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[Fan Fiction]  Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice)

Nov. 21, 2021  8:43 PM
 
(Nov. 21, 2021  8:20 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Next Episode is gonna be pretty sick, also probably going to be my longest chapter yet which will hopefully exceed 3,000 Words.

Sorry I haven't been rating it. It's just that I've been busy in General Especially trying to keep my Fanfic up to date on Weekends. I'll definitely give it a review if it comes out today. If it comes out tomorrow I'll do it on Wenseday
Nov. 21, 2021  10:27 PM
 
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 35: Explosive Clash! The Bonds Of Legends!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1156806568-story...lade-burst
Nov. 22, 2021  1:40 AM
 
Spoiler (Click to View)
Nov. 22, 2021  2:57 AM
 
(Nov. 21, 2021  10:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 35: Explosive Clash! The Bonds Of Legends!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1156806568-story...lade-burst

sorry i couldnt do this review earlier but really this chapter was insanely fun to read and intrigued me for whats next! for the first battle i honestly thought phi was gonna win due to his prior knowledge about power and resonance, but actually lane wins! this wasnt extremely unexpected tho, and gave us the hint that phi does indeed have more room to improve if he wants to defeat lane! then comes the battle with valt and aiga, i legitimately thought valt was gonna win 100%, yet aiga won! thought that was pretty cool s well. now the last battle is the MOST surprising to me. instead of free winning sisco won, which completely caught me off guard, because usually in their fights free wins. and its also good to see that sisco was actually growing over the years! and the final battle between dante and delta was pretty inevitable though still amazing to see a clash of old rivals like we did with free and sisco and valt and aiga!

so all in all i'd say this chapter was pretty unexpected and unpredictable! me honestly i'd give it a 24.5/25! the dialogue was intriguing, and hypes me up for next chapter (like every other chapter does!)! 👌
Nov. 22, 2021  4:53 AM
 
Coming Chapters
Chapter 36: Take Off! The Grand Voyage!!
Chapter 37: Explosive Showdown! The Heated Up 1st Stage!!
Chapter 38: A Grand Revolution! Fierce Battle!!!
Chapter 39: Full Force! An Explosive Battle On The High Seas!!
Chapter 40: Breaking Through! The Battle Royale Of Legends!!
Chapter 41: The Final Countdown! Road To Revolution!!
Chapter 42: A Revolution On The High Seas! The Sparking Legend Tour!!
Chapter 43: Explosive First Round! Everyones Bonds!!
Nov. 24, 2021  3:00 AM
 
Sparking Legend Tour Arc Summary
Spoiler (Click to View)
Nov. 24, 2021  6:21 PM
 
Season 2 Chapter 36: Take Off! Grand Voyage!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1157631189-story...lade-burst
Nov. 26, 2021  2:22 AM
 
So someone asked me outside of WBO about the topic of S3 and what is to happen to it once Season 2 ends. quite honestly, i'm actually not 100% sure. The idea with S3 is that it's supposed to dive into the story of 2 adopted girls who now belong to the Valhalla Royal Family and it also uses the DB System so characters like Bell, Ranzo, Ilya, Basara, Rashad (and maybe Pain?) appear.

The thing is, i'm not sure if i still want to do a Season 3 because a story of this scale wouldn't call for beys that much but at the same time it's gonna take place in the Beyblade Universe. If i do end up doing a Season 3 then it'll most likely be the last season and as well as a Wattpad exclusive as i don't see S3 being as well received as Season 1 or 2 is but i guess time will tell.
Nov. 26, 2021  2:53 PM
 
S2 Chapter 37
https://www.wattpad.com/1158301853-story...lade-burst
Nov. 29, 2021  1:11 AM
 
Forgot to mention this before i left for the day but i will be working more on this fic over my break and when i do return, there will be a pretty massive content drop with probably at least 3-4 chapters done because i am grinding on this fic and aiming to get it done by christmas.

But yeah, i'll be on break from WBO until 12/10/21 and i'll be working on this fic until then so again, there'll be a big content drop when i return.

Seeya then!
Dec. 04, 2021  10:59 PM
 
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 38: A Grand Revolution! Fierce Battle!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1159489114-story...lade-burst

Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 39: Burning Rage! Dark Matter Gravity!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1160800181-story...lade-burst

Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 40: The Ultimate Bonds! Triumphant Achilles!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1161725518-story...lade-burst
The Ultimate Achilles: Triumphant Achilles.Wheel.Xtend+'.4B Description

Achilles2 Chip (Ac2) - A Right Spinning Chip with a side facing Achilles Motif, A Greek Hero. The Chip Core is fused and the design closely resembles Z/Union Achilles

Triumphant Ring (Tr) - A Right Rotating Ring with 2 Reversed Metal Swords akin to Z Achilles with a bulky outer shell that covers up the blades from making contact. The ring is incredibly bulky with 2 Spring Loaded Swords and Shields. The Overall Shape resembles a mixture of Infinite/Cho-Z Achilles with Z Achilles reversed swords

4-Balance Chassis (4B) - A Gold Balance Single Chassis with a shape that closely resembles that of Convert. The chassis has a very heavy weight which is akin to 8A.

