[Fan Fiction]  bruhblade Burst Not even trying to write well [Requests: closed]

(Oct. 13, 2020  10:29 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:03 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: No I'm confused. I was being stoopid and joking around about how you review wasn't bad enough.

Well then we are both confused, whatever.

oops, typo, no was supposed to be now. my bad.
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:32 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:29 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: Well then we are both confused, whatever.

oops, typo, no was supposed to be now. my bad.

Eh, both make sense, but I WAS PROMISED CALL OF THE BEYBLADE CHAPTER. Apologies for all caps, you left me on a cliffhanger.
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:34 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:32 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: oops, typo, no was supposed to be now. my bad.

Eh, both make sense, but I WAS PROMISED CALL OF THE BEYBLADE CHAPTER.  Apologies for all caps, you left me on a cliffhanger.

Yea ik, I was out yesterday and came home very late. I wrote it on a different device, so I'll post it later today.
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:35 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:34 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: Eh, both make sense, but I WAS PROMISED CALL OF THE BEYBLADE CHAPTER.  Apologies for all caps, you left me on a cliffhanger.

Yea ik, I was out yesterday and came home very late. I wrote it on a different device, so I'll post it later today.

Ok, I have stuff in 23 minutes so....
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:37 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:35 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Yea ik, I was out yesterday and came home very late. I wrote it on a different device, so I'll post it later today.

Ok, I have stuff in 23 minutes so....

Oof, I'll @ you, if you don't mind.
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:38 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  10:37 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: Ok, I have stuff in 23 minutes so....

Oof, I'll @ you, if you don't mind.

I'm available now you can @ me whenever, just so you know.
Random thing #16   Ryotaaaaaaaaaaaaa saga #3 CheetoBlader

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:21 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Random thing #16   Ryotaaaaaaaaaaaaa saga #3 CheetoBlader


This sounds like a newborn child trying to say random words (okay maybe a 3 year old). 0/25. Garbage, horrible, the worst thing next to fake beys. Heck even a fake S2 is better than this because at least it can win
(Oct. 14, 2020  6:26 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020  6:21 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Random thing #16   Ryotaaaaaaaaaaaaa saga #3 CheetoBlader


This sounds like a newborn child trying to say random words (okay maybe a 3 year old). 0/25. Garbage, horrible, the worst thing next to fake beys. Heck even a fake S2 is better than this because at least it can win
tHANK you
Request by GreenK. This story has no great plot points and if the characters were to be made out of something it would be made out of dodo water. Even Blast Zone Kid is less cringier then this and he tries to be cringe. If I had to buy this you would end up paying me.
let me try roasting this. with a rap.
Rating: negative one trillion billion million quadrillon thousand out of twenty-five. this disgusting garbage is the definition of failure.
(Oct. 14, 2020  7:10 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: let me try roasting this. with a rap.
Rating: negative one trillion billion million quadrillon thousand out of twenty-five. this disgusting garbage is the definition of failure.

True
(Oct. 14, 2020  7:12 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020  7:10 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: let me try roasting this. with a rap.
Rating: negative one trillion billion million quadrillon thousand out of twenty-five. this disgusting garbage is the definition of failure.

True

there was an insane burn here but didnt wanna get rudness so imagine being very very ridiculed rn
GreenK9148 would you like me to review your fan fic with my real rating system? (Warning: It will be a serious and honest review despite this being intentionally bad).
(Oct. 14, 2020  7:15 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: GreenK9148 would you like me to review your fan fic with my real rating system? (Warning: It will be a serious and honest review despite this being intentionally bad).

Sure. Also, can you review my other serious fanfic?
(Oct. 14, 2020  7:16 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020  7:15 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: GreenK9148 would you like me to review your fan fic with my real rating system? (Warning: It will be a serious and honest review despite this being intentionally bad).

Sure. Also, can you review my other serious fanfic?

Sure, I will do that soon.
This is something funny to make you laugh
Hikar Asahi : Helios !!! use Gravity Strike !!
Hyuga Asahi : Hyperion !!! use Crown Strike !!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares !!! use Rain Slasher !!
There is a pig explosion oh no a pig explosion
All three : AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A pig explosion run!!!!!!!
(Oct. 15, 2020  2:44 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote: This is something funny to make you laugh
Hikar Asahi : Helios !!! use Gravity Strike !!
Hyuga Asahi : Hyperion !!! use Crown Strike !!
Aiden Umuzaki : Ares !!! use Rain Slasher !!
There is a pig explosion oh no a pig explosion
All three : AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A pig explosion run!!!!!!!

Next eps: The Naruto rip-off returns! Will Ekusas Iobome appear?(for those who dont know, ekusas iobome backwrds is emo boi sasuke)
Alright, I almost let my roof break today, and I'm not in the mood for fake bad comments. So, back to Normal.

free and norman having an argument over who's more depressed: Reques by The Blacknight

Random thing #17

(Oct. 15, 2020  10:22 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Alright, I almost let my roof break today, and I'm not in the mood for fake bad comments. So, back to Normal.

free and norman having an argument over who's more depressed: Reques by The Blacknight

Random thing #17


You have Killed SunBlader98 through Laughter!
(Oct. 15, 2020  10:25 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  10:22 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: Alright, I almost let my roof break today, and I'm not in the mood for fake bad comments. So, back to Normal.

free and norman having an argument over who's more depressed: Reques by The Blacknight

Random thing #17


You have Killed SunBlader98 through Laughter!
You have showered GreenK9148 with complements. Hold up, I need to get a towel now.
(Oct. 15, 2020  10:27 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  10:25 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote: You have Killed SunBlader98 through Laughter!
You have showered GreenK9148 with complements. Hold up, I need to get a towel now.
I have lost a rap battle to GreenK9148
(Oct. 15, 2020  10:28 PM)SunBlader98 Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  10:27 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: You have showered GreenK9148 with complements. Hold up, I need to get a towel now.
I have lost a rap battle to GreenK9148

0/10101010101010101010 a french fry can make a better fan fic
Lane but with shu’s hair. The bey will be za worldo Lucifer, 2d (with no barrier), and guard