Nah. Like some other person in the Burst Universe.

I got no clue.

I'll pm you the person

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Free... Hoya Behold the Heavenly Dragon chapter is For Free.

Remember, Free has Heavenly Dragon Fafnir

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OMGGGGGGG I LOVE IT!!!!!

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@Applebot hi

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Hi

The titles sound very cool

Thanks a lot
Can you guess what is Doji's other indentity? Hint: You have seen the person before in beybalde anime

Ashtem/Theodore Glass?

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DON'T CALL ME SHORT!1!!1!

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Thanks a lot
Can you guess what is Doji's other indentity? Hint: You have seen the person before in beybalde anime

Ashtem/Theodore Glass?

Ashtem is from Burst, Doji is from MFB. They barely have any ties.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

Ashtem/Theodore Glass?

Ashtem is from Burst, Doji is from MFB. They barely have any ties.

Well Ryuga's Son mentioned Doji's other identity in his fanfic is a Burst character. I'll quote him.

His other identity? You mean the one in Metal Fury?

Nah. Like some other person in the Burst Universe.

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DON'T CALL ME SHORT!1!!1!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Ashtem is from Burst, Doji is from MFB. They barely have any ties.

Well Ryuga's Son mentioned Doji's other identity in his fanfic is a Burst character. I'll quote him.

Nah. Like some other person in the Burst Universe.

ah.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

Thanks a lot
Can you guess what is Doji's other indentity? Hint: You have seen the person before in beybalde anime

Ashtem/Theodore Glass?

Ashtem/Theodore Glass?

Ashtem is from Burst, Doji is from MFB. They barely have any ties.

Ashtem is from Burst, Doji is from MFB. They barely have any ties.

Well Ryuga's Son mentioned Doji's other identity in his fanfic is a Burst character. I'll quote him.

Nah. Like some other person in the Burst Universe.

Well Ryuga's Son mentioned Doji's other identity in his fanfic is a Burst character. I'll quote him.

ah.

Wrong. It is someone else

@Longinox, you're reading my fan fic?

And

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OMGGGGGGG I LOVE IT!!!!!

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@Applebot hi

what do u love?

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Ashtem/Theodore Glass?

Ashtem is from Burst, Doji is from MFB. They barely have any ties.

Well Ryuga's Son mentioned Doji's other identity in his fanfic is a Burst character. I'll quote him.

ah.

Wrong. It is someone else

@Longinox, you're reading my fan fic?

And

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OMGGGGGGG I LOVE IT!!!!!

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@Applebot hi

what do u love?

yeah pretty much. Just starting though, it's pretty good.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

Wrong. It is someone else

@Longinox, you're reading my fan fic?

And

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what do u love?

yeah pretty much. Just starting though, it's pretty good.

What chapter are you on?

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yeah pretty much. Just starting though, it's pretty good.

What chapter are you on?

Chapter 5, like I said I'm still starting to read it.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

What chapter are you on?

Chapter 5, like I said I'm still starting to read it.

how much do u rate it out of ten?

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Chapter 5, like I said I'm still starting to read it.

how much do u rate it out of ten?

8.5/10, yep.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

how much do u rate it out of ten?

8.5/10, yep.

any suggestions?

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8.5/10, yep.

any suggestions?

It's pretty fine really, I'm just getting into it and I might change my opinion of it soon enough. So none really at the moment.

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-Enzo Ferrari 

any suggestions?

It's pretty fine really, I'm just getting into it and I might change my opinion of it soon enough. So none really at the moment.

I'll post new chapters when i'm done with my essay and test

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It's pretty fine really, I'm just getting into it and I might change my opinion of it soon enough. So none really at the moment.

I'll post new chapters when i'm done with my essay and test

And also plot inconsistency, Salamander (Ninja Salamander) was supposed to be a Balance-type not an Attack-type really.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

I'll post new chapters when i'm done with my essay and test

And also plot inconsistency, Salamander (Ninja Salamander) was supposed to be a Balance-type not an Attack-type really.

Oh ya anyways, Ima make him die or like forget him lol

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And uh... aside from that what's up with them long attack names, 'you Blader? fite me' thing, and always saying 'Switch modes' instead of letting them just switch automatically.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

And uh... aside from that what's up with them long attack names, 'you Blader? fite me' thing, and always saying 'Switch modes' instead of letting them just switch automatically.

All mfb special moves are long

And I will not say, 'Switch Modes' just letting it happen automatically

any more suggestions?

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And uh... aside from that what's up with them long attack names, 'you Blader? fite me' thing, and always saying 'Switch modes' instead of letting them just switch automatically.

All mfb special moves are long

And I will not say, 'Switch Modes' just letting it happen automatically

any more suggestions?

If a Blader happens to come across another random Blader, rather than have them engage in battle immediately most of the time have some lines of dialogue between them explaining the plot or something along the lines of that and as for the battle that would be in later chapters after their first meeting. But the intro arc is done so, I guess I was late for that.

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Or let them start a rivalry with one another.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

All mfb special moves are long

And I will not say, 'Switch Modes' just letting it happen automatically

any more suggestions?

If a Blader happens to come across another random Blader, rather than have them engage in battle immediately most of the time have some lines of dialogue between them explaining the plot or something along the lines of that and as for the battle that would be in later chapters after their first meeting. But the intro arc is done so, I guess I was late for that.

Ok sorry ima work on that. Any more? (sorry I'm asking too much but no one else gives me suggestions)

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FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

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If a Blader happens to come across another random Blader, rather than have them engage in battle immediately most of the time have some lines of dialogue between them explaining the plot or something along the lines of that and as for the battle that would be in later chapters after their first meeting. But the intro arc is done so, I guess I was late for that.

Ok sorry ima work on that. Any more? (sorry I'm asking too much but no one else gives me suggestions)

That's it so far mate. Either way FBW is good.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

Ok sorry ima work on that. Any more? (sorry I'm asking too much but no one else gives me suggestions)

That's it so far mate. Either way FBW is good.

Thanks a lot by the way. Would like to collabroate with me?

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FBW saga (First Blader War)

Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

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That's it so far mate. Either way FBW is good.

Thanks a lot by the way. Would like to collabroate with me?

Soon maybe, I'm just a newbie in creating fanfics and the only novel I've read is literally the Tensura LN and the fanfics I've read was just some lemons (was horni), Dreaming of Akina (Initial D fanfic), and some other crossover fanfic with MFB and OG Beyblade.

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"I lived with you for twenty years; how many deeds, events, and men went by! Today I remember them, each and everyone. I still have, for Alfa (Romeo), the tenderness of a first love. The pure affection of a child for his mother."

-Enzo Ferrari 

Thanks a lot by the way. Would like to collabroate with me?

Soon maybe, I'm just a newbie in creating fanfics and the only novel I've read is literally the Tensura LN and the fanfics I've read was just some lemons (was horni), Dreaming of Akina (Initial D fanfic), and some other crossover fanfic with MFB and OG Beyblade.

We can think of ideas together and make chapters together.

Your choice. is it a no or yes

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Scion of the Legends (The Dark Forsworn Series)

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