you just wrote numbers. No info, no background.

cause im at school

so what?

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cause im at school

so what?

I got bored so I logged on to the WBO then then i gave a quick rating then i had to head back to class

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so what?

I got bored so I logged on to the WBO then then i gave a quick rating then i had to head back to class

Bruh, in EVERY fan fic, you make ratings without info, or any stuff that could help the author. A

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hmm I thought this was boring but I will just give you  a rating
plot 4/5
grammer 5/5
characters  6/6
overall
15/15

you just wrote numbers. No info, no background.

They also gave it a perfect rating despite saying the chapter was boring lol.

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About the chapter, it was fantastic! Lane breaking Adeona was sad but the battle itself and her interaction with Shu and the others later on was nice. Also, did you deliberately make Athena's injury similar to Shu's?

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you just wrote numbers. No info, no background.

They also gave it a perfect rating despite saying the chapter was boring lol.

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About the chapter, it was fantastic! Lane breaking Adeona was sad but the battle itself and her interaction with Shu and the others later on was nice. Also, did you deliberately make Athena's injury similar to Shu's?

Mr. JJustice just wrote random things.

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I got bored so I logged on to the WBO then then i gave a quick rating then i had to head back to class

Bruh, in EVERY fan fic, you make ratings without info, or any stuff that could help the author. A

alright first I gave it with info in bionic battle and more

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They also gave it a perfect rating despite saying the chapter was boring lol.

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About the chapter, it was fantastic! Lane breaking Adeona was sad but the battle itself and her interaction with Shu and the others later on was nice. Also, did you deliberately make Athena's injury similar to Shu's?

Mr. JJustice just wrote random things.

and dude I don't read lots of fan fic

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Woo boy... Heres Chapter 37
https://www.wattpad.com/1072915001-story...lade-burst

Spanish dance goes brrrrrrr

So I'm kinda burned out and don't have much to say, but here goes the rating regardless.

Plot: 5/5. I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN! I knew it! But dang, it still hurt..
Dialogue: 5/5. All hail Shu's motivational powers and sweet mother/daughter interactions!
Characterization: 5/5. Great, I think we're all done with Lane's carp by now. It'll be kinda hard to wait until chapter 52 for him to be put in his place, but oh well...
Grammar: 4/5. It's fine, but sometimes tenses switch and it's kinda confusing (or maybe it's just me)
Battle: 4.5/5. Adeona noooooooo-

Final Rating: 23.5/25. Pretty solid chapter, now let's see how long it will take for Athena to master the Limit Break.

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Chapter 38: The White Suns Rebirth! Adeona Heaven!
Chapter 39: Fierce Training! Master The Limit Break!
Chapter 40: New Friend, New Rival! Lunatic Cthulhu! BeybladeManiac0
Chapter 41: Adeona's Counterattack!
Chapter 42: Visit To Valhalla Manor!

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Chapter 38: The White Suns Rebirth! Adeona Heaven!
Chapter 39: Fierce Training! Master The Limit Break!
Chapter 40: New Friend, New Rival! Lunatic Cthulhu! BeybladeManiac0
Chapter 41: Adeona's Counterattack!
Chapter 42: Visit To Valhalla Manor!

Adeona Heaven? Bad name.

How about Divine Adeona?


Divine Adeona
Hero Adeona
Spiritual Adeona
Angel Adeona

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Chapter 38: The White Suns Rebirth! Adeona Heaven!
Chapter 39: Fierce Training! Master The Limit Break!
Chapter 40: New Friend, New Rival! Lunatic Cthulhu! BeybladeManiac0
Chapter 41: Adeona's Counterattack!
Chapter 42: Visit To Valhalla Manor!

Adeona Heaven? Bad name.

How about Divine Adeona?


Divine Adeona
Hero Adeona
Spiritual Adeona
Angel Adeona

You realize this is a Limit Break system Bey right? And those names combined with Limit Break: (Insert name) would just sound incredibly ridiculous.

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Adeona Heaven? Bad name.

How about Divine Adeona?


Divine Adeona
Hero Adeona
Spiritual Adeona
Angel Adeona

You realize this is a Limit Break system Bey right? And those names combined with Limit Break: (Insert name) would just sound incredibly ridiculous.

There is a different way to do it... A new Limit Break Technique. That would unique and cool. But your choice, your fan fic.

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You realize this is a Limit Break system Bey right? And those names combined with Limit Break: (Insert name) would just sound incredibly ridiculous.

There is a different way to do it... A new Limit Break Technique. That would unique and cool. But your choice, your fan fic.

limit break heaven sounds cool tho

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Adeona Heaven fits the naming system, but it feels like 2 words mashed together instead of 2 words that fit together well imo.

Adeona Heaven fits the naming system, but it feels like 2 words mashed together instead of 2 words that fit together well imo.

Also Heaven is technically taken by Heaven Pegasus

Adeona Heaven fits the naming system, but it feels like 2 words mashed together instead of 2 words that fit together well imo.

Also Heaven is technically taken by Heaven Pegasus

not the same system

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Also Heaven is technically taken by Heaven Pegasus

not the same system

Uh, you do realize the taken names carry over throughout all systems, right?

not the same system

Uh, you do realize the taken names carry over throughout all systems, right?

'-' name a ring from gt that is in sparking or any other seasons

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Uh, you do realize the taken names carry over throughout all systems, right?

'-' name a ring from gt that is in sparking or any other seasons

That’s the point. They can’t reuse names from previous Beys regardless of the system. Also they’re called based, not rings. The only exception to this rule was Cho-Z and Dead, but Cho-Z was to describe an entire sub system, and Dead is b/c Hades literally got combined with Phoenix, so it’s still technically the same bey in a different form.

Why exactly are we arguing over a simple name?

Adeona Heaven is staying as is. I dont really give a damn about the naming system.

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There is a different way to do it... A new Limit Break Technique. That would unique and cool. But your choice, your fan fic.

limit break heaven sounds cool tho

What about OVER HEAVEN
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Adeona Heaven/Royal

@tenma PinkRose

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Adeona Heaven/Royal

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Ayy those drawings are pretty neat! It's just that Adeona's palette is not what I expected haha /lh I thought Adeona's palette would be Ivory-gold toned. Still, those drawings are very neat!

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hey guys, did you know that in terms of competitive battling, vaporeon is one of the most underrated? not only that it is a water type which grants it only 2 weaknesses and 3 resistances, vaporeon also has a whopping HP stat of 130 and a respectable special defense of 95, allowing it to tank attacks well. it also has the access to the ability hydration, which makes it especially a power to be beckoned in rain teams as it is immune to status moves. not only as a staller, vaporeon can also hold the role of a sweeper as it has a respectable special attack stat of 110, allowing it to fit on HO or HO Rain teams well. in addition, it is able to learn the moves toxic, scald, wish, protect and acid armor making it a very compatible staller and support, flexible to fit in various teams, tiers and so much more to come.

Adeona Heaven/Royal

tenma, PinkRose

Woah, this looks really good! Royal gives me Rock vibes for some reason but hey, it still looks really pretty. Love the Chip's color scheme too.

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