Head Strong (a beyblade story)

Poll: What do you think of this story? (other than the typo's)

One Star: A moderator should wipe this thread
18.18%
2
Two Stars: Mediocre
0%
0
Three Stars: Decent
0%
0
Four Stars: Good, needs a little work
36.36%
4
Very Good, keep it going
45.45%
5
Total: 100% 11 vote(s)
Hey WBO. THis is my story, and as of September 2nd, it has been revamped and organized. This next Part is important!!!! For all returning readers or new readers, As of September 2nd, and from now on, You will find the entire story in this fist post, but that doesn't mean skip the rest of the thread, because there is a lot of information in the rest of it. I hope all of you that read this thread will enjoy it and comment on it.

I am no longer accepting characters!!!!!Thanks though Smile


Head Strong


Chapter One:

Chapter 2;

Chapter 3:


Chapter Four:


Chapter 5:

Chapter 6:
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But other than that......I need character request to be based off constellations and roman gods, and not the ones that have already been used.
ouch,no one cares about this post,but awesome!

can i have a character request?

name:takeru

bey:cyber unicorno mf 145gb

special move:cyber shot(bey glows gold,then hits the opponent with blinding speed)

side:good,then turns evil,then turns good aqain

personality:good at beyblading

looks:almost like sora
This is a great story, don't get disheartened. And you randomly switch between Vulture and Fornax in the first post, just do find and replace on Word and make them all Fornax.
So, I need to check the spelling and grammar, and I originally had it as vulture, but changed it to Fornax, cause it's an actual constellation.... And I'll make it more interesting soon.
So, i fixed the vulture and fornax switching thing...sorry for the bad story/thread....
(Feb. 18, 2011  12:53 PM)cyberpegasis98 Wrote: ouch,no one cares about this post,but awesome!

can i have a character request?

name:takeru

bey:cyber unicorno mf 145gb

special move:cyber shot(bey glows gold,then hits the opponent with blinding speed)

side:good,then turns evil,then turns good aqain

personality:good at beyblading

looks:almost like sora

So, I really like your charater and plan to use it but, what does Mf145 and GB stand for? And what does Takeru look like? Thanks!
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I need more evil characters!!
sorry for not giving all the info.......here you go



looks:
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mf145 is the track height,while gb means galaxy ball(its like a mishmash of leone and galaxy pegasis' bottom
cyberpegasis98, thanks for the update, you'll see your character very soon!
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And thank you to all of you who have contributed characters!
good job!i like how you put takeru in.just saw a typo,but still keep going!
oh for my gratitude here is marcus's looks(images may vary from your idea)


marcus sayoto:
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Wow, this story is great. Keep up the good work!
Pretty good story. Makes more sense then some others I have read.
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The reason these litle notices have been popping up is becuase they have been realtivly hard to follow, so the entire story will now be taken and posted on the beginning of the thread.
ha,tnx.anyway good story!keep it up!
that's an awesome stry!!i'm gonna make a request(character request) but not now...
My sig won't show up!
It does but as a URL!!!
here are some request you told me,fornax
images may vary from your idea
Great Story! Can i Enter a Character?
Kairo Yukiba
Hair:Normal Low Hair
T-SHirt: Normal but with a tornado like pattern
Pants: Baggy
SHoes: Rubber SHoes
Bey:
Boreal Cygni DW120EWF (Based on the constellation Cygnus)
(Dual Wing 120, Eternal Wide Flat)
Boreal: Looks Like Big Bang But Light Blue
Cygni: Looks Like Pegasis but white and a wind pattern
Double WIng: Is like Upper wing but two wings and is free spinning and can retract
Eternal Wide Flat: Like hoe you look at it.
Special Move: Blizzard Novae
Ctgni Dashes awat then does a u-turn and clashes with the opponent then goes away then jumps then falls with a Zig Zag Pattern then continues to batter the enemy.
Here's a request it's the request i'm always gonna use like Darkangel and Kevin here it is:
NameConfusedamuel Hasine
BeyGrineadly Army SD75 R/MB
Side:Good
Gender:Boy
Age:13
Type:Attack/Stamina
Bey Descripton:The Army facebolt has a pistol in the middle and says U.S.A on the top and Army in black bold letters on the bottom with 3 blood spots as the background.The Energy ring is red and has a sniper on opposite sides and bullets curving around with semi circles near the center.The fuson wheel ,Deadly, has three of those blockes like L-Drago's fusion wheel on the top bottom left and right that shows on Rapid attack mode only it's gold and the other spaces are spin absorbing semi-circles made of rubber.The Spin track ,SD75, stands for SurpriseDagger75 it has a dagger that pops out every time an opponent tries to hit the spintrack and it's made of metal.The performance tip ,R/MB, is shaped like a bullet and half of it is rubber and the other half is metal that's why it's called R/MB.
Personality:Cares about his friends,beys,and blading,loyal,honest,trustworthy,ALWAYS wants to battle with someone like Yuu or Ginga,doesn't really like to show full power,funny,takes alot to keep him down and never bakes down from a challange!
Special move #1Eeexpert Sniping Bey Atack:Army turns invisible and hits with deadly attacks then if that doesn't work it just attacks viciously for 30 seconds.
Special move #2:Retreatig Counterstrike/Escape:This depends on the performance tip if it leans to the right it's escape if it leans to the left it's counterstrike.
Looks Like:Wears a t-shirt that's gold colered on the front andsilver on the back,and wears fingerless ninja gloves the right one is white and the left one is black, and wears red Jordans, and bage shorts,and his skin tone is african american,and has a black small fro, and brown eyes.
Plz accept!!like the series
Hey guys! I have two announcements! First, both Samuel Hasine and Kairo Yukiba are both accepted! You might see your characters in chapter five or six...depends.

Second, the rest of this post has been erased and moved to the front of the thread.
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD

BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “blades”)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,” Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,” the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level X: “Infinite Blade” Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
BeyBlade Type: Attack/Defense
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Armani Exchange T-Shirt with black GUESS jeans and a silver cloak with black flames (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO) clothes all the time
Attitude: helpful and cool, classmates are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Lost his brothers in a explosion when he was 10 yrs old.
Age: 12 years as of February 27, 2011
he can be evil instead of good as in the bio
Dracovianauis, your character is awesome! He will, be evil, and you will see him as the leader of an under the radar organization. He will make an appearance in the end of chapter 6/7...depends.
Thanks!
thank you, keep it up