[Fan Fiction] bruhblade Burst Not even trying to write well [Requests: closed]

GreenK9148 · Sep. 28, 2020 3:50 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 3:49 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Kinda off topic but I noticed that one of Lui’s fingers are missing on the cover (the image I found online was a cropped image and I edited from there)

honestly i think that serves the weirdness of the cover and fanfic

It certainly does.

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Master_chanter0 · Sep. 28, 2020 3:52 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 3:46 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2020 3:44 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
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Omg I died because of the peanut butter jelly time. I was a little late but oh boy, this is great. And I was laughing at the achiles heel.

Wow, the pun actually got someone. Thanks!

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 28, 2020 3:53 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 3:52 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2020 3:46 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Wow, the pun actually got someone. Thanks!

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"Drum, are you okay?"
"Who's Drum?" Drum asked. "I'm Dante."
"Oh no," Aiga said, and immediately ran-into a wall.

This is anime fans reacting to the english dub.

lol. I can imagine myself doing that.

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The Blacknight · Sep. 28, 2020 4:00 PM

these have better plot than every anime, marvel/dc movie, horror/action/romcom film, and teletubbies, combined. Okay, maybe not teletubbies, but it almost hits that level. If you make it an ounce stupider, maybe it will his teletubbies and supa hot fiya level. Maybe.

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 28, 2020 4:02 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 4:00 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: these have better plot than every anime, marvel/dc movie, horror/action/romcom film, and teletubbies, combined. Okay, maybe not teletubbies, but it almost hits that level. If you make it an ounce stupider, maybe it will his teletubbies and supa hot fiya level. Maybe.

Thanks, I accept the challenge.

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The Blacknight · Sep. 28, 2020 4:13 PM

ik u aint taking requests, but im stupind and impatient, so im putting this request here: Aiger and his english dub catchphrase vs. the three little piggies

in case u dont know, his catchphrase is "Achilles, we're gonna blow him away!" or "Achilles and I are gonna blow you away!" or "Let's blow them away, Achilles!" or, well you get the idea.

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 28, 2020 5:08 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 4:13 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: ik u aint taking requests, but im stupind and impatient, so im putting this request here: Aiger and his english dub catchphrase vs. the three little piggies

in case u dont know, his catchphrase is "Achilles, we're gonna blow him away!" or "Achilles and I are gonna blow you away!" or "Let's blow them away, Achilles!" or, well you get the idea.

I'll add that to the on hold list in the depths of my empty brain.

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6Jupiter5 · Sep. 28, 2020 5:10 PM

What am I reading

beykid44 · Sep. 28, 2020 5:10 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 5:08 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2020 4:13 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: ik u aint taking requests, but im stupind and impatient, so im putting this request here: Aiger and his english dub catchphrase vs. the three little piggies

in case u dont know, his catchphrase is "Achilles, we're gonna blow him away!" or "Achilles and I are gonna blow you away!" or "Let's blow them away, Achilles!" or, well you get the idea.

I'll add that to the on hold list in the depths of my empty brain.

lol good one

consequences

GreenK9148 · Sep. 28, 2020 5:15 PM

(Sep. 28, 2020 5:10 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: What am I reading

Um, either very good trash or very bad gold.

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Bladerbuilder · Sep. 29, 2020 2:30 AM

This is my new fan fiction.
Also when requests are open heres mine:
what if jar jar binks joined beyblade

Click this spoiler you won’t regret it!!!

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 29, 2020 5:09 PM

(Sep. 29, 2020 2:30 AM)Bladerbuilder Wrote: This is my new fan fiction.
Also when requests are open heres mine:
what if jar jar binks joined beyblade

I'll bring the request cap up to 8, because it seems there are a lot of requests.

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TakaraTheLord · Sep. 29, 2020 6:51 PM

This................is...................the...............best...............thing.............ever !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Manager of the Spryzen Lightnings.Go Helios Valcano!!!!!!!!!!! Go World Sprigan !!!!!

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 29, 2020 6:57 PM

(Sep. 29, 2020 6:51 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: This................is...................the...............best...............thing.............ever !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Thanks. I just got 6 notifs.

