Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress]

Episode 1
CnC would be greatly appreciated. Tips, comments and any form of help would also be appreciated.
Hey, BBP, Great Story! Your a great writer and a lot of people could learn from you. Hurr, I'm having fun reading this and I can safely assure that your story is going to be better than mine but of course, that's because you have more experience.

Can't for the next chapter! (Or is it Episode?)
Haha. Thanks a lot bro. I'm working on the first episode again. Trying to make it longer.
Update 1 12/24/11 : Made Episode 1 longer. Check it out. Working on Ep. 2. Revision scheduled on 27th.
BBP, I hate you, now I'm dying for Chapter 2!
Anyway, off-topic question, your from the PH? Right?
Yah. I live in the PH. Lol.