World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress] - Printable Version

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Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress] - BeybladerPotter - Dec. 24, 2011

Episode 1
CnC would be greatly appreciated. Tips, comments and any form of help would also be appreciated.


RE: Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress] - Septentrione - Dec. 24, 2011

Hey, BBP, Great Story! Your a great writer and a lot of people could learn from you. Hurr, I'm having fun reading this and I can safely assure that your story is going to be better than mine but of course, that's because you have more experience.

Can't for the next chapter! (Or is it Episode?)


RE: Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress] - BeybladerPotter - Dec. 24, 2011

Haha. Thanks a lot bro. I'm working on the first episode again. Trying to make it longer.
Update 1 12/24/11 : Made Episode 1 longer. Check it out. Working on Ep. 2. Revision scheduled on 27th.


RE: Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress] - Septentrione - Dec. 24, 2011

BBP, I hate you, now I'm dying for Chapter 2!
Anyway, off-topic question, your from the PH? Right?


RE: Friend or Foe [Sci-Fi Story in Progress] - BeybladerPotter - Dec. 25, 2011

Yah. I live in the PH. Lol.