Chapter 43
https://www.wattpad.com/1109180307-story...lade-burst

So, I didn't rate the chapter last time, I got busy out of nowhere sorry about that, but I'm free for about 6-7 hours so ima read this then rate it.

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

nice chapter and i like how lane is showing signs of aggression

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

Lane is aiming for… the Valhalla Manor!

Athena is so much fun to write and read, thanks for giving everyone this character DeltaZakuro!

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Yes, no, maybe? ¯\_(•,•)_/¯

Three bladed beys are the best.

I'm WAAAAY behind but chapter 3... MAN THAT WAS JUICY

Yo DeltaZakuro this is my rating.

Plot: 5/5: It was really good Lui Vs Lane was so interesting, I loved the battlee

Grammar: 4.5/5: Your grammar is really good, just a couple of small i's when there supposed to be capitalized.

Length: 5/5: It was perfectly long, you added everything you needed and ended on an awesome cliffhanger!

Character: 5/5: You really captured their personalities and it's so Lui to apologize to Longinus, especially after and "Embarrassing" loss.

Dialogue: 4.5/5: It's really good, but in my opinion, it's kinda plain, what I mean by that is, like they're just talking about the plot, add some arguing and funny roasts then it'll be way more interesting!

Overall: 19/25: It was really good, just a few holes but you can improve, your really good at this!

Edit: I meant to give you a 5 not a 2 on Plot sorry about that

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WHO WANTS TO HELP ME AND RUBY MURDER LANE

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FOR MAKING BABY CRY

Chapter 43
https://www.wattpad.com/1109180307-story...lade-burst

Welp, I gotta say my favorite part of the chapter was Shu's little exchange wuth Athena; it goes to show that sometimes, even if the truth might hurt a bit, it's better than keeping someone in the dark and leading to even worse consequences. Wish his anime counterpart learned that lesson, it always feels like he's keeping things from his friends and students just because he deems them too risky to be told when they're not.

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I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.

I am going to read it righwt now.

New Chapter Out Soon!

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Chapter 44
https://www.wattpad.com/1114681652-story...lade-burst

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Chapter 44
https://www.wattpad.com/1114681652-story...lade-burst

Spoiler (Click to View)

Athena when she sees Chiki: NO NO NO NO NO!!! Lol Anyways, old enemy? Definitely Phi Hyde or Counter Night Fail but overall I really liked this chapter, Athena had some character growth and how do you not Burst Ragnaruk with a double move? Also, in the next season will everyone have DB Beys? Overall Nice chapter really liked it!

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Chapter 44
https://www.wattpad.com/1114681652-story...lade-burst

Spoiler (Click to View)

Athena when she sees Chiki: NO NO NO NO NO!!! Lol Anyways, old enemy? Definitely Phi Hyde or Counter Night Fail but overall I really liked this chapter, Athena had some character growth and how do you not Burst Ragnaruk with a double move? Also, in the next season will everyone have DB Beys? Overall Nice chapter really liked it!

Season 2 is still Sparking as it takes place shortly after Season 1. Season 3 is DB, and yes, Athena and Lane will both return in S3 and have DB Beys

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Okay, thanks! This is my theory of how Season 3 starts. Athena hears about everyone losing to this kid called The Demon King so, she tries taking him on herself, she's shocked to see just a kid in a cape hanging out in the mansion, Athena will kinda be confused and ask Bell some questions, Bell (Being Bell) will take this as an insult and says that he'll probably wipe the floor with Athena and in the battle, Athena's shocked to find out that he created a new Beyblade System called the DB System, Bell tells Athena about it and then they start the battle, Bell actually wins not easily but it wasn't too hard, Athena's crushed by this and seeks guidance from Adeona, Adeona says they need to evolve into the DB System and become stronger, (Also, Lane witnessed the battle so he's planning on evolving soon) After Athena evolves her Bey she goes back to challenge Bell, but Bell's battling Ransou with his new Cyclone Ragnaruk when she sees them. That's all I've got for now, I'm looking forward to season 3 with DB Beys and Athena's reaction to meeting Bell but, I'm also excited for Season 2!

Edit: Nevermind just read the plot for Season 3

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would also like to point out that Season 3's Protagonists are Athenas adopted younger sisters. Unseen has actually predicted what i had in mind for Season 3's starting chapters.

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would also like to point out that Season 3's Protagonists are Athenas adopted younger sisters. Unseen has actually predicted what i had in mind for Season 3's starting chapters.

Dang, I spoiled everything lol I'm pretty impressed I got it right tho lol

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oh nuts who's the old enemy?!?!?
nice chapter btw, cant wait to see athena defeat chiki perhaps

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz

oh nuts who's the old enemy?!?!?
nice chapter btw, cant wait to see athena defeat chiki perhaps

I guess the old enemy is Phi.

A lot of people on Wattpad said Phi too. Well Phi does get mentioned in the coming chapters but im not confirming anything :)

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A lot of people on Wattpad said Phi too. Well Phi does get mentioned in the coming chapters but im not confirming anything

Folks, DeltaZakuro has just revealed it, lol but I know for a fact it's either Phi, Hyde, or Arthur

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New Chapter soon.

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New Chapter soon.

I know this is off topic but I thought you were sick?

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

New Chapter soon.

I know this is off topic but I thought you were sick?

I've returned and I've gotten better.

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Chapter 45
https://www.wattpad.com/1121410197-story...lade-burst

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Chapter 45
https://www.wattpad.com/1121410197-story...lade-burst

It was ________?! I never saw that coming! LOL, lemme read through the rest then I'll give my thoughts

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cant wait to read this!!!! wonder who the villan is... 🧐🤔

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nicely done! that battle between athena and chiki was so epic it almost made me wet my pants lol (joke)

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"If you fail to prepare, your prepared to fail." - Mark Spitz