Mercury Anubis Draft

AllGenBlader · Jan. 13, 2012 3:10 AM

Face: Anubis
The face depicts Anubis, the jackal-headed, Egyptian god.

Clear Wheel: Anubis
2.86 grams
Anubis is a translucent blue color, with 2 rounded sides and triangular-like spike between the rounded sides. The rounded sides are Anubis's head and neck similar to the Pegasus Clear Wheel.

Metal Wheel (MW): Mercury
28.94 grams
Mercury has also two rounded sides and 2 medium-sized spike with a gap between each rounded side. Mercury is colored a metallic blue and has eight silver highlights. The middle part of the Mercury Metal Weal is colored a light blue. The Wheel is only should be used as a collectable part because it has vary little competitive value whatsoever, however this is more than made up for by Mercury's looks, value, and rarity factors. Mercury has barely any attack power, no defensive abilities, and what's more, a little stamina. It's too light in weight to be effective competitively. It is outclassed by most other Metal Weals for Attack combos such as the Metal Weals Beat, Vulcan, Variares, and Lighting.

Track: 85
0.86 grams
http://wiki.worldbeyblade.org/index.php/...ck_List#85
Performance Tip: Extreme Flat (XF)
0.70 grams

XF is the widest Performance Tip that is flat currently available the second one is the Wide Flat (WF). XF has fast and aggressive movement, equal to that of Right Rubber Flat (R2F) because of how wide it is combined with how wide it is. Although having more Stamina than the R2F due to being plastic, it is not as fast as R2F because R2F is obviously made of rubber and gives it more friction with the Stadium floor. but also, Extreme Flat is a great Performance Tip for Attack Type Beyblades, and is top-tier at that.

Overall
Mercury Anubis is only worth getting for collection uses because the pain chips off of all the not so good Mercury Metal Weal and even though 85 and XF are good parts to have they can be easily be obtain by getting Hasbro's Ultimate Meteo L'Drago Assault Ver. and can be also found in many random bosters

Other Versions
brave ver. black and red paint
legend ver. blue and black paint
1st place ver. a gold and blue ver. of Mercury Anubis from winning a WBBA tournament when that was the prize for first
2nt place ver. a silver, purple, and black ver. of Mercury Anubis obtain if you got 2nt in a WBBA tournament

View All Faces · Jan. 13, 2012 3:13 AM

A decent amount of spelling mistakes, no description for 85, using of a Hasbro name, and a completely absent Other Versions section.
I'd say this needs more work. Also, do you even have Mercury Anubis?

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AllGenBlader · Jan. 13, 2012 3:20 AM

most of that is now changed
I just needed to find the short cut to the preexisting 85 page thing and for got about the other versions, and I believe the Hasbro name has not been released yet.
Working on spelling now.
:edit Got it changed to Bottom and spell check didn't say anything was wrong besides the names of most Beyblade parts:

View All Faces · Jan. 13, 2012 3:25 AM

I was talking about you using 'Performance Tip' rather than 'Bottom'. I probably should've used 'term', but whatever. Tongue_out

You should probably just wait for Dan, Shabalabadoo or someone else who usually critiques drafts to help you, seeing as I've got very little idea of how to help. Smile

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blader239 · Jan. 13, 2012 3:36 AM

I didn't find it so bad but wasn't but there are 3 other Mercury Anubis versions that were prizes of WBBA tournaments in Japan.

th!nk · Jan. 13, 2012 3:49 AM

Again, do you actually have mercury anubis? If so, proper testing is needed before an article is made, because we don't have nearly enough information to write about it.

The draft is somewhat poorly and unprofessionally written, especially the XF section (other than being horribly written, it is just plain incorrect), and the Overall section is just abysmal.