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 30, 2020 5:58 PM

Lui and Lane have an argument over who is more powerful: request by BuilderROB

Why thing #9

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The Blacknight · Sep. 30, 2020 7:06 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 5:58 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Lui and Lane have an argument over who is more powerful: request by BuilderROB

Why thing #9

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"Luigi Shirosagi," Lane said.
"Sup dude,"
"I powerful more you than!" Lane said.
"No,"
"Yes"
"No"
"WHY ARE YOU WEARING A YOGI-BO PILLOW LUI? HUH, SEE YOU CAN'T RESPOND TO MY FACE. WHY ARE YOU RUNNING." Lane screamed, and everyone looked at him as if he was in the wrong lane (get it).
"Over there Lean, or Lane or Lahyne. How do you say it?" Lui said.
"wHAt?!" Lane (or is it Lean) looked away.
Lui poured water on his hair.
"Stop being a Goku try hard, its not like you're gonna win lottery," (get it? Brave Valkyrie gold version).
"HOW DARE YOU MESS UP MY HAIR?" Lane said. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"Bruh,"
"SUPER SAIYAN! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Lane said, as Somehow, his hair pooped- I mean popped back up.
"ok"
"ok" Lane responded. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"What's that noise?" Lui asked concerned.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
"WHO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? HARRY THE HEDGEHOG BOIZZZZZ."
Suddenly, there was nothing happening.
"Wat" Lui said.
"Look behind you"
Lui turned around and saw nothing.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HARRY THE HEDGE HOG.
Suddenly, A gigantic hedgehog came and hit Lui all the way to the ocean. Lui could still be alive, in fact he was still ded.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUI GOT TRAPPED IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

The end.

stoopidest

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DeltaZakuro · Sep. 30, 2020 7:12 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 5:58 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Lui and Lane have an argument over who is more powerful: request by BuilderROB

Why thing #9

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"Luigi Shirosagi," Lane said.
"Sup dude,"
"I powerful more you than!" Lane said.
"No,"
"Yes"
"No"
"WHY ARE YOU WEARING A YOGI-BO PILLOW LUI? HUH, SEE YOU CAN'T RESPOND TO MY FACE. WHY ARE YOU RUNNING." Lane screamed, and everyone looked at him as if he was in the wrong lane (get it).
"Over there Lean, or Lane or Lahyne. How do you say it?" Lui said.
"wHAt?!" Lane (or is it Lean) looked away.
Lui poured water on his hair.
"Stop being a Goku try hard, its not like you're gonna win lottery," (get it? Brave Valkyrie gold version).
"HOW DARE YOU MESS UP MY HAIR?" Lane said. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"Bruh,"
"SUPER SAIYAN! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Lane said, as Somehow, his hair pooped- I mean popped back up.
"ok"
"ok" Lane responded. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"What's that noise?" Lui asked concerned.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
"WHO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? HARRY THE HEDGEHOG BOIZZZZZ."
Suddenly, there was nothing happening.
"Wat" Lui said.
"Look behind you"
Lui turned around and saw nothing.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HARRY THE HEDGE HOG.
Suddenly, A gigantic hedgehog came and hit Lui all the way to the ocean. Lui could still be alive, in fact he was still ded.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUI GOT TRAPPED IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

The end.

this is actual gold

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Bija · Sep. 30, 2020 7:36 PM

ok, do a scene where the bladers from japanese dub meet there english dub counterparts. and I mean EVERYone

Master_chanter0 · Sep. 30, 2020 7:47 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 5:58 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Lui and Lane have an argument over who is more powerful: request by BuilderROB

