectionist so they try not to mess up.

“Kris! We have cake and presents for you!” Kit called.

“Coming!” Kris replied.

Kris got out of her dorm and headed for the cafeteria. When she arrives there’s cake, balloons, and presents.

“Here! This is from me!” Shasa gave a present containing Blue and White arm warmers to Kris.

“Thanks! I needed new arm warmers! Mine were getting holes in them!” Kris received another present from Valt containing a launcher.

“Thanks? I don’t really blade but I guess I could observe it!” Kris then received a lot more presents containing dresses, shoes, Launcher grips, Beyloggers with custom inserts, cards (some with money some without).

Then Raul gave a rather small box to Kris.

“Open it!”

Kris teared open the box and reached inside. It was a BEYBLADE. But not a generic one! A real BEYBLADE!

“That was your fathers BEYBLADE when he was here at BC Sol!” Raul explained to Kris.

“I like the color and design on it!” The BEYBLADE started glowing. “What’s going on!?” Kris questioned. “Is it possessing me!?”

“No! It’s bonding with you!” Raul explained.

“Ohhhhh! That makes me feel better!”

“Kris! Wanna battle?” Valt called out. “You can use your new launcher setup!”

“Sure!”

Kris, Valt, and the rest of BC Sol walked to the stadium.

“Rantaro wanna judge?” Valt asked.

“Sure! The battle is first to two points!”

“3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip!” BC Sol cried out.

“Go Valkyrie! Blitz Rush!”

“Uhhhh… hang in there?” Kris said confused.

Kris’ BEYBLADE bursted.

“Don’t worry Kris you’ll get stronger over time! Practice makes perfect!” Valt said encouragingly.

“Right… perfect.” Kris mumbled.

“Hey! Anyone want cake?” Cuza shouted.

“Me!” Every BC Sol member exclaimed.

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loved that story.

loved that story.

Thanks!

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I enjoy thus alot

@XSabxManiacX drew an amazing picture of Roan! Thank you!

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Working image (this is not the original. The original comes without the dramatic anime lines and is currently in Cheeto’s inbox)



Here:

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Call me either Sands/Suns! That one female Beyblade fan

Pfp: Cedric from Arcaea by Nataslyn on Discord

[Status: Lurking]

way to go great drawing

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Hi, my name is Honor and I've been blading since 2016 and lost interest in 2018 and now i'm back

BuilderROB Alright, Story Critic, let’s see what you give this awful story.

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BuilderROB Alright, Story Critic, let’s see what you give this awful story.

Ok then. Don’t expect me to go easy though.

Grammar: 3/5 (How the dialogue is formatted doesn’t count here)
Story: 1/5
Characters: 1/5
Dialogue: 2/5
Length: 1/5

Total: 8/25

This was...painful to read. Grammar wise, there were many run-on sentences, which lowered the score. The last few chapters did remedy your dialogue score by one point, but the majority of the chapters with the dialogue...was painful. Dialogue was all smashed together into one paragraph, along with the story. The characters were pretty one sided, and were simply excited to Beyblade and nothing else it felt like. Length was also awful, not even being more than a couple paragraphs worth in most chapters. The story was also virtually nonexistent. There was no story for the majority of the fan fiction and it was simply Roan and Colin battling other people. They had no goal whatsoever it felt like.

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Hey there! My name is BuilderROB and I am an organizer who hosts tournaments in North Carolina.

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BuilderROB Alright, Story Critic, let’s see what you give this awful story.

Ok then. Don’t expect me to go easy though.

Grammar: 3/5 (How the dialogue is formatted doesn’t count here)
Story: 1/5
Characters: 1/5
Dialogue: 2/5
Length: 1/5

Total: 8/25

This was...painful to read. Grammar wise, there were many run-on sentences, which lowered the score. The last few chapters did remedy your dialogue score by one point, but the majority of the chapters with the dialogue...was painful. Dialogue was all smashed together into one paragraph, along with the story. The characters were pretty one sided, and were simply excited to Beyblade and nothing else it felt like. Length was also awful, not even being more than a couple paragraphs worth in most chapters. The story was also virtually nonexistent. There was no story for the majority of the fan fiction and it was simply Roan and Colin battling other people. They had no goal whatsoever it felt like.

Aw yeah, finally some good feedback.

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