Wheel Disk (Wh)

Xtend+' Driver (Xt+')

User: Aiga Akaba

Special Moves: Triumphant Bound, Triumphant Shoot, Triumphant Defense, Triumphant Slash, Triumphant Buster
Dec. 06, 2021  7:36 PM
 
Chapter 41: Breaking Through! The Battle Royale Of Legends!!
Chapter 42: A Revolution On The High Seas! The Sparking Legend Tour!!
Chapter 43: Explosive First Round! Everyones Bonds!!
Chapter 44: A Dark Battle! Lucifer Rises!!
Chapter 45: Full Strength, Believe It!!
Chapter 46: Stand Your Ground! Going All Out!!
Chapter 47: The Greatest Battle Yet!!
Chapter 48: Swords Up! Semi-Finals!!
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 41: Breaking Through! The Battle Royale Of Legends!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1162222323-story...lade-burst
Dec. 07, 2021  7:54 PM
 
Official Confirmation: Season 2 is the final season. Season 3 is a spin off
Dec. 07, 2021  9:47 PM
 
(Dec. 07, 2021  7:54 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Official Confirmation: Season 2 is the final season. Season 3 is a spin off

"Spin off" Pun unintended. Anyways, I don't read your fics but considering it has 2 seasons, good job.
Dec. 08, 2021  3:36 PM
 
Decided to come back and do this again as i've done it with previous fan-fictions
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43. Explosive First Round! Everyones Bonds!!
爆発的な第1ラウンド！みんなの絆! !
Bakuhatsu-tekina dai 1-raundo! Min'na no kizuna! !
Release Date: December 9th, 2021
Description: The final matches of Block A's Round 1 comes to a close with Aiga VS Delta and Drum VS Gwyn! Meanwhile, Athenas new power gets even stronger as Lane prepares for his match against Sisco!
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44. Destructive Fight! Lucifers Rampage!!
破壊的な戦い！ルシファーズ暴れ! !
Hakai-tekina tatakai! Rushifāzu abare! !
Release Date: TBA
Description N/A
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45. Shining Light, Believe It!!
輝く光、信じて!
Kagayaku hikari, shinjite!
Release Date: TBA
Description: N/A
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46. Stand Your Ground! Going All Out!!
あなたの立場を主張をする！お出かけ! !
Anata no tachiba o shuchō o suru! Odekake! !
Release Date: TBA
Description: N/A
Dec. 10, 2021  4:58 PM
 
Coming Soon
[Image: Screen-Shot-2021-12-10-at-9-57-06-AM.png]
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 42: A Revolution On The High Seas! The Sparking Legend Tour!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1163271763-story...lade-burst
UnseenBurst
Dec. 11, 2021  9:00 PM
 
47. The Greatest Battle Yet!!
史上最大の戦い!!
Shijō saidai no tatakai!!
Release Date: TBA
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48. Swords Up! Semi-Finals!!
ソードアップ！準決勝!!
Sōdoappu! Junkesshō! !
Release Date: TBA
Dec. 14, 2021  2:57 AM
 
After the Epilogue, there will be a small little bonus Chapter because ive actually decided that a Spin Off is indeed happening so this bonus will be a bit of a prelude to what you can expect. I wont say its contents.

What i can confirm is that this will be AFTER Dynamite Battle so no DB System but will actually use my own system which will not be revealed until after Season 2 is over. You can honestly just think of it as an alternate Season 7 in a way because thats really the goal.
Dec. 15, 2021  1:11 AM
 
The 3rd and possibly final season
Spoiler (Click to View)

that's all you get until Season 2 ends. Have fun trying to decipher this :p
Dec. 16, 2021  12:09 AM
 
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 43: Explosive First Round! Everyones Bonds!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1164904121-story...lade-burst
Dec. 16, 2021  10:51 PM
 
Once season 2 ends, i will be doing a Q&A where you can ask me questions regarding the story or Athena in general. Season 2 is expected to conclude before Christmas so you have until then to send me questions.

You can ask me Questions here or in PM, won't matter to me. Any and all questions will also be featured on Wattpad as well.

Questions will be answered on December 25th

UnseenBurst - Athena/Lane Age difference
Dec. 17, 2021  12:11 AM
 
(Dec. 16, 2021  10:51 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Once season 2 ends, i will be doing a Q&A where you can ask me questions regarding the story or Athena in general. Season 2 is expected to conclude before Christmas so you have until then to send me questions.

You can ask me Questions here or in PM, won't matter to me. Any and all questions will also be featured on Wattpad as well.

Sorry if you've already mentioned this before but what's the Age Difference between Lean and Athena? Not in the general Anime Lean age but just in your fanfic.
Dec. 17, 2021  5:00 AM
 
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 44: Destructive Fight! Lucifers Rampage!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1166609248-story...lade-burst
Dec. 17, 2021  10:12 PM
 
Season 2 Chapter 44 Recap
Spoiler (Click to View)
Dec. 19, 2021  2:39 AM
 
Story Of Lanes Sister Season 2 Chapter 45: Full Strength, Believe It!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1167214348-story...lade-burst
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