Why thing #9

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"Luigi Shirosagi," Lane said.
"Sup dude,"
"I powerful more you than!" Lane said.
"No,"
"Yes"
"No"
"WHY ARE YOU WEARING A YOGI-BO PILLOW LUI? HUH, SEE YOU CAN'T RESPOND TO MY FACE. WHY ARE YOU RUNNING." Lane screamed, and everyone looked at him as if he was in the wrong lane (get it).
"Over there Lean, or Lane or Lahyne. How do you say it?" Lui said.
"wHAt?!" Lane (or is it Lean) looked away.
Lui poured water on his hair.
"Stop being a Goku try hard, its not like you're gonna win lottery," (get it? Brave Valkyrie gold version).
"HOW DARE YOU MESS UP MY HAIR?" Lane said. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"Bruh,"
"SUPER SAIYAN! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Lane said, as Somehow, his hair pooped- I mean popped back up.
"ok"
"ok" Lane responded. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"What's that noise?" Lui asked concerned.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
"WHO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? HARRY THE HEDGEHOG BOIZZZZZ."
Suddenly, there was nothing happening.
"Wat" Lui said.
"Look behind you"
Lui turned around and saw nothing.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HARRY THE HEDGE HOG.
Suddenly, A gigantic hedgehog came and hit Lui all the way to the ocean. Lui could still be alive, in fact he was still ded.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUI GOT TRAPPED IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

The end.

I am literally dead at harry the hedgehog.

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 30, 2020 8:07 PM

Wow, 13 notifs. Why.

(Sep. 30, 2020 7:12 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 30, 2020 5:58 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Lui and Lane have an argument over who is more powerful: request by BuilderROB

Why thing #9

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"Luigi Shirosagi," Lane said.
"Sup dude,"
"I powerful more you than!" Lane said.
"No,"
"Yes"
"No"
"WHY ARE YOU WEARING A YOGI-BO PILLOW LUI? HUH, SEE YOU CAN'T RESPOND TO MY FACE. WHY ARE YOU RUNNING." Lane screamed, and everyone looked at him as if he was in the wrong lane (get it).
"Over there Lean, or Lane or Lahyne. How do you say it?" Lui said.
"wHAt?!" Lane (or is it Lean) looked away.
Lui poured water on his hair.
"Stop being a Goku try hard, its not like you're gonna win lottery," (get it? Brave Valkyrie gold version).
"HOW DARE YOU MESS UP MY HAIR?" Lane said. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"Bruh,"
"SUPER SAIYAN! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaa. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Lane said, as Somehow, his hair pooped- I mean popped back up.
"ok"
"ok" Lane responded. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"What's that noise?" Lui asked concerned.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
"WHO LIVES IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA? HARRY THE HEDGEHOG BOIZZZZZ."
Suddenly, there was nothing happening.
"Wat" Lui said.
"Look behind you"
Lui turned around and saw nothing.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HARRY THE HEDGE HOG.
Suddenly, A gigantic hedgehog came and hit Lui all the way to the ocean. Lui could still be alive, in fact he was still ded.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LUI GOT TRAPPED IN A PINEAPPLE UNDER THE SEA OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

The end.

this is actual gold

12 karat, 18 karat or 24?

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DeltaZakuro · Sep. 30, 2020 9:30 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 8:07 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Wow, 13 notifs. Why.

(Sep. 30, 2020 7:12 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: this is actual gold

12 karat, 18 karat or 24?

1 Billion

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 30, 2020 9:32 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 9:30 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 30, 2020 8:07 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Wow, 13 notifs. Why.

12 karat, 18 karat or 24?

1 Billion

Sry, what number is that. My Very smart stoopid brain cannot comprehend that number.

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DeltaZakuro · Sep. 30, 2020 9:38 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 9:32 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Sep. 30, 2020 9:30 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: 1 Billion
Sry, what number is that. My Very smart stoopid brain cannot comprehend that number.

1,000,000,000 Karats

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GreenK9148 · Sep. 30, 2020 9:43 PM

(Sep. 30, 2020 9:38 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 30, 2020 9:32 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Sry, what number is that. My Very smart stoopid brain cannot comprehend that number.

1,000,000,000 Karats

That's a lot of 0's thank you for your kind contribution.

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GreenK9148 · Oct. 01, 2020 5:25 PM

Alright people. Here's my goal; post one thing every weekday. If I don't I'll up the request amount to 10 that week.

Edit: This is starting next week.

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